2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（5）应用文写作-推荐信 11页

应用文写作-推荐信 ‎1、假定你是李华,你校要开展评选 “The Most Qualified Student”(最美学生)的活动,请你用英语写一封推荐信,推荐你班的林扬同学。内容包括: ‎ ‎1. 简单介绍被推荐人(林扬); ‎ ‎2. 说明推荐理由(学习、品德、特长等)。 ‎ 注意: ‎ ‎1. 词数100左右; ‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ‎ ‎3. 开头语给出,不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Editor, ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎2、假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack想学汉语,你推荐他去孔子学院,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:‎ ‎1.推荐理由;‎ ‎2.孔子学院的相关课程,如中国历史、传统文化等。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;‎ ‎3. 可以适当增加细节,使文章行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇:孔子学院Confucius Institute Dear Jack,‎ I am more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎3、假如你是李华,在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。美国中学生John想来中国旅游,不知道去哪儿更好。你向他推荐了苏州市,请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.自我介绍;‎ ‎2.推荐理由(从历史、文化等角度阐述……);‎ ‎3.你的祝愿。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数80左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ Dear John,‎ I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4、假设你是李华,你的外教Declan让你推荐一份英文报纸,供学生们阅读。你推荐“学英语”,并说明理由。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.与教材同步,适合中学生;‎ ‎2.内容丰富,开拓视野;‎ ‎3.提高英语水平,深受欢迎。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100词左右;‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ Dear Declan,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I'm looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎5、假定你是李华,你校要开展评选 “The Most Qualified Student”(最美学生)的活动,请你用英语写一封推荐信,推荐你班的林扬同学。内容包括:‎ ‎1. 简单介绍被推荐人(林扬);‎ ‎2. 说明推荐理由(学习、品德、特长等)。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 开头语给出,不计入总词数。‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎6、假定你是李华,  你的英国朋友John正在学习汉语,希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容,给他回复邮件。‎ ‎1. 推荐网站:www.edchinese.com;‎ ‎2. 网站内容:‎ ‎(1)网络课程的内容;‎ ‎(2)其他相关资源;‎ ‎(3)有在线老师答疑,全部免费。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎7、假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter想提高中文水平,进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信,推荐学习资源。内容包括:‎ ‎1.学习资源:报纸、杂志及其他途径;‎ ‎2.推荐理由;‎ ‎3.表达祝愿。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear  peter,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Best wishes Li Hua ‎8、假如你是学生会主席张凡,学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Snow推荐一名学生帮手(assistant) 。请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。‎ ‎1.欢迎Snow的到来 ‎2.推荐李华为学生帮手(高二年级学生,17岁,)‎ ‎3.介绍李华当帮手的优势(电脑,沟通能力,英语水平)‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.不要逐句翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.信件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。‎ Dear Snow,‎ ‎  I’m Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students’ Union. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,‎ Zhang Fan ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Editor,                                                                                           ‎ ‎    I came across the news that your website is selecting “The Most Qualified Student”. It’s my pleasure to recommend Lin Yang to you.‎ ‎    Lin yang is one of my best friends. As a student, he puts study first and is always trying his best to make progress, so he is among the top students in our school. At the same time, he never forgets to help others either in study or in their life, because of which, he has a lot of friends and is highly spoken of by the teachers and students. What’s more, Lin Yang is talented in traditional Chinese painting.‎ ‎   All in all, I think he deserves the title. I’m proud of him.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear jack,‎ ‎    I am more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute,intended for foreigners to learn Chinese, may be your right choice.‎ ‎    The school ofifers such interesting subjects as Chinese history, traditional culture and Chinese rniting. More importantly, you can get access to speaking Chinese with classmates. Besides, you will be involved in some Chinese traditional festivals, like the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. And during that time, you can join in activities like making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but have a good knowledge of Chinese life.‎ ‎    I hope that you will find my recommendation helpful and attractive.‎ ‎    Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(102 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 这是篇提纲作文,要求习作者以李华的身份推荐Jack去孔子学院学习汉语,根据内容提示可知,习作者可根据推荐的理由加以发挥,可以介绍该学院的课程、特色教学等;但由于词数限制,故要掌控好发挥的度,精选词汇和句型,做到言简意赅。‎ 精彩点评 本文内容丰富,层次清楚,结构严谨;理由充分,说理透彻,令人信服:使用了大量的高级词汇和高级句型,增强了表现力,更增加了本文的亮点,为这篇上乘之作“锦上添花”。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ 高分范文 Dear John,‎ ‎    I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum, I am strongly convinced that Suzhou is your best choice.‎ ‎    I'm Li Hua, a native of Suzhou. And now I am a senior school student here. The reason why I recommend the city is that Suzhou is not only a city with a lone history but also has manv places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself. Next, people here are outgoing, friendly and helpful, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Last hut not least, you can experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Suzhou.‎ ‎    I do hope that you will have a good time in China.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(102 words)‎ 标准范文 Dear John,‎ ‎    I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Suzhou.‎ ‎    I'm Li Hua, a high school student, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to traveling in China, Suzhou is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Suzhou is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest. Second, people in Suzhou are friendly, kind, and willing to help others. Third, you can have a chance to experience different cultures.‎ ‎    In addition, I'd like to serve as your guide if you come.‎ ‎    Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(92 words)‎ 解析：‎ 思路点拨 ‎1. 问候及导人语已给出;‎ ‎2. 可将"自我介绍”与正文有效地整合在一起;‎ ‎3. 再将“推荐苏州”的理由阐述清楚;‎ ‎4. 阐述推荐理由时,可适当从历史、文化等角度考虑;‎ ‎5. 重视阐述理由的省略号,可适当延伸、发散等;‎ ‎6. 给出你美好的祝愿作为此篇电子邮件的结束语。‎ 高分范文揭秘 ‎1.短文结构清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅。‎ ‎2.使用了较高级的词汇:strongly,a native of, recommend, places of interest 等。‎ ‎3.文章中句式变化层出不穷,如that引导的宾语从句,which及 where引导的非限制性定语从句,why引导的定语从句及that引导的表语从句等,这些多样化的句式的精准表达都给文章增添了很多亮点。本题满分15分,本文得14分。‎ 标准范文精彩点评 ‎1. 本篇习作虽用词不多.但读来紧凑,使人一目了然,且思路清晰,细节处交代得清楚。‎ ‎2. 运用了一些高级句式、结构。如lha丨引导的宾语从句、并列连词not only...but also…以及if引导的条件状语从句等。‎ ‎3. 高级词汇的大量使用,也使文章增色不少:如:pay a visit to, good at,when it comes to, first of all, with a long histon , places of interest, help others, have a chance to, in addition, serve as等。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案： ‎ Dear Declan,‎ ‎    There are several English papers aiming at English study,the best of which is Learning English.It is written according to the textbooks,so it is especially fit for the English study for our students.‎ ‎    Besides,the paper is rich in content,whose articles include stories,school life,news,foreign cultures,technology,environment protection,grammar study.It also provides plenty of necessary exercises to strengthen our skills.With the help of the paper,we can greatly broaden our vision and knowledge.‎ ‎   I have been reading the paper since I studied English.It is very popular with students as it can greatly improve our English.‎ ‎    I'm looking forward to your reply..‎ Yours,‎ LiHua ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear Editor,‎ ‎    I came across the news that your website is selecting “The Most Qualified Student”. It’s my pleasure to recommend Lin Yang to you.‎ ‎    Lin yang is one of my best friends. As a student, he puts study first and is always trying his best to make progress, so he is among the top students in our school. At the same time, he never forgets to help others either in study or in their life, because of which, he has a lot of friends and is highly spoken of by the teachers and students. What’s more, Lin Yang is talented in traditional Chinese painting.‎ ‎    All in all, I think he deserves the title. I’m proud of him.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear  John ‎    I am more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I would like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It is a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.‎ ‎    Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses , such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of  the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And it is free of charge.‎ ‎    I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time.‎ Yours,  Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎    I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.It's my pleasure to recommend you some resources.‎ ‎    Reading some popular newspapers and magazines,such as Southern Weekly and Readers,is the first choice,from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.Besides,there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet,on TV or with some apps.The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.You can benefit a lot from them.‎ ‎    I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.‎ 解析：‎ 评分建议:‎ ‎1.获悉peter想提高中文水平  (2分)2.写信目的---推荐(3分)3.途径:报纸杂志/补充一点2*3分)4.理由:报纸杂志理由/ 其他途径理由2*5分)5.祝愿 (4分) 6.书写  (2-3分)‎ ‎ ‎ ‎8答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Snow,‎ ‎   I’m Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.‎ ‎   I was asked to write to you, recommending Li Hua, a Senior 2 student , aged17, to be your assistant. He(She )is a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, he(she) is expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need. I am confident that he(she )can be helpful in your work and life inChina. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask me.‎ ‎   Looking forward to your coming soon.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Zhang Fan ‎ ‎