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话题写作（四） 旅行交通 第一篇　教材考点梳理 典例分析 【话题点睛】旅行交通包含两个方面的话题——旅行和交通。旅行话题通常涉 及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等;交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、 各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时 涉及这两个话题。 假如你是Lingling,你的美国朋友Betty 要来中国旅游,她需要你的帮助。下面 是Betty给你写的一封信,请根据信的内容给她回一封电子邮件,80词左右。邮 件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 典例分析 Dear Lingling, 　　I'm preparing for a trip to China, and I'm making a list of things for my trip, but I don't know what I should take? 　　I'm leaving at the start of October. I'm going to stay there for three weeks. What clothes should I take? Which places of interest can I visit? What else should I pay attention to? Can you give me some advice? Yours, Betty Dear Betty, 　　I'm very happy that you can come to China for a trip. . . . 【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:本文的主题是给Betty提供来中国旅游的一些建议。根据Betty给 我(Lingling)的来信可知,本文主要从以下几个方面展开: (1)中国十月份的天气及建议Betty带的衣物。 (2)建议Betty参观的风景名胜。 (3)给Betty的其他一些建议。 2.确定时态:一般现在时。 3.确定人称:第一人称。 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 根据所给提示词补全下列各句。 1.基础句 带一副太阳镜。(take) . →升格句 我想你最好带一副太阳镜。(had better do sth.) . 2.基础句 带一把雨伞因为在这个季节经常下雨。(bring) . →升格句带一把雨伞是个好主意因为在这个季节经常下雨。(It's a good idea to…) . . It's a good idea to bring an umbrella because it often rains in this season. Take a pair of sunglasses. I think you'd better take a pair of sunglasses. Bring an umbrella because it often rains in this season. 3.基础句 T恤衫是好的。(good) . →升格句 至于衣服,T恤衫是好的。(用含as for的结构表达) .As for clothes, T-shirts are good. T-shirts are good. 【连句成文】 Dear Betty, 　　I'm very happy that you can come to China for a trip. 　　The weather will be sunny and warm in China in October. So I think you'd better take a pair of sunglasses. It's a good idea to bring an umbrella because it often rains in this season in China. As for clothes, T-shirts are good, or you can wear light trousers. But don't forget to take a coat or thicker clothes because in October the weather begins to get cooler. 　　Beijing is a good place to visit. There are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Bird's Nest and so on. You can visit them at any time. But you should get everything ready earlier. It will be exciting to visit these places. 　　Have a good trip! Yours, Lingling 拓展积累 【相关短语】 enjoy the sunshine 享受阳光; one of the biggest mountains 最大的山之一; have a picnic 野餐; as everyone knows 众所周知; be famous for 因……闻名; have a good trip 旅途愉快; have fun doing sth. 做某事很开心; have a good time 玩得愉快 【参考谚语】 1.Travel broadens the mind.旅游开阔思维。 2.He who travels far knows more.远行者见识广。 3.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行 万里路。 【亮点句型】 旅途经历 1.Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why so many people are attracted by the city. 2.When we stayed there, we got lots of help from local people. They were very friendly to us. 3.Only in this way can you enjoy your summer holiday happily. 4.It is said that Hawaii is more beautiful than any other place in the world. 5.The subway is one of the most convenient ways to travel in this city. 旅途收获 1.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also broaden our eyes to the outside world. 2.Traveling is like a story. We can make friends with others and get help and love from others. 3.Traveling is like a war. 实战演练 A 　　假如你是Wang Hui, 以下是你的网友Liu Lin发给你的一封邮件,请你根 据该邮件内容用英语给Liu Lin写一封回信。 [要求] (1)请按电子邮件格式来完成回信; (2)回信中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息; (3)词数:不少于80。 Hi, Wang Hui, 　　How is everything going? I'm very happy that the winter holiday is coming. I am planning to take a trip to England. I know you went to England last year. Would you please tell me something about the weather and the way of life in England? What must I say when I meet someone for the first time? What is the traditional food? And what about afternoon tea? 　　Looking forward to your letter. 　　Best wishes, Yours, Liu Lin A One possible version : To: Liu Lin From: Wang Hui Subject: England Hi, Liu Lin, 　　I am glad to hear that you are going to England for the coming winter holiday. 　　England is really a beautiful country with mountains and lakes. The weather here is fine all the year round. In winter it's not very cold, but it rains a lot, so you need to bring an umbrella with you. The English way of life is interesting. You must say Mr. or Mrs. when you meet someone for the first time. 　　Fish and chips is traditional food. It's very delicious. In England, they like afternoon tea. It is not just a drink but a light meal at around 4 p.m. They usually drink tea with milk. 　　Have a good journey! Yours, Wang Hui B 　　假设你是李华,计划暑假期间出境旅游。下面这则广告引起了你的注意, 请根据以下标注内容写一封邮件,询问有关情况。 [要求] (1)词数:80左右,格式已为你写好; (2)文中不要出现本人真实信息; (3)可根据个人想法适当增加相关细节。 Time for an adventure 　　Are you a bit bored with your daily life? Come and enjoy fantastic holidays! 　　We organize small group tours to get closer to nature in Africa. Go on safari and watch lions and giraffes… 　　We use local guides and stay in a range of accommodation, from tents to tree houses. 　　Email: cathy@adventure.com 　　Phone: 79986158 　　　　　 [参考词汇] advertisement广告; safari野外观兽旅行; accommodation住宿 Dear Cathy, . . . Yours truly, Li Hua B One possible version: Dear Cathy, 　　I'm a student from China and I plan to travel in Africa for the summer holidays. I've seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something about the tour. 　　First, I'd like to know the date we start and how long it may last so that I can get ready for it. Besides, how about the food? I'd like to enjoy a different taste. At last I care about the price of the tour and what it includes. Could you please give me more information? 　　I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua