深圳英语中考作文模板 5页

1. 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion 2. 就我而言/ 就个人而言Personally, in my opinion, as for me, ‎ 3. 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。‎ 4. 导致，引起 lead to 5. 责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement 6. 做出共同努力 make great efforts 7. 因特网 the Internet (一定要有冠词，字母I 大写)‎ 8. 方便快捷 convenient, convenient transportation/ people buy cars for convenience.‎ 9. 环保(的) environmental protection /Be environmentally friendly（形容词）‎ 10. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information 11. 采取有效措施来… take steps, take effective measures to do sth 12. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。‎ 13. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally 14. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 reduce stress/pressure 15. 相反on the contrary。‎ 16. 毫无疑问There is no doubt that…‎ 17. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of.‎ 18. 随着时间的流逝 As time goes by,______‎ 开头 1. In recent days 2. Different people have different ideas.‎ Some people firmly believe/ think/say/ hold the opinion that _______, because________. while others strongly believe________.‎ 3. There is an old saying,” Failure is the mother of success”‎ Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. ‎ First, ____ Second,____. To make things better, / To make things worse,/ much worse, / even worse,_________‎ ‎3. Nowadays，it is common for people to write microblogs. People like it because ______. Besides，______. ‎ ‎4. With the development of science and technology/society, the greenhouse effect/ our environment has become more and more serious/ more and more popular/. We can see more and more pollution. 5. Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception.‎ It has both advantages and disadvantages. ‎ ‎6. Man is /Human beings are now facing a big problem, which is becoming more and more serious. That is pollution. （which代替前面一句，逗号不可少。）‎ 同学们经常用的是it。也可以。但标点符号不一样。‎ We are now facing a big problem. It is becoming……‎ ‎7. ______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. There is no doubt that it has brought us a lot of benefits/ advantages, but meanwhile/ at the same time it has created some serious problems as well. ‎ 中间段落句 ‎ 尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句 ‎1. / Most important of all, / first of all, / in the first place/ firstly/ To begin with,‎ besides,/ moreover/ in addition,/ furthermore/ also, ‎ in that case, as a result, though, However, in other words, ‎ ‎2. On the contrary，some people believe that ___. They say____. ‎ But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve the problem. For one thing, _______. For another, ________. 3. we should take a series of effective measures to______. ‎ on one hand, ________. On the other hand, ________. ‎ 4. I fully/ totally agree with the statement/ idea because______. ‎ 5. In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______. ‎ 6. I often help my parents do housework， such as， washing clothes， cleaning the room and watering flowers 结尾 ‎·at last/ last but not least/ all in all/ in a word/ To sum up ‎1. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ________. Only in this way can we______in the future. ‎ ‎2. From above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.‎ We can easily draw a conclusion that _____________‎ ‎3. Personally, I believe that_____. ‎ Hopefully, students at school can study and play safely in the future.‎ 1. If all of us make great efforts/ try our best to __________, I am sure __________‎ 2. if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution 审题，书写，无语法错误，语句通顺最关键！！！‎ ‎(满分作文标准：包含所有要点。能围绕内容适当发挥。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇。用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚)‎ 检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：‎ ‎（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。‎ ‎（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。‎ ‎（5）书写字迹和标点符号，大小写是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。‎ 一篇简洁、通顺的文章，建议大部分同学模仿 Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, we’d better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze. It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end. ‎ 有争议的、正反观点的文章，用以下的作文模板 Microblog Today, our class held a heated discussion about whether it is good for students to use microblogs. Different people have different opinions. Some students/ most of the students hold the opinion/ agree that it brings much benefits to us and we can get a lot of knowledge from it. Firstly/ On one hand, through microblogs, we can know more friends with similar interests. Secondly, it becomes possible to talk to famous people closely. Besides, it is a convenient way for us to share our joy and sorrow with our close friends. Sometimes, it can reduce our pressure in a way.‎ However, a quarter of the students are strongly against it. They think (that)…….. and It can hardly be trusted. On the other hand, most of the young teenagers have no ability to tell the true from wrong, so they may be misled by certain false advertisements.‎ In my opinion, the advantages of writing microblogs far outweigh the disadvantages。It can not only practise our writing, but also express our feelings. But as a students, we shouldn’t spend too much time on it. After all, study comes first./ study should be put in the first place.‎ about holidays Some people think ……. is very important. Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work. Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family. Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries. 　　However, other people hold opposite/ different views. They think(that) it causes a lot of problems. For one thing, / on one hand, It may lead to traffic jams and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded. For another, / on the other hand, …… 　　In my opinion, I prefer a 7-day holiday. I can not only sleep well and do exercise, but also read some interesting books. ……….‎ 以下的文章是hot topic，积累素材而用，有的地方还不通顺。亲们也许可以写得更好！‎ Food safety Every day we have to eat food and it can give us lots of energy. However, in the past two years, food safety has become a serious and important problem.Unhealthy food is harmful to us. So we must do something to make our food safe. ‎ First, we need to let all the people understand the danger of using additives, which can cause many health problems. Second, the government must make some useful laws to make sure that the food producers who use harmful materials are punished, so that they never do it again. Third, businessmen should be educated to be aware of people's health instead of being only interested in making money. ‎ Beside, as for us, we'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because …... ‎ I sincerely hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.‎ Shopping online Now shopping online attracts more and more people. Of course, it has a lot of advantages. First, the products on the Internet are cheaper than those in the shops. Second, we have many different kinds of products to choose on the Internet. In addition, it’s more convenient. We just stay at home and press the mouse instead of shopping in a crowded and noisy shopping mall. ‎ However, it has disadvantages as well. For example, the products may not be good enough. And the sellers can hardly provide good services to everyone. So be careful when you are shopping online!‎ Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. Some shops on the Internet are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy what we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.‎ However, some students disagree with them. They say they can't see the things while shopping. So they are not sure whether they are good or not. They are worried about the quality of the goods. Besides, they can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with friends.‎ Advertisements, good or bad?‎ When we talk about this topic, different people have different opinions/ ideas.‎ There is no doubt that a number of ads bring great benefits to us people, to some extent. Some people think they can benefit a lot from ads. To begin with, ads promote economy by encouraging people to buy more goods. Second, ads give people the latest information about products. Third, they can help people buy better and cheap goods.‎ However, on the other hand, some ads have bad effects. First, they persuade/ encourage people to buy the products they don’t really need. And false ads cheat consumers. Second, a survey shows that children who watch many ads are more interested in possessions when they grow up. Besides, ads put much pressure to both children and parents because it is ‎ easier for children to ask their parents for money to buy things when they find attractive things from advertisements. That is to say, children are easier to be influenced. Last but not least, paper ads are a kind of waste and damage the environment.‎ ‎ In fact, every coin has two sides. So what we should do is to make full use of the benefits of ads.‎ Should students bring mobile phones to school Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone, because students will use mobile phones to play games, send text messages, watch movies, etc , which will affect their study. In my opinion, it is necessary for us to bring mobile phones to school. I hold the opinion for the following reasons. 　　As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. /It is a fashionable and useful invention…… It’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way ‎ ‎ Keep safe at school As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn't bring knives or other sharp things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting and bullying are strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.‎ ‎ ‎ How to study better If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again. 　　First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second, you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers’ questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. What’s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. I really hope my advice can help you out