杭州专版2020中考英语复习第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作02事物介绍课件人教新目标版 23页

话题写作（二） 事物介绍 第一篇　教材考点梳理 典例分析 【话题点睛】主要涉及的话题有物品介绍、失物招领等。主要涉及的要点:学 习用品、生活用品、发明物等在外形、颜色、功能、用途、操作步骤以及特点 等方面的介绍。 　[2019·杭州]假定你是李平(Tel:13612345678),家住滨海市人民路1号。你 在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你 阅读后进行回复,词数80 左右。 From: Mr. Smith, hotel manager Hi, Li Ping, 　　Thank you for your email about your lost wallet. 　　Please send me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in? Please describe your wallet. What was in it? Send me your address and phone number. 　　All the best, Mr. Smith To: Mr. Smith Subject: Lost wallet Dear Mr. Smith, ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是回复有关钱包遗失的经过和对所丢失钱包的具体描述。文 章主要可从三个部分展开叙述: (1)描述丢失钱包的时间和场所; (2)具体描述钱包。可以从颜色、大小和里面的物品展开描述; (3)告知自己的联系方式。 2.确定时态:描述丢失钱包的时间和场所时,用一般过去时;描述钱包时,用一般现 在时。 3.确定人称:第一人称。 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 根据所给提示词补全下列各句。 1. 基础句 它不大不小。(or) . → 升格句 它既不太大也不太小。(neither…nor…) . It is/It's not big or small. It is/It's neither too big nor too small. 2.基础句我的身份证、两张信用卡和一张100美元的钞票在我的钱包里。(and) . →升格句我的身份证、两张信用卡和一张100美元的钞票在我的钱包里。(as well as) . My ID card, two credit cards and a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. 3.基础句你能通过快递把钱包发给我吗?(can) . . →升格句能劳驾你通过快递把钱包发给我吗?(Would you be kind enough to…?) . . . Can you send the wallet to me by express?/Can you send me the wallet by express? Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet by express?/Would you be kind enough to send the wallet to me by express? 【连句成文】 Dear Mr. Smith, 　　Thank you so much for your reply. 　　I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. It is neither too big nor too small. My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. 　　Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet by express at No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China when you find it? Please call me on my phone number 13612345678 if needed. 　　Thanks again. Yours, Li Ping 拓展积累 【相关短语】 look like 看起来像; as small as 和……一样小; the most useful 最有用的; for example 比如; such as 比如; with the help of 在……的帮助下; in order to 为了; from then on 从那以后; bring sth. to sb. 给某人带来某物; learn about 了解 【参考谚语】 1. Something is learned every time a book is opened. 开卷有益。 2. A letter from home is a priceless treasure. 家书抵万金。 3. It's my cup of tea. 那恰是我所喜欢的。 4. You cannot eat your cake and have it. 鱼和熊掌,不可兼得。 【亮点句型】 来源表达 1.There is a washing machine in my home. 2.It was invented by accident. 3.My mother bought the scarf for me as a gift. 用途表达 1. It is easy to wash dirty clothes and other things. 2. The electronic schoolbag is like a computer. 3. Computers are useful, convenient and they have more functions. 4. For example, you can listen to music and watch movies on it. 5. The ballpoint pen is one of the most useful inventions. 6. The ballpoint pen really helps us write faster and makes our life easier. 特点表达 1. The electronic schoolbags are easy to carry and children's backs and necks may not be hurt. 2. And the price of it is usually low. 3. The book is just like my best friend. 外观表达 1.Ballpoint pens are becoming smaller and lighter. 2.My handbag is red and small. 3.The special cup looks like a small football. 4.It's neither too big nor too small. 实战演练 A 　　书包伴我学习,伴我成长。某英文报以“My Schoolbag”为题,举办中学 生征文活动。请根据以下图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:书包的外形特 征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课外你期望做的事情。 [要求] (1)短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明; (2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Schoolbag 　　I have a schoolbag. . . . A One possible version : My Schoolbag 　　I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a piece of luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge. 　　My schoolbag is always by my side. However, it also brings me many problems. I have to do so much homework that I cannot get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, I'm forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in all kinds of activities. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well. 　　As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden. B [2019·宿迁改编] 　　某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你 一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。 Name Happy English Learning Contents News, movies, songs, games… in English Advantages 1.to learn together 2.help students enlarge the vocabulary 3.improve English listening skills Others …(at least one) [注意事项] (1)词数:90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)内容要包括表中要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯顺畅; (3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。 　　Here is my design for the new app. . . B One possible version : 　　Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app. 　　I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.