专题26 短文改错（Ⅰ）-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版） 4页

A ‎ I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me，what made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me. Luckily，I made several good friend. Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher，Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first，but with the help of my teacher，I made rapidly progress. Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”‎ ‎【答案】　‎ I still remember the first day I to this new school. Everything was new to me， made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on .Luckily，I made several good .Their interests were similar mine. I had great English teacher，Maggie. She let me know the of English. So I decided to learn English .Although it was very difficult at first， with the help of my teacher，I made progress. Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：friend→ friends。考查名词的数。由前面的several(几个)可知，此处应用名词的复数形式。‎ 第五处：with→ to。考查固定搭配。be similar to...意为“与……相似”，为固定搭配。‎ 第六处：great前加a。考查冠词。句意：我有一位了不起的英语老师Maggie。此处表泛指，应用不定冠词。‎ 第七处：important→ importance。考查名词。句意：她让我认识到英语的重要性。由定冠词the可知，此处应用名词。‎ 第八处：hardly→ hard。考查副词。句意：因此我决定努力学习英语。hard意为“努力地”，hardly意为“几乎不”。根据句意可知，应用hard。‎ 第九处：删除but。考查连词。although意为“尽管”，不与but连用，因此删除but。‎ 第十处：rapidly→ rapid。考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词，因此将rapidly改为rapid。‎ B Recently，a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall.In the fact，this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem.‎ First，make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦)．Besides，punishments，such as a fine，is necessary to tourists with so bad behavior. Also，I think it's helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages.‎ I'm sure with our efforts，more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Recently，a famous basketball player has caused public by writing on the Great Wall.In fact，this happens in many of interest. I some suggestions to solve this problem.‎ First，make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦)．Besides，punishments，such as a fine， necessary to tourists with bad behavior. Also，I think it's to put up some boards along the tourist attractions tourists can leave messages.‎ I'm sure with our efforts，more and more people will become about protecting cultural relics.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：had→ have。考查时态。根据上下文可知，该句陈述的是目前的情况，故用一般现在时。‎ 第五处：public后加of/about。考查介词。inform sb.of/about sth.为固定搭配，表示“通知某人某事”。‎ 第六处：is→ are。考查主谓一致。该句主语为复数名词punishments，故系动词用复数形式are。‎ 第七处：so→ such。考查限定词。该句中behavior为不可数名词，只能用such修饰。so用于“so＋adj.＋a/an＋可数名词”结构。‎ 第八处：helpfully→ helpful。考查形容词。is为系动词，后接形容词作表语。‎ 第九处：that→ where。考查定语从句的关系词。分析该句结构可知，该句为定语从句，先行词为boards，关系词在从句中作地点状语，故用where引导该定语从句。‎ 第十处：concerning→ concerned。考查固定搭配。be/become concerned about为固定短语，意为“关注……”。 ‎ C ‎ It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems.68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise.42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally，I ‎ think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body，one can't achieve anything. However，too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result，I suggest we are given less homework or more time for outofclassroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ It is shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems.68% of the students have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight .And a larger percentage sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise.42% of the students won't obey parents or teachers. Personally，I think we should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body，one can't achieve anything. However，too much attention has been paid only studies. As a result，I suggest we given less homework more time for out of classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：lacks→ lack。考查主谓一致。percentage作主语时，谓语与它所修饰的名词或指代的名词一致。此处指学生，所以谓语动词用复数。‎ 第五处：our→ their。考查代词。42%的学生不听他们父母和老师的话。主语是42%of the students，是第三人称，故此处形容词性物主代词用their。‎ 第六处：student→ students。考查名词单复数。we后面的名词是其同位语，所以用student的复数形式与we一致。‎ 第七处：Without后加a。考查冠词。body是可数名词，且此处泛指一个好的身体，故加冠词a。‎ 第八处：on→ to。考查介词。pay attention to“注意……”是固定搭配，此处用的是该短语的被动形式。‎ 第九处：are→ be。虚拟语气。suggest在此处表示“建议”，因此后跟的宾语从句应用虚拟语气，即从句谓语用“should＋do”形式，且should可以省略。故此处应把are改为be。‎ 第十处：or→ and。考查连词。我建议我们应该少布置点作业，多些时间进行课外活动。本句是肯定句，此处不表示选择意义，而指的是并列的两个名词，表示“及”，应用and。‎ D Last weekend I went on a ecotravel with a travel agency. All the way we appreciate the beautiful ‎ scenery and fresh air，so a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing. What was worse，many tourists threw rubbishes here and there.‎ I don't think that it is a truly ecotravel. An ecotravel not only allows us to express our love for nature，but needs our responsibility as well as. A real ecotravel should like this：take nothing away but your good memory；leave nothing behind but all cleaner water and green trees. Enjoyed the beauty of nature，we should try their best to protect it.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Last weekend I went on ecotravel with a travel agency.All the way we the beautiful scenery and fresh air， a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing.What was worse，many tourists threw here and there.‎ I don't think that it is a ecotravel.An ecotravel not only allows us to express our love for nature，but needs our responsibility as well .A real ecotravel should like this：take nothing away but your good memory；leave nothing behind but all water and green trees. the beauty of nature，we should try best to protect it.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：rubbishes→rubbish。考查名词。rubbish作“垃圾”讲，为不可数名词。‎ 第五处：truly→true。考查形容词。此处应用形容词修饰名词ecotravel。‎ 第六处：删除well后的as。考查固定表达。as well as后跟宾语，意为“以及”，不符合语境，此处应用as well表示“也”，放在句末。‎ 第七处：like前加be。考查系动词。此处like是介词，should后缺少be动词。‎ 第八处：cleaner→clean。考查形容词。根据and后面的green以及语境可知，此处应用形容词原级。‎ 第九处：Enjoyed→Enjoying。考查非谓语动词。主语we和enjoy之间是主谓关系，所以应用现在分词。‎