呼和浩特专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作04降生活课件 26页

话题写作（四） 健康生活 [ 话题来源 : 七上 M4, 八上 M3 、 M11 、 M12, 八下 M4, 九上 M8] 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及 : 开展体育锻炼的方式 ; 鼓励多进行体育运动 , 强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及 : 远离垃圾食品、健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。 【 典型例题 】 [2019 · 毕节 ] 　　每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的“爱眼日” , 可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要 , 为此 , 学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿 , 谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。 典例分析 [ 内容如下 ] 1. 保护视力的重要性 ( 请写 1 点 ); 2. 对保护视力的建议 : (1) 阅读时注意用眼卫生 ; (2) 少用电子产品 ; (3) 常看绿色植物 ; (4) 做眼保健操 ; (5) 多做户外运动。 [ 要求如下 ] 1. 结构完整 , 表达通顺 , 语言规范 , 书写清晰 ; 2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名 , 学校名等信息 ; 3. 词数 :80 左右 ; 开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数。 [ 参考词汇 ] Sight Day “爱眼日” ; electronic products 电子产品 ; eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操 Dear friends, 　　 June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 本文以“爱眼日”为切入点 , 引出保护视力的话题。以演讲稿的形式谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。可以提炼出两个要点 : (1) 对“保护视力重要性”的综述 ; (2) 对保护视力的五点建议。 2. 时态 : 一般现在时。 3. 人称 : 第二人称。 【 写作架构 】 【 基础写作 】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 一些学生的视力正在变差 , 所以保护视力很重要。 (It is+ adj. + to do sth.) __________________________________________________________________________ _____________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ .  ( 用含定语从句的结构表达 ) Some students’ eyesight is becoming bad, so it is important to protect eyesight It is important to protect students’ eyesight which is seriously declining in recent years 2. 基础句 一些学生不知道如何保护他们的视力。 ( vt. +how to do sth.) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 　 .  (have no idea) Some students don’t know how to protect their eyesight Some students have no idea how to protect their eyesight 3. 基础句 少使用电子产品。不要花太多时间玩电脑游戏。 (spend … doing sth.) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ .  (keep a balance between … and … ) Use electronic products less. Don’t spend too much time playing computer games Don’t spend too much time playing computer games and keep a balance between using electronic products and protecting your eyes 【 连句成文 】 　　 Dear friends, 　　 June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, it is important to protect students’ eyesight which is seriously declining in recent years. However, some students have no idea how to protect their eyesight. Now I’d like to share some suggestions on this topic. 　　 Firstly, I suggest you get into the habit of using eyes properly to protect them, for example, don’t keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better have a rest by looking in the long distance after studying an hour or so. 　　 Secondly, don’t spend too much time playing computer games and keep a balance between using electronic products and protecting your eyes. When your eyes feel tired, you should look at the nearby green plants. 　　 And thirdly, keep doing eye-protecting exercises every day and do more outdoor activities. 　　 If you follow the advice above, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted. 【 导入主题句 】 1. Students can easily be short-sighted after playing computer games for a long time. 2. Smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out. 3. As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy. 4. Many students are short of exercise in their spare time, which has been a serious social problem now. 5. As we all know, eyes are the windows of the soul. 拓展积累 【 文章的发展句 】 1. The more exercise they do, the better it is for them. 2. Fast food usually includes a lot of fat, thus causing children to become fat. 3. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious to attract us. 4. I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful and that taking exercise can make us relaxed when we’re under much pressure. 5. We should develop good habits and correct bad ones in our life. 【 文章的结尾句 】 1. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. 2. In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. 3. In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 4. We could eat more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. 5. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy and bright. A 　 [2019 · 广安 ] 　　当前 , 许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机 (smart-phones) 。针对这一现象 , 学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑 , 健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。 实战演练 危害 1. 花大量时间玩游戏 , 上课睡觉 , 不按时完成作业 2. 伤害眼睛 , 不利健康 建议 1. 远离智能手机 , 认真学习 2. 多花时间与家人、朋友交流 3. 积极参加各种活动 , 如打篮球、唱歌…… [ 要求 ] 1. 字迹工整 , 书写规范 , 包含全部要点 , 可适当发挥 ; 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称 ; 3.80 词左右 , 开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数。 [ 参考词汇 ] eyesight( 视力 ); disadvantage( 不利条件 ); keep away from( 远离 ); take an active part in( 积极参加 ) Girls and boys, 　　 With the development of the Internet, many students have smartphones. _______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　 　 That’s all. Thank you! One possible version : Girls and boys, 　　 With the development of the Internet, many students have smartphones. 　　 The students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. Someone can’t finish their homework on time and someone even sleeps in class. What’s worse, smartphones do harm to our health. Some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer and they even become addicted. 　　 To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should take some effective measures. 　　 First, we should keep away from smartphones and work hard. Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life and feelings instead of playing phone games. Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs. That’s all. Thank you. B 　　 “民以食为天” , 饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“ Say No to Junk Food ”为题 , 根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 [ 写作要点 ] 1. 垃圾食品尽管美味 , 但对健康无益 , 而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾 ; 2. 远离垃圾食品 , 还应选择正确的生活方式 , 如 :① 三餐要有规律 , 少吃零食、快餐 ;② 多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物 , 以提供身体必需营养 ;③ 多参加户外活动 …… [ 写作要求 ] 1. 词数 :80 左右 , 开头与结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 2. 内容必须包括上述所有要点 , 可适当发挥。 [ 参考词汇 ] 过多包装 over packaging; 有规律地 regularly; 营养 nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. One possible version : Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging leads to much more rubbish. To get away from junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularly — three meals a day on time. Try as few snacks and little fast food as possible. Second, have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. What’s more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food. In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.