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‎2013届高考英语专线突破（书面表达巅峰训练）‎ ‎1，第四部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ Mrs. Williams, my next-door neighbor, have a big house with a beautiful ‎ garden in front of them. She is very proud of her house because of it is always ‎ clean and tidy. While cleaned the carpets one day she suddenly saw a little mice run ‎ across her dining room. She felt terrible ashamed, for she used to telling others that ‎ mice were found only in dirty houses. She quickly asked her daughter Jenny help ‎ catch the mouse. It takes them almost half an hour to catch the mouse. Afraid of ‎ being laughed at by other people around her, Mrs. Williams wanted her daughter to ‎ keep it the secret.‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 最近， 校车的安全引起了社会的关注。 政府在征集校车安全的条例，请你用英语写一篇短文，提出合理建议并向《英语周报》投稿。要点如下：‎ 1． 严期格限制乘坐人数；‎ 2． 定期进行安全教育；‎ 3． 设置专门停靠站点；‎ 4． 严格挑选合格司机。‎ 5． 注意，词数：100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 改错：1.have—has 2.them—it 3.of去掉 4.cleaned—cleaning ‎ ‎5. mice—mouse 6.terrible—terribly 7.telling—tell 8.加to ‎9.takes—took 10.the—a ‎ 书面表达：‎ ‎2，第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ Dear Tom,‎ I’m very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your sister will come to ‎ Xi’an and call on me on July. 1st. And I’m terribly sorry that I can’t meet you at ‎ the airport because I have to attend meeting in Beijing. Now let me to tell you the ‎ way to your home. When you got out of the airport, you can take Bus No.29 to ‎ YouYi Bus Station. Walk across the Friendship Street to the west, you can see a bookstore at the corner. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can ‎ see a bank your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the bank. Find ‎ Room 502, which my mother will be waiting for you . ‎ ‎ Best regard to you all.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Liu Mei 第三节 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是中学生李华, 在搜狐微博上看到一位名叫Worryguy的中学生发布的博文。请你根据博文内容、写作要点和要求发布自己的观点。‎ 首页 微博 博客 相册 ‎ 播客 我来说两句 Worryguy: A parents’meeting is always meaning a complaints meeting to a slow student. My parents will scold me whenever they come back from it. Now the mid-term exam is over and another terrible parents’meeting is around corner. What shall I do? Help!‎ 微博通知 我的评论 我的邮箱 ‎ ‎ 发布 ‎ 表情 @ 点名 图片 视频 ‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1. 表明自己的看法；                ‎ ‎2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；‎ ‎3. 提出至少两条建议。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。‎ ‎3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。  4. 书写需清晰、工整。‎ Dear Worryguy,‎ ‎ This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion,_________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ LiHua 短文改错：‎ And—But meeting 前加a 去掉to your---my ‎ got---get Walk---Walking straightly—straight ‎ bank后加on which---where(in which) regard--regards 作文：‎ ‎ Dear Worryguy,‎ ‎ This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting. Instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.‎ ‎ In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improving teaching quality. ‎ As for your problem, it’s advisable to have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎3，第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that day, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done. 第三节 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 近年来尽管政府在改善居住上花了大量资金，但是住房问题仍然是中国许多大城市所面临的最严重问题之一。对此话题你班举行了热烈的讨论。一部分人建议：多造高层建筑(high-rise apartments)，一部分人认为：向地下发展。而你赞成前一种观点。‎ 你的理由： 1.建筑费用便宜； ‎ ‎2.久住地下对身体不利；‎ ‎3.地上阳光充足，地下只有人造光源 你的结论：…… ‎ 提示：人造光源（artificial lighting）‎ 现请你以How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities为题写120字以上的短文。‎ ‎,Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that ‎ shall given day, when she   entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she  introduced her and said we shouldn't call her Teacher ‎ herself Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ‎ Later ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don't dare ‎ in  didn't ‎ to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, "Don't be ‎ kindly afraid. I believe you can do ∧ well." At last, I went to the blackboard. She ‎ it praised me for that I had done what In recent years the government has spent a large sum of money in improving housing but the shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems facing many big cities in China. We’ve discussed heatedly the topic “How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities.”‎ Some of us suggest building more high-rise apartments while others believe to develop underground housing areas. I am in favor of the former opinion. For one thing, it is cheaper to build above ground than below. For another, living underground for a long time will do harm to people's health. Above all, people are unwilling to live underground with artificial lighting and they prefer to live above ground to enjoy the sunshine.　　‎ Although there may be some other ways to solve the housing shortage problem, I believe to build more high-rise apartments is one of the promising solutions to the housing problem.‎ 一、评分原则 ‎　　1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。‎ ‎　　2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。‎ ‎　　3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。‎ ‎　　4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。‎ ‎　　5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。‎ ‎　　6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。‎ ‎　　二、内容要点：(略)‎ ‎　　三、各档次的给分范围和要求：‎ ‎　　第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。‎ ‎　　-覆盖所有内容要点。‎ ‎　　-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。‎ ‎　　-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强 ‎　　的语言运用能力。‎ ‎　　-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。‎ ‎　　完全达到了预期的写作目的。‎ ‎　　第四档（好）（19-24分）‎ ‎　　完全完成了试题规定的任务。‎ ‎　　-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。‎ ‎　　-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。‎ ‎　　-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。‎ ‎　　-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。‎ ‎　　达到了预期的写作目的。‎ ‎　　第三档（适当）：（13-18）‎ ‎　　基本完成了试题规定的任务。‎ ‎　　-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。‎ ‎　　-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。‎ ‎　　-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。‎ ‎　　-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。‎ ‎　　整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。‎ ‎　　第二档（较差）：（7—12分）‎ ‎　　未恰当完成试题规定的任务。‎ ‎-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。‎ ‎　　-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。‎ ‎　　-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。‎ ‎　　-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。‎ ‎　　信息未能清楚地传达给读者。‎ ‎　　第一档（差）：（1-6分）‎ ‎　　未完成试题规定的任务。‎ ‎　　-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。‎ ‎　　-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。‎ ‎　　-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。‎ ‎　　-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。‎ ‎　　信息未能传达给读者。‎ ‎　　0分 ‎　　未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。‎ ‎　　四、说明 ‎　　1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达 2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分 ‎4，第四部分 写作 ‎ 书面表达 某英文报社正在举办 “An Unforgettable Experience” 征文比赛。假设你是李华，你班参加全校班歌比赛获得一等奖。请根据所给提示写一篇120词左右的英语短文，向报社投稿。‎ 写作内容应包括： 1. 准备工作如: 选歌; 展现形式; 服装 ‎ 2. 简述成功原因及个人感受 注意： 1.短文开头语已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 2.短文中不要出现你的真实信息。‎ An Unforgettable Experience I will never forget the day when our class won the first prize in the Class Theme Song ‎ Competition. ___________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Key I. Writing I will never forget the day when our class won the first prize in the Class Theme Song Competition. Proud as we are, it is how we prepared ourselves for the big day that impresses me most. ‎ Getting prepared for the competition was no easy work. It took us several days to decide on the song written by the “music genius” in our class accompanied by the melody of “When You Believe”. Then came the two weeks of practice, during which we learnt to cooperate with each other so as to sing a song of harmony in chorus. On top of that, what helped our class stood out were the creative style we showed on stage and the specially designed T-shirts we wore. ‎ Talking of the highlights of our performance, personally I think it is our enthusiasm and team work that make our class a success in the competition. Our enthusiasm put us forward even on stormy days while team work paved the way to better understanding and cooperation. With all the efforts made, not only do we enjoy a great success but we have a closer friendship with each other, which we will keep in mind for ever. ‎ 第二节 ‎5，书面表达（满分30分）‎ ‎ 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：‎ 有些人认为有必要 另一些人认为没有必要 有老师辅导比自己学好 有更多机会和老师互动 可以弥补上课错过或没听懂的东西 容易养成依赖习惯 学生需要时间休息和娱乐 导致有的学生在常规课堂上不认真听讲 请您根据以上提示，以Are Training Classes or Tutors Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 ‎ 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。‎ 参考词汇：家庭教师：tutor ‎ 要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。‎ 文章开头已给出：‎ ‎ Are Training Classes or Tutors Necessary ?‎ Nowadays, more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends. ‎ Are Training Classes or Tutors Necessary ?‎ ‎ Nowadays, more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends.‎ Some think it necessary to do so. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher’s help than by themselves. Secondly, you can have more chances to communicate with teachers (there are more interaction between students and teachers.) . Besides, you can make up for what you miss or fail to understand in classes on weekdays. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence.‎ ‎ For another, students need time for rest and recreation at weekends. What’s worse, attending training classes or hiring tutors even causes some students not to listen attentively in their regular classes.‎ In my opinion, whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.‎ ‎6，第四部分：书面表达 第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）‎ 阅读下列各小题，根据所给的汉语句子，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。‎ ‎71. By the time he was twelve years old, he __________________ a chemistry lab of his own. (set) ‎ 他十二岁时，已经建立了自己的化学实验室。‎ ‎72. _______________ that China produces one third of the world’s cigarettes. (astonish)‎ 令人震惊的是全世界三分之一的香烟是由中国生产的。‎ ‎73. ____________________ should be no reason for treating one’s neighbors as strangers. （occupy）‎ 工作繁忙不应该成为“对面不相识”的借口。‎ ‎74. Rosalyn loves sports. She is proud ________________ competitions and to have broken a record by running 800 meters this year. (participate)‎ 罗莎琳热爱运动。她为今年参加比赛并打破800米赛跑的记录而感到骄傲。‎ ‎75. Not until we watched the Earth Day program on TV ______________________ much about global warming. (learn)‎ 直到我们观看了地球日的电视节目，我们才了解了大量关于全球变暖的问题。‎ ‎76. The settlement is home to nearly 1,000 people, __________________ their village homes for a better life in the city. （leave）‎ 近千人在这一小社区居住，他们当中很多都是从农村老家来城市寻求更好的日子的。‎ ‎77. He arrived in New Orleans without a penny in his pocket __________________ that there were boats for South America. （find）‎ 他身无分文的来到新奥尔良时，却发现那里没有开往南美洲的船了。‎ ‎78. __________________ of over ‎400km per hour, the train can complete the 30-kilometre journey in eight minutes. （travel） ‎ 以每小时400多公里的速度行驶，所以这辆火车能在8分钟之内可以完成30公里的行程。‎ ‎79. When the survivor came to himself, he was eager to know _________________that saved him from the burning house. (be) ‎ 当生还者醒过来后，他急切的想知道到底是谁把他从燃烧的房子里救出来的。 ‎ ‎80. Had he not broken the rules last week, he __________________ this week, which annoyed his mother. (fall)‎ 要是上周他没有违反纪律，这周他就不会掉队，这让他妈妈很懊恼。‎ 第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）（原创）‎ 请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ ‎ Life is a series of events—both good and bad. Just when we start to get comfortable with a person, a place or a situation, something comes along to change the recipe. The truly successful person expects the unexpected, and is prepared to make adjustments. ‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数为120左右。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ 完成句子 ‎71. had set up 72. It is astonishing / People are astonished / What astonishes people is ‎73. Being occupied with work 74. to have participated in ‎75. did we learn 76. many of whom left 77. only to find 78. Travelling at a / the speed ‎79. could have run 80. would not fall behind ‎ 短文写作评分标准 第五档 ‎（很好，25~30分）‎ 很好地完成了试题规定的任务； 按要求写出了内容要点； 语言结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富；语言错误极少； 有效采用不同连接手段，层次清楚； 格式和语域恰当； 完全达到与目标读者交流的目的。‎ 第四档 ‎（好，19~24分）‎ 较好地完成了试题规定的任务； 包含基本内容要点，允许漏掉一到两个次要点； 使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇； 语言较为准确，只在试图表达较复杂意义时才出现个别错误； 采用了较适当的衔接手法，层次清楚； ‎ 格式与语域较恰当； 达到与目标读者交流的目的。‎ 第三档 ‎（适当，13~18分）‎ 基本完成了试题规定的任务；包含多数内容要点，可能漏掉一些内容； 应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务需求； 有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解； 采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清楚； 格式与语域基本合理； 基本达到与目标读者交流的目的。‎ ‎7，第四部分：书面表达 (共两节，满分40分)‎ 第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）‎ 阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。‎ ‎71. Our teachers often say whether we ______________________ relies on our attitude.(achieve)‎ ‎ 我们老师常说我们能否实现目标取决于我们的态度。‎ ‎72. It was in the city where _________________ that he received his compulsory education. (live)‎ ‎ 他是在那个他曾经住过的城市接受的义务教育。 ‎ ‎73. In response, Jiang Yu states that we hope the foreign countries don't _________________in South Sea dispute. (involve)‎ ‎ 姜瑜在回应中称我们希望外国不要卷入南中国海的争端。‎ ‎74. By the time _____________________ , I will have finished the book.(come)‎ ‎ 到他回来时，我将完成这本书。‎ ‎75. __________________ at the meeting is important for you as well as for me. (present)‎ ‎ 出席这个会议对你对我都很重要。‎ ‎76. Out ____________________of students, most of whom were once my son’s classmates. (rush)‎ ‎ 一群学生冲了出来，他们大部分曾经是我儿子的同班同学。‎ ‎77. The weather is hotter and hotter; I would rather that ________________winter now. (be)‎ ‎ 天气愈来愈热，我宁愿现在是冬天。‎ ‎78. I ___________________ there when the traffic accident occurred. (happen)‎ ‎ 车祸发生时我碰巧在那儿。 ‎ ‎79. He didn’t come to school yesterday ____________________ that he was ill. (fact)‎ ‎ 他昨天没来上学是因为他生病了。‎ ‎80. Our new campus is _____________________ of the old one. (size)‎ ‎ 我们的新校园是老校园的五倍大。 ‎ 第二节：短文写作 (共1题，满分30分)‎ 请你就“物价上涨及中学生节省开支”这一话题写一篇发言稿，发表看法，并包括如下要点：‎ ‎ (1) 受访者对物价上涨的反映；‎ ‎（2）你在日常生活中对物价上涨的体会； ‎ ‎（3）中学生在日常生活中应如何精打细算，节省开支； ‎ ‎（4）呼吁同学们从小事做起，发扬节约的中华美德。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右；‎ ‎2．发言稿中不能现出真实姓名和学校名称。‎ 参考词汇：受访者 respondents 美德virtue(s) ‎ Dear boys and girls, ‎ It’s my great honour to make a speech here. Recently, the People’s Bank of China conducted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ KEY ‎71.can achieve our goal ‎ ‎72.he once lived ‎73. get involved ‎74. he comes back ‎75. Being present ‎ ‎76. rushed a crowd/ a group ‎ ‎77. it were/was ‎ ‎78. happened to be ‎ ‎79. because of /owing to/ due to the fact ‎ ‎80. five times the size One Possible Version: ‎ Dear boys and girls, ‎ It’s my great honor to make a speech here. Recently, the People’s Bank of China conducted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities. Nearly half of the respondents said they couldn’t tolerate the increasing prices, while some others considered it OK although they acknowledged the truth. As a result, many families began to seek various ways to save money. ‎ The survey does draw my attention to the rapidly increasing prices in my daily life. Take food as an example, the prices of pork, beef, fish, chicken, as well as various vegetables, have risen at least 20%. It seems that money is flowing out of our pockets more quickly, but silently. ‎ Although we middle school students feel less stress than our parents do, we should also have a proper budget for our pocket money. For example, we can make the most of each exercise book and reuse some waste paper. Or we can also try to cut down our expenses on unnecessary magazines, CDs and so on. In a word, we can save money in many aspects in our daily life. ‎ All in all, saving money is a great Chinese virtue and it is especially needed in this period. Thank you!‎ ‎8, III 写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 近年来，我国校车安全事故频发，引发社会强烈关注与反思。请根据以下提示，写一篇有关我国校车安全情况的文章，向21st Century英文报投稿。‎ 事故回放 ‎2011年11月16日上午，甘肃省庆阳市，一辆严重超载的幼儿园校车与大卡车相撞，造成包括司机、1名老师以及19名幼儿在内的21人死亡。‎ 社会影响 人们感到震惊和痛心，担心事故重演，呼吁政府采取行动。‎ 政府措施 国务院于‎2012年4月5日颁布《校车安全管理条例》，并要求在各地施行。‎ 决策意义 体现了对生命的关爱，有助于稳定社会。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。‎ ‎【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯 参考词汇：国务院 the State Council；‎ ‎ 校车安全管理条例 School Bus Safety Regulations 第二节  读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） ‎ 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词的英语短文。‎ The elephant and the fly A disciple(信徒), who was disturbed by the fact that his mind was in constant unrest, asked his teacher, “Why are most people’s minds restless? What can one do to still the mind?” The teacher looked at the disciple, smiled and told him a story:‎ ‎ An elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree. A small fly came，flying and buzzing(嗡嗡叫) near his ear. The elephant waved it away with his long ears. Then the fly came again, and the elephant waved it away once more. ‎ This was repeated several times. Then the elephant asked the fly, “Why are you so restless and noisy? Why can’t you stay for a while in one place? ”‎ The fly answered, “I am attracted to whatever I see, hear or smell. My five senses pull me constantly in all directions and I cannot resist them．What is your secret? How can you stay so calm and still?”‎ The elephant stopped eating and said, “My five senses do not rule my attention. Whatever I do, I get immersed in it. Now that I am eating, I am completely absorbed in eating. In this way I can enjoy my food and chew it better. I rule and control my attention, and not the other way around.” ‎ Upon hearing these words, a smile appeared on the disciple’s face, “I understand! If my five senses are in control of my mind and attention, then my mind is in constant unrest. If I am in charge of my five senses and attention, then my mind becomes calm.” ‎ ‎【写作内容】 ‎ 1． 以约30个词概括短文的内容；‎ 2． 然后以约120个词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：‎ （1） 大象和苍蝇的故事给你的启示；‎ （2） 讲述你（或你朋友）因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历；‎ （3） 你认为怎样才能保持专注、专心。‎ ‎【写作要求】 ‎ 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；‎ 2. 作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ ‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 ‎ III 写作 第一节  基础写作 A possible version:‎ The morning of November 16th, 2011 witnessed a disastrous car accident in Qingyang, Gansu Province. A kindergarten school bus, which was seriously overloaded, crashed into a big truck, causing 21 deaths, including 19 kids，a school teacher and the driver himself. Shocked and sad at the news, people feared that accidents like this would happen again and thus called for the government to take immediate action. To people's relief, the State Council officially issued the School Bus Safety Regulations on April 5th, 2012 and ordered the act should be put into effect in all places. The act not only reveals the government's great concern about people's lives, but also helps create a more stable society.‎ 第二节 读写任务 Possible version：‎ ‎ An elephant told a restless fly that being absorbed in doing things helped him stay still. After hearing the story from his teacher, the disciple realized that only by controlling his senses can he obtain calmness. (36 words)‎ After reading the story, I was inspired by what the elephant said. The ability to focus your attention is the key to your success in doing anything. Just like the fly, a person who is easily distracted by the surroundings will feel restless and tired, unable to achieve his success. ‎ This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student. I was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and after-class activities intended for us students. It seemed that many groups were suitable to me. During the first term, I was ‎ attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it. As a result, I didn’t spend enough time on my studies, nor could I settle down on my homework every day. Consequently, I failed in an important exam. ‎ I have learned a lesson from this experience that one should focus on one thing at a time before he can get it well done. To do so, we should put what we are doing in the first place and keep it up without being interfered by other events. Only when we have a clear and determined mind can we accomplish something in the end.‎ ‎9, 第三部分 写作(共两节，满分50分)‎ 第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l．5分，满分l5分)‎ ‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ Dear David,‎ ‎ I can't be more glad and exciting to hear that you are 66. ______‎ paying visit to us. You are welcome to stay with us. We 67._______‎ will show you around the city but spend a lot of time 68. _______ ‎ talking and sharing. Now take your time make your 69. _______ ‎ plans. I will be teach and grading exams until July 70. ________‎ ‎13th. Then, maybe I will fly to Mexico for 3 and 4 weeks. 71. ________ ‎ We have been decided that Damaris is not going to study 72. ________ ‎ in Canada and I might go to Mexico to solve some 73. ________ ‎ problems．Anyway，we hope what it will work out well． 74．________‎ We are looking forward to meet you soon． 75．________‎ ‎ Yours， ‎ Victoria ‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分35 分）‎ 自去年年底起，我国西南地区的旱灾持续了几个月。许多土地因干旱而颗粒无收，人们面对着缺水断粮的困境。在天灾面前，我们人类在寻找办法降低损失的同时，也应反省自己。请根据下表，写一篇文章分析出现旱灾的原因以及我们该如何从自身做起。‎ 注意:(1)词数100左右; (2)可适当增加细节以使上下文连贯; (3)开头已写好,不计入总词数。‎ 原因 ‎ 做法 中国63％的城市面临水资源缺乏，污染和工业化恶化了这种情况；‎ 大量树木被砍伐，森林覆盖率急剧下降；‎ 水利工程没有合理利用，灌溉系统过于陈旧。‎ ‎(1) 用水意识……‎ ‎(2)水土保持……‎ ‎(3)政府投入……‎ 参考词汇1.drought干旱 2. industrialization工业化 3.water conservation project水利工程 ‎ ‎ 4.irrigation systems 灌溉系统 5. investment投资 What Lessons Should Be Learned From the Drought The drought in the south-west China lasts for several months, which makes people face water and food scarcity. We should learn lessons from it.‎ The drought can be caused by several factors. ‎ 短文改错 ‎66．将exciting改为excited。 67．在paying后加a。 68．将but改为and。 69．在time后加to。 70．将teach改为teaching。71．将and改为or或to。 72．去掉been。‎ ‎73．正确。 74．将what改为that或去掉what。75．将meet改为meeting。‎ 书面表达 ‎【猜题理由】我国西南地区的旱灾牵动着国人的心，在为之痛心的同时，我们也应从中吸取教训。通过这篇文章来唤起人们的节约用水 和环保意识。环保意识也是全人类共同关注的焦点。‎ ‎【构思点拨】此类作文一般分三段式：第一段点明主题：旱灾给我们带来的反思(已给出);‎ 第二段分析出现旱灾的原因;第三段写作为人类，在天灾面前应如何 从自身做起。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ What Lessons Should Be L earned From the Drough ‎ The drought in the south-west China has lasts for several months, which makes people face water and food scarcity. We should learn lessons from it.‎ The drought can be cause by several factors. Firstly, about 63 percent of cities in China are facing water scarcity. The situation is worsened by pollution and industrialization. In addition, too many trees have been cut down, so forest coverage has been decreasing rapidly. What's more, some water conservation projects haven't been functioning properly, thus people there have had to rely more heavily on rainfall for their water supply. Most of China's irrigation systems are very old.‎ In order to prevent this case coming about again, we should improve our awareness of saving water, making proper use of water and recycling water. Meanwhile, we ought to plant more trees and protect environment to prevent loss of water and soil erosion. Of course, the governments should increase investment and repair water conservation projects as timely as possible.‎ ‎10, 第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。‎ 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。‎ ‎2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。‎ It is known to us all, paper burns easily. Yesterday, Mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper box and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much to his surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment that he asked for his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary school,‎ ‎ didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did everything he could help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting in the study of modern science.‎ 第一节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 随着人们环保意识的提高，越来越多的人选择低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）。假设你是校英语协会主席李华，请写一篇英语倡议书，从出行、购物、用水、用电四个方面倡议同学们选择低碳生活。‎ 注意：1. 词数：120左右；‎ ‎ 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3. 参考词汇：排放emission Dear fellow students,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Dear fellow students, let’s take action right now!‎ 短文改错 ‎1 It---As 2 for---with 3 tries---tried 4 surprises---surprise 5 Such---- so ‎6 去掉 for 7 which---who 8 ask ---answer 9 help 前加 to 10 interesting---interested 作文 Dear fellow students， ‎ ‎ The earth is faced with serious pollution and energy shortage. It is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. I think everyone should take an active part. ‎ ‎ First of all, we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Second, when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. And it’ s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. Last but not least, we should turn off the tap after we use the running water. If we can make a small change in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth!‎ ‎ Dear fellow students, let’s take action right now!‎ ‎11, ‎ ‎12,‎ 根据短文内容，从下框的A---F选项中选出能概括每一段主题的最佳选项。 ‎ A. A short history of naming hurricanes B. Make use of the hurricane energy C. Difficulty in forecasting the course of a hurricane D. Huge energy stored in a hurricane E. Forecasting a hurricane through satellite watching F. Different names for the same things Hurricanes ‎ ‎61. ‎ Did you know that before 1950, hurricanes had no names? They were simply given numbers. The first names were simply Alpha, Bravo, Charlie, etc. But in 1953, females names were given ‎ because of the unpredictability factor of the storms. In 1979, realizing the sexist (性别歧视的) nature of such names, the lists were expanded to include both men and women.‎ ‎62. ‎ Hurricanes and typhoons are the same things. If they form in the Atlantic, we call these strong storms hurricanes, from the West Indian word hurricane, meaning "big wind." And if they are Pacific storms, they are called typhoons from the Chinese “taifeng”, meaning " great wind." To be classified as a hurricane, the storm must have maximum winds of at least ‎75 mph. ‎ ‎63. ‎ Hurricanes get their power from water vapor as it gives out its stored-up energy. All water vapor gives out heat as it condenses (凝结) from a gaseous state to a liquid state over fixed points on the equator (赤道). To make a hurricane, you must have extremely wet, warm air, the kind of air that can only be found in tropical region.‎ ‎64. ‎ Scientists have determined that the heat given out in the process of water condensation can be as high as 95 billion kilowatts per hour. In just one day alone, the storm can produce more energy than many industrialized nations need in an entire year! The problem is that we don't know how to make sure such great energy work for us. Predicting the path of a hurricane is one of the most difficult tasks for forecasters.‎ ‎65. ‎ A hurricane moves at a typical speed of ‎15 mph. But not always. Some storms may race at twice this speed, then suddenly stop and remain in the same location for several days. It can be maddening if you live in a coastal area that may be hit. The biggest advance in early prediction is continuous watch from weather satellites. With these, we can see the storms form and track them fully, from birth to death. While they can still kill people and destroy property, hurricanes will never surprise any nation again.‎ 第三部分：书面表达（25分）‎ ‎ ‎ 假设你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题班会为健康成长的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1，乐观的人生态度；2，努力学习；3，参加体育锻炼。‎ 注意：1，词数100个左右；2，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯，开头已写好。‎ ‎ We all want to grow up happily and healthily ,for this goal we must do several things.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 短文改错答案 写作 We all want to grow up happily and healthily , for this goal we must do several things.‎ Firstly , we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. we should be brave in front of difficulties. ‎ Secondly,we must study hard .because knowledge is power .if we have the power ,we can help to build our county and enjoy life better .‎ In order to study well ,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit .we can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day study .if we do those things well .we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. ‎ ‎13,第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.‎ 学科王 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎2月4日‎，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。‎ ‎1组学科王 扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物 ‎2组 宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木 ‎3组 演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性 你的看法 ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；‎ ‎2．日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数；‎ ‎3．词数：100词左右。 4．参考词汇：烟蒂cigarette end 标牌 board February 4, Sunday Fine This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________短文改错：‎ Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was ‎ ‎ ‎ very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to ‎ so a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. ‎ ‎ known an Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, ‎ ‎ who ‎∧looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the ‎ was或looked company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had ‎ no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the ‎ ‎ idea waiting workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he ‎ ‎ Luckily was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give ‎ ‎ because the job to whoever he believed was helpful.‎ ‎14, 第四部分 写作 (共两节，满分35分) 第一节 短文填词 (共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)  阅读下面短文，根据以下提示：1）汉语提示；2）首字母提示；3）语境提示，在每个空格内填入一个适当的英语单词，并将该词完整地写在右边相对应的横线上。所填单词要求意义准确，拼写正确。 ‎ The mobile phone is becoming more and more popular with teenagers. ‎ It shortens the d________ between people. Thanks to the mobile phone, 76. ___________‎ it is more ________ (方便) for us to contact people. But have you noticed that 77. ___________‎ sometimes the mobile phone also b________ embarrassment to us? It's not 78. ___________‎ rare to see someone shouting loudly as if there ________ no one else present. 79. ___________‎ And I'm sure everyone has had some ________ (经历) in which the mobile 80. ___________‎ phone rings again and again ________ public. People may have various reasons 81. ___________‎ why they keep the phone w________ all the time, but it interrupts people who 82. ___________‎ want to concentrate on ________ they're doing. So if you are one of them, 83. ___________‎ please shut off your mobile phone on formal occasions, e________ when you 84. ___________‎ are attending class or meetings. It's a respect for both ________ (别人) and 85. ___________‎ yourself. ‎ 第二节 书面表达 （满分25分）‎ ‎ 2011年广东佛山的“小悦悦”事件引发广泛热议, 请根据以下的图表, 用英语写一篇短文, 简单描述事件的经过并谈谈你的看法。‎ 时间 ‎2011年10月13日 地点 广东佛山 人物 ‎2岁的王悦 事件经过 ‎1. 相继被两车碾压；‎ ‎2. 18名路人路过但都视而不见；‎ ‎3. 最后一名拾荒阿姨上前施以援手。‎ ‎4. 八天后, 王悦去世 你的看法 ‎。。。‎ ‎ ‎ 注意：1.不能逐条翻译, 可适当发挥。‎ ‎ 2.词数120左右（开头已经写好, 不计人总词数）。‎ ‎ 3.参考词汇：小货车small van; 拾荒collect scraps ‎ ‎ On October 13, 2011, two-year-old Wang Yue was playing on the street. _______________‎ V.短文填词10% ‎ ‎76. distance 77. convenient 78. bring 79. were 80. experiences ‎81. in 82. working 83. what 84. especially 85. others IV.书面表达25%‎ One possible version:‎ ‎ On October 13, 2011, two-year old Wang Yue was playing on the street. Unfortunately, a small van rushed by and ran over the young girl. But with brief stopping, the van continued driving. Then a second vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without stopping. At least 18 people passed the seriously injured girl before finally an old woman who was later discovered to be making a living by collecting scraps came to her rescue. After 8 days of struggle in hospital, Wang Yue died and left us forever. The incident has stirred heated discussions both in and outside China.‎ ‎ Most people can't believe this incident should have happened in Guaiigdong, a place where China's economic reforms first began and a place which has powered the country's remarkable growth. People have focused much on economic development, but they haven't paid enough attention to the promotion of morality. While we can't ignore the development of economy, we should offer a hand to those in need as well. ‎ We should concentrate more on the education of morality and enforce laws to prevent similar incidents from happening again.‎ ‎15, ‎ ‎16, 第四部分 写作（共三节，满分35分）‎ 第一节 短文填词（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）学科王 阅读下面短文，根据以下提示：1）汉语提示，2）首字母提示，3）语境提示，在每个空格内填入一个适当的英语单词，并将该词完整地写在右边相对应的横线上。所填单词要求意义准确，拼写正确。‎ A 95-year-old American woman named Nola Ochs is the ‎ oldest college graduate in ______(历史). She loves learning all 76. ___________‎ her life though her ______(教育) was interrupted several times. 77. ___________‎ There is an English proverb, “It’s never ______ old to learn.” 78. ___________‎ The oldest college graduate is i in learning and she has 79. ___________‎ s a good example for us young students. I need to work 80. ___________‎ harder at my lessons so ______ one day my dream will 81. ___________‎ ‎______ true. My deskmate Zhang Hong is a top student in my 82. ___________‎ grade. W impresses me most is that she uses every 83. ___________‎ minute she can ______(腾出) to study. It’s time for me to learn 84. ___________‎ ‎______ the old woman and catch up with Zhang Hong. 85. ___________‎ 第二节 书面表达 （满分25分）‎ ‎ 根据漫画，请用英语写一篇短文，描述图画内容，解释图画内涵并提出你的建议,如开发干净又便宜的新能源、提供便捷的公共交通方式等等。‎ 词数：120左右 参考词汇：汽车废气 car exhaust 交通方式 means of transportation 一. 短文填词（10分）:‎ ‎76. history 77. education 78. too 79. interested 80. set ‎81. that 82. come 83. What 84. spare/save 85. from 二. 书面表达（25分）：‎ ‎17，第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）‎ 第一节 短文填词（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 阅读下面短文，根据以下提示：1）汉语提示，2）首字母提示，3）语境提示, 在每个空格内填入一个适当的英语单词，并将该词完整地写在右边相对应的横线上。所填单词要求意义准确，拼写正确。‎ The Internet was first set up in the 1960s. At that time, the ‎ computer was both large expensive and the networks were 76.________‎ unable to w well. If one of the computers broke down, the 77.________‎ whole networks would be unable to run. At the b , the Internet 78. _______ was just e by the government. By the 1970s, it had been 79._______‎ used in universities, banks and _______(医院). In the early 1990s, 80._______‎ computers became _______(便宜) and easier to operate. Now it 81.________‎ is very ______(方便) to log on the Internet. It is said that each 82._______‎ day tens _______ millions of people log on the Internet. Sending 83.________ ‎ e-mails is becoming ______ and more popular. The Internet has 84._______‎ become the most important p of people’s life. 85._________‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是某校一名高三学生，被校学生会推选参加兄弟学校联合举办主题为“怎样成为一名效率高的学习者”的交流研讨会，请按要求用英语写一篇短文，发表在joinus.edu.cn校园网。内容须包括以下要点：‎ ‎1. 制定切实可行的学习日程表；‎ 2. 合理分配各科学习时间，均衡发展；‎ 3. 适当参加体育锻炼；‎ 4. 其他。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文标题和开头句子已给出，不计入总词数;‎ ‎2. 可根据提示适当发挥;‎ ‎3. 词数：120左右。‎ 参考词汇：seminar n.研讨会 agenda n. 日程表 well-balanced adj均衡发展 ‎ How to Be an Efficient Learner?‎ Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. ‎ ‎76. and 77. work 78. beginning 79. employed 80. hospitals ‎ ‎81. cheaper 82. convenient 83. of 84. more 85. part One possible version How to be an efficient learner?‎ Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. Because of limited time, it’s important to be an efficient learner. But how can we become efficient learners? ‎ Firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.‎ Secondly, divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. ‎ Thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and ensure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.‎ Besides, hold informal seminars to discuss with classmates about difficult problems and find best solutions. It’s also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.‎ All in all, efficiency is the key to success. ‎ ‎18，第一节 单词拼写（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 根据下列句子及所给汉语注释，写出空缺处各单词的正确形式。每空只写一词。‎ ‎66. The exercises are designed to ________ (增强) your stomach muscle. 67. Don’t be frightened by the television camera. Just speak (自然地).‎ ‎68. The boy spoke in a low voice （承认）that it was his fault.‎ ‎69. Are you well __________(准备) for the entrance examination?‎ ‎70. As the storm drew near, black clouds were __________ (聚集) over the sky.‎ ‎71. However, his __________ (知识) of French remained very weak.‎ ‎72. (令人吃惊的是) , some graduates with qualification failed to find jobs.‎ ‎73. The Bank of China has a lot of __________ (支行) in the world.‎ ‎74. This kind of tree can only grow in the __________ (北方) parts of China.  ‎ ‎75. Nuclear physics is ________（超出） my understanding.‎ 第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ ‎　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：‎ ‎　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ ‎　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ ‎　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ Attention, please, everyone. We’ve accepted the 　　　　　　　　　　　76. ______ weather forecast on the radio this morning that　　　　　　　　　　　　77. ______ there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure 　　　　　　　　　　　　 78. ______ to shut the windows and doors until you leave 　　　　　　　　　　　　79. ______ your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to 　　　　　　　　　80. ______ hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes 　　　　　　　　　 　 81. ______ fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will 　　 　　　　　　　　　　82. ______ have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is 　　　　　　　　　 　 83. ______ colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 　　　　　　　　　84. ______ Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your 　　　　　　　　　　　　85.______ umbrellas open while riding. ‎ 第三节：书面表达（满分30分）‎ 你班同学在英语课上讨论毕业班学生是否可以把课本留给下一届学生使用这一问题。假如你是小组长，请根据小组讨论的记录用英语写一份报告，并陈述自己的看法或建议。报告要点如下：‎ Advantages Disadvantages 可以节省资源，减少浪费 教材内容经常更新 节约家庭开支 不能在书上作笔记 西方国家普遍采用此作法 注意：(1)报道必须包括所有要点，适当增加细节，使内容连贯、完整。‎ ‎(2)报道的开头部分已写好，只需接着写。（不记入总字数）‎ ‎(3)词数1 20左右。‎ Is Recycling Textbook a Good Suggestion?‎ On behalf of our group，I'd like to give a brief summary of our discussion on the topic “Is Recycling Textbook a Good suggestion?”‎ ‎19，Part IV Writing (45 marks)‎ Section A (10 marks)‎ Directions: Read the following passage. Fill in the numbered blanks by using the information from the passage.‎ Write NO MORE THAN THREE WORDS for each answer.‎ Cheerleaders are part of athletic competitions throughout the United States. As their name says, they lead the crowd in cheering for team it likes best.‎ ‎ About five years ago, cheerleaders were considered to be simply entertainers. Today they are much more than that.‎ ‎ Cheerleading in America has become another form of athletic competition.‎ ‎ Cheerleading today are expected to be gymnasts and dancers. They are expected to be quicker and stronger. Many cheerleaders are better athletes than the boys and girls on sports teams. High school cheerleading especially has become more difficult. The students must be in top physical shape. They must be able to jump high, turn circles in the air and lift each other. Teachers say this ‎ ‎ is the result of the influence of college football and basketball games on TV.‎ ‎ They see how the cheerleaders throw each other into the air and perform difficult athletic movements. They want to do the same thing. There is one big difference between the two groups, however. College cheerleaders in America are young men and women.. The men do most of the lifting. At most high schools only girls are cheerleaders. It’s very difficult for them to hold others on their shoulders and throw them into the air.‎ ‎ There are a number of ways high school cheerleaders are improving their skills. They are exercising and lifting weights to increase their strength. And they are attending camps during the summer holiday to learn new techniques. Cheerleaders test their skills by taking part in competitions against cheerleaders from other schools, just like other athletes.‎ ‎ Coaches at some high schools say this new kind of athletic cheerleading has caused some problems. They say girls who were soccer and basketball players are now competing, for places on a cheerleaders team. As mere girls attempt to become cheerleaders, sports teams suffer from a lack of good players. ‎ ‎ Title : Cheerleaders Players of cheerleaders ‎76.______________________‎ Entertainers Today ‎77._________________‎ ‎78. __________________‎ required as a cheerleader ‎ Bring able to jump high ‎ Being able to turn circles in the air ‎ ‎ Being able to 79.________________‎ ‎80._________________‎ High school cheerleaders ‎ 81._________________‎ ‎82. __________________‎ ‎ Young men and women Cheerleaders’ 83.____________‎ ‎ Exercising and lifting weights ‎84. _______________during summer holidays ‎ Problems from the new kind of cheerleading ‎ ‎ ‎ Sports teams 85.____________‎ Section B(10 marks)‎ ‎ Directions: Read the following passage. Answer the questions according to the information given in the passage.‎ ‎ My school goes all the way from classes for five-year-olds to classes for 18-year-olds .One day, my teacher told me about Clare. “I have a girl in my year 3 class. Her name is Clare and she reminds me so much of you. She seems a little lost in class. Do you think you could have a chat with her?” Of course I was very glad to do this.‎ ‎ Clare turned out to be a pale little girl, slim and small for her age. After talking to the 8-year-old for a while, we discovered that we both enjoyed reading and writhing short stories.‎ ‎ I started visiting the junior school as often as I could during morning break to read aloud some of the books to Clare. After a while, other girls started coming to listen too. Some days I didn’t read and instead just talked to Clare. We talked about her friends, school work , books we’d read and things we’d done. I told her about the work I was doing sometimes and she always surprised me so much with her great intelligence. We talked about general interesting things they don’t teach in school at her age.‎ ‎ I still go to see Clare as often as I can. There are days when I get so excited about Clare, about how brilliant she is and how far she’ll go in life. I’m excited about how much she understands about the world. Being with her and talking to her excites me to no end.‎ ‎ I just wanted to share that excitement with you and to encourage everyone to help somebody in their life who could use a little bit of support. ‎ ‎81. Why did the teacher ask the author to talk with Clare? (no more than 8 words)‎ ‎ ______________________________________________________________________.‎ ‎82. What did the author and Clare both like doing?(no more than 6 words)‎ ‎ ______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎83. What did the author’s purpose by writing the text? (no more than 7 words) ‎ ‎ ______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎84. How did the author and Clare get along with each other?(no more than 3 words)‎ ‎ _______________ _______________________________________________________‎ Section C (25 marks)‎ ‎ Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. ‎ ‎ 请根据内容提示，用英语以“Life in Senior” 为题写一篇短文，叙述高三生活。‎ 词数：120左右 ‎ 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 总体印象 ‎ 快乐、辛苦、压力大 实际生活 ‎ 时间紧，常熬夜 ‎ 作业多，考试多 ‎ 克服困难，不断进步 ‎ 设法放松，看书打球 展望未来 ‎ 充满信心 ‎ 快乐高三 阅读填空 ‎71. Five years ago ‎ ‎72. Gymnasts and dancers ‎ ‎73. Qualities /Abilities ‎74. lift each other ‎75. Different cheerleaders / Kinds of cheerleaders ‎ ‎76. Mostly/Mainly girls ‎77. college cheerleaders ‎78. ways of improvement ‎79. Attending camps ‎80. lacking good players 简答题 ‎81. Because they have so much in common.‎ ‎82. Reading and writing short stories.‎ ‎83. To encourage readers to help others.‎ ‎84. Very well.‎ 作文 One possible version ‎ Life in Senor ‎ Life in Senior is both tiring , exciting and meaningful.‎ ‎ As everyone knows, Senior is far from relaxing and easy. Every minute counts. Working late at night is often the case. There is much homework and we have to take many exams, such as monthly exams.‎ ‎ We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies. We have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers.‎ ‎ Besides our lessons, of course, we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves, girls reading colorful magazines ad boys playing basketball.‎ ‎ Busy and tired as we are, we still feel happy and confident of our future.‎ ‎20，‎ 第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分50分）‎ 第一节：完成句子（共10小题，每小题2分，满分20分）‎ 阅读下列各小题，根据汉语译文及句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。‎ ‎71．________________________, you will be admitted into a key university. (work)‎ ‎ 好好学习,你会被重点大学录取的。‎ ‎72．The kids are not interested in this subject, which is ________________________. (lie)‎ ‎ 孩子们对这门功课不感兴趣，这是问题所在。‎ ‎73．________________________, he went to the Hollywood. (with)‎ ‎ 心存梦想，他去了好莱坞。‎ ‎74．When we went to that district last year, we found that ________________________covered with trees and grass. (five)‎ ‎ 当我们去年到这个地区来时，我们发现它的五分之二覆盖着树木和草。‎ ‎75．_____________________, they took quick action to attack the enemy’s army. (consideration)‎ ‎ 一切都考虑周全了，他们迅速采取行动攻击敌人的军队。‎ ‎76．My MP4 player isn’t in my bag. Where ________________________ it ? (put)‎ ‎ 我的MP4不在我的包里，我可能把它放在哪里了呢？‎ ‎77．____________,she heard a great noise, which grew to a terrible roar. （move）‎ 她还没来得及动弹，就听见有很响的声音，接着就成了可怕的隆隆轰鸣声。 ‎ ‎78．________________________, we must admit his musical talent. (as)‎ ‎ 尽管我们可能会讨厌他，我们必须承认他的音乐才华。‎ ‎79．We rushed to the football court, only to see a sign ________________________ “Periodic maintenance”. (write)‎ ‎ 我们冲进足球场，结果看见球场上写着“定期维修”。‎ ‎80．I _______________________ the movie with my friend George last night, but it was raining hard all the time. (plan)‎ ‎ 昨天晚上我本来打算与我的朋友George一起去看电影的，但是雨一直下得很大。‎ 第二节：短文写作 （共一题；满分30 分）‎ ‎“读书周”活动中我校英语网站以That is a good book which is opened with expectation and closed with profit.（好书开卷引人入胜,闭卷使人获益）为主题进行征文比赛。请以中学生的视角，结合你最喜欢的一本书写一篇120左右的参赛文章。‎ 注意：①无须写标题；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③开头已给出，不得再抄写，不计入总词数；‎ ‎④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎⑤词数为120左右。‎ I don't think I have read many books; nevertheless, I attach much importance to reading. ‎ ‎71．Working hard ‎72．where the problem lies ‎73．With a dream in his heart ‎74．two fifths of it was ‎75．Everything taken into consideration ‎76．can I have put ‎77．Before she could move ‎78．Hate him as we may ‎79．on which was written ‎80．had planned to watch/see/planned to have watched/seen Writing: One possible version I don't think I have read many books; nevertheless, I attach much importance to reading good books . A Chinese proverb "That is a good book which is opened with expectation and closed with profit” shows reading good books is always beneficial. Reading good books not only broadens our horizons but also enriches our minds. Some books are to be overlooked, others are to be tasted, and some few to be chewed, digested all life long ‎ Despite the fact I am not widely read, if you want me to name the book that I like best and has largely shaped my life, I will definitely say it is THE STORY OF MY LIFE by Helen Keller that is the most influential book in my life. It is filled with courage, struggle and faith throughout. Helen Keller was once in deep despair in her childhood, but finally she decided to overcome her physical defects and live happily. Furthermore, she showed great patience in her long and hard learning period. ‎ The book is inspiring in that it is one full of the unbending will of a gallant woman. I hope I can be as courageous as she. ‎ ‎21，‎ 第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分50分）‎ 第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）‎ ‎71．It was not until the train pulled into the station that he found that his suitcase was nowhere .（find）‎ 直到火车进站时他才发现自己的行李箱不见踪影了。‎ ‎72． that he will win the first place in the coming final match. （chance）‎ 他没有可能在即将到来的决赛中获得第一名。‎ ‎73．So computer games that he never spent a moment thinking about his future. （addict）‎ 他如此热衷于电脑游戏，以至于没有花一刻的时间来想想他的未来。‎ ‎74．With each classroom a water fountain , all the students now have with easy access to clean drinking water. （equip）‎ 每个教室都配备一台饮水机，所有学生都可以喝到干净的水了。‎ ‎75．It is a pity that he failed the exam. If he his handwriting, he would have done better. （concentrate）‎ 很可惜他考试没及格。如果他注意他的书写，他可能做得更好。‎ ‎76． my research, I didn’t have time for social work. （occupy）‎ 忙于研究工作，我没有时间参与社交活动。‎ ‎77．From his eyes, I sensed that something unexpected . （happen）‎ 从他的眼神里我感觉到，肯定发生了意外。‎ ‎78． in the speech was unknown to the fresh students. （refer）‎ 他在演讲中谈到的是这些新生所不知道的。‎ ‎79．He interviewed two students, to study abroad as exchange students. （eager）‎ 他采访了两名学生，两个都不想作为交换生出国学习。‎ ‎80．The reason why he is so happy today is that he has finally got the toy car . （expect）‎ 他今天很高兴的原因是他终于得到了他一直期盼的玩具小汽车。‎ 第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）‎ 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就“自信”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。‎ If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数120左右。‎ ‎71．to be found ‎72．There is no chance ‎73．addicted was he to ‎74．equipped with ‎75．had concentrated on ‎76．Occupied with ‎77．must have happened ‎78．What he referred to ‎79．neither of whom was eager ‎80．(that) he has been expecting ‎ 作文 Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.‎ When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.‎ As the saying goes, where there’s a will, there’s a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.,‎ ‎22，第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study well if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a little money, it can make our school a nicer place.‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假设下面是你们学校对学生课外阅读情况所作的调查。请根据下面的图表为某报社写一篇有关这次调查的报道，并适当发表你自己的看法。 ‎ 图: 学生阅读各类书籍的比例 ‎ 要求：1．字数130左右。 2. 短文中已写好了的部分，不计入词数。‎ Recently our school has had a survey on reading. It shows ‎ ‎ ‎ 第三部分：写作（共两节, 满分40分）‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as far as we∧ concerned, the buildings ‎ ‎ happy are would be more beautiful if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school looks ‎ ‎ think like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in a rainy day. We would be much happier ‎ ‎ on and are able to study well if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, photos and ‎ ‎ be better paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons and enrich our lives. Original art work are ‎ ‎ which works too expensive, but unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a little money, it ‎ ‎ if we can make our school a nicer place. ‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分30分）----A possible version. ‎ Recently our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 45 percent of the students spend their time reading textbooks after school. 30% of the students choose to read cartoons in their leisure time. However, only 10 percent enjoy reading literature.‎ Why are so many students unwilling to spend some time in reading serious works? According to the survey, 48 percent of the students say they have no enough time because they have too much homework to do. Some complain that literature works are so thick that they have hardly enough patience to finish them. Others who only concentrate on how to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them at all with their exams.‎ As far as I’m concerned, books play an important role in our life. Literature works help us learn the customs and cultures in the past and at present, at home and aboard. It provides us with good examples of writing. ‎ ‎23，第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。‎ To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead(n.铅). In fact, lead is a metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. In fact, lead in the bags is not possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.‎ 第二节：书面表达（共1小题；满分30分）‎ 假设你是学校学生会的一员，为了拥有一个更美好的校园，你发出了全员环保的倡议，并制作了如下图的海报。‎ 请根据海报内容及以下要点写一份倡议书。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1.环保是我们中学生义不容辞的责任。‎ ‎2.我们可以养成这些环保习惯。‎ ‎3.让我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力吧。‎ 要求: 注意文章的地道性和连贯性 高考资源网 friends,‎ Do you want to live in a beautiful world? ____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ The Students’ Union 改错：‎ To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from ‎ it ‎ ‎ paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by ∧Florida newspaper says ‎ ‎ to a that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a ‎ ‎ sold metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. I fact , Lead in the bags is not ‎ ‎ humans或∧a或∧beings possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating likely goes repeated ‎ use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags ‎ ‎ are without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.‎ ‎ should ‎ ‎ ‎24，第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Dear Brown,‎ Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I ‎ have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to ‎ it．How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so ‎ a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in ‎ tents, that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have ‎ plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an ‎ unforgettable experience．If you are interesting in it, reply to me soon．‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。十月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：　　‎ ‎1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；　　‎ 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；　　‎ ‎3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。‎ 注意：1．词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎25，第三部分 写作（共二节，满分35分）‎ 第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：‎ ‎ 1．建议他回国；‎ ‎ 2．你的理由是：学有所用，就业容易；照顾父母。‎ ‎ 注意；1．词数100左右。‎ ‎ 2．行文应连贯，内容应完整。‎ Dear Jianhua, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎,26五、短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ ‎ 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a Ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend he re and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.‎ 六、书面表达（25分）‎ 假如你叫李英，给你的笔友Fred写信,告诉他你很高兴收到他的信,同时告诉他你现在英语学习中遇到的一些困难,例如遗忘所学过的单词和词组,对一些习惯用语和语法规则未能弄懂,在学习中常犯错误等。请教他帮助你提一些如何学习好英语的建议。全文100~120词。　　‎ Dear Fred,‎ I am pleased to receive your letter._________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ With my best regards.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Ying My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ‎ buying ‎ ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to ‎ there Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag ‎ a and from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my Money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange ‎ in were to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me ‎ luggage friend’ s lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.‎ ‎ felt ‎27，第四部分:写作（两节，共35分）‎ 第一节: 阅读表达（共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分）‎ ‎ 阅读下面短文并回答问题，然后将答案写到相应的位置上（请注意问题后的词数要求）。‎ ‎[1] With many job postings(公开招聘) now requiring candidates to apply via e-mail, first impressions are made not with a handshake but with words on a computer screen.‎ ‎[2] Just like it’s usually a good idea to dress best for an interview, e-mails also should be refined(文雅高尚). ____, here are some tips:‎ Forget what instant messaging has taught you ‎[3] Recruiters(招聘人员) report that young professionals often send overly casual e-mails, treating an application like an instant message (IM). When using IM with friends and acquaintances, it’s acceptable to use shortened forms of words or phrases and incomplete sentences. In business correspondence, however, stick to the rules your Chinese and English teachers taught you.‎ Don’t be cool ‎[4] Your lovely e-mail background of pets playing with each other has got to go.‎ ‎[5] Comic fonts(字体) are unprofessional. HR managers recommend plain fonts such as Times New Roman or Arial, and black text on a white background. They also warn against sending e-mails from strange addresses. Littlebird@ or Chinatiger@ might not get what you hope for.‎ Don’t be too creative in the subject line ‎[6] Use plain, simple language like “Talented candidate seeking position as [name of position]” or “Enthusiastic candidate seeking position with [name of company]”. Use one word to describe yourself, but do not go to extremes.‎ ‎[7] The same rules apply to a paper resume and cover letter. Recruiters have only seconds to devote to each cover letter they receive. Many look at just three things: the positions you’ve held, the companies you’ve worked for, and your educational background. Anything else, such as a long story about yourself, can get in the way.‎ ‎76. What do recruiters pay attention to when they receive an application letter? (no more than 15 words)‎ ‎77. What does the word “They”(Line 2, Paragraph 5) probably refer to? (no more than 3 words)‎ ‎78. According to the passage, what should an e-mail application be like? (no more than 8 words)‎ ‎79. Please fill in the blank in the second paragraph with proper words or phrases. (no more than 8 words)‎ ‎80. What’s the purpose of this passage? (no more than 12 words)‎ 第二节 书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）‎ ‎ 某大学教授称，高学历者的贫穷意味着耻辱和失败，并对大学生提出要求：“当你40岁时，没有4,000万身价不要来见我，也别说是我的学生。”对此，凤凰网进行了调查。多数人持反对态度，认为教师不应用金钱来衡量学生；有少数人则认为这是一种激励；还有极少数人说不清楚。请你根据漫画并结合饼状图（pie chart）用英语写一篇短文。‎ ‎ 注意：1. 适当地发挥想象，增添细节以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 2. 词数120左右；‎ ‎ 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ A survey has been conducted by ifeng.com about whether a teacher should judge his students’ success by the money they have earned…‎ 阅读表达:‎ ‎76. The positions you’ve held, the companies you’ve worked for, and your educational background ‎77. HR managers.‎ ‎78. It should be formal and simple.‎ ‎79. To avoid failing you application / search ‎80. To give advice on e-mail manners that affect job-hunting results.‎ 书面表达 ‎ A survey has been conducted by ifeng.com about whether a teacher should judge his students’ success by the money they have earned.‎ ‎ It is true that some teachers judge their students’ success by money. As can be seen from the picture, a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and that wealth means success.‎ ‎ But opinions are divided among the surveyed people. Just as the pie chart shows, 70% of them oppose the teacher’s view. They think that teachers shouldn’t judge their students’ success by money. However, 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. There are also a few people who are not clear about how to measure students’ success.‎ ‎ In my opinion, we should understand success in a reasonable way. Money is certainly one way to measure success, but it is not the only way.‎ ‎,28第五部分 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 热衷于苹果产品的人称之为“果粉”。请根据下图，写一篇题为“Is Your Fashion Worth It?”的短文。短文必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 简要描述图中的情景；‎ ‎2. 结合话题，说说你自身的经历，或者身边的人或事；‎ ‎3. 谈谈你对追求时髦的看法。‎ ipad2首次发布之日，数千北京“果粉”云集某代理机构，争相购买这一主要功能为上网和娱乐的苹果产品。‎ 注意：1. 可以根据具体情况作适当的发挥和想象；‎ ‎2. 单词数：150左右；开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。‎ Is Your Fashion Worth It?‎ There are so many Apple fans in China, and it seems a fashion. ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ ‎ ▲ ‎ 书面表达：‎ One possible version:‎ There are so many Apple fans in China, and it seems a fashion. As is shown in the picture, when iPad2 was first released, thousands of them crowded to get one.‎ However, iPad2, which costs thousands of dollars, is nothing but a tool for surfing the Internet and entertaining. Apple fans around me use iPad2 to play games only. They have spent so much money on such a device to idle away their time. It surely isn’t worth the money.‎ There are many reports about young people, especially university students, who take great efforts, and even lifelong costs, to obtain an Apple product of their own as a fashion. I’m not against people going after fashions. But we should be aware whether the fashion is of any value, or worth our efforts and even sufferings. What’s more, fashions sometimes change so quickly that immediately we catch them, we are left behind.‎ As a young man, I believe it makes far more sense to find pleasure in pursuing something meaningful.‎ 写作试题：满分35分，主要考查考生书面表达能力，例如写正确句子的能力、使用精彩词 汇、短语的能力、所写文章逻辑性强的能力等。并且在有限的时间内容，快速写出好句、好文。‎ 本课程要帮助学生掌握快速写句、写文、改错的方法。‎ 强化训练一 结构 课程内容：短文改错 / 开放性作文 课程目标：把握改错方法，提高改错速度 课时：3‎ 教学建议：‎ ‎1、训练前教师可以安排学生思考高分作文的要素 写作考商 在写作前你是否先列提纲？‎ 是否先写初稿，然后再修改、定稿？‎ 写作过程中，会注意语法使用，尤其时态的使用是否正确？‎ 会尽量避开生僻的词汇和没有把握的表达方法吗？‎ 会用简单的语句间的连接成分，使文章结构紧凑吗？‎ 是否能在高考前背诵30-40篇优秀范文吗？‎ ‎2、限时训练后，教师启发学生自查问题，欣赏范文，明确问题 ‎3、教师可以在表达方面进行重点说明，例如一词多义，短语优先，句式多样、连词使用。‎ ‎4、短文改错核对答案后，教师要及时带读，巩固成果，提高语感，如果时间容许教师可当堂安排短文背诵默写，强化正确意识，学生才会对错误敏感。‎ ‎5、写作限时训练后，教师要安排自查自改环节，然后再范文分析，通过范文分析反思自己写的文段。教师也可以根据学生的问题进行即兴强化训练，例如造句、翻译练习，巩固短语、连词等使用能力。‎ ‎6、教师可以根据学生情况，灵活处理所提供的素材，例如短文改错的文段改为听写、短文翻译（中译英）等。‎ 仿真训练1‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 One day, while my friend and I was traveling through 1. _________‎ Germany‎, we were not very hungry but we only had a little 2. _________‎ money. We decided stop at a village market to buy 3. _________‎ something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and 4. ________‎ ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great. 5. ______‎ ‎“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they 6. _____‎ really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but 7. _________‎ I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. 8. _________‎ She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?”9. _________‎ I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said. 10. _________‎ 解题技巧点评 短文改错通常考查以下几点：‎ ‎1．一致性：时态、人称、数 ‎2．动词用法：包括非谓语（动名词、分词、不定式）、系动词（后接形容词）、及物动词（无 需介词，直接跟宾语）或不及物动词（需加介词，再跟宾语）等。‎ ‎3．上下文逻辑：肯定/否定；连词等。‎ One day, while my friend and I was traveling through 1. were ‎ and为关键词（A and B），所以谓语为复数。‎ Germany‎, we were not very hungry but we only had a little 2. not ‎ 考查逻辑。下文but…only a little为关键词。‎ money. We decided ^ stop at a village market to buy 3. to ‎ 考查动词用法：decide to do sth.‎ something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and 4. chose ‎ 考查时态。文章描述的是过去发生的事。‎ ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great. 5. them ‎ 考查代词。此处代替上文biscuits，故用复数形式。‎ ‎“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they 6. get ‎ 考查动词形式（非谓语动词/不定式）：Let’s do sth.‎ really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but 7. good ‎ taste为系动词，后接形容词作表语。well作形容词时只表示身体状况。‎ I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. 8. so ‎ 考查连词。通过前后句逻辑解题，即I gave her…是I couldn't read German的结果。‎ She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” 9. why ‎ 考查疑问副词。通过前后句逻辑解题。‎ I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said. 10. √ ‎ 仿真训练2‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 1. _________‎ prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 2. _________‎ was to write a story or present it. My teachers 3. _________‎ have been telling me how great my writing was. 4. _________‎ So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 5. _________‎ of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 6. _________‎ help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 7. _________‎ near my house, who was a very much famous writer. 8. _________‎ He agreed to reading my story and gave me some 9. _________‎ advices on how to write like a real writer. 10. _________‎ 解题技巧点评 ‎1．√——a / the / one's chance of a lifetime：千载难逢的机会。‎ ‎2．on改为in ：考查介词。in the show。‎ ‎3．or改为and：考查连词。write和present为并列关系。‎ ‎4．have改为had：考查时态。通篇文章为过去时态。此处为过去完成进行时，发生在All I had ‎ to do之前。‎ ‎5．they前加what：考查句子结构。if引导的条件状语从句主语是个句子（was 是其谓语），‎ 且主语从句缺宾语（said的内容）。‎ ‎6．were改为was：考查数的一致性。代词what谓语动词用单数。‎ ‎7．Uncle … 后加a：考查冠词。living near my house的gentleman因该不止一个，故用不定 冠词。‎ ‎8．去掉much：very修饰形容词；very much修饰动词。‎ ‎9．reading改为read：考查动词形式（不定式）：agree to do sth.。‎ ‎10．advices改为advice：advice为不可数名词。‎ 仿真训练3‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 1. _________‎ At that time, we often spend time together. 2. _________‎ Thank to her help, I made great progress inn my 3. _________‎ study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 4. _________‎ other words, we would be separated for long time. 5. _________‎ Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 6. _________‎ my best wishes to him. She said it was the beat 7. _________‎ gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 8. _________‎ kept touch with each other through e-mails. I 9. _________‎ look forward to see her again in the near future. 10. _________‎ 解题技巧点评 ‎1．friend →friends：考查数的一致性。one of + 可数名词复数。‎ ‎2．spend →spent：考查时态的一致性。文章开头和At that time都表明时间为过去。‎ ‎3．Thank →Thanks：惯用法——thanks to sth. / sb. ：多亏了…。‎ ‎4．√‎ ‎5．for a long time：考查冠词的惯用法。‎ ‎6．去掉off：leaving：名词/动名词：离开。‎ ‎7．him →her：考查人称的一致性。通过上文多次出现的she或her可知Christie是个女孩。‎ ‎8．has →had：考查时态的一致性。‎ ‎9．kept in touch：考查固定短语。‎ ‎10．see →seeing：考查非谓语动词。look forward to + 名词/动名词：盼望某事/做某事。‎ 仿真训练4‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 After five years away in my hometown, I find that 1. ‎ the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 2. ‎ a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 3. ‎ across the street from our middle school were gone. 4. ‎ There exist now a park that has a small river running 5. ‎ through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 6. ‎ Zhongshan Road‎ has been moved out of the city, and sports 7. ‎ center has been built in their place. The market at the comer of 8. ‎ Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 9. ‎ a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 10. ‎ school is still there.‎ 解题技巧点评 ‎1．in →from：此句表示离开应用from；‎ ‎2．living →live：used to do sth.表示过去常常做某事，而现在不在做了；‎ ‎3．older →old：这里表示“老的、旧的”，不含比较级；‎ ‎4．were →are：表示现在已经不在了，应是现在时态；‎ ‎5．exist →exists：There be 句型中的谓语动词应与be后面的第一个主语来决定，a park为 ‎ 单数，故谓语动词也用单数；‎ ‎6．正确；‎ ‎7．a：根据谓语是单数，此句应是：一个体育中心建成，故sports前加不定冠词；‎ ‎8．their →its：指代错误，根据句意是指这个城市，应用its；‎ ‎9．been：此句不应用被动结构，应用主动形式，故将been去掉；‎ ‎10．Besides →But：根据句意，前、后句是转折，故将besides改为but。‎ 仿真训练5‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 Hi Susan, ‎ I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your 1. _________‎ bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it 2. _________‎ back to you before four in the afternoon，and I 3. _________‎ was hold up on my way back. Just before I 4. _________‎ turned corner of Park Street. I happened to 5. _________‎ see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her 6. _________‎ mother needed help. So I helped them going to 7. _________‎ the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and 8. _________‎ a half hour and made sure that the girl 9. _________‎ were all right. I hope you can understand. 10. _________‎ Thank you! ‎ Li Ling ‎ 解题技巧点评 ‎1．去掉第二个to：考查动词用法。return当“返还”讲是及物动词，后直接跟宾语。‎ ‎2．mean改为meant：考查时态。meant to do sth.：本打算做某事（但没做成）。‎ ‎3．and改为but：考查逻辑。通过前后句可看出此处表示转折。‎ ‎4．hold改为held：考查语态。be held up：‎ ‎5．turned the corner：考查冠词。the corner of Park Street：…的拐角处。‎ ‎6．正确；‎ ‎7．going改为go：考查非谓语动词。help sb. (to) do sth.：不定式做宾补。‎ ‎8．here改为there：考查逻辑。the表示the nearest hospital。‎ ‎9．hour改为hours：考查数的一致性。 ‎ ‎10．were改为was：考查主谓一致。‎ 仿真训练6‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 短文改错 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the thing on the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick. Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s delay, my neighhor picked up the box but announced: “I’ll take them.” ‎ 解题技巧点评 My friend Nick told me ^ story about his experience back in the US, which was ‎ a（考查冠词。）‎ very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door ‎ interesting（-ed结尾的形容词表示被动或完成；-ing结尾的形容词表示主动或进行。此处说明的是which，即story/experience的性质，是interest动作的发出者，故用ing形式。）‎ come by to help. As the old man looked over the thing on the yard that were to be came（考查时态的一致性。） in 或ground（考查介词与名词的搭配。）‎ sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card ‎ balls（考查名词。因为是a box of，所以一定是复数形式。）‎ say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick.‎ saying（考查动词形式。首先要了解此处是介+名的倒装句，通过句型还原可知动词形式应该是A card was saying…on the box.）‎ Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s ‎ （考查时态的一致性。） down（考查逻辑。从25降到10。）‎ delay, my neighhor picked up the box but announced: “I’ll take them.” ‎ ‎ His（考查人称逻辑。） and（考查结构逻辑。）‎ 仿真训练7‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 开放作文 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。‎ In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.‎ 答案 In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try ‎ their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.‎ 解题技巧点评 开放作文的命题意图是考查考生能否比较具体地、清楚地表述自己的想法和感受的能力，鼓励考生使用细节和实例，具体说明所要表达的思想。‎ 开放作文评分标准：文章是否扣题；内容是否充实、健康；思维是否活跃；逻辑是否清晰；语言是否规范；交际是否得体。‎ 审图立意步骤：‎ 一审：图片构成、整体感觉；‎ 二审：局部与整体的关系、多角度立意；‎ 三审：优选立意、确定主题。‎ 写作步骤：1．审题/图；2．立意；3．定人称、时态。‎ 考生常见问题：‎ ‎1. 没有涉及图的内容；‎ ‎2. 说明部分逻辑不清。议论与说明脱节；‎ ‎3. 没有展开议论，内容欠丰富。‎ 仿真训练8‎ ‎（做题时间：10分钟）‎ 开放作文 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。‎ In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it. ‎ 答案 In the picture, a boy is absorbed in fishing, while others are leaving, empty-handed. Finally his efforts pay off, and he gets one big fish. Actually, there are still more fish in the water. If those who are heading back could stay longer, they would surely get a good catch. So from the children's different behaviors, we can see that success needs a person's patience because patience plays an important role in the process of achieving goals. Stick to what we are doing, and the gain we get will be beyond imagination just like the fish left in the pool. ‎ 解题技巧点评 话题：持之以恒才能成功 审题：describe the picture --- 图片描写（三分之一篇幅）‎ explain how you understand it --- 对于图片的理解和自己的观点（三分之二篇幅）‎ 人称：图片描述用第三人称；自己观点用第一人称 时态：一般现在时 图片信息： ‎ ‎1．池子里有很多鱼，但是表层鱼不多，而且大小不同（可以从不同的写作角度出发）‎ ‎2．几个人正在离开 ‎3．一个人坚持不走，钓到了大鱼 发散角度：恒心；毅力…‎ 写作要点：观点鲜明、积极健康、理由充分、思维独特、有创造性 写作要领：内容充实、逻辑合理、发散得当、语言正确、句式多样、词汇丰富、行文连贯 学生文选1‎ From the picture, we can see there is a pool, in which many fish are swimming. On the bank, there are four teens. From the tools in their hands we can infer that they all want to catch some fish. Instead of waiting, three of them have left because they might not want to spend more time in waiting. Still, a boy kept on fishing and finally he succeeds in catching a fish.‎ What I want to say is that most of us are eager to succeed, while success is hard to come by. It demands many qualities. Patience is one of them. After a long way which is full of setbacks and difficulties, many people choose giving up, for they can't stand waiting anymore. In fact, if they can become more patient, they will be successful. Waiting is also a test. Become more patient and success will step to you. ‎ 学生文选2‎ There is a small pool, in which there are some fish. Four boys go fishing but only a boy does not give up. As the other three boys go back. The boy who does not give up gets a fish. The boy is on his knees and excited for the fish while others go home disappointedly.‎ I am wondering that if the three boys wait for another one minute, they may get fish, too. Sometimes if we insist, we will succeed. So we should not give up. If we are in trouble, we should believe that we can live through it. Therefore, do not give up and the fish is ours. Never give up and we will achieve our goals. Maybe this is the meaning of the picture. ‎ 强化训练二 结构 课程内容：情景作文 课程目标：把握写作方法，提高写作速度 仿真训练9‎ ‎（做题时间：15分钟）‎ 目前，随着环保意识的增强，越来越多的人们开始倡导低碳生活。请根据下面的图表以及中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要描述全球近五十年来气候变化，并分析其产生的主要原因、影响及解决措施。‎ 原因 ‎1）过多使用矿物燃料；‎ ‎2）过度砍伐森林。‎ 影响 ‎1）海平面上升；‎ ‎2）极端天气现象增加；‎ ‎3）自然平衡被破坏。‎ 措施 ‎1）控制二氧化碳排放；‎ ‎2）采用新型能源 注意：‎ ‎1．短文必须包括以上图表所表现的主要内容。‎ ‎2．短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。‎ ‎3．参考词汇：矿物燃料fossil fuels；二氧化碳carbon dioxide；释放：release The diagram shows the weather changes in the global climate. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 答案 The diagram shows the weather changes in the global climate. It tells us that the global average temperature has increased by ‎0.8℃‎ from ‎17℃‎ in 1951 to ‎17.8℃‎ in 2001. Thus, we can come to a conclusion that our earth is getting warmer and warmer.‎ As far as we know, the major reason for global warming is due to human activities. Firstly, the use of fossil fuels by industry releases greenhouse gases. Moreover, cutting down forests means that less carbon dioxide can be changed back into oxygen. As a consequence of global warming, the sea level is rising. And people are suffering more extreme weather of global warming, the sea level is rising. And people are suffering more extreme weather. The increase in temperature is also causing much damage to the balance of nature.‎ It’s high time that we should take measures to protect our earth. Not only can we control the releasing of carbon dioxide, but also we can be encouraged to use new energy, such as solar energy.‎ In a word, only in this way can we make our earth a better place for our human beings. ‎ 解题技巧点评 情景作文的命题意图是考查考生能否根据 所给情景（表格、图、文字等）撰写主题明确、内容完整、语言连贯的短文能力。在考查考生的书面语言水平的同时，还考查他们的想象能力和逻辑思维能力，考查他们能否清楚地表达试题要求表达的内容。 ‎ 记叙文常包含三个主要部分：‎ 开头段：多是背景的介绍，交代时间、地点、人物等（when, where, who）；‎ 主体段：讲述故事的情节（what），可以由一个或几个段落构成；‎ 结尾段：故事的结局（ending）是对全文进行归纳、总结，或思想提升。‎ 仿真训练10‎ ‎（做题时间：15分钟）‎ 目前，一些诸如GG、MM、Xia Mi等的网络语言在青少年中极为盛行。你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查，调查结果见下面饼状图（pie chart）。请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表达你自己的观点。‎ 注意：1. 短文的开头已为你写好。‎ ‎2. 词数不少于60。‎ 幽默 33%‎ 充满智慧 ‎35% 生动、时尚 ‎ 没有思想性，太简单；‎ ‎7% 没有被大多数人接受；‎ 过多使用会使人不解，甚至误解 ‎25% 使网上聊天更快捷方便 ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ 答案 At present, Internet slang, such as “GG”, “MM”, “Xia Mi”, has become popular among the teenagers. According to a survey conducted by our Students’ Union, students’ opinions on this issue are divided. ‎ Most of the students are in favor of Internet slang. About 35% of the students hold the view that Internet slang is vivid and fashionable. Another 33% of them enjoy its humor and intelligence. And a quarter of the students believe it makes chatting on the Internet more convenient. ‎ However, there are 7 % of the students thinking Internet slang lacks depth of thought and is too casual. In addition, it is hard for most people to understand and accept this kind of slang. If it is used too much in a passage, it may make readers confused, and even cause misunderstanding.‎ In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we are not familiar with Internet slang, we are likely to fall behind. ‎ 解题技巧点评 审题：话题：网络语言；文体：对比型写作；时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称。‎ 饼图信息要点：‎ ‎1．生动、时尚：35%；‎ ‎2．幽默、充满智慧：33%；‎ ‎3．使网上聊天更快捷方便：25%；‎ ‎4. 没有思想性、太简单；过多使用会使人不解，甚至误解：7%。‎ 写作要领：要点全面、前后连贯、叙述流畅、点题准确。‎ 写作过程：‎ 注意人称、时态的正确应用；要点齐全；行文连贯，句式多样，语法正确，用词恰当。‎ 仿真训练11‎ ‎（做题时间：15分钟）‎ 假设你是李华，奥运会期间你和你的同学们参加了志愿者工作。请根据下图提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封信，介绍你们当志愿者的经历并简单谈谈你的感受。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ ‎2．词数不少于60。‎ Dear Peter,‎ Sorry I haven’t written to you for a long time. I was lucky to be a volunteer in the Olympic Games. I’ve learned a lot from the volunteer work. ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ The 2012 Olympic Games will be held in London. Would you like to be a volunteer as well? Please tell me your plan in your next letter.‎ Best wishes,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 答案 Dear Peter,‎ Sorry I haven’t written to you for a long time. I was lucky to be a volunteer in the Olympic Games. I’ve learned a lot from the volunteer work. ‎ Before the Olympic Games, all of us received special training. Under the guidance of the trainer, we got to know what jobs we could do and what we should pay attention to. ‎ During the Games, some of us stood outside the stadium, guiding the audience to go into the Bird’s Nest with loudspeakers. Some worked at the information center and offered all kinds of help. Others acted as tour guides and took foreigners to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Summer‎ ‎Palace, which helped them to get a better understanding of Chinese culture.‎ ‎ Being a volunteer was a valuable experience for me. Not only did I help others, but also I made many friends. Besides, I felt I could do something for our country. ‎ The 2012 Olympic Games will be held in London. Would you like to be a volunteer as well? Please tell me your plan in your next letter.‎ Best wishes，‎ Li Hua ‎ 解题技巧点评 本文是一篇记叙文，话题是奥运志愿者活动。时态为一般过去时，人称用第一人称我们。写作要点：1．接受培训；2．引导观众入场；3．提供帮助；4．当导游。每幅图中的主要人物都不同，说明志愿者服务是我和我的同学们共同完成的，不是我一个人完成的，所以注意人称代词的使用。‎ 仿真训练12‎ ‎（做题时间：15分钟）‎ 北京大学2010年将试行有中学校长实名推荐的招生改革。被推荐的学生高考成绩可获得30分的加分。‎2009年11月16日北大公布了39所具有推荐资格的中学名单。北大这一举措在全国引起了激烈的争论。请根据以下要点给《中国日报》写一篇有关这场争论的报导，并表达你对这场争论的看法。（至少两点）‎ 支持方意见 反对方意见 是改革当前高考制度的大胆尝试。‎ 能确保高素质学生和有特殊才华学生进入一流大学。‎ 促进中学重视学生的全面发展。‎ 可能导致作假。‎ 对全国许多中学不公平。‎ 给被推荐的学生加分没意义。‎ 你的看法：1. 。。。。。。‎ ‎ 2． 。。。。。。‎ 注意：‎ 对所给要点要逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。‎ 词数100字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：大胆的 bold Peking‎ ‎University‎ will enroll students recommended by high school principals in 2010.The recommended students will have extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam ‎ scores. Peking‎ ‎University’s move has set off a nationwide debate. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案 Peking‎ ‎University‎ will enroll students recommended by high school principals in 2010.The recommended students will have extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores. Peking‎ ‎University’s move has set off a nationwide debate. ‎ Some people approve of this move. They think this is a bold attempt Peking‎ ‎University has made at reforming the current university entrance system. This move provides quality students and students talented in certain subjects with an opportunity to enter first-class universities and ensure that they aren’t overlooked simply because of their performance in the national university entrance exam. Meanwhile, it will push high schools to pay more attention to the students’ all-round development.‎ However, quite a few people object to the move. Firstly, it may lead to cheating. Secondly, only 39 schools are qualified to recommend students, which is unfair to so many schools across the country. Thirdly, there is no point giving extra scores to those recommended students, for they are mostly top students and have no problem entering Peking‎ ‎University.‎ As far as I’m concerned, I’m in favor of this reform. As the process of recommendation is transparent, cheating is impossible. Besides, we should support new reforms even if they are not mature. ‎ 解题技巧点评 审中文信息：‎ 话题：校长实名推荐的招生改革 文体：对比型描写；连接词的应用 时态：一般现在时（客观描述他人观点）‎ 人称：第三人称they（支持者和反对者）‎ 仿真训练13‎ ‎（做题时间：15分钟）‎ 假设你叫李华，你的美国网友Peter想了解你业余生活情况。请您根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述你们上周末参观首都博物馆的前后情况。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。‎ 提示词：讲解员guide；脸谱a paint mask；剪纸paper-cuts ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ 答案 Our class visited the Capital‎ ‎Museum last week, and it is one of the most impressive social practice activities since high school.‎ Last Thursday before our visit, my classmates and I searched for as much information as possible through the Internet, such as its location and the latest exhibitions and shows.‎ On Friday morning we gathered at the entrance at nine o’clock, and then a beautiful guide showed us around the exhibition on the traditional buildings in Beijing, where we learned the development of our city architecture. After that, we got to know our folk culture by watching the digital film and learning to make some paper-cuts and paint masks in DIY area. Before we left at twelve, we also went to the craft show that I was interested in. ‎ The capital Museum is very large and attractive and the activities there aroused our great excitement and interest in our traditional culture and custom. We enjoyed the visit so much that most of my classmates decided to come again later.‎ 解题技巧点评 一般说来，时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素是写作时要明白、清楚地给予表达的。此外，图片作文需要注意以下两点：‎ ‎1. 割裂的图片→完整的故事：看图写作要看懂每一幅画，确定一个完整内容，对画面进行 分析组合，确定每一幅画的中心再组句成文。‎ ‎2. 合理的想象 + 连贯的语言。‎ 课后作业 ‎1．活动介绍 模拟联合国活动每年吸引全球30多个国家200万高中生和大学生。2010年北京大学全国中学生模拟联合国大会(Peking University National Model United Nations for High School Students 2009) 拟定于2010年3月19日—22日在北京大学举行。假设你是北京大学学生会主席李华，应你的美国笔友Peter的要求，向他介绍此次大会的情况。请根据下列信息，给他写一封电子邮件。‎ 时间、地点：2010年3月19日—22日，北京大学；‎ 参会人数：200余名学生，来自57所学校，代表97个国家；‎ 主要议题：体育发展、环境保护、妇女的权利等9个议题；‎ 活动意义：开阔视野，提高组织、沟通能力……‎ 注意：1．电子邮件的开头已为你写好；2．词数不少于60。‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎ Thank you for your interest in Peking University National Model United Nations for High School Students 2009.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ 答案 Dear Peter,‎ Thank you for your interest in Peking University National Model United Nations for High School Students 2010. It will be held from March 19th to 22nd, 20010at Peking‎ ‎University. More than 200 students from 57 high schools in Beijing will attend the conference. Representing 97 countries in the world, these student “delegates” will mainly discuss nine topics including sports development, environment protection, as well as women's right. Everybody at the event, whether acting as a member of a committee, or a volunteer, will enjoy the activity very much. Not only will they broaden their international horizon, but they will also improve all kinds of abilities, such as speaking in public, organizing various activities and communicating with different people. It will really be a great experience for them.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎2．观点对比 最近，你校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：周末双休日要不要上课。请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况同时阐明你的观点。‎ ‎40%‎ ‎50%‎ 我的看法 ‎1．要上课 ‎2．高考6月举行，要抓紧时间复习 ‎1．不要上课 ‎2．休息好，提高学习效率 ‎1．其中—天学习，一天休息 ‎2．学习与休息两头兼顾 注意：1.文章的开头已经为你写好；2.词数：100左右　‎ 答案 Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends. 40% of us think we should have classes on weekends because the college entrance examinations will be held in June, and we should make full use of our free time to review what we have learnt. ‎ Another 50% are against the idea of having classes on Weekends，They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.‎ I don't agree with either of the ideas above. In my opinion, study and rest are both important for students. I suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study and the other day to have a rest. ‎ ‎3．建议信 在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。‎ ‎　　●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间 ‎　　●反复训练重要、易错知识点 ‎　　●指导方法 ‎　　●减少作业量以保证质量 ‎　　●给予更多鼓励 注意：1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2．要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。‎ ‎3．词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。‎ 答案 Dear Mr. Wang,‎ We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.‎ In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.‎ By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.‎