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‎2016全国高考卷及答案解析 注意事项：‎ ‎ 1.答题前，先将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在试题卷和答题卡上，并将准考证号条形码粘贴在答题卡上的指定位置。用2B铅笔将答题卡上试卷类型A后的方框涂黑。‎ ‎ 2.选择题的作答：每小题选出答案后，用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。写在试题卷、草稿纸和答题卡上的非答题区域均无效。‎ ‎ 3.非选择题的作答：用签字笔直接答在答题卡上对应的答题区域内。写在试题卷、草稿纸和答题卡上的非答题区域均无效。‎ ‎ 4.考试结束后，请将本试题卷和答题卡一并上交。[来源:Z.xx.k.Com]‎ 第Ⅰ卷 第一部分 听力（共两节，满分 30 分） ‎ ‎ 做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。 ‎ 第一节（共 5 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 7.5 分）‎ 听下面 5 段对话，每段对话后有一个小题。从题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有 10 秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。 ‎ 例： How much is the shirt? ‎ A.£ 19.15. B.£ 9.18. C.£ 9.15. ‎ 答案是 C。‎ ‎1. What are the speakers talking about?‎ A. Having a birthday party.‎ B. Doing some exercise. ‎ C. Getting Lydia a gift. ‎ ‎2. What is the woman going to do?‎ A. Help the man.‎ B. Take a bus. ‎ C. Get a camera. ‎ ‎3. What does the woman suggest the man do?‎ A. Tell Kate to stop.‎ B. Call Kate’ s friends.‎ C. Stay away from Kate. ‎ ‎4. Where does the conversation probably take place?‎ A. In a wine shop.‎ B. In a supermarket. ‎ C. In a restaurant. ‎ ‎5. What does the woman mean?‎ A. Keep the window closed.‎ B. Go out for fresh air. ‎ C. Turn on the fan. ‎ 第二节 （共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）[来源:学#科#网]‎ ‎ 听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。‎ 听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。‎ ‎6. What is the man going to do this summer?‎ A. Teach a course.‎ B. Repair his house. ‎ C. Work at a hotel. ‎ ‎7. How will the man use the money?‎ A. To hire a gardener.‎ B. To buy books.‎ C. To pay for a boat trip. ‎ 听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。‎ ‎8. What is the probable relationship between the speakers?‎ A. Schoolmates.‎ B. Colleagues.‎ C. Roommates. ‎ ‎9. What does Frank plan to do right after graduation?‎ A. Work as a programmer.‎ B. Travel around the world. ‎ C. Start his own business. ‎ 听第8段材料，回答第10至12题 ‎10. Why does the woman make the call?‎ A. To book a hotel room. ‎ B.To ask about the room service.‎ C.To make changes to a reservation.‎ ‎11. When will the woman arrive at the hotel?‎ A.On September 15.‎ B. On September 16.‎ C. On September 23.‎ ‎12. How much will the woman pay for her room per night?‎ A. $179. B.$199. C. $219.‎ 听第9段材料，回答第13至16题。‎ ‎13. What is the woman’s plan for Saturday?‎ A. Going shopping. B. Going camping. C. Going boating.‎ ‎14.Where will the woman stay in Keswick?‎ A.In a country inn. B. In a five-star hotel. C. In her aunt’s home.‎ ‎15.What will Gordon do over the weekend?‎ A. Visit his friends. B. Watch DVDs. C. Join the woman.‎ ‎16. What does the woman think of Gordon’s coming weekend?‎ A. Relaxed. B. Boring. C. Busy.‎ 听第10段材料，回答第17至20题 ‎17. Who is Wang Ming?‎ A. A student. B. An employer. C .An engineer.‎ ‎18. What does the speaker say about the college job market this year?‎ A. It’s unpredictable. B. It’s quite stable. C. It’s not optimistic.‎ ‎19. What percentage of student job seekers have found a job by now?‎ A．20％. B. 22％. C. 50％.‎ ‎20. Why are engineering graduates more likely to accept a job?‎ A. They need more work experience.‎ B. The salary is usually good.‎ C. Their choice is limited.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1-5 CBACA 6-10 CBAAC 11-15 BBCAB 16-20 BACAB 第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节（共15小题：每小题2分，满分30分）‎ 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。‎ A You probably know who Marie Curie was,but you may not have heard of Rachel Carson.Of the outstanding ladies listed below,who do you think was the most important woman of the past 100 years?‎ Jane Addams(1860-1935)‎ Anyone who has ever been helped by a social worker has Jane Addams to thank. Addams helped the poor and worked for peace. She encouraged a sense of community(社区)by creating shelters and promoting education and services for people in need. In 1931,Addams became the first American ‎ woman to win the Nobel Peace Prize.‎ Rachel Carson(1907-1964)‎ If it weren’t for Rachel Carson, the environmental movement might not exist today. Her popular 1962 book Silent Spring raised awareness of the dangers of pollution and the harmful effects of chemicals on humans and on the world’s lakes and oceans.‎ Sandra Day O’Connor(1930-present)‎ When Sandra Day O’Connor finished third in her class at Stanford Law School, in 1952,she could not find work at a law firm because she was a woman. She became an Arizona state senator(参议员) and ,in 1981, the first woman to join the U.S. Supreme Court. O’Connor gave the deciding vote in many important cases during her 24 years on the top court.‎ Rosa Parks(1913-2005)‎ On December 1,1955,in Montgomery, Alabama, Rosa Parks would not give up her seat on a bus to a white passenger. Her simple act landed Parks in prison. But it also set off the Montgomery bus boycott. It lasted for more than a year, and kicked off the civil-rights movement. “The only tired I was, was tired of giving in,” said Parks.‎ ‎21. What is Jane Addams noted for in history?‎ A. Her social work.‎ B. Her teaching skills.‎ C. Her efforts to win a prize.‎ D. Her community background.‎ ‎22. What was the reason for O’Connor’s being rejected by the law firm?‎ A. Her lack of proper training in law.‎ B. Her little work experience in court.‎ C. The discrimination against women.‎ D. The poor financial conditions.‎ ‎23. Who made a great contribution to the civil-rights movement in the U.S.?‎ A. Jane Addams. B. Rachel Carson. ‎ C. Sandra Day O’Connor. D. Rosa Park.‎ ‎24. What can we infer about the women mentioned in the text?‎ A. They are highly educated. B. They are truly creative.‎ C. They are pioneers. D. They are peace-lovers.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎21. A 22. C 23. D 24.C ‎【解析】‎ ‎23.D细节理解题。根据末段倒数第二句中and kicked off the civil-rights movement可知，Rosa Parks对民权运动做出了贡献。故选D。‎ ‎24.C推理判断题。根据文章对这几个人物的介绍可知，这些女性都是在各自的领域为社会做出贡献的先驱。故选C。‎ 考点：人物类短文阅读 B Grandparents Answer a Call As a third-generation native of Brownsville, Texas, Mildred Garza never planned to move away. Even when her daughter and son asked her to move to San Antonio to help with their children, she politely refused. Only after a year of friendly discussion did Ms. Garza finally say yes. That was four years ago. Today all three generations regard the move as a success, giving them a closer relationship than they would have had in separate cities.‎ No statistics show the number of grandparents like Garza who are moving closer to adult children and grandchildren. Yet there is evidence suggesting that the trend is growing. Even President Obama’s mother-in-law, Marian Robinson, has agreed to leave Chicago and move into the White House to help care for her granddaughters. According to a study by grandparents. Com, 83 percent of the people said Mrs. Robinson ’s decision will influence grandparents in the American family. Two-thirds believe more families will follow the example of Obama’s family.‎ ‎“In the 1960s we were all a little wild and couldn’t get away from home far enough for fast ‎ enough to prove we could do it on our own,”says Christine Crosby, publisher of Grand , a magazine for grandparents.“We now realize how important family is and how important it is”to be near them, especially when you’re raising children.”‎ ‎ Moving is not for everyone. Almost every grandparent wants to be with his or her grandchildren and is willing to make sacrifices, but sometimes it is wiser to say no and visit frequently instead. Having your grandchildren far away is hard, especially knowing your adult child is struggling, but giving up the life you know may be harder.‎ ‎25. Why was Garza’s move a success?‎ A．It strengthened her family ties. ‎ B．It improved her living conditions.‎ C．It enabled her to make more friends.‎ D．It helped her know more new places.‎ ‎26. What was the reaction of the public to Mrs. Robinson’s decision?‎ A．17% expressed their support for it.‎ B．Few people responded sympathetically.‎ C．83% believed it had a bad influence.‎ D．The majority thought it was a trend.‎ ‎27. What did Crosby say about people in the 1960s?‎ A．They were unsure of themselves.‎ B．They were eager to raise more children.‎ C．They wanted to live away from their parents.‎ D．They had little respect for their grandparents.‎ ‎28. What does the author suggest the grandparents do in the last paragraph?‎ ‎ A. Make decisions in the best interests of their own.‎ ‎ B. Ask their children to pay more visits to them.‎ ‎ C. Sacrifice for their struggling children .‎ ‎ D. Get to know themselves better.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎25. A 26.D 27.C 28.A ‎【解析】‎ ‎26.D细节理解题。根据第二段末句Two-thirds believe more families will follow the example of Obama’s family可知，很多人会受Marian Robinson的影响，所以这会形成一种潮流。故选D 。‎ ‎27.C细节理解题。根据第三段首句可知，在20世纪60年代人们都希望离开家，以此来证明自己的独立。故选 C。‎ ‎28.A推理判断题。根据末段推知，作者建议人们要明智，不要为了孩子而做出牺牲。故选A 。‎ 考点：社会生活类短文阅读 C ‎ I am Peter Hodes , a volunteer stem cell courier. Since March 2012, I’ve done 89 trips—of those , 51 have been abroad. I have 42 hours to carry stem cells（干细胞）in my little box because I’ve got two ice packs and that’s how long they last. In all, from the time the stem cells are harvested from a donor(捐献者) to the time they can be implanted in the patient, we’ve got 72 hours at most. So I am always conscious of time. ‎ I had one trip last year where I was caught by a hurricane in America. I picked up the stem cells in Providence, Rhode Island, and was meant to fly to Washington then back to London. But when I arrived at the check-in desk at Providence, the lady on the desk said:“Well, I’m really sorry, I’ve got some bad news for you—there are no flights from Washington.” So I took my box and put it on the desk and I said:“In this box are some stem cells that are urgently needed for a patient-please, please, you’ve got to get me back to the United Kingdom.” She just dropped everything. She arranged for a flight on a small plane to be held for me，re-routed(改道)me through Newark and got me back to the UK even earlier than originally scheduled.‎ For this courier job, you’re consciously aware that in that box you’re got something that is potentially going to save somebody’s life.‎ ‎29. Which of the following can replace the underlined word “courier” in Paragraph1?‎ A. provider B. delivery man ‎ C. collector D. medical doctor ‎30.Why does Peter have to complete his trip within 42hours? A. He cannot stay away from his job too long. B. The donor can only wait for that long. C. The operation needs that much time. D. The ice won’t last any longer.‎ ‎31. Which flight did the woman put Peter on first? A. To London. B. To  Newark. C. To Providence.        D. To Washington.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎29.B 30. D 31.B ‎【解析】‎ ‎30. D细节理解题。根据第一段第二句I have 42 hours to carry stem cells in my little box because I’ve got two ice packs and that’s how long they last.可知冰盒只能保持42小时适宜的温度。故选D 。‎ ‎31.B细节理解题。根据第二段末句 She arranged for a flight on a small plane to be held for me, re-routed me through Newark 可知，这位好心的女士首先安排作者去Newark的航班。故选 B。学科.网 考点：故事类短文阅读 D The meaning of silence varies among cultural groups. Silences may be thoughtful, or they may be empty when a person has nothing to say. A silence in a conversation may also show stubbornness, uneasiness,or worry. Silence may be viewed by some cultural groups as extremely uncomfortable; therefore attempts may be made to fill every gap(间隙) with conversation. Persons in other cultural groups value silence and view it as necessary for understanding a person’s needs.‎ Many Native Americans value silence and feel it is a basic part of communicating among people, just as some traditional Chinese and Thai persons do. Therefore, when a person from one of these cultures is speaking and ‎ suddenly stops, what may be implied(暗示) is that the person wants the listener to consider what has been said before continuing. In these cultures, silence is a call for reflection.‎ Other cultures may use silence in other ways, particularly when dealing with conflicts among people or in relationships of people with different amounts of power. For example, Russian, French, and Spanish persons may use silence to show agreement between parties about the topic under discussion. However, Mexicans may use silence when instructions are given by a person in authority rather than be rude to that person by arguing with him or her. In still another use, persons in Asian cultures may view silence as a sign of respect, particularly to an elder or a person in authority.‎ Nurses and other care-givers need to be aware of the possible meanings of silence when they come across the personal anxiety their patients may be experiencing. Nurses should recognize their own personal and cultural construction of silence so that a patient’s silence is not interrupted too early or allowed to go on unnecessarily. A nurse who understands the healing(治愈) value of silence can use this understanding to assist in the care of patients from their own and from other cultures.‎ 32. What does the author say about silence in conversations?‎ A. It implies anger.‎ B. It promotes friendship.‎ C. It is culture-specific.‎ D. It is content-based.‎ 33. Which of the following people might regard silence as a call for careful thought?‎ A. The Chinese.‎ B. The French.‎ C. The Mexicans.‎ D. The Russians.‎ 34. What does the author advise nurses to do about silence?‎ A. Let it continue as the patient pleases.‎ A. Break it while treating patients.‎ B. Evaluate its harm to patients.‎ C. Make use of its healing effects.‎ 35. What may be the best title for the text?‎ A. Sound and Silence B. What It Means to Be Silent C. Silence to Native Americans D. Speech Is Silver; Silence Is Gold E. ‎【答案】‎ F. ‎32.C 33.A 34.D 35.B G. ‎【解析】‎ H. 试题分析：本文是一篇说明文， 主要介绍了沉默在不同文化背景下的不同内涵。‎ ‎35.B主旨要义题。文章主要介绍了在不同文化背景下谈话期间的沉默的不同含义，由此判断B选项可以概括文章内容。故选B 。‎ I. 考点：社会生活类短文阅读 第二节 （共 5 小题；每小题 2 分，满分 10 分） ‎ 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 ‎ Secret codes (密码)keep messages private. Banks, companies, and government agencies use secret codes in doing business, especially when information is sent by computer.[来源:学.科.网Z.X.X.K]‎ ‎ People have used secret codes for thousands of years. 36 Code breaking never lags(落后) far behind code making. The science of creating and reading coded messages is called cryptography.‎ ‎ There are three main types of cryptography. 37 For example, the first letters of “My ‎ elephant eats too many eels” spell out the hidden message “Meet me.” ‎ ‎38 You might represent each letter with a number, for example. Let’s number the letters of the alphabet, in order, from 1 to 26. If we substitute a number for each letter, the message “Meet me” would read “135 520 135.”‎ ‎ A code uses symbols to replace words, phrases, or sentences. To read the message of a real code, you must have a code book. 39 For example, “bridge” might stand for “meet” and “out” might stand for “me.” The message “Bridge out” would actually mean “Meet me.” 40 However, it is also hard to keep a code book secret for long. So codes must be changed frequently.‎ A. It is very hard to break a code without the code book.‎ ‎ B. In any language, some letters are used more than others.‎ ‎ C. Only people who know the keyword can read the message.‎ ‎ D. As long as there have been codes, people have tried to break them.‎ ‎ E. You can hide a message by having the first letters of each word spell it out.‎ ‎ F. With a code book, you might write down words that would stand for other words.‎ ‎ G. Another way to hide a message is to use symbols to stand for specific letters of the alphabet. ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎36.D 37.E 38.G 39.F 40.A ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了密码的设置方法和破解的方法。‎ ‎40.A根据空后内容的转折可知尽管利用密码书可以破译密码，但是一本密码书也不会使用很久的时间，故判断A选项符合语境。‎ 考点：七选五阅读理解 第三部分 英语知识运用 （共两节，满分 45分） ‎ 第一节 完形填空（共 20 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 30 分） ‎ 阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C 和 D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 ‎ ‎ A Heroic Driver ‎ Larry works with Transport Drivers, Inc. One morning in 2009, Larry was 41 along 165 north after delivering to one of his 42 . Suddenly, he saw a car with its bright lights on. 43 he got closer, he found 44 vehicle upside down on the road. One more look and he noticed 45 shooting out from under the 46 vehicle. Larry pulled over, set the brake and 47 the fire extinguisher (灭火器). Two good bursts from the extinguisher and the fire was put out.‎ The man who had his bright lights on 48 and told Larry he had 49 an emergency call. They 50 heard a woman’s voice coming from the wrecked (毁坏的) vehicle. 51 the vehicle, they saw that a woman was trying to get out of the broken window. They told her to stay 52 until the emergency personnel arrived, 53 she thought the car was going to 54 . Larry told her that he had already put out the fire and she should not move 55 she injured her neck.‎ Once fire and emergency people arrived, Larry and the other man 56 and let them go to work. Then, Larry asked the 57 if he was needed or 58 to go. They let him and the other man go.‎ One thing is 59 —Larry went above and beyond the call of duty by getting so close to the burning vehicle! His 60 most likely saved the woman’s life.‎ ‎41. A. walking B. touring C．traveling D．rushing ‎42. A. passengers B. colleagues C. employers D. customers ‎43. A. Since B. Although C. As D. If ‎44. A. each B. another C. that D. his ‎45. A. flames B. smoke C. water D. steam ‎46. A. used B. disabled C. removed D. abandoned ‎47. A. got hold of B. prepared C. took charge of D. controlled ‎48. A. came down B. came through C. came in D. came over ‎49. A. returned B. received C. made D. confirmed ‎50. A. then B. again C. finally D. even ‎51. A. Starting B. Parking C. Passing D. Approaching ‎52. A. quiet B. still C. away D. calm ‎53. A. for B. so C. and D. but ‎54. A. explode B. slip away C. fall apart D. crash ‎55. A. as if B. unless C. in case D. after ‎56. A. stepped forward B. backed off ‎ C. moved on D. set out 57. A. woman B. police C. man D. Driver ‎58. A. forbidden B. ready C. asked D. free ‎59. A.for certain B. for consideration ‎ C. reported D.checked ‎60. A.patience B. skills C. efforts D.promise ‎【答案】‎ ‎41.C 42.D 43.C 44.B 45.A 46.B 47.A 48.D 49.C 50.A ‎51.D 52.B 53.D 54.A 55.C 56.B 57.B 58.D 59.A 60.C ‎ 47.A考查动词辨析。根据后句可知他下车灭火。get hold of拿起；prepare准备；take charge of负责；control控制。故选A ‎48.D考查动词辨析。根据and told Larry he had _49__ an emergency call可知，那个司机走了过来和Larry说话。come down下来； come through 经历；come in进来；come over 走过来。故选D。‎ ‎49.C考查动词辨析。根据下文可知这个司机打了电话报警。make a call 打电话。 故选C。‎ ‎50.A考查副词辨析。根据语境判断他们听到车内有人发出的声音。t hen那时；again再次；finally终于；even甚至。故选A。‎ ‎51.D考查动词辨析。根据上文可知汽车着火了，情况很危险，由此推断Larry离汽车远，由此判断走近，才看到车内的那位女士。‎ ‎52.B考查形容词辨析。根据本段末句she should not move可知，Larry让这名女士不要动。quiet 安静的；still不动的；away远离的；calm沉着的。故选 B。‎ ‎53.D考查连词辨析。根据后句可以推断这位受困的女士想从汽车里出来，而Larry不让她动，怕她伤到脖子，这两句话之间是转折关系。‎ ‎54.A考查动词辨析。根据后句内容判断这位妇女害怕汽车会爆炸。explore爆炸；slip away溜走；fall apart 崩溃；crash坠毁，摔碎。故选A 。‎ ‎60.C考查名词辨析。patience耐心；skill技能；effort努力；promise承诺。 故选C。根据上文可知Larry努力挽救了别人的性命。选C。‎ 考点：故事类短文阅读 第 II 卷 第三部分 英语知识运用 第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。‎ Chengdu has dozens of new millionaires, Asia’s biggest building, and fancy new hotels. But for tourists like me, pandas are its top 61 (attract).‎ ‎ So it was a great honour to be invited backstage at the not-for-profit Panda Base, where ticket money helps pay for research. I 62 （allow）to get up close to these cute animals at the 600-acre centre. From tomorrow, I will be their UK ambassador. The title will be 63 (official) given to me at a ceremony in London.But my connection with pandas goes back 64 my days on a TV show in the mid-1980s, 65 I was the first Western TV reporter 66 (permit) to film a special unit caring for pandas rescued from starvation in the wild. My ‎ ambassadorial duties will include 67 (introduce) British visitors to the 120-plus pandas at Chengdu and others at a research in the misty mountains of Bifeng.‎ ‎ On my recent visit, I held a lively three-month-old twin that had been rejected by 68 (it) mother. The nursery team switches him every few 69 ( day) with his sister so that while one is being bottle-fed, 70 other is with mum—she never suspects.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎61. attraction 62. was allowed 63. officially 64.to 65. when ‎66. permitted 67. introducing 68. its 69. days 70. the ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：‎ ‎[来源:学科网ZXXK]‎ ‎65. when考查定语从句。后面是非限制性定语从句，缺少状语，先行词是时间故填when。‎ ‎66. permitted 考查过去分词。被修饰名词和permit之间是被动关系，用过去分词。‎ ‎67. introducing考查现在分词。 介词后面用动名词。‎ ‎68. its考查代词。 指代前面的twin，用its。‎ ‎69. days考查名词复数。few修饰复数名词。‎ ‎70. the考查冠词。one …the other“一个……另一个”。‎ 考点：短文填空 第四部分 写作 （共两节，满分 35分） ‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。‎ 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。学科网 ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live .Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.‎ ‎71. that →where 72. but去掉 73. had →have 74. honest→ honesty 75. or→ and ‎ ‎76. using →used 77. becoming前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎75. or→ and 从句意判断是并列关系，把or改为and。‎ ‎76. using →used 此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来去做”。[来源:学&科&网]‎ ‎77. becoming前加of 固定短语: dream of 梦想做某事。 ‎ ‎78. the →a 固定短语：in a short period of time在短时间内。‎ ‎79. our→ his 此处指叔叔的生意，用his指代。‎ ‎80. stead→steadily grow指增长，不是系动词，故用副词修饰。‎ 考点：短文改错 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.‎ In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.‎ Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【亮点】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。‎