中考英语作文专题复习课学案 3页

中考英语作文专题复习课学案 ‎ ----How to Write English Compositions ‎ 1.Discussion：How to Write English Compositions？‎ ‎2.Learn the steps of writing： （书面表达六步法）‎ 改 Sample：健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，下图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 ‎ Step1 Cross-question ‎1)Style (体裁）：__________ 2)Person（人称）：_________ 3)Tense（时态）: _________________ 4)据实描写：_________________ 适当发挥：_________________ ★ 具体做法：_________________ Step2 An outline drawing 1）List key points(列要点)‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ __________________________________________________________________ 2）Arrange and Add (布局加首尾)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎★Structure：（作文一般框架：文章分3段）‎ Begging（开头）：概括性强，尽量2句话引入主题； Body(正文):主要内容：展开描述，层次性强，要有过渡型连接词。 Ending(结尾)：总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应 Step3 Sentence Making and Beautifying 在有把握的情况下遣词造句，改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。可适当多使用定语从句、宾语从句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。 ★英语写作微技巧 方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调。 方法二 : 活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采。 方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。 方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。‎ 方法五:另辟蹊径.采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简. Enjoy some proverbs 1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 4.Do as the Romans do. 5.The early bird catches the worm. 6.Failure is the mother of success.‎ ‎7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 8.All roads lead to Rome. Step4.Sentence connection 关联词(connection words) 1.表示并列: and, as well as, not only…but also，both…and, neither…nor， 2.表示递进: besides, what’s more, in addition, last but not the least(最后但同样重要的是) 3.表示转折: but, however, although hough, after all, anyway 4.表示因果: because, since, for, so, therefore, as a result 5.表示条件: if, unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as ,that is to say, in other words, ‎ ‎8.表示顺序: first (of all) , next，then, finally, firstly, second(ly), in the end； ‎ ‎9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, in a word, generally speaking, in short 11.表陈述事实：In fact 11.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion Let’s try. (Using the proper connection words) 1.________I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. 2.He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______. 3.We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. 4._____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ______, he smiled. Step5 Checking Spelling(拼写) Tense(时态) Grammar (语法) H andwriting(书写) Punctuation marks(标点符号) Enough words.(字数) Key points.(要点) ‎ Let’s try.(Correcting the article) Great changes in my hometown For the past several years, my hometown changes a lot. Such as in the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly and made little money. But now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money. Because it’s relaxing work in the factory, so they lead a happily life. Step6 Copying out 书写规范，卷面整洁 Possible version:‎ ‎ How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.‎ ‎ According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work.‎ ‎ As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.‎ ‎3.Let’s practice! （Writing practice） 节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。李明 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，要点：（1）每天步行上学； （2）离开教室时，关灯、电视；（3）不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4）充分使用纸张；（5）不使用塑料袋