广东高考英语基础写作小作文训练 6页

广东高考英语基础写作小作文训练 一、写作的基本要求 ‎1、信息完整（所写的文章中一定要包含所有的写作内容）‎ ‎2、不超过5句话（句子的复杂性，多使用从句，非谓语动词和连词及一些复杂的句型）‎ ‎3、内容清楚连贯，逻辑性强（使用恰当的连词，使文章连贯）‎ ‎4、尽量减免语法错误 二、写作技巧以及顺序 A. 通篇浏览，把握整体。浏览文章信息，并对其进行处理，将其分割成五句话，做到哪句话包含哪些信息心中有数。‎ B. 集中兵力，逐个击破。在第一步的基础上，把五个句子逐一写清楚，包含所需信息。在组织句子时注意以下几点：‎ ‎1. 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾，然后想办法拓展这句话，把其它的信息加进去。‎ ‎2. 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语（并列谓语）。‎ 改错：‎ I writing the letter to complain about I bought the shoes recently.‎ ‎3. 将多个句子并到一起，并且要做到只有一个谓语的话，有3种方法：‎ ‎1）使用各种连词。‎ More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world. 句中用到and连接2个并列简单句，前后都可保留谓语，顺利将2句变成一句。‎ 连词包括具有递进关系的并列句， 如由and，then，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句，具有转折关系的并列句，如由but，however，on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句，具有平行选择关系的并列句，如由both…and…，as well as，as well，neither…nor…or，either…or…，not only…but also…等连接的并列句。‎ ‎2）使用从句。包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。‎ More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.‎ ‎3）使用非谓语动词，及一些特殊句型。如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。‎ More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.非谓语动词ranking作结果状语，表“主动”。‎ C. 想办法为作文加分 ‎1. 多多使用各种连词，使文章更为连贯。‎ 顺接/递进：Firstly/ secondly/thirdly, besides, in addition, what’s more, what’s worse, what’s more important, moreover, also, finally, last but not least,.‎ 转折：but, however, nevertheless(然而), yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, while 原因：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to 结果：so, therefore, as a result, so that, then, so …that, such …that 总结：to sum up, to conclude, in conclusion, in summary, finally, in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, ‎ ‎2. 多使用高级词汇，句式和短语进行变换，不要重复使用一个句式和短语。同时要注意避免常见错误：‎ ‎1）不要为了减少句数而不断使用逗号，一定要通过从句，连词，非谓语等来减少句数。‎ 如：It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. 改为：‎ It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields. ‎ They could not work in the fields, because it was raining hard.‎ ‎2）时态错误：一定要根据文章的语境判断该使用的时态 实战演练一 用不同的句型写出下面的句子。 ‎ ‎ 经历                 心情 被接纳为亚运会志愿者       兴奋 ‎01 同位语从句： The news that i was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games made me very excited.‎ ‎02 宾语/主语从句： It made me very excited / I felt very excited that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian games.‎ ‎03 状语从句： When i heard that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.‎ ‎04 定语从句： I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asain Games, which made me very excited.‎ ‎05 非谓语动词： Hearing that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.‎ ‎06 普通连词：I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and i felt so excited about it.‎ ‎07 倒装句/强调句：It was last week that i was accpeted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and I felt so excited about it.‎ 实战训练二 第一节 基础写作 （共1小题，满分15分）‎ 假设你是你校校园广播站的记者，请根据以下内容给广播站写一篇英语新闻报道。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ 活动目的 为了庆祝改革开放30年所取得的伟大成就 活动形式 演讲比赛 活动组织 高二年级 观摩人员 本校高二年级全体师生、部分学生家长和学校领导，共1200多人 活动地点 学校体育馆 活动时间 ‎2010年3月15日下午 参赛选手 来自高二年级不同班级的18名选手非常流利地做了精彩的演讲。有的从亲身经历讲述祖国发生的巨大变化；有的通过家乡今昔的对比来赞美改革开放的英明决策。‎ 活动影响 活动使我们更自信，更为祖国感到自豪，决心努力学习，把国家建设的更加美丽。‎ 参考词汇：改革开放 reform and opening up ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部所给要点; 2. 报道中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。‎ To celebrate the great achievements in the past 30 years of reform and opening up，a speech contest organized by Senior Two was held in the gymnasium of our school on the afternoon of March 15th, 2010. More than 1200 people were lucky to listen to the speeches on the spot, including all the teachers and students in Senior 2, the leaders of our school and parents of some students. Eighteen contestants / candidates from different classes in Senior Two delivered wonderful speeches very fluently. Some of them talked about the great changes which had taken place in our country through their personal experiences and others sang high praise for the wise policy of reform and opening up by comparing the present of their hometowns with the past. This activity made us more confident and proud of our country and we all made up our mind to study harder to build our country more beautiful.‎ 实战训练三 基础写作 假设你是李华，昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛（Talent Show），并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受：‎ 1． 看别人比赛时：紧张；‎ 2． 自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助，冷静；‎ 3． 在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议，顺利；‎ 4． 宣布结果时：兴奋，遗憾Mike不在场。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎ 请根据以上介绍，给回美国度假的外籍教师Mike写一封感谢信，内容包括：‎ 1． 告知获奖；‎ 2． 介绍参赛情况；‎ 3． 表达获奖感受。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达所给的全部内容。信的开头与结尾已给出。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ Dear Mike ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua Dear Mike,‎ ‎ I’m writing to let you know that I won first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon. Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually calmed down. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging, I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions. When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity you were not there.‎ Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 实战训练四 第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况: ‎ 时间: 上周末 对象: 眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授 主题: 我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题 基本信息: （1）发生率: 略高于50％‎ ‎（2）人数: 世界第一 专家解读: （1）原因: 很复杂 ‎（2）治疗: 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 ‎（3）建议: 不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 ‎（4）特别提示: 如何握笔也和近视有关 ‎ [写作内容]‎ 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容: ‎ ‎1. 采访的时间、对象和主题；‎ ‎2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数；‎ ‎3. 专家解读。‎ ‎ [写作要求]‎ 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。‎ ‎ [评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ ‎【答案】Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No. ‎1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.‎ 实战训练五 III. 写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节：基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 最近你们学校组织了一次高三年级学生成人仪式。请根据以下内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯。‎ 对象：全体高三学生共1500多人 时间：2011年5月4日下午三点 地点：学校操场 目的：树立责任意识 过程：1、唱一首感谢父母的歌，拥抱父母；‎ ‎2、宣誓：做合格公民，奉献社会，服务国家。‎ 参考词汇： 成人仪式 coming-of-age ceremony ‎[写作内容]‎ 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 成人仪式的时间、地点、对象;‎ ‎2. 成人仪式的目的、过程;‎ ‎3. 个人感受。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 ‎ More than 1500 students in Senior Three in our school attended the coming-of-age ceremony at 3:00 p.m. on May 4th, 2011 on the playground. The aim of the ceremony is to build up the awareness of students’ responsibility. Students sang a song to appreciate their parents first and then hugged them in the ceremony. Besides, they swore that they would become qualified citizens and devote themselves to society and serve the country. Deeply moved I think the ceremony is of great significance and have a deep influence on us.‎ 实战训练六 第一节：基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中考生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。‎ 活动时间 ‎7月15日‎-22日或‎8月15日-22日 活动内容 参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧 看英语电影 教外宾学中文 ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎ 电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求用英语以书信形式给予答复。‎ ‎1. 选择适合你的时间并说明理由；‎ ‎2. 解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义；‎ ‎3. 说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ 1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。‎ Dear Sir or Madame,‎ ‎ I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.‎ ‎ Thank you very much.‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Ping ‎【评分标准】‎ ‎ 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. ①Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. ②I am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③But it’s a pity that I can only take part in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. ④I would like to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn more about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. ‎ ‎⑤I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, so I am going to attend the camp from August 15th to 22nd. ‎ Thank you very much.‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Ping 第①句顺应已给出的句中的glad心情，表示感谢安排这么多的活动，具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地将活动内容做一介绍。‎ 第②句用简单句表达活动的意义，语意上连贯，句式上没有继续用“长”句，有变化。‎ 第③句用but转折并用it’s a pity 句型表示委婉的歉意，然后解释原因。‎ 第④句用一个长句子表达自己要参加的两个项目，并解释原因，解释原因的第一句用定语从句，第二句用状语从句，使句子结构富于变化。‎ 第⑤句解释参加的时间并给出解释。之所以把时间放在后面，主要是考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间在语意上的连贯性不够。‎