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话题写作 （一） 人物故事 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对此人物的看法等方面。 三年的初中生活 , 你对自己的表现一定有满意的方面和不满意的方面。假如你是林薇 , 请参照以下提示 , 给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言 , 希望对他们有所帮助。 典例分析 提示内容 提示词 简单自我介绍 姓名 , 班级…… Class Three 对自己满意的方面 勤学好问 , 养成良好的学习习惯…… work hard, a good habit of 对自己不满意的方面 忙于学习 , 锻炼身体较少…… be busy, do less exercise 对学弟学妹们的建议或希望 乐于助人 , 积极参加志愿活动…… be glad to, volunteer activities [ 注意 ] （ 1 ）参照提示适当发挥 ; （ 2 ）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名 ; （ 3 ）词数 :80 左右（开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数）。 Dear boys and girls,         Yours, Lin Wei 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : （ 1 ）自己三年来的优点及收获 ; （ 2 ）自己存在的缺点及问题 ; （ 3 ）自己给学弟学妹们的建议。 2. 确定时态 : 讲述自己的优缺点时用一般现在时 , 讲述自己的收获或取得的成绩时用现在完成时和一般过去时。 3. 确定人称 : 讲述自己的情况用第一人称 , 提建议时用第二人称。 【写作架构】 【 基础写作 】 Ⅰ. 写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。） 1. 我勤学好问 , 并且养成了许多良好的学习习惯。（ habit of ） I am 　　　　　　　 and have developed many 　 　　　　　 learning.  2. 我的视力变得相当弱。（ in one's eyesight ） I have become quite weak 　　　　　　　　 .  3. 我通常忙于辛苦的工作。（ be busy with ） I was usually 　　　　 　　　　 .  hard-working good habits of in my eyesight busy with hard work Ⅱ. 句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。） 1.It's also a pity. I did less exercise. （用 that 连成一个句子） . 2.I also hope. You all can take an active part in some volunteer activities. （合并为宾语从句） . It's also a pity that I did less exercise. I also hope (that) you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities. 【连句成文】 Dear boys and girls, 　　 I'm Lin Wei. I come from Class Three. It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years. 　　 I am hard-working and have made great progress. I have developed many good habits of learning. I did well in the exams. However, I also had some problems. I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight. What's more, it's also a pity that I did less exercise because I was usually busy with hard work. 　　 In the future I hope you can understand the saying, “ A friend in need is a friend indeed. ” So you should be glad to help them if someone is in trouble. I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities, such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment, helping disabled children and so on. 　　 Thank you, my dear teachers and schoolmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and schoolmates a happy life! Yours, Lin Wei 【参考谚语】 1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者 , 事竟成。 3.All things in their being are good for something. 天生我材必有用。 拓展积累 【相关短语】 be born in 出生于 ; come from=be from 来自 ; be good at=do well in 擅长 ; be of medium build 中等身材 ; be of medium height 中等身高 ; get on well with 与……和睦相处 ; at the age of 在……岁时 ; make friends 交朋友 【亮点句型】 导入主题句 1.Jim is my best friend but he has changed a lot in the past 3 years. 2.I still remember one of my memories in the three years' life, which impressed me very much. 3.Today, I would like to introduce one of the greatest writers named Lao She. 文章发展、过渡句 1.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. 2.Since then, she has kept helping me. 3.What's more, she always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. 4.Whenever she sees you, she always gives you a friendly smile which makes you comfortable. 文章结尾句 1.I think people surely change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time. 2.I have learned a lot from him. I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. 3.From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. 4.In short, we can get on well with each other and we will enjoy ourselves every day. A [2019 ·石家庄 28 中模拟 ] 2019 年 1 月 6 日 , 首届“相约 2022 ”冰雪文化节在北京奥林匹克公园开幕。本届冰雪文化节吸引了众多青少年的参与。假如你是李华 , 你想在 2022 年做一名冬奥会的志愿者 , 请你根据下面的提示 , 向冬奥会组委会写一封信介绍自己的情况。 实战演练 [ 提示 ] （ 1 ） Introduce yourself （ your personal information, hobbies …） . （ 2 ） Introduce your advantages of being a volunteer. [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）短文须包括所有提示内容 , 可适当发挥 ; （ 2 ）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名 ; （ 3 ）词数 :80 左右（开头和结尾已经给出 , 不计入总词数）。 Dear Sir/Madam, I'm very happy to hear that China will hold the 2022 Winter Olympics. I'd like to be a volunteer for it.         　　 If you can agree with me, I will try my best to improve myself. I'm sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua One possible version : Dear Sir/Madam, I'm very happy to hear that China will hold the 2022 Winter Olympics. I'd like to be a volunteer for it. My name is Li Hua, and I'm 15 years old. I'm a junior high school student from Hebei. I have lots of hobbies, such as running, playing football and so on. I like doing sports after class. As a volunteer, I have many advantages. First, my spoken English is pretty good and I can communicate with players easily. Second, I'm outgoing and I like making friends with people from other countries. Besides, I have experience to be a volunteer. Please give me a chance, and I will try my best to serve them. If you can agree with me, I will try my best to improve myself. I'm sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua B [2019 ·新疆改编 ] 初中生活即将结束 , 请你以 “ My Favorite Teacher ”为题 , 根据下面提示用英语写一篇短文。 [ 提示 ] （ 1 ） What does he/she look like? （ 2 ） Why do you like him/her? [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名 ; （ 2 ）词数 :80 左右。 My Favorite Teacher         One possible version : My Favorite Teacher Miss Wang is my English teacher. Among all my teachers, I like Miss Wang best. She is tall and has long straight black hair. She is of medium build. She is friendly and patient. There is always a smile on her face. She helps us a lot. Last term, I failed in my test. I was sad and didn't know what to do. Miss Wang explained the key words to me. She also encouraged me to read more and listen more. When she was free, she would study with me. With her help, my English improved. Thanks to her, I like English and other subjects. I become one of the best students in my class.