2021届新高考英语人教版一轮考评训练：：写作规范练（八） 4页

www.ks5u.com 写作规范练(八)‎ 写作(共两节，满分40分)‎ 第一节　应用文写作(满分15分)‎ 假定你是李华，是你校学生会主席。你校打算举办面向本校交换生的“读中文经典，学中文语言(Learning Chinese through Reading Chinese Classics)”竞赛活动。请用英语写份通知，内容包括：‎ ‎1．活动目的；‎ ‎2．活动形式；‎ ‎3．活动持续时间。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数80左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 第二节　读后续写(满分25分)‎ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。‎ A Sweet Song ‎“Nothing will ever be the same again，” Ally whispered. She sank slowly into her father's favorite chair and stared at the small American flag on his desk. It was the flag which Chief Russell had given to her after the funeral last summer, when he hugged her and told her how proud the Police Department was of her dad's work for them. His tears had warmed Ally's cheeks; her own tears were still frozen inside her heart.‎ Ally looked at her father's picture on the bookcase. Dad was sitting in the middle of a stream, wet through but grinning proudly. “I miss you, Dad，” she said softly. By this time last year she had already taken dozens of pictures. Ever since she could remember, she and Dad had been a team, searching the woods behind the house each weekend for a glimpse of the special wood warbler (林莺)．‎ Ally reached for the first photo album she and Dad had put together. On the cover a tiny orange bird with bluegray wings and sharp black eyes ‎ peered out of the photo her father had clipped from a local newspaper. Ally smiled, remembering the excited look on his face when he first showed her the pretty bird. “Ally, I bet if we search real hard, we'll see this little guy together some day.”‎ They'd never spotted the warbler, but her father had an amazing way of making each outing seem special. Staying with Dad, Ally felt comfortable. “If only I could get that good feeling back，” she thought, sighing.‎ Staring at the bird, suddenly, she knew exactly what she had to do. Grabbing the little flag, she placed her camera around her neck and hurried outside. Ally stuck the flag among the flowers in the garden. “Please let me see the warbler，” she murmured to herself. She gave her worried mom a kiss and then set off into the woods.‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when ringing birdsong floated down to her.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 写作规范练(八)‎ 第一节 ‎【佳作展台】‎ Notice In order to improve your Chinese, our school is to hold a program called Learning Chinese through Reading Chinese Classics for all you exchange students. During the activity, all of you are supposed to read a Chinese masterpiece you are interested in. After reading, you are to write a book review in Chinese and email it to studentsunion 567 @126. com. Students' Union will call in experts to grade the book reviews and award prizes to the winners. The program will last one month from next Monday. Looking forward to your participation.‎ Students' Union Dec. 15, 2019‎ 第二节 ‎【文章大意】　本文是一篇记叙文。Ally的父亲去世了，他曾经是一名好警察；Ally非常伤心，但是她尽力克制自己的泪水；Ally看着书架上父亲的照片，想到了和父亲在一起的那些美好的时光，特别是寻找林莺的那些日子；但是，虽然曾经他们一再寻找，却从未发现一只林莺；于是，Ally带上相机，决定独自一人再次去寻找林莺。‎ ‎【写作指导】　(1)明确故事中心。故事主要人物为Ally以及她的父亲。(2)抓住主要事件。父亲去世，Ally很想念他，于是开始自己寻找林莺。(3)根据已知事件及续写段落首句预测故事发展。续写的第一段是以描述泥土的味道开始的，续写部分需要侧重Ally在没有父亲陪伴的情况下，独自一人去寻找林莺的心情以及寻找的结果。续写的第二段的首句交代了一个新的线索，即Ally听到了一声清脆的鸟鸣。那么在续写的时候，我们就要着重思考Ally究竟有没有找到林莺；若找到了，那结果又会如何呢。‎ ‎【佳作展台】‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Some things never change, Ally thought. ①Quickening her pace, she hurried to the rock by the stream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch. She sat on it, with her face toward the sun. Overhead the sky was filled with birds busily ‎ diving to gather dried grass to place in their nests. Their sweet songs echoed throughout the woods. Ally felt content for the first time in a long while. She could almost hear her father's laughter in the gentle breeze as she listened for the sweet song of the special bird. All too soon, the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds.‎ Paragraph 2：‎ Determined to start out again the next morning, she was about to head home when ringing birdsong floated down to her. It was prettier than any she had heard before. ②An excited feeling bubbled up inside Ally as she searched the sky. A flash of orange dashed down and rested on a nearby branch. For a moment Ally couldn't believe her eyes, but it was true. ③The tiny wood warbler just sat there, looking around, as if it was waiting for something. Ally blinked back tears. “Thanks, Dad，” she whispered slowly lifting her camera and taking careful aim. “Things will be different without you. I'll always miss our times together, but I feel better now.”‎ ‎【一句多译】‎ ‎①Walking even more quickly, she went to the rock by the stream in a hurry where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch.‎ ‎②Ally was feeling very excited as she searched the sky.‎ ‎③Sitting there and looking around, the tiny wood warbler looked as if it was waiting for something.‎