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写作规范练7
Ⅰ.应用文写作
你校要举办首届英语节(English Festival),假如你是学生会主席李华,请你用英语给全校师生写一封信。信的内容主要包括:
1.举办时间:9月6日—9月10日。
2.内容:英文歌曲比赛、英文戏剧表演、西方文化讲座等。
3.举办英语节的意义。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
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Yours,
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Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I have exciting news to share with you.The first English Festival is to be held from September 6th to 10th.
This weeklong festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds.Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in
English singing competitions,drama performances,or attend lectures on Western culture.
By immersing everyone in the charm of English,the festival is bound to fuel your desire to be better English learners,spark your way of thinking and above all get all of you to have fun with English.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
For decades before my mother's diagnosis(诊断)of Alzheimer's in 2001,we had suffered a tense relationship born from her alcoholism.When I learned she had Alzheimer's,my hope for reconciliation(言归于好)and forgiveness disappeared—along with her abilities to think.
But the world of Alzheimer's is full of surprises!As mum's disease progressed,the ways I had disappointed her disappeared from her consciousness,and our struggles over my healthy life choices that differed from hers effortlessly ended.In her“now”,I was her kind,loving companion.
My faithful presence was all that mattered to her.And for the first time in my life,I felt wholeheartedly accepted by my mum—just exactly as I am.The wounds from the past began to heal in the arms of a mother who loved me in the present.
For our relationship to truly heal,my acceptance of mum was also essential.Having learned about the process of decline determined by
Alzheimer's,I acknowledged her limitations.I let go of expecting her to be the mother I had always wanted,and accepted the mother wholeheartedly she now was.After doing this,I noticed that she had,in many ways,become the mother I needed.
Because I didn't expect,demand,or want mum to be anyone other than who she was at each moment,she became the person who could never let me down.I gratefully received whatever she offered,not asking for more.From this viewpoint,I realized just how much mum was still able to give—including important things a daughter needs from her mother.For example,I trusted that she would be available to me(she was living in a secure memory care unit) whenever I was sad or stressed and needed a hug—from my mum.She was always happy to see me.And she let me know that I was appreciated—through looks,smiles,touches,and sounds.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数为150左右;
2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下画线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
4.续写完成后,请用下画线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Perhaps mum lacked the ability to intentionally mother me in these ways.______________________________________________
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I also believe she couldn't possibly enjoy the excitement and laughs on her own.__________________________________________
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【写作指导】
◆文章主线
已知线索:(母亲)阿尔兹海默症—关系紧张—健忘的(母亲)—陪伴—接受(母亲)……
可续写线索:关爱母亲—一起生活(看电视等)—亲密接触—享受这种过程—希望母亲能讲话—逗母亲乐—回报—希望母亲痊愈
◆续写词汇
已给提示词汇:
Alzheimer's,forgiveness,struggles,mattered,loved,heal,acknowledged,received,trusted,happy
续写可能用到的词汇:
in turn,watched TV,from my childhood,roles,squeezed my hand,kiss on the cheek,wish,speak,a silly girl,rubbing mum's nose,in return,gentleness,compassion,reflect,mutual mothering
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Perhaps mum lacked the ability to intentionally mother me in these ways.However,I,in turn,received such comfort,protection and
love that only a mother could give.We watched TV together;we had a programme from my childhood that she also liked to watch but this time it was as if our roles were reversed—I understood everything and she rejoiced every time I did.Every time I laughed or cried she squeezed my hand or gave me a kiss on the cheek.She was just so happy to share in the experience.
I also believe she couldn't possibly enjoy the excitement and laughs on her own.But how I wish mum could speak.“Gracie is such a silly girl,”I laughed and mum squeezed my hand and smiled.“Falling down ditches and getting in trouble with the boys,”I cried,rubbing mum's nose and receiving a Gracie laugh in return.All done with gentleness and compassion for the complete trust of me that was reflected in her eyes.I'm not sure which one of us was healed more by what felt like an experience of“mutual mothering”.
Ⅲ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The New Year brings many new beginnings,and not all of them are always welcome or fun.But one thing it does bring for sure is renewed hope.Whenever I'm feeling afraid of something coming up in my life,or whenever I'm trying to encourage someone close to me to be brave,positive and strong,I strongly rely on and believe in hope.
There are many ways you can encourage your friends to have a fresh start in the New Year and promote strong hope in them.The first thing that comes to mind is to let them know you believe in them.When things get tough,it's always a helpful and welcome reminder that someone believes in you,loves you and is there to cheer you on.Whatever fresh start they might really need,find ways to tell them
that you firmly believe they can achieve it,and make them be in a better place than they were last year.
You can find simple ways to encourage them and renew their hope if they get discouraged.I know a few people who had hard New Year's goals.They stuck to the goals by having an inspirational photo or quotation on the fridge or by the desk.You can also celebrate the first steps towards a fresh start early with your friends,by taking them out for a nice dinner or even just a cup of coffee,or sending them a congrats card.Letting them know that someone really cares,supports and appreciates the changes they are facing and embracing can go a long way to keeping someone on track and cheering them on.
Without encouragement from friends or loved ones,a big change always feels more discouraging,difficult and stressful.Personally,I'm always trying making some important and fresh starts each New Year,and I am so grateful for any encouragement and hopeful,helpful support from friends and family as I soldier on.
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[参考范文]
The New Year brings us renewed hope,which I strongly rely on and believe in.(要点1)To encourage your friends to have a fresh start,you should first let them know you believe in them.(要点2)You can
find some easy ways to encourage them and renew their hope.(要点3)Encouragement from friends or loved ones is a really powerful tool to help us carry on.(要点4)
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