高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit6 Section Ⅳ　Writing 4页

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　 Writing——如何写电影观后感 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 写作任务 假定你是李华，上周你班同学集体观看了电影《西游记之大圣归来》(Monkey King: Hero is Back)。请根据所给提示用英语写一篇电影观后感。‎ 类型 国产3D动画片 ‎(3D animation)‎ 导演 田晓鹏 剧情介绍 ‎　　小男孩江流儿救了一个小女孩，遭到山妖(monster)追杀。他带着女孩逃到了山洞，无意中释放了被压在五行山下五百年的大圣。在江流儿的激励下，大圣重获神力，打败了妖王。‎ 感受 ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作要求写一篇电影观后感。电视观后感包括“观”的内容和“感”的内容。“观”的内容要求完整又简练。“感”的内容可以从主题、人物、细节、场面、语言等方面切入，表达自己的看法。人称以第三和第一人称为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 内容可分为三部分：‎ 第一部分：电影简介 (故事来源、类型、导演等)；‎ 第二部分：剧情简介 (概括剧情，让读者对影片内容有大致了解)；‎ 第三部分：观后感想。‎ 三、组织语言 第一段：介绍该影片故事来源、类型及导演。‎ ‎1．Monkey King: Hero is Back is an exciting Chinese 3D animation. Its_director_is_Tian_Xiaopeng (它的导演是田晓鹏)．‎ ‎2．The film is based on... but_tells_a_completely_different_story (但却讲述了一个完全不同的故事)．‎ 第二段：简要概括影片内容 ‎3．Jiang Liuer is attacked by monsters because_he_saves_a_little_girl (‎ 因为他救了一个小女孩)．‎ ‎4．They run_into_a_cave (跑进山洞)．‎ ‎5．Unknowingly (不知不觉地), Jiang Liuer saves Monkey King...‎ ‎6．At last, with_the_encouragement_of_Jiang_Liuer (在江流儿的鼓励下), Monkey king becomes a hero...‎ 第三段：表达自己的感受。‎ ‎7．这个角色的勇敢和善良深深打动了我。‎ I_was_deeply_moved_by_the_characters'_bravery_and_kindness.‎ ‎8．这是一部老少皆宜的好电影。‎ It_is_a_good_movie_that_people_of_all_ages_can_enjoy.‎ 四、连句成篇 Monkey King: Hero is Back is an exciting Chinese 3D animation. Its director is Tian Xiaopeng. The film is based on a popular Chinese myth Journey to the West but tells a completely different story.‎ A young boy Jiang Liuer is attacked by monsters because he saves a little girl. They run into a cave. Unknowingly, Jiang Liuer saves Monkey King, who has been held under Wuxing Mountain for 500 years. At last, with the encouragement of Jiang Liuer, Monkey King becomes a hero and defeats the monsters' king.‎ I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness. It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 ‎《功夫熊猫3》的热映，又一次唤起了人们对该系列电影的兴趣。请根据该电影写一篇100词左右的观后感。‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1．故事背景： China's Valley of Peace；‎ ‎2．从一只普通熊猫被选为the Dragon Warrior到成为大师的过程；‎ ‎3．发表自己的看法。‎ 参考词汇：《功夫熊猫3》 Kung Fu Panda 3‎ 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 电影观后感 时态 一般现在时为主 主题 电影《功夫熊猫3》‎ 人称 第三人称为主 结构 首段：电影名，电影背景等 中段：故事情节 尾段：评论 二、词语储备——对接模块词汇 ‎1．tell_the_story_of...　　　　　　讲述了……故事 ‎2．be_set_in　 以……为背景 ‎3．by_accident　 偶然 ‎4．be_confident/believe_in_oneself　 自信 三、备用句型罗列——巧用模块句式、语法 完成句子 ‎1．以China's Valley of Peace为背景，那里没有人类，只生活着一群会说话的动物。‎ The film is_set_in and around China's Valley of Peace, and there are no humans except talking animals.‎ ‎2．最后他意识到成为一名功夫大师的真谛是：如果我们自信，我们就能成功。‎ In the end, he realizes_the_truth to be a master of Kung Fu. That is, you will succeed if you_believe_in_yourself.‎ 句式升级 ‎3．用not only...but also...合并1和2句 We_should_not_only_have_different_kinds_of_foods,_like_fish,_meat,_vegetables,_fruits_as_well_as_rice,_noodles,_but_also_have_the_food_regularly_and_properly.‎ ‎4．用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并3和4句 I_think_it_is_important_to_keep_a_healthy_diet,_which_is_beneficial_to_build_up_a_strong_body.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级范文：‎ Kung Fu Panda 3 tells a story about a fat, big panda that can perform martial arts. The film is set in and around China's Valley of Peace, where there are no humans, only talking animals. ‎ At first, the panda works for his father in a noodle shop. At that time, he was only a common panda. By accident, he is chosen to be the Dragon Warrior. In the end, he realizes the truth to be a master of Kung Fu is that you will succeed if you believe in yourself.‎ Kung Fu Panda 3 is considered to be one of the greatest cartoon films. It is popular among teenagers, even the adults. ‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 写作训练 一、某英文报纸的Wonderful Movie栏目开展征文活动。请根据所给提示，就电影《西虹市首富》(Hello Mr. Billionaire)写一篇影评并向该杂志投稿。‎ 类型 喜剧 导演 闫非、彭大魔 剧情介绍 ‎　　业余足球队的守门员王多鱼(沈腾饰)接受了一个月花光十亿资金的任务。如果任务完成，他将得到三百亿。但是，他不允许告诉别人他的任务且任务完成时不允许拥有任何贵重物品。本以为快乐生活就此开始，王多鱼却第一次感到“花钱特烦恼”。‎ 评论 ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文：‎ Hello Mr. Billionaire, a highly funny movie, is directed by Yan Fei and Peng Damo.‎ A minor league soccer goalkeeper Wang Duoyu (played by Shen Teng) is given a task to spend one billion in one month. If he makes it, he will get 30 billion. However, he's not allowed to tell anyone about the task and he must not own any valuables by the end of it. The poor guy really doesn't know how to deal with so much money, which gives him so much trouble.‎ The characters' humourous but meaningful words touched my heart deeply. It will appeal to people of all ages.‎ 二、根据表格提示信息，写一篇关于电影《2012》的观后感，词数100左右。‎ Name ‎2012‎ Director Roland Emmerich Film stars John Cusack, Chiwetel Ejiofor, Amanda Peet, Oliver Platt, Danny Glover, Thandie Newton and Woody Harrelson Plot 由于太阳活动异常，人类将遭遇灭顶之灾(catastrophe)。以写小说谋生的Jackson在带孩子们到黄石公园度周末时发生了一连串怪事。最后Jackson带领自己的家人靠着互爱和对生命的尊重渡过了难关 你的感想 ‎……‎ 参考范文：‎ ‎2012 is a disaster film directed by Roland Emmerich. The film stars John Cusack, Chiwetel Ejiofor, Amanda Peet, Oliver Platt, Danny Glover, Thandie Newton and Woody Harrelson.‎ The film tells of how the main characters survive the human catastrophe caused by unusual sun activity. Jackson, good at writing novels, experiences a series of strange things with his children in Yellowstone Park. At last Jackson and his family go through the difficulty with love for each other and respect for life.‎ I think it is one of the most satisfactory films and it really can be called “the mother of all disaster movies”. From it we learn that human beings should take measures to protect our earth. If not, such a catastrophe might come in the future.‎