短文改错专项练习高考真题 5页

预习案 ‎ 近年高考，英语短文改错题，学生和老师都认为难度不大，然而，每年高考中部分同学还是对此深感头疼，‎ 主要原因：一、英语基础知识不扎实 ‎ 二、对短文改错题的考点不了解 三、最欠缺是行文逻辑能力，学生上下文联系呼应及翻译能力有待增强 目标：1、学生能加强对短文改错题型的了解，‎ ‎2、通过针对性练习，学生能增强自信心和做题的准确度 重点：时态语态、逻辑一致 难点：逻辑一致 ‎（每题一处错误）‎ 1. My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. ‎ 2. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.‎ 3. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. ‎ 4. In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.‎ 5. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. ‎ 6. I knew that they would be worried about me because I was so farther away. ‎ 7. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers. ‎ 8. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. ‎ 9. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of mine.‎ 10. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.‎ 11. He said it was best to stay until help arrived rather than go into the forest and getting lost. ‎ 预习案 近年高考，英语短文改错题，学生和老师都认为难度不大，然而，每年高考中部分同学还是对此深感头疼，‎ 主要原因：一、英语基础知识不扎实 ‎ 二、对短文改错题的考点不了解 三、最欠缺是行文逻辑能力，学生上下文联系呼应及翻译能力有待增强 目标：1、学生能加强对短文改错题型的了解，‎ ‎2、通过针对性练习，学生能增强自信心和做题的准确度 重点：时态语态、逻辑一致 难点：逻辑一致 ‎（每题一处错误）‎ 1. My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. ‎ 2. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.‎ 3. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. ‎ 4. In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.‎ 5. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. ‎ 6. I knew that they would be worried about me because I was so farther away. ‎ 7. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers. ‎ 8. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. ‎ 9. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of mine.‎ 10. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.‎ 11. He said it was best to stay until help arrived rather than go into the forest and getting lost. ‎ 探究案 短文改错得分易，经典口诀记心里（熟读&牢记）‎ 动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副，代词格，细领悟，介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住，冠词连词常光顾，逻辑主谓两一致，平行结构勿忘记。‎ 一、动词（形）‎ ‎——动词错误在短文改错中所占比重最大 A）时态语态——注意上下文、特定的语言环境及该句的时间状语 1. I knew that they will be worried about me because I was so far away, …【2012浙江卷】‎ 2. ‎ I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt! 【 2011陕西】‎ 3. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and …….‎ 4. It has been rained for the past few weeks.‎ B）非谓语动词、及物与不及物动词的误用、be动词的错用、漏用 5. Last Sunday morning …I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actors. 【 2011陕西】‎ 6. Two years ago, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. 【2012浙江卷】‎ 7. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to make his findings known. 【2011辽宁】‎ 二、名词（数）‎ ‎——名词是否可数；与其修饰语是否一致；与谓语是否一致等 8. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. 【2012陕西卷】‎ 9. ‎……I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favorite actor. 【2011陕西】‎ 三、（还要注意）形和副、及其它词性的误用 ‎——形容词与副词词性的误用；原级、比较级、最高级的误用 10. I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. 【2012新课标】‎ 11. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience.‎ 四、代词（格，细领悟）‎ ‎——指代的各类代词应在数、格、词性上与上下文一致，多或是缺少代词（人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词、疑问代词）‎ 12. For a while parents bought me new toys. 【2012全国新课标】‎ 13. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.【2012全国新课标】‎ 14. It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ……‎ 五、介词短语（须关注），习惯用法（要记住）‎ ‎——介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配，多或是缺少介词；固定短语和固定句式的使用是否正确 15. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend. Gina. 【2012辽宁卷】‎ 16. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! 【2012四川卷】 ‎ 1. I also shared for my friends many photos taken in Beijing. 【2012陕西卷】‎ 六、冠词 ‎——不可数名词或者可数名词复数泛指时前面多放了冠词；单数可数名词前缺少冠词；不定冠词与定冠词的错误使用；固定搭配中的冠词错误等 2. Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. 【2012辽宁】‎ 3. As a result, nobody knew truth.【2012浙江卷】‎ 七、连词（常光顾）‎ ‎——根据翻译判断名从与定从的连接词是否符合语法规则；判断状语从句与并列句的连接词是否符合行文逻辑 4. But before long they began to see which was happening. 【2012全国新课标】‎ 5. Whenever I am, I will always love you. 【2012四川卷】 ‎ 八、逻辑一致 ‎ ——重点在连词、代词、肯定与否定、及相对应的词汇如come, go，需通篇考虑 6. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. 【2012四川卷】 ‎ 7. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. 【2011陕西】‎ 8. My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. 【2012陕西卷】‎ 9. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here, Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way home. 【2012辽宁卷】两处逻辑错误 九、主谓一致 ‎ ——谓语动词与主语在人称和数上保持一致 10. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. 【2012陕西】‎ 11. Two hours are a long time to take over a coffee.‎ 12. Neither you nor I are fit for the work.‎ 十、平行结构 ‎——注意前后时态、词性一致问题，平行结构常借助于并列连词 and, or, but, not only…but also…, not … but…, neither…nor…, either…or…, as well as 13. Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. 【2012四川卷】 ‎ 14. It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. ‎ 检测案 1. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. ‎ 2. Dear Diana, Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.‎ 1. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys for you." ‎ 2. Unfortunately, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two weeks. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. ‎ 3. There was one toy in particular I'd always wanted. I put it into my pocket when he wasn't looking. Later on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slowly and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.（一处时态错误，一处逻辑错误）‎ 4. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. …… the old man stopped at a box of golden balls for Christmas trees. On the box was a card saying:”25 cents each.” You will never sell these for that much. ” he told Nick. Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s delay, his neighbor picked up the box but announced: I’ll take them”（两处时态错误、两处逻辑错误）‎ 短文改错解题步骤 ‎1、浏览全文，掌握大意，留心短文中关键的词语，并注意全文的时态，为下一步判断和改错奠定基础。 ‎ ‎2、分句阅读，逐句找错，根据词法、句法知识，逐句检查主谓是否一致，代词、关联词的使用是否正确，动词形式是否恰当，词语之间的搭配是否正确，表达是否符合惯用法，形容词和副词是否用错。 ‎ ‎3、根据不同错误分别进行解题。即分别进行改词、加词、减词，注意大小写。‎ ‎4、复读全文，检查核对。‎ ‎2010陕西 ‎ My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!‎ 给同学们的两条建议：‎ 每篇短文改错核对答案后，‎ 第一：必须通读几遍，帮助同学们培养正确的语感 第二：翻译全文，帮助同学们更准确地理解语篇，掌握行文逻辑能力 今天的改错练习，你熟读了吗？‎ 课后练习与巩固 单句改错：‎ 1. She said that all my classmates all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. ‎ 2. I also shared for my friends many photos taken in Beijing. ‎ 3. My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very ‎ interested. ‎ 1. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get. ‎ 2. Unfortunately, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. ‎ 3. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. ‎ 4. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. ‎ 5. And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own.‎ 6. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. ‎ 短文改错：‎ ‎【2012浙江卷】 ‎ Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. ‎ ‎【2012全国新课标】 ‎ I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.‎ ‎【2012陕西卷】 ‎ My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.‎ It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. ‎