呼和浩特专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作02快乐成长课件 23页

话题写作（二） 快乐成长 [ 话题来源 : 七下 M7, 八下 M1 、 M2] 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。涉及的要点 : (1) 成长体验及感悟 ; (2) 成长烦恼与困惑 ; (3) 关于更好地成长的方法与建议。 【 典型例题 】 [2019 · 呼和浩特 ] 　　临近毕业 , 学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动 , 假设你是 Rainbow 小组的组长 Zhang Hong, 请你为你的组员 Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价 , 写一份素质报告。 [ 内容包括 ] 1. 他的爱好 ; 2. 他的优点 ( 两条 ); 3. 他的缺点或存在的问题 ; 4. 你对他的建议 ( 两条 ) 。 典例分析 [ 要求 ] 1. 表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯 ; 2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息 , 并作适当发挥 , 但不得出现真实班级、姓名等 ; 3. 词数 : 不少于 80 词 ( 所给内容不计入总词数 ) 。 　　 Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. 　　 　　　   _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 本文针对本组成员 Li Ming 的爱好、优缺点进行评价 , 并为他的成长和改进提出两条合理建议。可以提炼出三个要点 : (1) 他的爱好及优点 ; (2) 他的缺点或问题 ; (3) 你的建议。 2. 时态 : 一般现在时。 3. 人称 : 第三人称和第一人称。 【 写作架构 】 【 基础写作 】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 他总是乐于助人。 (help other people) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ .  (give sb. a hand; in return) He is always ready to help other people He is always ready to give others a hand whenever they are in trouble without asking for anything in return 2. 基础句 他也能与老师们和同学们相处融洽。 (get on well with sb.) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________.  (form a good relationship with sb.) 3. 基础句 有时他在学业上不够努力。 (enough) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________.  (realize the importance; be hard-working) He can also get on well with teachers and classmates He can also form good relationships with teachers as well as classmates Sometimes he doesn’t work hard enough on his lessons Sometimes he doesn’t realize the importance of being hard-working on his lessons 【 连句成文 】 　　 Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. Generally speaking, he is a warm-hearted and outgoing boy. He is always ready to give others a hand whenever they are in trouble without asking for anything in return. Besides, he can also form good relationships with teachers as well as classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading books on history, so he knows a lot of knowledge about history. 　　 Although the advantages above are important factors in evaluating him, some shortcomings shouldn’t be ignored. Sometimes he doesn’t realize the importance of being hard-working on his lessons. I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on. What’s more, it’s better for him to answer questions in class actively so that he can understand the knowledge well. 　　 I’m sure that if he can try harder to improve himself, he’ll make steady progress soon and be the pride of our whole team. 【 导入主题句 】 1. As a proverb goes, “ God helps those who help themselves. ” 2. Some of us may have problems with our parents who just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. 3. It’s really important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. 4. There is nothing better than that. 5. I still remember the day when I got a low grade in my English exam. 拓展积累 【 文章的发展句 】 1. To my joy, not only have our skills improved a lot, but all of us are more responsible for our team. 2. Most importantly, you will have an optimistic effect on the people around you. 3. Whenever I made progress in studies, my parents bought me my favourite books, which not only motivated me to learn, but also helped me get along well with my studies. 4. All that reminds me of my mother/father who has been doing whatever she/he could to let me have the best. 5. As I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn how to deal with problems on my own. 【 文章的结尾句 】 1. We are pretty sure that everything will be better with time passing by. 2. I love my mother who leads me to a bright and right way in my life. 3. From then on, whenever I was about to give up, her smile would appear in my mind and cheered me up at once. 4. This is really a very good activity, isn’t it? 5. In short, at no time can we forget to thank our parents because they are the dearest people to us. A 　 [2019 · 遂宁 ] 　　在成长过程中 , 青少年面临越来越多的烦恼 , 主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 [ 要点提示 ] 1. 导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因 : (1) 学业 ; (2) 与他人相处。 实战演练 2. 减少压力的措施 : (1) 积极参加课外活动 ; (2) 多与他人交流沟通。 3. 简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。 ( 至少一点 ) [ 注意 ] 1. 文章开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 2. 文章必须包含所给要点提示 , 要求语句通顺 , 行文连贯 ; 3. 不可逐词翻译 , 应有独自的见解并适当发挥 ; 4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : 　　 We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. 　　 On the one hand, it may be caused by their schoolwork. Too much homework and less spare time make them unhappy. On the other hand, the problems in getting on with other people may have an effect on their high pressure. 　　 However, too much pressure is not good for teenagers’ development. So how to deal with these pressures? Taking part in after-school activities is a very useful way. Besides, more communication with others often works, especially when they feel upset. 　　 All in all, we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy both in body and mind. B 　 [2019 · 连云港改编 ] 　　减负之后 , 同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义 ? ”展开了讨论 , 大家各抒己见。请你根据提示 , 以“ How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? ”为题 , 用英语写一篇短文。 [ 提示 ] 如何让课余生活更有意义 ? [ 注意 ] 1. 短文应包括所给内容要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使文章连贯 ; 2. 词数 :90 左右 , 短文开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 [ 参考词汇 ] 提升素养 promote literacy How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? 　　 Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : 　　 How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? 　　 Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? 　　 My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What’s more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. 　　 In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.