高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练 11页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（11）附参考范文 Passage ***‎ My hometown is a pretty city, so people there 1._____________‎ are kind and polite.With coming of spring, grass and 2. _____________‎ trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors. 3 ______________‎ In summer, the sea under the blue sky is even more 4 ______________‎ beautiful.After autumn arrives, the city looks as 5. _____________‎ an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter, 6. _____________‎ a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can 7. _____________‎ wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long 8. ______________‎ time.While they find fish coming to the surface, 9. _____________‎ they fly down immediate and catch them without 10. ______________‎ delay.That is my city, and I love it so much.‎ ‎【参考答案】Key 8‎ ‎1. so-- and 2. the coming 3. grew--- grow 4. right ‎ ‎5. as--like 6 fallen—falling 7. I--They 8. 去掉more ‎ ‎9. While—When 10.immediate---immediately ‎*********************************************************结束 ‎**********************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文 ‎(1)(25 min.)[来源:1ZXXK]‎ ‎(2019·师大附中二模)某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校和你们小组研究性学习活动的短文。 [来源:学|科|网]‎ 全校研究性学习所涉及的主题 当地风俗习惯 人民生活变化 环境保护 ‎……‎ 你们小组的研究课题 家乡河流的污染问题：‎ ‎1. 发现三大污染源：‎ 工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药；‎ ‎2. 建议：……‎ 感想与体会 ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；‎ ‎3. 词数：不少于120。‎ 参考词汇： agricultural chemicals Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】One possible version：‎ Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in ‎ school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of people's living conditions，and protection of the environment. ‎ Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown. The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell. Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories. Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river. To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it. [来源:1]‎ Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities. We find such research very valuable and helpful. ‎ ‎**********************************************************结束 如何展开你的文章是英文写作必不可少的一步。如果不了解展开文章的技巧和方法，你的写作可能会是一篇糟糕透顶的、令读者大跌胃口的、不能称之为文章的文章。读完下面的tips，也许你会有所感悟。 ‎ I. Writing down ideas ‎ As you begin to plan your writing, you may already have some ideas concerned with points you wish to write. Write them down on a sheet of paper or card as they come to you. ‎ As you continue to study your subject, be sure to add further ideas and information. Your finished list might look something like this: ‎ Topic: The School Library ‎ Ideas: ‎ ‎1. a very well designed modern building ‎ ‎2. a large number of useful books ‎ ‎3. bright and quiet reading rooms ‎ ‎4. patient and helpful librarians... ‎ II. Building a thesis sentence ‎ Having completed your list of ideas, your next step is to build a thesis sentence by organizing those ideas in relation to each other, because while planning writing, you must make certain that you have a central idea in your mind. Such a central idea is called a thesis sentence. ‎ As a thesis sentence indicates the central idea that you will develop in your paper, you should use only one in the writing. ‎ You need not always express a thesis sentence in the paper itself, although you should clearly control the development of any writing that requires one. If you do use such a statement, it had better appear in the very first paragraph. Why? Because it works for the entire writing in the way a topic sentence does in a paragraph. It tells the readers of your paper what the "big idea" is-and also helps you keep on track in developing that idea. ‎ Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example. ‎ From our study of the school library we have got two possible thesis sentences: ‎ ‎1. The library is a nice place to study in. ‎ ‎2. The library plays an important part in both teaching and students' study and life. ‎ III. Making an outline ‎ One useful way of planning a piece of writing is a formal outline. An outline is an organized list of related items of ideas. Some people object to outlining. They ‎ believe that preparing a formal outline steals valuable time from actual writing and that an outline acts as a brake on the free flow of their ideas. Both objections make some sense. But time spent on an outline will be more than repaid when one begins to write. Also, few of us always think logically. So the final step in organizing your ideas is to make an outline. ‎ Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example. ‎ Topic: The School Library ‎ Thesis: The school library plays an important part in both teaching and students' study and life. ‎ Outline: ‎ ‎1. There are bright and quiet reading rooms in the library, so students can study and read in them. ‎ ‎2. Students borrow books from the library when they need reference books for their studies. ‎ ‎3. The library provides students with a large number of useful books ‎***********************************************************结束 短文改错（满分10分）‎ 下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ 例如：‎ It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. Luckily I was ‎ ‎ the am completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday ‎ ‎ on evening.‎ In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy‎ ‎Airport. When he ‎ reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he ‎ discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the ‎ airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but ‎ with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he ‎ caught a next plane back to England. ‎ 参考答案\\ 短文改错（满分10分）‎ In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/ Kennedy‎ ‎Airport. When he ‎ ‎ to[来源:1ZXXK]‎ reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he ‎ arrived still discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the [来源:学&科&网]‎ ‎ couldn’t either[来源:1ZXXK]‎ airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but ‎ ‎ trying that with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he ‎ ‎ no caught a next plane back to England. ‎ ‎ The ‎*********************************************************结束 写作综合练(一) ‎ ‎【1】‎ 假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Jim发来一封email，向你了解我国传统节日端午节的情况，请你根据中文提示和图片利用本单元学过的词汇写一封图文并茂的电子文档发给他。‎ 节日日期：中国农历五月初五 节日由来：爱国诗人屈原——投江自尽——划船找他的尸体——往江中投粽子(以免鱼损伤他的躯体)。‎ 节日活动：家人团聚，观看龙船比赛，吃粽子，纪念先人。‎ 参考词汇：端午节The Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu Festival；农历Lunar calendar；自杀commit suicide；汨罗江Miluo River ‎[来源:学|科|网Z|X|X|K]‎ ‎ [来 ‎ ‎ [来 ‎ ‎【1】---【参考范文】‎ Dear Jim，‎ Thanks for your interest in my country’s traditional festivals．And I’m delighted to introduce The Dragon Boat Festival to you．‎ The Dragon Boat Festival, also known as the Duanwu Festival, is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivals．It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to Chinese Lunar calendar．‎ The festival is said to be in honour of Qu Yuan, a great poet as well as one who tried all his best to help his own country but failed and committed suicide by drowning ‎ himself in Miluo River． The folks respected and loved him so much that they threw zongzi into the river to prevent fish from eating his body． Later it became a custom for people to eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races on that day．‎ Now we can have a oneday holiday on this festival when all family members can stay together and enjoy a big meal． As far as I am concerned, it is a chance for people not only to have a day to have fun, but also a day to recall the memories of our ancestors and to give thanks to the ones who have helped us． Although Qu Yuan was gone, his spirit will always live with us．‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎********************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）‎ ‎3. 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。‎ 调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学 调查对象：高中生 调查人数：1200 调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图）‎ Reading Interests of Senior‎ ‎Middle School Students Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei‎ ‎Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.‎ The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.‎ ‎**********************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文 ‎(1)(25 min.)‎ ‎(2019·师大附中月考)学校学生会正在招募学生干部，你作为一名优秀的高中生，想竞选学生会主席，请你准备一篇不少于120词的竞选演讲稿，内容包括： ‎ ‎1．你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作；‎ ‎2．如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。[来源:1ZXXK]‎ 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇： 学生会主席chairman of the Students' Union Dear fellow students，‎ It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Students' Union. ________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】One possible version：‎ Dear fellow students，‎ It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union. Who is the best candidate? The answer is: me, nobody but me.‎ As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the work. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports，I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.‎ If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will take innovative measures to make the Union a true assistance to students' study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students. I promise that I'll become your voice, representing every need of yours. ‎ So, my wise friends, vote for yourself and vote for me — that's because I am your hope and your best choice! Thank you! ‎ ‎**********************************************************结束 ‎(201**郑州质检)‎ We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________‎ study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________‎ and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________‎ take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________‎ There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________‎ such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________‎ However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________‎ every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________‎ and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________‎ that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________‎ 答案与解析：‎ ‎1．healthy→health　这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。‎ ‎2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。‎ ‎3．help→helps　这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。‎ ‎4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。‎ ‎5．去掉them　这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。‎ ‎6．swim→swimming　应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。‎ ‎7．去掉in　every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。‎ ‎8．giving→given　这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。‎ ‎9．take前加to　此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。‎ ‎10．√‎ ‎**********************************************************************结束