广州市中考英语作文专题复习三体育与校园活动 9页

‎2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（三）体育与校园活动 一、与专题相关的话题项目  ‎ ‎       学校 (school), 文娱与体育 (Entertainment and sports)‎ ‎ 二、与专题相关的知识准备 ‎1、相关单元  7A Unit 1 Making friends            7A Unit 2 Daily life ‎                    7A Unit 7 School clubs       ‎ ‎                    8A Unit 5 Educational exchanges     8A Unit 7 Memory   ‎ ‎                    8A Unit 8 English Week      ‎ ‎                     9A Unit 4 Problems and advice ‎2、相关词汇 ‎  *高频词 ‎    (n.) hobby, country, age, dream, flat, world, mountain, engineer, sound, table tennis, break, band, guitar, market, practice, fair, rocket, power, skill, information, headline, ant, butterfly, bee, culture, host, weekday, success, guest, corner, trouble, step, cycle, note, wallet, basket, manager, list, mile, letter, speech, notice, competition, text, chance, topic, winner, opinion, model, diet, situation, advantage, mess, exam, comment ‎    (v.) complete, ride, ring, end, attend, teach, tour, introduce, respect, lose, improve, mention, spell, advise, communicate, hide, choose, regret, hate, suggest, fail,  ‎ ‎    (adj.) daily, friendly, elder, surprised, amazing, boring, recent, glad, fantastic, local, silly, worth, whole, rich, poor, shy, awful, ashamed, embarrassed, mad, annoying, careless, polite,   ‎ ‎    (adv.) never, seldom, usually, together, already, yet, confidently, else,‎ ‎    (pron.)everyone, yourself,  ‎ ‎    (conj.) though ‎         ‎ ‎ *高频短语 ‎     be good at, go to school, make friends with, take part in, have a good time,  ‘d like to, all over, on foot, go to bed, get up, learn about, all the way, look up, so far, introduce…to, take  out, pour out, treasure hunt, in public, put on, in my opinion, look out, be on a diet, laugh at, feel ashamed of, drive sb, mad. Make a mess, out of place, none of one’s business, hear from ‎       ‎ ‎*拓展词汇 ‎        experience, disappear, attack, exchange, t’ai chi, chopstick, reference,   application, treasure, several, suggestion, unless, whenever, request, keep in touch with, apply for,  make sth. A big success, ‎ 9‎ advise sb. to do, give sb. a chance to do sth, be worried about, regret doing,  have a habit of, make up one’s mind, pay attention to,‎ ‎ *句式句型 ‎1. My favourite subjects are......‎ ‎2. I am good at ........‎ ‎3. I like/ enjoy.............‎ ‎4. I always have a good time at school.‎ ‎5. be so adj. that +从句 ‎6. I’m glad to do.....‎ ‎7. Spend.......(in) doing....‎ ‎8. It’s been a fantastic experience so far.‎ ‎9. We’ve tried to .......‎ ‎10. I can’t wait!‎ ‎11. I haven’t had much success, but I’ll keep trying.  ‎ ‎  12. If you......, you will......‎ ‎13. It is adj. to do sth.‎ ‎14. Some students..... Other students.......‎ ‎15. What should I do in this situation?‎ ‎16. It’s none of my business.‎ ‎ ‎ 三、经典例题 v    体育 ‎（1）2007年天津市书面表达考题 ‎    日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文.‎ 内容 感想 ‎1.学校师生收看了启动仪式(launching ceremony);‎ ‎2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等;‎ ‎1.锻炼有利于强健身体;‎ ‎2.运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高.‎ ‎3.每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子.‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数80 个左右.‎ ‎2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.‎ 9‎ ‎3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯.‎ ‎4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.‎ ‎“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to_________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎（2）、解题思路示范 ‎1、审题：‎ 本文共有  5  个要点 时态主要采用 一般过去时和一般现在时 ‎ 人称是__第一人称____‎ 段落 第一段落写活动情况；第二段落写感想;  ‎ ‎2、可能用到的短语和句型 词汇the launching ceremony 启动仪式；build up one’s body strength 强身健体；more effective  效果更好; take part in; different kinds of…;   enjoy oneself ;be good for; have a rest; an hour a day; in one’s opinion; have a happy life 连接词 after that;  besides;  also; what’s more;‎ 句型some…some…others…; so…that…; I think…; Doing sth. is adj.; Why not do…?; If you…; I’m sure…‎ 内容 感想 ‎1.学校师生收看了启动仪式(launching ceremony);‎ ‎2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等;（短语：do different kinds of sports for an hour）‎ ‎1. 锻炼有利于强健身体;( 短语：build up our body strength.)‎ ‎2. 运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高.(短语：have a rest; more effective)‎ ‎3. 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子. (短语：do sports an hour a day; have a happy life)‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3、 学生成文：‎ ‎      “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to see a launching ceremony. After that, we did different kinds of sports for an hour. For example, running, taking exercise, playing basketball and so on.‎ ‎      In my opinion, do sports can help build up our body strength. What’s more, it also can let our ‎ 9‎ brains have a rest, then our study will more effective. I am enjoy running every day. I think running can make me relax. So why not take part in some exercise with me every day? As the saying goes, do sports an hour a day, have a happy face every day!‎ ‎ ‎ 点评：‎ ‎   整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，没有什么单词拼写错误，而且文章最后一句写得相当漂亮，但是全文还是存在不少语法小错误和用词不当，部分句子的表达过于中式。‎ 分项分档评分表 项目 要素 给分表 内容 ‎6分 切合题意，体现要点 ‎6-5．5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 6‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 有所发挥 准确性 ‎6分 语  法 ‎6-5.5‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎   3.5‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 词  汇 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 流畅性 ‎3分 结构 ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2-1.5‎ ‎  2‎ ‎1‎ ‎0.5‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ 自评总分： 11.5‎ ‎  4、检查思路：‎ 完成作文自查表：‎ ‎1) 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。‎ ‎2) 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。‎ 项目 ‎ 第一次自查 第二次自查 布局与内容要点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 人称 时态、主谓一致 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 动词搭配、介词搭配 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 9‎ 拼写错误 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 好词好句 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5、参考例文：‎ ‎     “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony. After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and others did some exercise. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. What a good time we had! ‎ I think doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our body strength. Besides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sports so that our study can be more effective. So why not join us? If you can do sports an hour a day, I’m sure you can have a healthier and better life.‎ ‎ ‎ v 校园生活 ‎（1）2007年广州市初中毕业生学业考试真题 通  知 活动：学生音乐会 时间：星期五下午2:30‎ 地点：玫瑰音乐厅 集合时间及地点：下午1:30；学校门口 出发时间：下午1:45；过时不候 注意事项：‎ ‎1.厅内不准喝饮料、不准吃食物；‎ ‎2.看表演过程中不得拍照、不得喧哗；‎ ‎3.看完表演后一起坐校车回校。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1、 词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数；‎ ‎2、 不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。‎ Hi Ben Our class is planning to go to a student concert. As you weren’t at school today, I’m sending you the information.‎ ‎…‎ Cheers,‎ 9‎ Li Ping ‎（2）解题思路：‎ ‎1. 审题：‎ a. 本文共有  6  个要点 ‎(1)时间：星期五下午2:30  (at half past two on Friday afternoon)‎ ‎(2)地点：玫瑰音乐厅 (Rose Music Hal)‎ ‎(3)集合时间及地点：下午1:30；学校门口  (school gate at half past one)‎ 出发时间：下午1:45；过时不候 ‎(4-6)注意事项：‎ ‎1.厅内不准喝饮料、不准吃食物；(No drinks or foods, be allowed )‎ ‎2.看表演过程中不得拍照、不得喧哗；(take photos, during )‎ ‎3.看完表演后一起坐校车回校。(return to school, by bus)‎ b. 时态主要采用 一般将来时 c. 人称是_________‎ ‎2. 可能用到的短语和句型 ‎1).主要连接词 If， so, also,‎ ‎2). 主要句型We are going to … We will … You can…   I think …‎ ‎            You should/ shouldn’t …   Remember to… ‎ ‎3. 成文：‎ ‎ In Friday afternoon, we have a students’ music concert .This music concert is start half past two p.m. And the concert will be held in The Rose Concert Hall.‎ We will meet at the gate of school at half past one p.m. and the go off at a quarter to two.‎ In the concert we must in attention: First don’t drinking and eating in the hall. Second we needn’t take photos and make noise in the show. Last, we will come back to school by school bus when we will be watched the concert.‎ ‎ ‎ 点评：‎ 整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式 分项分档评分表 项目 要素 给分表 内容 ‎6分 切合题意，体现要点 ‎6-5．5‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 9‎ ‎4‎ ‎ ‎ 有所发挥 准确性 ‎6分 语  法 ‎6-5.5‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎   ‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 词  汇 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 流畅性 ‎3分 结构 ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2-1.5‎ ‎  2‎ ‎1‎ ‎0.5‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ 自评总分：8‎ ‎ ‎ ‎  4. 检查思路：‎ 完成作文自查表：‎ ‎   如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。‎ ‎   如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。‎ 项目 ‎ 第一次自查 第二次自查 布局与内容要点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 人称 时态、主谓一致 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 动词搭配、介词搭配 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 拼写错误 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 好词好句 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5. 参考例文：‎ Hi Ben,‎ Our class is planning to go to a student concert. As you weren’t at school today, I’m sending you the information.‎ The concert will be held in the Rose Music Hall at half past two on Friday afternoon. You must be at the school gate at half past one. We will leave at a quarter to two. Don’t be late. If you are late, we won’t wait for you. No drinks or foods are allowed inside the hall. Photos may not be taken during the concert. Also, we are not allowed to talk loudly during the show. We’ll return to the school by bus after the concert.‎ Cheers,‎ Li Ping 9‎ ‎ ‎ 四、练习 ‎    你校正在举行英语艺术节，请你根据下面的海报，写一个通知，告诉你班同学关于艺术节读书活动的情况。‎ ‎                            ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1、词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；‎ Attention everybody:‎ ‎ The 2015 Reading Day of Our School                          _________________                                         ‎ ‎                                                                           ___________________________________________ ‎ ‎                                                                             __________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ 解题思路：‎ ‎1. 审题：‎ a. 本文共有    个要点 b. 时态主要采用            ‎ c. 人称是_________‎ ‎2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ 9‎ ‎3. 可能用到的句型 ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4. 成文：‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ 检查思路：‎ 完成作文自查表：‎ ‎1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。‎ ‎2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。‎ 项目 ‎ 第一次自查 第二次自查 布局与内容要点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 人称 时态、主谓一致 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 动词搭配、介词搭配 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 拼写错误 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 好词好句 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考例文：‎ Attention everybody:‎ The 2015 Reading Day of Our School will be held in the library on the morning of April 18th, It will last from 8a.m to 11:30 a.m. Everyone is welcome to take part in the Reading Day. Before that day, students should pick up one English book and write your afterthought after reading so that you can recommend the book you read to other students. On that day, there will be two activities: the first part is to recommend books and share what we have got from reading with our classmates and teachers. The second part is a Reading Competition. Come on! Reading will make you cleverer!‎ 9‎