高考短文改错全国卷及答案解析 6页

‎【2012全国II】‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. ‎ Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎76.【答案】opinion前加my ‎【解析】根据句意前后的代词指代要一致，前文主语是I，所以后半句表达的意见就应该是我的意见。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查缺词的填补。‎ ‎77.【答案】animal---animals ‎【解析】我们还有动物们没有水就无法活。根据句意用复数形式。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查名词的单复数错误。‎ ‎78.【答案】or—nor ‎【解析】根据前文的neither可知将or改为nor。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查固定句型neither . . . nor . . .的用法。‎ ‎79.【答案】seemed—seems ‎【解析】文章整体讲得是节约用水方面的话题，通篇用得是一般现在时。所以将seemed改为seems。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查时态错误。‎ ‎85.【答案】去掉for ‎【解析】此处for找不到其相应的充分，故删去。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查多词错误。‎ ‎2013年全国卷2‎ The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early ‎1800’‎s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1.【解析】第一句中“I’m reading”作定语修饰The book, read为及物动词,所以去掉介词of。‎ ‎2.【解析】第三句中Have改为Having。provides前为主语,应用动名词形式。‎ ‎3.【解析】第三句中that改为which。逗号后为非限制性定语从句,that不能引导非限制性定语从句。‎ ‎4.【解析】第四句中becomes改为became。根据下文可知应用一般过去时。‎ ‎5.【解析】第四句中day前加定冠词the。‎ ‎6.【解析】第五句中Interesting改为Interestingly。位于句子开头,修饰整个句子,应用副词。‎ ‎7.【解析】第五句中by改为with/to。have a connection with/to表示“与……有联系”。‎ ‎8.【解析】第六句drank改为drunk。应用被动语态,drink的过去分词形式为drunk。‎ ‎9.【解析】第七句cup改为cups。根据文章可知cup应用复数形式。‎ ‎10.【解析】第八句grow改为growth。定冠词the后应加名词形式,grow为动词,其名词形式为growth。‎ ‎　My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. 　　My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. 　[语篇解读]　本文为记叙文,题材是学校生活类。作者描述了自己心目中理想的校园。 　　第二句:They→There　表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用there be句型。 　　第三句:didn’t→don’t　全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn’t改为don’t。 　　第三句:many→much　homework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。 　　第四句:with→for　表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)时,应使用介词for。 　　第五句:第一个hour→hours　“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。 　　第六句:look→looks　主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,其谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。 　　第七句:删掉第一个the　all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。 　　第八句:sat→sit　We can lie...,or (can) sit... 　　第八句:listening后加to　listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。 　　第九句:helpfully→helpful　and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。 2015普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语短文改错试题及答案解析 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am ‎ ‎ thought living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are ‎ ‎ the and green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. ‎ ‎ with Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously ‎ ‎ serious problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We ‎ ‎ air Many ‎ must found some ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ’ll live to regret it. ‎ find our think 该文thought，过去认为居住城市好，现在不这么认为了 in the countryside在乡下 or 改为and，在那里空气清新并且（不是或者）群山翠绿 on改为with, with the development of……随着…的发展（固定搭配）‎ been去掉,大量研究已经显示了（并非被显示）‎ seriously改为serious，形容词修饰名词problem严重的问题 airs改为air， 空气是不可数名词 Much改为Many， Many修饰可数名词animal found 改为find,must情态动词后边跟动词原形find找到 your改为our,代词与前边的人称We保持一致 The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can ‎ ‎ what chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend ‎ choose taking and money. But in that case, we will learn little about∧ world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view ‎ ‎ the our and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I ‎ ‎ knowledge can或should thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.‎ think much ‎2017年全国卷 Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. 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