呼和浩特专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作07环境保护课件 24页

话题写作（七） 环境保护 [ 话题来源 : 八上 M2 、 M6, 九上 M12] 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 该话题是近几年的热点话题 , 主要涉及低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等。此类试题通常以要点提示的方式来考查。 【 典型例题 】 [2019 · 湘西州 ] 　　湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设 , 我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动 , 从小事做起 , 让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生 , 请以“ Start out small ”为题 , 用英语写一篇倡议书。 [ 要点提示 ] 1. 多种树木和花草 , 不乱砍伐树木 ; 2. 购物时重复使用袋子 ; 3. 不乱扔垃圾 , 保持河流等干净 ; 4. 遵守公共秩序 , 做文明学生。 典例分析 [ 要求 ] 1. 词数 :100 左右。文章的开头已给出 , 不计入总词数。 2. 文章须包括所有要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 [ 参考词汇 ] protect the environment; reuse bags; plant; cut down; throw; wait in line; be polite; obey ( v . 遵守 ) Start out small 　　 Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 本文以建设美丽家乡为话题 , 以倡议书的形式从多角度提倡大家做好身边的环保小事 , 从而让家乡变得更美丽。可以提炼出四个要点 : (1) 花草植被 ; (2) 循环利用 ; (3) 垃圾污染 ; (4) 公共文明。 2. 时态 : 一般现在时。 3. 人称 : 第一人称。 【 写作架构 】 【 基础写作 】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 我们不能砍倒太多的树。那对环境是有害的。 (cut down) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ .  (stop sb. from doing sth.) We can’t cut down too many trees. It’s bad for our environment We are supposed to stop people from cutting down too many trees because it is bad for our environment 2. 基础句 如果我们去购物 , 不要使用塑料袋。它们对环境是有害的。 (if) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________.  ( 用含定语从句的结构表达 ) If we go shopping, don’t use plastic bags. They are harmful to our environment If we go shopping, don’t use plastic bags which are harmful to our environment 3. 基础句 当我们在公共场合时 , 我们应该排队。遵守规则是礼貌的行为。 (when) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ .  (such as) When we are in public, we should wait in line. It’s polite to obey the rules It’s polite to obey the rules and behave well, especially in public places, such as waiting in line and respecting the old 4. 基础句 做这些事情可以让我们变成好学生 , 也可以变成文明市民。 (make sb. do sth.) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________.  (not only … but also … ) Doing these can make us good students and civilized citizens Doing these can make us not only good students but also civilized citizens 【 连句成文 】 Start out small 　　 Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? We can do some small things to protect our environment. We can plant more trees, grass and flowers to make the air fresher. We are supposed to stop people from cutting down too many trees because it is bad for our environment. Besides, if we go shopping, we can reuse cloth bags instead of plastic ones, which is helpful to reduce the white pollution. Third, in order to keep the rivers or lakes clean, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Fourth, it’s polite to obey the rules and behave well, especially in public places, such as waiting in line and respecting the old. Doing these can make us not only good students but also civilized citizens. 　　 If we do the small things from now on, our hometown will be more beautiful and comfortable. Let’s try our best to make it together. I believe we can do it. 【 导入主题句 】 1. It’s our duty to keep the school clean. 2. Many students are optimistic about the environment now. 3. The government will take more effective measures to improve the environment. 4. I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. 5. The local government has shut down the factories that cause pollution. We can use new energy, such as the sun, wind and water. 拓展积累 【 文章的发展句 】 1. Don’t order more food than you can finish. 2. A large number of trees will be cut down. 3. Besides, we’re supposed to sort the rubbish before we throw it out. 4. Use cloth bags or china cups instead of paper bags and plastic cups. 5. Set up a recycling network to encourage people to recycle the e-waste. 6. I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth, and taking shorter showers. 【 文章的结尾句 】 1. I think we should plant more trees and pick up litter around us. 2. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. 3. It is time for us to take action to make a greener world. 4. I believe that if everyone can do something, the earth will be saved. It will certainly make a difference and make the earth a better place to live. 5. We should tell people to realize the matter and raise the awareness so that they can know the importance of protecting the environment. A 　 　每年 6 月 8 日为“世界海洋日 (World Oceans Day) ”。今年世界海洋日的主题为“清洁我们的海洋 (Cleaning Our Oceans) ”。据新闻报道 , 每年流入大海的微塑料达 1300 万吨 , 导致大量鱼类死亡。科学家预测 , 如果不采取措施限塑 ,2050 年海洋里的塑料重量比鱼类还重。作为中学生的你 , 应该减少塑料制品的使用。请以“ Saying No to Plastics ”为题 , 写一篇 80 — 100 词的英语短文。 [ 注意 ] (1) 语句通顺 , 语意连贯 ; (2) 文中不得出现真实校名和人名。 实战演练 [ 参考词汇 ] pollute( 污染 ) 　 recycle( 回收利用 ) 　 protect( 保护 ) 　 cloth bags( 布袋 ) 　 basket( 篮子 ) Saying No to Plastics ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : Saying No to Plastics In recent years, we have to face the ocean pollution problem,which is becoming more and more serious.Scientists predict that if the plastic is not limited, the weight of plastic in the ocean in 2050 will be heavier than that of fish.Therefore, we must take a series of measures to prevent plastic pollution. Actually, I use plastics too much in my daily life.Now I have come to realize that it’s a terribly bad habit.I’m supposed to reduce the use of plastics and everyone can do this.For example, we should use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping.More importantly, we should recycle and make full use of them. All in all, we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener. Do you think I am right? B 　 [2019 · 宜昌 ] 　　假定你是李华 , 你的英国朋友 Mike 得知你们开展了“做生态小公民 , 建设美丽家乡”的活动 , 他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节 , 请给 Mike 写一封回信向他描述你 ( 们 ) 曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。 [ 要求 ] 1. 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受 ; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名 ; 词数 :80-100 。开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environmental protection activities. To be an ecological citizen ( 生态公民 ), we did a good job. Last ________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua One possible version : Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environmental protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day. Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua