初中英语九年级全册Unit6Whenwasitinv单元同步作文指导课件 人教新目标版 11页

Unit 6　When was it invented? 第六课时　Section B (3a3b)—单元同步作文指导 随着科技的进步，许多新的发明不断涌现，它们给我们的生活带来了方 便。本单元以“谈论重要发明”为话题，要求同学们学会介绍某项发明的用 途、特点等。近年来，介绍某项发明的用途或特点的写作题材在全国各地中 考试题中常有出现。此类文体属于说明文，最常用的时态是一般现在时。 写此类说明性文章应注意的事项：①写作时应采用一定的顺序；②具体、 清晰地说明该发明的用途、特点；③充分发挥想象力，谈谈自己使用的感受。 教材中出现的相关句型： ①…was invented… ②It is used for… 拓展常用句型： ①It is very convenient/comfortable/important/useful.它非常方便/舒适/重要/ 实用。 ②It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life.很难想象在我们的日常生活中，如果没有电脑会是什么样。 ③When was the telephone invented？电话是什么时候被发明的？ ④Who was it invented by？它是被谁发明的？ ⑤It's said that a Chinese ruler called Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink.据说一位名叫神农的中国统治者是第一个发现茶可当作饮品的人。 ⑥Basketball has not only become a popular sport to play，but it has also become a popular sport to watch.篮球不仅成为一项很受欢迎的体育运动，而 且还成为很受欢迎的观看活动。 要点提示：1.由一位荷兰设计师为驼背者设计； 2．驼背时，衬衫背部就会变紧，提醒人们改变坐姿； 3．设计师希望帮助人们改善长期坐姿； 4．表达你对该衬衫的看法。 要求：1.语言简洁流畅，条理清晰； 2．词数：80～100词。 参考词汇：slouch驼背；tighten变紧；posture坐姿 The Shirt That Stops People from Slouching The unique shirt is one of the latest inventions.A Dutch designer designed it for people who always slouch when they sit at a desk.The shirt works in a simple way—each time the wearer slouches，the shirt will tighten around the back.Then the shirt will remind the wearer to sit up straight again.The designer hopes that the shirt could help people improve their poor postures in the long run. In my opinion，the shirt is a great invention，because it can help us keep a good posture and work or study efficiently.It is also helpful to our health. 【点评】范文语言通顺流畅、详略得当、条理清晰地介绍了这款衬衫的 设计者、适用人群、工作原理和设计目标等方面，使读者对该衬衫有一个较 为全面的了解。文中使用了一些精美的短语，如remind sb.to do sth.，in the long run，in my opinion等，为文章增添许多文采。 注意： 1．参考词汇：轮子wheel；太阳能solar power； 2．词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention is a flying bike. It is a special bike with two wheels and two wings. The flying bike can drive both on the ground and in the air, and it can be used to take photos and people can talk with it. As a very special bike, it is fast, and it is environmentallyfriendly because it is driven by solar energy. This is my flying bike, which is made by myself alone in my spare time. If it is made real, I will have two improvements. I will suggest the engineer use light irons of high quality to make the frame, and make the wheels as large as possible.Thank you very much.