专题49看图写话类书面表达（二）-2017年高考英语二轮核心考点总动员 6页

专题 49 看图写话类书面表达（二）‎ 关键词：看图写话,记叙类写话,多图（一遍为四图）,书面表达 难度系数：✱✱✱✱ 推荐指数：✱✱✱✱✱‎ ‎【基础回顾】]‎ 考点归纳：‎ 图画式作文要求考生将画面所包含的信息转换成文字，旨在避免考生汉语思维，要求考生直接用英语思维。它要求通过图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，包括叙述一个故事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画式作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。‎ 基础必读：‎ 图画式作文要求考生不仅具有一定的观察分析能力，还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。‎ 考生在写图画式作文时，有时难以取得比较理想的成绩，其原因主要有：观察图画不细致，不能准确地对图画内容加以分析概括；分不清内容主次，从而不能层次分明地表达作文主题的意思；无法将图片所要求表达的意思恰到好处地用文字写出来。‎ 写好图画式作文的关键是：一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容，并直接用英语表达，千万不要先想好一句句的中文，然后逐句译成英文，那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平，作文中就会出现“生造”的英语句子，难免会出错。另外，对于与图画无关的事要少写，还要注意人称、时态的呼应，整个作文要通篇考虑。‎ 写作要领：]‎ ‎①准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。‎ ‎②把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画，合理想象，围绕特定的主题，把握情景，（利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图中的文字说明和标识来）提炼要点等。‎ ‎ ③发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象，发表自己的联想或感想。‎ ‎【技能方法】‎ 记叙类看图写话应从以下几方面着手：]‎ 一、 提炼要点：围绕图中人物的动作和重要的图标来提炼要点。‎ ‎]‎ 二、遣词造句：根据提炼的要点进行造句，注意使用高级词汇和句型。‎ 三、连句成篇：连句成篇，注意使用恰当的连接词，使文章自然流畅。‎ 四、发表感想：适当发表感想，画龙点睛。‎ ‎【基础达标】‎ 假定你是李华，下面四幅图画描绘了发生在你上学路上的一件事情，请根据图画内容用]]‎ ‎]‎ ‎ ]]‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground. I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what was wrong with her. She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble. I was worried and decided to take her to a hospital. And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contacted her family. Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital. They thanked and praised me for my kindness by ‎ writing me a thank-you letter. Although I was late for school today, I felt very proud of what I had done.]‎ ‎【能力提升】]‎ 下面四幅图描述了妇女节那天王林家的情况．请根据这些图画写一篇完整的故事．‎ 注意：1. 故事包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯．]‎ ‎2. 用第三人称写． 3.词数100左右．‎ ‎]‎ ‎【答案】]]‎ On March eighth, Women's Day, Wang Lin had a good idea that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they did some housework, which was always done by his mother. Wang Lin cleaned the house completely. His father washed all the dirty clothes. Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken and some other delicious dishes. Wang Lin laid the table and set a vase in the middle of the table. After that, they hid themselves ‎ behind the door, waiting for his mother. They wanted to give her a happy surprise. Indeed, when his mother came back and saw all of these, she felt very curious and happy. They had a pleasant festival.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文是一篇合格的作文，根据图片内容，很好的写出了文中要求的知识点。并且用了很多加分的句子，例如：First they did some housework, which was always done by his mother是一个非限制性定语从句，再如： Indeed, when his mother came back and saw all of these, she felt very curious and happy.用了副词Indeed，还用了when引导的一个从句，文章整体结构很好。‎ ‎【终极闯关】]‎ ‎ 你是北京第20中学的一名学生。请根据下面图画写一篇题为"My Colorful School Life"短文。‎ 要求：1. 短文应包括图画的全部内容; 禁止使用数字符号，注意使用第一人称。‎ ‎2. 要紧扣主题，适当发挥，使句子表达流畅；注意使用正确时态；‎ ‎3. 词数100个左右。开头结尾已给。‎ surf the Internet My Colorful School Life I’m a student from ‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________]]‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ I enjoy my colorful school life.‎ ‎【答案】‎ My Colorful School Life ‎ I’m a student from Beijing No.20 Middle School and I know what I’m studying for so that I work hard and listen carefully and attentively at school.‎ ‎ After class or during the breaks, I often play basketball with my classmates, which makes me happy, energetic and healthy. Besides, I like the computer class very much because we can surf the Internet and get more information at home and abroad.‎ ‎ I go to the library regularly and spend some time there reading various books. I am really interested in visiting museums where I have learned a lot of knowledge beyond school books.]‎ ‎ I enjoy my colorful school life.‎ ‎【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式、词汇及短语，为文章增色不少。如：regularly定期地、listen carefully and attentively认真地听和专注、learned a lot of knowledge学到很多知识以及定语从句which makes me happy, energetic and healthy.的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。]‎ 考点：图画类作文 ‎