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写作技巧
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师
自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程
中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于 as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、
other 、another 等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过
程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个
动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用 help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand
to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:My name is Jim. I’m
Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有:She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She is a girl aged 12.
等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词
或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不
会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想
想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要
点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
四、耐心修改,提炼句子
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕,高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实,这时候,不妨从以下方面去修改,相信会
让你受益匪浅的。
1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后,在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力,
你务必要选择高级的。例如,就以今年中考的英语作文为例,它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达
法,有 old people 和 the old 。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理,作文中的“病人”的表达法有 sick people ,
patients ,the sick ,你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是 the sick 了。
2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如:我市今年中考作文
题,就要求学生表达一个意思:帮助同学,可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”,面对这样的问题怎么办呢?
怎么不换个说法呢?你看,If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our friendship
longer .不就达到目的了吗?
3、大胆改变句型,使之生辉
例如,我们将一些句子改为感叹句,复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何
乐而不为呢?
4 高度关注句与句 、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然,衔接紧凑。
5、适当引用个别谚语或警句,来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文
一篇好的作文,经过审题、修改之后,务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上,再认真地仔细检查一遍,那才是大公
告成了。
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers.
There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life.
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making money.
Now there are many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive
their own cars to go to work. Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have
improved a lot. Thanks to the government’s efforts. My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
一、在我的家乡发生了很大的变化
二十多年来,我的家乡只是个小,又老又穷镇。大多数人都是农民。有几个工厂。人们没有足够的食物吃,把旧衣服穿在
身上。他们有一个艰苦的生活。
发生了巨大的变化,在过去的 20 年。人们已经发现很多的赚钱途径。现在有许多高大的建筑物。他们很漂亮。道路宽
阔,又干净。人们可以搭公车或驾驶自己的汽车去上班。许多人有手机和个人电脑。人民的生活条件有了很大的进步。
由于政府的努力。我的家乡正变得越来越美丽了。
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our
neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more
trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave
rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone
tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and
better.
二、拯救地球
如何保护环境已成为世界上最大的问题。
这是我们的责任保护我们的环境。不管我们居住的地方,我们应该做些事情来保持我们的邻居整洁。我们可以收集废纸
或其他废弃物回收利用。我们应该种更多的树,我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。我们不应该
把垃圾随处可见,在公共场所随地吐痰。我们不能摘花、践踏草地在公众场合。如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护
环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活一定会越来越好。
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life. What
should we do to improve our environment?
We should plant more trees. And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes
and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin. Don’t spit in public
places. Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.
三、改善我们的环境
好的环境能让人感到快乐。改善环境意味着资格我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境?
我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。当我们看到垃圾在地上,我们应该把
它捡起来,扔进一个垃圾箱。不要在公共场所随地吐痰。别把公共墙壁。这是我们的责任,让我们的地球整洁。
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very
bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off) waste gas. More and more
trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand). We often see factories pour waste
into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in
danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect
the environment, the world will become much more beautiful, and our life will be better and better .
四、我们周围的污染
近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是我们的环境变得越来越糟糕。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在许多人有空调、汽车、
生产(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在这块土地上只留下沙砾)。我们经常看到工厂将废物倒入河流
或湖泊。河里的水是很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水喝的城市。现在我们正处于危险中。这是非常必要的和重要的保
护好环境。我认为,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans. It’s our duty to take care of the
nature around us. Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them. We shouldn’t kill
wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home. We must plant more trees and grass, they
can make the world greener. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have. Let’s do our best to make
the world beautiful.
五、使我们的世界更美丽!
环境保护是越来越重要的人类。这是我们的责任照顾我们周围的天性。动物和植物都是我们最好的朋友。,我们应该与
他们共同分享这个世界。我们不应该杀野生动物,我们必须保护森林,因为他们是动物的家。我们必须种植更多的树木
和草,他们就可以让世界环保。更美丽的世界,我们将会有快乐的生活。让我们尽我们所能使世界美丽。
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as
in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence
the look of our school. We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone
tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.
六、保持校园清洁
我们在这所学校学习。这是我们的责任保持房间整洁。这并不是一个好吐唾沫在公共场所,如在图书馆,在课堂上。我
们不应该把垃圾扔在这里和那里。不要在墙上乱画,他们影响看我们的学校。我们应该保持教室干净整洁。我们应该经
常做些清洁。如果每个人都尽自己最大努力做些有用的事情对我们学校来说,我相信我们的学校也会变得更加美好。
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house.
I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read
aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet. What a nice place I
live in!
七、我的乡村生活
我喜欢住在乡下。我住在一个小村庄。附近有一条河。许多树在房子的周围。我能看到很多农场和鸟类。有低噪音。
这里的空气清洁和清新。有私家车的减少。我念在清晨。当它变得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安静。一个好地方我住
在!
八、How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China.
English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well. At school, we
should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time in practicing English. If we keep on
working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.
八、如何学好英语
正如我们所知,英语已成为一种国际语言。它更受欢迎,比其他任何语言在中国。英语在世界上被广泛地使用,是全世界
最有用的语言。但是如何学好英语呢?
最好的方法是使用它。如果我们可以一起说英语、用英语思考我们能把它学好。在学校,我们应该学会听、说、读、写
的小心。我们应该花足够的时间在练习英语。如果我们继续努力学英语,我们将能够做得很好一天。
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well. I like English very much. I
always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class, I listen carefully, speak loudly and write
carefully and take notes if necessary. After class, I do my homework carefully. I watch English movies and listen to
English songs. I have booked an English newspaper. It’s Times English Post, I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid
of remembering the new words because I master many good methods. I hope you work hard at English and make
progress every day. That’s all.
九、我怎样学习英语
嗨,大家好。我很荣幸跟你们讲讲如何学好英语。我非常喜欢英语。我总是预览和主人的主要思想课上课前。在课堂上,
我仔细听着,大声说话、写,如果有必要认真记笔记。课后,我做我的家庭作业仔细。我看英文电影和听英文歌曲。我已
经预定了一份英文报纸。这是次英文帖子,我可以从中学到很多东西。我不是怕记忆新单词,因为我掌握许多很好的方
法。我希望你努力学习英语,天天向上。这是所有。
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher
attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for
help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my
homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十、我怎样提高我的英语
当我开始学习英语,我就不会它。我很担心在那个时间。后来我 1 istened 老师在课堂上专心,仔细地做着笔记。如果
我有任何问题,我问英语老师或同学帮忙。我每天早晨读英语文章,听着大声的英语录音带。在晚上,做完作业后,我总是
读一些英语和杂志。现在我是一个最好的学生在英语在我的课。
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada,
Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's
widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in
English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge. English is used by travellers and business people around the
world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in
China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well. Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in
our class.
十一,英语的重要性
英语是世界上使用最广泛的。这是说,对于大多数人来说,在美国、英国、加拿大、澳大利亚、新西兰等国家。它也是
非常广泛地用作外语在世界上许多其他国家。这是广泛应用于不同国家之间的贸易。超过四分之三的因特网上的信息
是用英文写的,太。它是真的是通向如此丰富知识的桥梁。使用英语的旅游者和商人环游世界。它是世界上最重要的语
言,因为它是如此的广泛应用。这就是为什么中国有越来越多的人对学英语有兴趣。
英语真是有用,我们必须把它学好。现在让我们努力学习,学好它,看看谁更快、更好的在我们班。
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have
greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world.
I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make
our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my
best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.
十二,我想成为一名发明家
电视、电话、冰箱、汽车、飞机、计算机和其他许多事情是重要的发明。他们已经大大改变了我们的生活。许多人都
有自己的想法和愿望。他们想创造一些新的东西了世界。我就是其中一个。我想成为一名发明家在未来,发明能带来的
乐趣,对我们的生活,使我们的日常生活更方便。我们的生活越来越好。现在我是一个高中学生。我将尽我所能努力学
习功课,使我的梦想成真。
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to
China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I
can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on, I must study hard. I am
going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
十三、我想成为一名导游
我想成为一名导游,因为北京将举办 2008 年奥运会。将有许多人来中国的来自世界各地。他们中大多数人都不懂中文。
他们想去参观中国许多有趣的地方。我可以成为一个导游。我赚的钱,太。我将会多么幸福!所以从现在开始,我必须努
力学习。我要每天都要学英语。我会尽我所能让它成真。
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some
information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download
the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most
important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like
the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try?
十四、我喜欢上网
互联网是扮演着重要的角色在我们的日常生活中。它是非常有用的。我经常因特网上搜索一些信息。我可以读到最新
的消息,买些东西,并获得各种信息从它。我还可以下载的信息,我需要,我可以发电子邮件,打电话到朋友在网上聊天。
最重要的是,我能学习我所有的功课在互联网上。
互联网使我的生活更有趣和丰富多彩,有一个很宽的影响我的学习和生活。我非常喜欢上网。你怎么样/你来试试好
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go
shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a
lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But
now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.
It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.
十五、互联网
互联网正成为越来越多的了解这一点对我们至关重要。没有它,我们不能做的更好的工作。我们可以去购物,就不能从
我们的房子。我们能听音乐或看电影在互联网上。它也能帮助很多学习。我们可以学到很多知识对不同的学科而言,尽
快获取信息。但是现在,我们中的一些人工作、学习或玩在互联网上很长时间了,尤其是对年轻人玩电脑游戏。这是对
我们的眼睛有害健康。如果我们好好利用互联网,它将是我们最好的朋友,帮助我们很多。
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest
computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many
ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of
information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
十六、电脑
计算机是一种奇妙的机器。这是一个伟大的发明在许多年。它非常迅速发展。最小的计算机是那样大的笔记本。我们
叫它口袋里的计算机。电脑已经成为越来越重要的在很多方面。它没有触及生命每一个人,即使一个人在遥远的村庄。
它帮助我们与各种各样的信息,我们从它获得知识。它能给我们许多乐趣。
十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two
or three days without water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes. Some factories
even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no
longer safe for people to drink.
Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.
十七、水的重要性
所有的事情我们吃的和喝的,水是最重要的。我们生活中可以没有食物了很多天,但两、三天没有水,通常会使人死。
然而,并不是所有的人理解这个。他们继续投呀投的垃圾倒入河流或湖泊。一些工厂甚至倒废水入河中。结果,许多河
流和湖泊已经变得如此肮脏的水是不再安全了人们喝酒。
让我们尽力保持水的清洁来拯救自己。
十八、Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for
all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all
living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some
factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as
much water as possible.
十八、水
水是非常重要的我们的生活。每一天我们都使用水喝,太做饭,洗。所有的植物都需要水。他们需要水来成长。人们没
有水是无法生存的。没有水植物会死。它是很重要的,所有活的东西。然而,许多人的排泄物污染的湖泊和河流的水,所
以我们必须阻止某些人或某些工厂浪费水或污染水,同时,有助于保持水的清洁。同时,我们应该节约大量水的情况。
十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I
keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel
much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying. And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take
exercise as often as possible.
十九,我喜欢体育
我觉得体育锻炼对我们的健康有好处。我经常感到累了,当我在学习之前。从这个学期我继续运行时,我早晨起来。课
后我常去和我的朋友打篮球。现在我感觉比以前好了许多,我从不感到疲倦当我学习和进步很多功课。所以请尽可能
经常锻炼。
二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei. I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 2000. I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn
Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My
hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My
father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much.
二十、介绍自己
我的名字是李雷。我出生在福州 2000 年 12 月 15 日。我在育才中学学习。我学习语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、
政治等。我最喜欢英语。我最喜欢的运动是足球。我的爱好是绘画和计算机。我很高兴能够生活在一个幸福的家庭。
我家有三口人。我的父亲是一位医生。我的妈妈是一位教师。我们彼此非常相爱。
二十一、My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for
school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me
with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at
home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play
football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us. Everyone in our class likes him.
二十一、我最好的朋友
我最好的朋友是- - - - - -他 15 岁。我们在同一个班。他工作得很努力。他上学从不迟到,他擅长所有的功课。他总是乐
于帮助别人。我的数学很差,所以他经常帮助我做数学课后。他的父母都是老师。他们很忙,所以他经常帮助在家做家
务。他是一个小短于我,但是他非常强壮。他非常喜欢踢足球学校。我们经常一起踢足球,打它很好。他和我们相处得
很好。我们班上每个人都喜欢他。
2012-2013 学年九年级英语作文范文
一
假定你是李华,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友 Jack 来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英
语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;2.垃圾分类;3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if
possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water is also very important. Besides, we
should sort out the rubbish, and we might recycle some of them. What’s more, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead
of paper so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding
bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
二
随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信
同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?
请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。参考范文:
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very
convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ,for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open
for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a
queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure
whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
三
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展
了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学
分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;●我的压力是什么;●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
词数 80~100;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 参考范文:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students
can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of
training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to
relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
四
2011 年初,我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨(freezing rain),特别是贵州、湖南和四川,灾情失分严重。公路、铁
路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州 40 万人饮水难,四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在
各级政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有
何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
参考范文
As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou,
Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service. The disaster destroyed power
facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic loss was caused. Many people could not
work and live normally. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight
against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should
learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
五
据报道,从 2011 年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外,同时还将
发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明,在韩国,电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为
“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论,请你写一篇 80 词左右的短文,表达你对这件事情的看法。
参考范文:
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many
advantages.
Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are
very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find
e-books very quickly on the computer.
In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.
六
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达
自己的看法。
赞成的理由 1.广交朋友 2.可自由表达思想 3.有利于外语学习
反对的理由 1.浪费时间 2.影响学习 3.可能上当受骗
你的看法是? 【参考范文】
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.They think Internet helps people make many friends.
Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even it can improve their foreign
language.
Others, however, think students should not. They think making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be
spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we
can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
七
为理想而奋斗--初中英语范文
Everybody has their own dreams, for example, someone wants to become a teacher, a police or a doctor, but I want
to make a company and make much money. Then I can give some to children who can't go to school, I also give some to
my parents, because they are too hard to take care of me, so I want to buy many new clothes and delicious food in
returning them. I also want to travel all over the world. so I have to study hard .
''where there is a will, there is a way,'' please believe our futures are not just dreams. let's study hard together for
our future.
八
Water Pollution-有关水污染的
Everybody knows that there is serious problem of water pollution on the earth. Yes, water pollution is increasing.
Look! The water in the river is getting dirtier and dirtier. Most of fish in the water have died, and we can’t swim in the
water
My grandfather says, when he was very little, the water in the river was very clean. He often swam in the river
with his friends. That was before, but now we can’t see such clean rivers. Let’s protect the water from pollution,
because we can’t live without water. The water is really important to us all.
九
关于中学生带手机
中学生应该带手机上学吗?谈谈你的看法和观点。
I think that middle school students carry mobile phones to school is wrong. some of us think it is easy to talk with
parents and classmates and it is fashion. But it has some shortcomings. Middle school students is still very little, they
like to talk with others or play games in class . then it will make them careless about their studies. what’s more, it will
cost some more money from our parents as we students still rely on them so far. Carrying phones to school has good
and bad influences on us. To be a middle school student, I think carried mobile phones to school isn’t good for us, Do
you agree with me?
十
1.关于环保
How to stay healthy
Would you like to keep healthy like the others do? Now let me tell you something about staying healthy.
1. Food. To keep yourself healthy, you shouldn't eat something that have too much oil, calory or salt. For that can
cause a lot of diseases. The right way to keep healthy is to eat more vegetables and fruits.
2. Exercise. Another way which is always be ignored is to excercise more. An average of steps a normal adult have
per day is 10000 - 15000. You'll find yourself more healthy after changing the steps to 15000 - 20000 per day, and you'll
get more fit easily by that.
That's my own easy methods of staying healthy. I'll be glad if you have any ideas about that and have a discussion
with me!
2.运动
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sport that I
like most is basketball. When I was in junior high, I started to play basketball in school. At that time, I found I had
loved deeply this sport. Now, I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can. The basketball games have given
me the most wonderful time in my life.
3.春节
My Spring Festival
Last year’s Spring Festival is special. My uncle and my aunt came back from Shanghai. My family were very
happy to keep the Spring Festival with them. And it was the most exciting festival of all the festivals.
On New Year’s Eve, my father and my uncle talked about their work together. My mum did some cooking with
my aunt Grandparents and I watched the New Year TV programmes. At about six o’clock, we had a special family
dinner. We all thought the dumplings were delicious.
On the first day of the New Year, we visited our relatives. In the afternoon, we went shopping in Jiefanf Road. My
uncle bought some Jay’s CDs. He likes Jay’s music very much. There were so many people on the road. It was more
alive than any other time of a year.
On the second and the third days, we spent a wonderful weekend in the country. There were much bigger trees
than in the city. And the animals were more beautiful than in the city. We all enjoyed ourselves.
I had an interesting Spring Festival. How about you?
4.出游
An unforgetful trip
I went Chong Qing in July 22.It is a city which was built near mountains. So people call it Mountain City. In
Chong Qing, I went to the Red Stone Center, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and
awful trip. There are a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisons are good, they
didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no
good water to drink. They had only twenty minutes to stay out side per day but they still said nothing.
I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit.
学校介绍
Dear Mr. Smith
I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school.
You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place here. On one side of the road there's a new classroom building.
On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all
kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of
trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself (亲自) some day.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
外宾学生团访问
Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. A student touring group from Australia is
coming to visit our school on Friday afternoon, April 12.Our guests will arrive at 2:00 p.m. and leave at 6:00 p.m. We
are going to hold a meeting to welcome them on the playground at 2:10 p.m.. Everybody is required to attend it on time.
After that, they will be shown around our classroom building, lab building, library, school-run factory and
swimming-pool. Last of all, a get-together will be given in the auditorium. There will be singing, dancing, music, games
and exchange of gifts. Please take an active part in it.
That's all. Thank you.
学生阅读室守则
Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. I'm from Class 6,Senior Grade 3.I'm in
charge of the students' reading-room. The new reading-room will soon be opened to you. All of you are welcome to it.
I hope you'll take care of the magazines, books and newspapers. Don't make them dirty. While reading, please
keep quiet. Remember to put away the books, newspapers and magazines after your reading. Don't take them out
without special permission. Please keep it clean and tidy. Don't spit on it.
Spring Festival
Chinese Lunar New Year, or Spring Festival falls on January 1st according to the lunar calendar, usually around
the late January or early February. As the start of spring as well as a new year, it is the most important celebration of
the year. Each family get reunited during the New Year. On the Eve, there is a big dinner for the family when each
member return to get together.
The biggest New Year's party is held on CCTV. Hundreds of people gather there, meanwhile millions of
others all over the country were sitting in front of the screen to watch excellent performances for more than four hours
continuously. The bell strike twelve at midnight to welcome the coming of the New Year or Spring. People start to set
off firecraks and say "Happy New Year" to each other.
出游邀请
Dear Mr. Eric,
I came to see you this morning but it so happened that you were out. So I have to leave this note to you.
I'm so glad to tell you that after raining so many days, it is said to be fine this Sunday. Therefore some of my
friends and I have decided to go for an outing. We'll meet at the gate of the Forest Park at 8:30 a.m. Then we'll go
climbing and have some games. We'll have a picnic. In the afternoon we'll go boating in the river nearby. If possible,
we'll go to pick some wild fruits. I'm sure we'll take some photos, too. Will you join us? We'll be very happy if you
will ring me up before 5 p.m., please.
Your,
Wang Gang
房间布局介绍
I live in a flat. When you go in you come into the hall. The toilet is on the left and the bathroom is on the right.
There are two doors in front of you. The door on the left leads to a bedroom. The door on the right leads to a living
room. When you go into the living room there are two doors on the right. The first door leads to the kitchen. The
second door leads to the dining room. There is also another door on the left near the end of the living room. This door
leads to the second bedroom. There is a balcony in front of the living room and the second bedroom.
旅游日记
Early in the morning, we all set off for the beach. We took a lot of pictures on the way. By noon we arrived at the
hotel. After having lunch there we went to the beach. We were so tired that we spent the whole afternoon lying on the
beach and swimming a lot. On the way back to the hotel, we went shopping for presents. In the evening it rained. We all
stayed in the hotel and played table tennis. We had a good time today.
介绍自己的城市和家乡
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to GuTian, now let me introduce our city — GuTian to you. GuTian is a city with a long history. It is in
the southeast of Fujian and 128kilometres away from Fuzhou. It has a population of 30,000.
There are many places of interest in GuTian, such as Linshuigong, Cuiping Lake and so on. Cuiping Lake is a
beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and
have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in GuTian.
Thank you.
个人介绍(学生)
Hu Kaili, a girl o f 16,has been living in Beijing ever since she was born in 1982.She now lives at 381 Fucheng Road
of the city. At the age of 6 in 1988, she went to school at Guanghui Primary School. Six years later, she graduated from
the school and became a middle school student at Xiahua Middle School in Beijing. She is now still studying there. Kaili
likes sports. She often plays basketball after school, goes swimming in summer and skating in winter. As a result, she
enjoys good health. Kaili has a hobby. She has been collecting stamps for years.
关于交通方式
谈谈你对骑自行车与开小汽车两种交通方式的看法及你通常采用的方式。
There are many kinds of vehicles, such as riding bicycles, driving cars. Which kind of vehicles do you like? I like
riding bicycles. I think riding bicycles is better than driving cars because it saves money and energy. It can avoid air
pollution. It has low cost. The bicycle needs less space. Riding bicycles can make us feel tired, but it let us keep fit.
Driving cars saves more time than riding bicycles. But it has high cost. It can cause air pollution. It needs more place
than the bicycle. What do you think of?
Healthy eating habits
As we know, food gives us energy. We must have enough food to keep us healthy. If we choose right food, we can
have healthy eating habits. We should eat more fruit and vegetables instead of biscuits, hamburgers, Beijing roast duck
and so on We should eat fewer snacks and candies. Different foods help us in different ways. We should have different
kinds of foods, such as fruit, vegetables, grains , eggs, milk, meat, fish and so on We should do exercise more often, so
we can become healthier.
My Favorite Food
There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice. In China, most of the people in the south eat
rice. And I like fried rice best.
It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that time I always make fried rice by
myself. I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious. It makes me happy. After eating it, I am not hungry any more.
Fried rice is my favorite.
My Favorite Sport
I like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball. But swimming is my favorite sport.
When I was six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool. They taught me how to swim. They told
me not to be afraid of water, and told me to jump into water bravely. Later I became very interesting in swimming.
Swimming is really very interesting .If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish. Great fun. I'm sure you
will feel very happy. And the most important thing is, if you swim, you’ll be strong.
By the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our town. I was the winner. Dear friends,
swimming is really very good for us. Let’s enjoy swimming.
介绍你喜欢的电影
I like movies very much. My favorite movie is “Love Me Once More, Mom”. This is a moving story about a mother
and her son. The son was lost one day and the mother was so worried that she looked for him everywhere, but she
couldn’t find him She was very sad and almost went mad. I think it is a wonderful movie. It is so moving and sad that I
ever cried over and over again. How I wish to watch it again.
描述近一周的天气状况
It's going to be sunny on next Monday, has a highest temperature of 9 degree and a lowest of 5 degree. And it
continues to be pretty good on Tuesday, has a highest temperature of 12 degree and possiblly a lowest temperature of 6
degree. But Wendsday is going to be a little windy, and getting cold. Highest temperature of 4 degree, lowest of -1
degree. And it will get colder and colder. Thursday is going to be cloudy, a highest temperature of 2 degree, a lowest
temperature of -5. On Friday, it's going to rain. Also very windy, so better put on some warm cloth for that day. A
highest temperature of -5 degree, a lowest temperature of -10 degree.
初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来,在你获取知识的同时,你的外貌,兴趣爱好,习惯…都有了一定的改变吧!
请你一定以(How I Change)为题,写一篇短文,告诉我们你的变化好吗?字数在 80 词左右。
温馨提示:1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2.这些词汇也许对你有帮助:hobby, habit, used
to, enjoy oneself3.短文开头已经为你写好(字数不计入总数),请你接着往下写。
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. …
范文两篇: How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair.
I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running
with my classmates. So I'm becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are
satisfied with me.
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time
I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me.
Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than
before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study
better and keep healthier.
回顾初中三年成长过程,你一定有很多感受,从学习, 生活,爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make
friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball
with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics
are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.
地震无情,人有情
2008 年湖北咸宁中考英语作文范文一:
要求:1、从下面两个题目中选取一个,按要求写一篇短文,80 字左右;
2、所给提示词全部用上,包含图示或提示的全部要点,并发挥你的想象力(但不要逐句翻译成英语!);
3.根据需要,使用正确的时态、语态等,叙事完整,内容充实,语言通顺,书写规范。4.首句已给出,但不记入总字
数。
题目:"地震无情,人有情",大灾之后,灾区的小朋友们却度过了他们终生难忘的一个"六一"儿童节!
请你仔细观察下面的三幅图,根据图示内容以"A Special Children's Day"为题,写一篇短文。
提示词:from disaster areas(灾区) unforgettable (难忘的)
A Special Children's Day
Children's Day is a great day for all the children and also for the children from disaster areas!...........
中考英语作文范文:
Children's Day is a great day for all the children and also for the children from disaster areas. They had an
unforgettable Children's Day this year! People all over the country are caring about them.
There were many special concerts held for them. In the concerts, they could sing with the famous singers like
Liu Dehua. Some of them were invited to enjoy the day with other children from big cities. They sang, danced and
played games together. Like the other children, they also got many beautiful gifts/ presents such as books, dolls,
backpacks and so on.
I believe it was the happiest Children's Day they had spent so far! How lucky they were!
环境问题
环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污
染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:
存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4
个方面, 80 字左右的。
范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted we have no
clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is poring dirty
air in the sky the population is
Increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health it also
has a great affection in the future. people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution. Many
people died of diseases. In order to live a better life we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things. Don’t waste things, saves
money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees
and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful.