浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习：写作专练 29页

写作综合练(七) 第一节:应用文写作 (2017·浙江台州期末) 假如你是李华,上周,你校学生会组织了“冬日暖衣(Warm Clothes For Winter)”活动, 为贫困山区儿童献爱心。请你为校英语报写一篇相关报道。内容如下: 1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.活动意义。 注意:1.词数 80 左右,题目已为你写好; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Warm Clothes,Warm Heart 第二节:读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 (2017·浙江杭州七校联考) An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window. The father asked his son,“What is this?” The son replied,“It is a crow.” After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,“What is this?” The son said,“Father,I have just now told you.It’s a crow!” After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,“What is this?” At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝).“It’s a crow,a crow.” A little while later,the father again asked his son the fourth time,“What is this?” This time,the son shouted at his father,“Why do you keep aski ng me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’.Are you not able to understand this?” A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发 皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it,the following words were written in the diary: “Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 After reading the diary, Feeling ashamed, 参考答案 写作综合练(七) 第一节 Warm Clothes,Warm Heart Last week,the Student Union in our school organized an activity “Warm Clothes for Winter” to show love and care to the children in the poverty-stricken mountainous areas.This a ctivity w as welcomed by all the students,who donated clothes,gloves and so on to help the less fortunate through the freezing winter. Unquestionably,students find such an activity quite rewarding.Knowing that they have improved the lives of others,they feel a strong sense of fulfillment.It is giving that makes the difference. (83 words) 第二节 Paragraph 1: After reading the diary,the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times!The son thought to himself:If I attain old age,how will my son look at me?Will he think of me as a burden?Will he shout at me because of my poor sight,poor hearing or poor understanding? Paragraph 2: Fee ling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father,begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud,“I promise to see you happy forever,Dad.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child,showering your selfless affection on me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best way no matter how you behave.” 写作提升练(二) 应用文 1 假定你是李明,上个月,你校学生会组织了一场“校园歌手大奖赛”,受到同学们的欢 迎。请你给校园英文报写一篇 80 词左右的报道。活动内容包括: 1.各班选拔; 2.学校决赛; 3.评奖颁奖。 2 假如你叫李华,你的好友李林发 QQ 向你询问如何写好英语作文。请根据以下提示回复。 内容包括: 1.收集好词好句并记忆; 2.背诵范文; 3.经常练笔。 注意: 1.词数:80 左右; 2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 3.可适当发 挥,注意行文连贯。 Dear Li Lin, Glad to receive your message.At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3 假如你是光华中学的 校报英文编辑李华,你校王伟同学昨天下午在放学回家的路上看 到一位老奶奶摔倒在地,他立刻将她扶起来,同时拨打了 120,使老奶奶得到了及时救治。你 决定将此事发布到校报英文版并倡议全校同学向他学习。内容包括: 4 一年一度的校园文化节又拉开了序幕,但今年学生却没有表现出像往年的兴趣和热情。 面对这一现象,有人提出校园文化节还要不要举办的问题,这引起了同学们的讨论。上周末你 班也进行了一场讨论。大多数同学都支持校园文化节,请你根据下面所提供的内容对讨论结 果做一总结。 支持的原因: 1.给学生创造了展示自我才华的舞台; 2.有利于提高学习兴趣; 3.丰富校园文化,活跃校园气氛。 注意: 1.词数:80 左右; 2.题目和开头语已给出,不计入总词数; 3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 To be continued or not The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again,but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before. 5 假设你叫王平。为响应国家厉行节约的号召,请你以“厉行节约——为资源,为环保”为 题,向某英语报社编辑写信,表达你对厉行节约的看法。该英文信应包括以下内容: 1.节约与资源的关系; 2.节约与环保的关系; 3.举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约; 4.倡导社会保持节约的优良传统。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 6 假定你是李明,上周末英语俱乐部组织了一次英语演讲比赛。请你给学校英语报写一篇 报道。演讲内容包括: 1.环保 2.东西方文化差异 3.文明行为 注意:1.词数 80 词左右,题目已为你写好; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 English Speech Contest of Our English Club 7 (2017·浙江台州一模) 假设你是李华,毕业在即,请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张 Thank-you Note。 内容应包括: 1.表达对老师的感谢; 2.陈述老师对你的帮助和影响; 3.表达对老师的祝福。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 8 (2017·浙江五校联考) 假定你是中学生李华,作为成员之一,刚刚访问完英国的姐妹学校 Morley College回国。 请你给 Morley College 的校长 Mr.Declan 写一封感谢信,内容包括: 1.感谢对方的热情款待; 2.你的收获; 3.邀请对方来访。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考答案 写作提升练(二) 应用文 1 Campus Singer Grand Show Last month,the Campus Singer Grand Show was finished successfully.The grand show roughly went through two stages.First,a competition is held in each class,after which the best ones were entered for the final competition of the school.After the competition,the competitors were ranked and prizes were presented to the best singers. The show has received positive comments from the students,who say it has provided a good chance for us students to refresh ourselves from our daily studies. 2 Dear Li Lin, Glad to receive your message.At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition. First and foremost,an effective way,to the best of my knowledge,is to collect classic words and sentences,processing them over and over until you bear them in mind.The more vocabulary you accumulate,the more freely you can apply them when writing.What’s more,reciting fantastic possible versions and sentence structures worth imitating can get you to make enough preparations in advance.Last but not the least,it is a good reward to practise writing.Only by exercising can you put to use what you have gathered. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3 Dear classmates, I’m more than pleased to share with you Wang Wei’s story. On his way home yesterday afternoon,Wang Wei noticed an old lady fall to the ground and didn’t hesitate to help her.After helping her to safety,he dialed 120 and the granny got timely treatment in hospital. I was deeply impressed by what Wang Wei had done.There is no doubt that such a deed should be encouraged.People nowadays seem to be getting more and more unwilling to help others.Actually,it is our duty to make our world a more harmonious place. I strongly advocate that everyone should learn from Wang Wei. That’s all.Thank you. 4 To be continued or not The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again,but t his year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study,a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active. In addition,more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions.On the other hand,students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book. 5 Dear editor, I’m Wang Ping.I’m writing to offer your newspaper an article “Trying to Save Both for Natural Resources and the Environment.” Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day.Meanwhile,saving can help us avoid producing waste.As students,we should make our contributions.For example,we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books.In this way,more trees would be saved.We Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame,so we call for everybody’s action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Wang Ping 6 English Speech Contest of Our English Club Last week end,the English Club in our school held a speech contest,which covered a wide range of topics.On top of the list are speeches about environment protection,in which we talked about ways to protect our environment.Next come those about the differences between Chinese and Western cultures.And finally,a lot of our contestants talked about what accounts for good behavior,especially for us students. The speech contest received high praise and is seen as a chance to promote our English studies. 7 Dear Ms.Yang, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me.I’m lucky to have you as my English teacher.English is never as an easy subject for me.And I’m not a smart or confident guy who can manage all the difficulties with your patience and devotion.I hope in the future I can do the same for others,always ready to reach out. With the note is a sweet chocolate bar.Wish you a happy and sweet life. Sincerely, Li Hua 8 Dear Mr.Declan, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in Britain.It was so nice and considerate of you to have prepared us so many cuisines of British flavor!We were also deeply impressed by the comfortable accommodation you arranged for us!And the activities you organized not only broadened our horizons but also promoted our mutual understanding.We now have a deeper insight into British culture.Thanks again for all your efforts! We hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future! Best regards! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作提升练(六) 概要写作 1 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的概要。 (2017·浙江高三“五校联考”第一次考试) A new,first-of-its-kind study examines the connection between teacher burnout and students’ stress levels.Researchers from the University of British Columbia collected saliva (唾液) samples from over 400 elementary school children,grades from four to seven,at 17 public schools.Cortisol (皮质醇) levels were then assessed from the samples as the hormone is commonly used as a biological indicator of stress.Correspondingly,teacher burnout was determined through survey results. Investigators found that in classrooms in which teachers experienced more burnout,or feelings of emotional exhaustion,students’ cortisol levels were elevated (提升).Higher cortisol levels in elementary school children have been linked to learning difficulties as well as mental health problems.The study appears in the journal Social Science & Medicine.“This suggests that stress contagion (蔓 延) might be taking place in the classroom among students and their teachers,” said Eva Oberle,Ph.D.,the study’s lead author. Indeed,the relationship between student stress and teacher burnout is a chicken and egg question.“It is unknown what came first,elevated cortisol or teacher burnout.We consider the connection between student and teacher stress a cyclical problem in the classroom.” Oberle said a stressful classroom climate could be a result of inadequate support for teachers,which may impact teachers’ ability to effectively manage their students.A poorly managed classroom can contribute to students’ needs not being met and increasing stress.This could be reflected in elevated cortisol levels in students. Alternatively,stress could originate from students,who may be more challenging to teach because of increases in anxiety,behavioral problems,or special needs.In this case,teachers could feel overwhelmed and report higher levels of burnout. “Our study is a reminder of the systemic issues facing teachers and educators as classroom sizes increase and supports for teachers are cut,” said Oberle.“It is clear from a number of recent research studies that teaching is one of the most stressful professions,and that teachers need adequate resources and support in their jobs in order to battle burnout and relieve stress in the classroom,” said University of British Columbia education professor Kimberly Schonert Reichl,Ph.D.,the study’s co-author.“If we do not support teachers,we risk the damage of students.” 2 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 What I Think of Boxing as a Sport Boxing is a popular sport.Newspapers,magazines and sports programmes on TV frequently cover boxing matches.It could be the toughest of all sports to survive.It takes boxers hours in the gym and years to develop the specific characteristics needed to be a great boxer.Perhaps that is the reason why successful boxers are treated as big heroes. It seems to me that some people,especially men,find it appealing because it is an aggressive sport.When they watch a boxing match,they can identify with the winning boxer.This gives them the feeling of being a winner themselves.Sometimes fans are rooting for a particular boxer.They do that because the boxer comes from their own country,and if “their” boxer loses,they often feel as if they have lost a fight themselves.It is a fact that many people have feelings of aggression from tim e to time,but they cannot show their aggression in their everyday lives.Watching a boxing match gives them a way of expressing it. However,boxing can be a very dangerous sport.Although boxers wear gloves during the fights,and amateur boxers even have to wear helmets,a kind of strong hard hat,there have frequently been accidents in both professional and amateur boxing,sometimes with dramatic c onsequences.Boxers have suffered from head injuries,and,occasionally,fighters have even been killed as a result of being knocked out in the ring.Besides,studies have shown that there are often long-term effects of boxing.They are usually in the form of serious brain damage,even if a boxer has never been knocked out. To conclude,I am personally not at all in favor of aggressiv e sports like boxing.I think it would be better if less time was given to aggressive sports on TV.We can celebrate more men and women from non-aggressive sports as our heroes in our society.I believe that the world is aggressive enough already! Of course,people like competitive sports,and so do I,but I think that hitting other people in an aggressive way is not something that should be regarded as a sport. 参考答案 写作提升练六 概要写作 1 A new research shows that student strain often coexists with teacher exhaustion.(要点 1)Students,who find their requirements unsatisfied as a result of teachers’ low-level management over class,may feel overwhelmingly stressed.(要 点 2) Conversely,teachers,who encounter great teaching challenge from students,tend to be burned out.( 要点 3) Therefore,more sufficient resources and support to teachers should be guaranteed,or students are likely to be ruined.(要点 4) 2 Boxing is a popular sport.Some people,especially men,find it appealing because it is an aggressive sport and watching a boxing match gives them a way of expressing their aggression.( 要 点 1)However,boxing can be a very dangerous sport.Boxers usually suffer long-term brain damage,and even loss of their life.( 要 点 2) Personally,I prefer non-aggressive sports to aggressive ones like boxing,for the world itself is aggressive enough already.(要点 3) 写作提升练(三) 读后续写 1 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 (2017·浙江衢州二中 5 月模拟) It was the late 1930s,and things were tough.Mum had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster,BC.My dad had drowned in Pitt Lake,five years ago. Looking back,I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to school.Every morning she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes,because our soles(鞋 底 )were worn out.When we got home,Mum would have “French toast” ready for us.Constant moving was typical for my family in those times.Rent was 25 dollars a month,but Mum couldn’t pay it,and we knew we would be evicted right after Christmas on the first of January. Christmas was approaching,and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social services.The inspector came to our house,and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didn’t have any food hidden away.When he didn’t find any,he issued the cheque to Mum.Mum said that instead of buying food,she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent,assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while longer.She told us then there would be nothing for Christmas. Unknown to Mum,I had been selling Christmas tree,shoveling snow,and doing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of boots.Boots that weren’t patched,boots with no cardboard in the soles.I knew exactly which boots I wanted.They were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars. Well,the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas Eve.I was excited,as I hurried up the road to the shoe store,but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights and decorations.It was then I realiz ed at our house,we had no lights,no decorations,nor any money for Christmas goodies.I knew that we would have no turkey or ham for Christmas,and I felt sad. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: As I continued walking I began to reconsider my plan. Paragraph 2: With great excitement and tears in my eyes,I knocked on the door. 2 (2017·浙江金华江南中学第二学期期中考试) A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden.One day his wife was ill and he had no money.He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market.The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to the town.But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out,it was dark.He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow.He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up.At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body.He was so afraid that he ran away quickly,without taking the baskets with him. The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station.Having shown the baskets,an officer asked:“Are these yours?” “Yes,sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地).“Have you killed the man?” “No,no,sir.” the farmer said in a hurry.“When did you see the dead man?” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No,Sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked,“Have you seen it yet?” “No,Sir.”The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and send him into prison.The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认),but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer. 注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. Paragraph 2: The farmer was lucky.A few days later, 参考答案 写作提升练(三) 读后续写 1 Paragraph 1: As I continued walking I began to reconsider my plan.I was feeling a strange sense of guilt.Here I was going to buy a new pair of boots while my mother was home in tears.She would be trying to explain to us why there were no presents.Across the street from the bus stop was a big grocery store.I realized that 25 dollars I had worked so hard for went a long way towards lights,decorations and a turkey.After finishing shopping,I went home. Paragraph 2: With great excitement and tears in my eyes,I knocked on the door.I could hardly wait to see my mother’s face! When Mum opened the door,some of the groceries fell inside onto the floor,and she just stood there,dumbfounded.Holding back the tears,I said,“Merry Christmas!” That day I got enough hugs and kisses from Mum. 2 Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.The farmer was very afraid.He thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people,but he didn’t.He was innocent.He must tell people the truth,but no one could hear his voice.He hoped that someone could come and save him. Paragraph 2: The farmer was lucky.A few days later,a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists,saying that he saw the murderer.It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening.He was so frightened and ran away.But the young man thought the farmer was innocent.So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.After the investigation,the young man was right.The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired,and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers. 写作提升练(四) 读后续写 1 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 (2017·11 浙江) A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放 哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey,where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections( 反 对 ).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 2 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring. Paragraph 2: But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man. 参考答案 写作提升练(四) 读后续写 1 Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind.Dad recommended buying a new one,while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it,saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly,so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally,we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day,towards evening,we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent,and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains,the tent was set up and the meal was ready.Sitting around the camp fire,we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face. 2 Paragraph 1: After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet. Paragraph 2: But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment. 写作提升练(五) 读后续写 1 (2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试仿真模拟) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。 Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),a lifestraw(救命吸管) and a raincoat. Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in trouble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location. What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come into play,Stewart says. For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame. “You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.” Second,you’ll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,Stewart says. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: “I always say that your life depends on your water source,”he said. Paragraph 2: You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home. 2 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Tom appeared on the sidewalk with a bucket of whitewash and a long-handled brush.He stopped at the fence in front of the house where he lived with his aunt Polly.He looked at it,and all joy left him.The fence was long and high.He put the brush into the whitewash and moved it along the top of the fence.He repeated the operation.He felt it was difficult for him to continue and sat down. He knew that his friends would arrive soon with all kinds of interesting plans for the day.They would walk past him and laugh.They would make jokes about his work on a beautiful summer Saturday.The thought burned him like fire. He put his hands into his pockets and took out all that belonged to him.Perhaps he could find some way to pay someone to do the whitewashing for him.But there was nothing of value in his pockets —nothing that could buy even half an hour of freedom.So he put the bits of toys back into his pockets and gave up the idea. At this dark and hopeless moment,a wonderful idea came to him.It filled his mind with a great,bright light.Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash. While Tom was working,Ben Rogers appeared.Ben was eating an apple as he walked along the street.As he walked along,he was making noises like the sound of a riverboat.First he shouted loudly,like a boat captain.Then he said “Ding- Dong-Dong”,“Ding-Dong-Dong” again and again,like the bell of a riverboat.And he made other strange noises.When he came close to Tom,he stopped. Tom went on whitewashing.He did not look at Ben.Ben stared for a moment and then said:“Hello!I’m going swimming,but you can’t go,can you?” No answer.Tom moved his brush carefully along the fence and looked at the result with the eye of an artist.Ben came nearer.Tom’s mouth watered for the apple,but he kept on working. Ben said,“Hello,old fellow,you’ve got to work,hey?” Tom turned suddenly and said,“Why,it’s you,Ben!I wasn’t noticing.” “Say—I’m going swimming.Don’t you wish you could?But of course you’d rather work — wouldn’t you?Of course you would.” Tom looked at the boy a bit,and said “Why do you call work?” “Why,isn’t that work?”Tom went back to his whitewashing,and answered carelessly. “Well,maybe it is,and maybe it isn’t.All I know is,it suits Tom Sawyer.” “Oh come,now,you don’t mean to say that you like it?”The brush continued to move. “Like it?Well,I don’t see why I shouldn’t l ike it.Does a boy get a chance to whitewash a fence every day?” Ben stopped eating his apple.Tom moved his brush back and forth,stepped back to look at the result,added a touch here and there,and stepped back again.Ben watched every move and got more and more interested.Soon he said,“Say,Tom,let me whitewash a little.” Tom thought for a moment,was about to agree;but he changed his mind. “No—no—it won’t do,Ben.You see,Aunt Polly wants this fence to be perfect.It has got to be done very carefully.I don’t think there is one boy in a thousand,maybe two thousand,that can do it well enough.” “No—is that so?Oh come,now—let me just try.Only just a little.” “Ben,I’d like to,but if it isn’t done right,I’m afraid Aunt Polly...” “Oh,I’ll be careful.Now let me try.Say—I’ll give you the core of my apple.” “Well,here—No,Ben,now don’t.I’m afraid...” “I’ll give you all of it.” 注意:1.所叙写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Tom gave up the brush with unwillingness on his face,but joy in his heart. Paragraph 2: And he had not worked.He had had a nice idle time all the time, 参考答案 写作提升练五 读后续写 1 Paragraph 1: “I always say that your life depends on your water source,”he said.“If you are in a bad situation and have to drink water not fit to drink,you take the risk of drinking wild poisonous water,which can quickly kill you.”In this case,a lifestraw will come into play.Finally,Stewart r ec ommends ha ving a raincoat,or anything that can be used to protect you against the weather.Even food should take a back seat to these three necessary items,he says.“Everyone gets really worried about food,but the human body is designed to last a long time without food.When it comes to survival necessary items,food’s on the bottom of the list,”he said. Paragraph 2: You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home.You can keep them in a backpack if you’re hiking or camping,or even a car if you’re traveling on the road.But in a word,the best thing you can do to ensure your own survival happens before you even leave. 2 Paragraph 1: Tom gave up the brush with unwillingness on his face,but joy in his heart.And while Ben worked at the fence in the hot sun,Tom sat under a tree,eating the apple,and planning how to get more help.There were enough boys.Each one came to laugh,but remained to whitewash.By the time Ben was tired,Tom sold the next chance to Billy for a kite;and when Billy was tired,Johnny bought in for a dead rat and so on,hour after hour.And when the middle of the afternoon came,Tom had won many treasures. Paragraph 2: And he had not worked.He had had a nice idle time all the time,with plenty of company—and the fence had been whitewashed three times.If he hadn’t run out of whitewash,Tom would have owned everything belonging to his friends.He had discovered a great law of human action,namely,that in order to make a man or a boy want a thing,it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to get. 写作提升练(一) 应用文 1 (2017·11 浙江) 假定你是李华,得知外教 Mr.Hall 寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封 信,内容包括: 1.时间;2.家人;3.活动。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2 (2017·浙江金华高三 9 月十校联考) 假定你是李华,暑假参加了某微信公众号(WeChat official account)举行的英语原版书 阅读活动,并写了一篇书评(a book review)。现你用英语给外教 Sam 写一封信,希望他能帮 你当面批改书评,信的内容主要包括: 1.简要介绍活动; 2.提出请求; 3.提议见面时间。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3 (2017·浙江高三“五校联考”第一次考试) 假定你是李华,最近你发现有学生将共享单车停到了校园内并且上了私锁。请你就此现 象,写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上,倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。 内容提示:1.共享单车带给人们的便利; 2.如何正确使用共享单车。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes Li Hua 4 (2017·吉林长春一模改编) 假设你是李华,校学生会主席,想邀请外教 Henry 先生一起参加学校举办的中秋节晚会。 请给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.介绍写邮件的目的; 2.晚会时间、地点:9 月 30 日晚 6 点、学校报告厅; 3.晚会内容:同学们表演节目、吃月饼、赏月。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 5 (2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试二次仿真模拟) 第一中学校委会要招聘一位课外活动老师,请你写一则招聘启事。内容包括: 1.年龄不大于 40 岁的男教师,至少有 3 年的工作经验。 2.计划、组织高一学生 15:00 至 16:00 的课外体育活动。 3.每周 3 次,报酬面议。 4.联系人:刘莉(Tel:13023458634) 注意:1.80 词左右;总词数不含已给部分; 2.参考词汇:课外活动 extracurricular activity;体操 physical exercises;联系 contact Extracurricular Activity Teacher Needed The Committee of No.1 Middle School 6 (2017·浙江台州期末) 假定你是李华,一位热衷中国文化的美国朋友 James 来信想了解你最近参加的一次校园 “诗词大会”(Poetry Conference)活动。请用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括: 活动目的 (走进中国诗词,感受传统文化……) 活动内容 (诗歌诵读、古诗词欣赏……) 活动体验 (……) 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 7 (2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试三次仿真模拟) 假设你是王伟。你从电视上获悉某公司要招一名 40 岁以下的销售经理,你很需要这份工 作,因此写求职信一封,要点如下: 1.年龄及教育背景; 2.工作经历及能力; 3.爱好及特长; 4.性格特点。 注意:1.80 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) 2.参考词汇:销售经理 marketing manager;硕士学位 master’s degree;北京外贸大学 商学院 Business School of Beijing Foreign Trade University June 8 Dear Sir/Madam, Your early reply will be appreciated. Yours ever, Wang Wei 8 假定你是李明。你校学生会组织学生举办了一次“海报设计创新赛”,受到同学们的欢 迎。请你给校园英文报写一篇报道。活动内容包括: 1.海报内容:反映校园生活,体现创新意识; 2.同学们积极参与。 注意: 1.词数:80 左右,题目已为你写好; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Creative Design of Posters 参考答案 写作提升练(一) 应用文 1 Dear Mr.Hall, I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19.It’s traditionally a time for family reunion,so my parents and my brother will all be there.We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner.We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.You may even get a gift from my parents.If you’re able to come,I’ll go and pick you up at your place. Best, Li Hua 2 Dear Sam, I’m writing to ask for a favor from you.As a bookworm and English lover,I signed up for a reading activity on a WeChat official account this summer,where I was expected to read some English books and submit a book review.Now I have written one on Wonder Boy,which you highly recommended last term.But I am not sure whether I have got my ideas across,so I reall y hope you can help me to correct the mistakes and give me some advice on writing.If possible,can I come to meet you on Sunday afternoon? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 3 My dear fellow students, Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes,such as Mobike and ofo,parked in our campus,and even own locks are put on them.Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem.Hence,shared bikes should be left in public for next users.It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest.I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service. Li Hua 4 Dear Mr.Henry, I’m Li Hua,Chai rman of Students’ Union.It’s a great honour for me,on behalf of my fellow union members,to invite you to attend our party.The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner,which is a time for family m embers and loved ones to get together. To celebrate this Chinese traditional festival,a party will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 6 pm on Sep.30th.At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,including mooncakes,watermelons,grapes and so on,while admiring the fullest and roundest moon. We can’ t wait to see you! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 5 Extracurricular Activity Teacher Needed The Committee of No.1 Middle School hopes to employ a man under 40 as an extracurricular activity teacher next term.His duty is to plan and organize extracurricular activities,such as play ing all kinds of games,doing physical exercises,and ev en doing some running,from 15:00 to 16:00,3 times per week. The applicant shall work continuously as an extracurricular activity teacher for at least 3 years. If you show interest,please contact Liu Li at 13023458634 for an interview,during which the salary will be talked about. The Committee of No.1 Middle School 6 Dear James, Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference.Basically,the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.During the activity,we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways.Meanwhile,we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction.For me,it was a meaningful experience,which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves. Yours, Li Hua 7 June 8 Dear Sir/Madam, I learn from an ad on TV that your company needs a marketing manager under 40.The position interests me very much.I think I’m qualified to gain it. I’m 35 years old and have a master’s degree from Business School of Beijing Foreign Trade University.I’ve been head of marketing department in the WAL-MART Harbin branch for 4 years.I’m not only good at communicating but also show a great talent for organizing,expressing and creating.Shopping is my hobby.I’m honest and reliable.I’m ready to help anyone in trouble. Your early reply will be appreciated. Yours ever, Wang Wei 8 Creative Design of Posters Recently organized by the Students’ Union of our school,we have carried out a competition of creative design of posters.Hundreds of students have handed in their designs,all of which are closely related to their school life.The collections have shown their creative thought through various designs. The event has received warm applause from the students,who say that they view this as a good chance for them to think in different new ways. 写作综合练(八) 第一节:应用文写作 (2017·浙江杭州二中考前适应) 假定你是李华,校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节,急需 一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔 友 Jimmy 写一封 email 求助,让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过 来,并告知会承担相关费用。 内容包括: 1.求助的原因; 2.对杂志的要求; 3.费用。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右。 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 第二节:概要写作 阅读下面短文,根据内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Every year,especially during the spring and early summer,the lives of many young animals are disrupted.People may attempt to “save” these animals,and more often than not,the mother is nearby. Young rabbits found at a nest site do not need to be rescued.The mother rabbit will not return as long as a person is standing near the nest site.If you’ve kicked to open a nest,just replace the top of the nest,and leave.The mother will return and care for the young.Cottontail rabbits leave their young for hours while eating,but they do return to nu rse the young,until the young are old enough to survive on their own.Young rabbits are ready to leave the nest at three to four weeks of age when their eyes are open and their bodies are furry. Young birds are sometimes found on the ground near a nest.When this happens,the best thing to do is to put the bird carefully back into the nest.Don’t worry about getting your scent on the bird;it will not affect the mother’s care.If you can’t reach the nest,leave the bird on the ground.Every bird alive today has spent a few precarious days on the ground while learning to fly.The best thing you can do during this time of year to protect young wildlife is to keep cats indoors. When yo ung raccoons are found out alone,it is likely that they are merely exploring and their mother is nearby.They are probably old enough to be fully capable of climbing back up a tree to their den.If they were too young to climb,the mother would carry them back. If you find a young fawn laying alone,leave it there.The mother comes back several times each day to nurse the fawn.If you’ve already picked the fawn up and brought it home,put it back.Even one or two days after removal from the wild,fawns have been successfully reunited with their mothers,by returning them to the place where they were found. 参考答案 写作综合练(八) 第一节 Dear Jimmy, I’m writing to ask for a favor from you.To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture,the S tudent Union is organizing an American Culture Festival.We’re now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society.So,could you please help select and buy some and send them to us?We will cover all the relevant costs.Also,we would appreciate it if you could help us to check that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students.Thanks a lot! Please reply at your earliest convenience! Yours, Li Hua 第二节 The passage introduces that many young animals are disrupted during the spring and early summer.(要点 1)So the author tells us how to prevent them from being bothered,(要点 2)including replacing the top of the nest,and leaving when opening the nest;putting the bird back into the nest when seeing a bird on the groun d;leaving it there when finding a fawn laying alone.(要点 3)