18高考英语作文评分标准及十份高考英语书面表达 6页

‎18高考英语作文评分标准及十份高考英语书面表达 ‎1. 感谢信 假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Professor Liang,‎ I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.‎ Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney‎ ‎University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation（推荐） for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.‎ It is your unreserved(无保留的） help that enables me to obtain this splendid（极好的）opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回报） your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.‎ Yours truly,‎ Zhang Ying ‎2. 道歉信 假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加，请写封信表达你对他的感谢。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Sarah,‎ I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening. That is owing to（因为） the fact that （同位语从句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.‎ I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.‎ Cordially, （sincerely）‎ Li Hua ‎3. 申请信 假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括下列要点：‎ ‎1．年龄：182．‎ ‎2. 学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好 ‎3．兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐 ‎4．性格特点：积极向上 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行为连贯；‎ ‎3．开头语和结束语己为你写好。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.‎ I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xin xing Foreign‎ Languages ‎School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, especially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.‎ I hope I may be granted（授予） an interview, when I can explain my qualifications（资格，条件） more fully. I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Sincerely/Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎4. 通知 假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。‎ 时间：下周五6：00—8：00‎ 地点：教学楼101室 内容：1．唱中国歌 2．比赛用筷子 3．学习包饺子 注意：1．词数不少于50；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please? ‎ I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union. As the New Year is around the corner（即将到来）, we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture. ‎ During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. What’s more, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Sounds great. Doesn’t it? The party is scheduled（计划于） in Room 101of the ‎ Teaching‎ ‎Building‎ from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. ‎ Please make sure you won’t miss it. Thank you for your attention.‎ ‎5. 邀请信 你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：‎ ‎1. 时间：8am—5 pm；‎ ‎2. 集合地点：校门口；‎ ‎3. 交通工具：公交车；‎ ‎4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。‎ 注意：1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Chris， ‎ I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. ‎ We are supposed together at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. The bus will serve as our transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. We will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. Please spare some time to join us. ‎ Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.‎ Yours,‎ Joe ‎6. 建议信 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者 ‎ ‎2．说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 ‎ ‎3．提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好； ‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Editor-in-Chief,‎ Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!‎ I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.‎ There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.‎ As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.‎ Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎7. 求助信 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：‎ ‎1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；‎ ‎2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；‎ ‎3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数:120—150；‎ ‎ 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Tom，‎ How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.‎ ‎ Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（语调）. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.‎ In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎8. 投诉信 你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：‎ ‎1. 介绍购物情况 ‎2. 反映存在问题 ‎3. 提出解决方案 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100词左右 ‎2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 ‎3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词 可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n.‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ To whom it may concern,‎ I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered（订购）a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.‎ I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎9. 祝贺信 假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。‎ 内容包括：1. 表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3.‎ ‎ 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Wei Fang,‎ I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.‎ You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.‎ I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎10. 求职信 假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。‎ ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．‎ Requirements attached：1．Good at English．2．Experienced priority．‎ Contact us by e-mail：Englishtec@163．com．‎ 注意：1．短文词数100字左右；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎【优秀满分范文】‎ Dear Director:‎ I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.‎ I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.‎ In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.‎ Sincerely,‎ Li Hua 高中作文评分标准 第五档(很好)：(21-25分)‎ ‎1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;‎ ‎2.覆盖所有内容要点;‎ ‎3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;‎ ‎4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力;‎ ‎5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。‎ 第四档(好)：(16-20分)‎ ‎1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;‎ ‎2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容;‎ ‎3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;‎ ‎4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;‎ ‎5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;‎ ‎6.达到了预期的写作目的。‎ 第三档(适当)：(11-15分)‎ ‎1.基本完成了试题规定的任务;‎ ‎2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容;‎ ‎3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;‎ ‎4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解;‎ ‎5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯;‎ ‎6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。‎ 第二档(较差)：(6-10分)‎ ‎1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务;‎ ‎2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容;‎ ‎3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;‎ ‎4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解;‎ ‎5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性;‎ ‎6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。‎ 第一档(差)：(1-5分)‎ ‎1.未完成试题规定的任务;‎ ‎2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求;‎ ‎3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;‎ ‎4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解;‎ ‎5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯;‎ ‎6.信息未能传达给读者。‎ 不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。‎