2011-2015高考英语真题短文改错及答案 16页

高考短文改错 1‎ ‎2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)‎ I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.‎ 第一节（10分，每小题1分）‎ ‎ 1.cousin – cousin’s 2. rich – richer 3.on --- in 4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy ‎ ‎6.faced --- face 7. Late --- Later 8.slow --- slowly 9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never ‎ 高考短文改错 2‎ ‎2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)‎ In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.‎ 注：文章红色部分为需要修改的地方！‎ 第1个考查 主谓一致，were—was;‎ 第2个考查 名词单复数 weeks--week 第3个考查 介词从外面来，介词应该用from.‎ 第4个考查冠词 the--a 第5个考查非限制性定语从句 注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。who后加 was或is 第6个考查非谓语 decide to do sth. making—make 第7个考查代词 指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。‎ 第8个考查动词explain是及物动词，不需要介词。去掉for 第9个考查非谓语做状语用follow---following.‎ 第10个考查连词 because 表示原因，根据上文应该是表示转折关系的连词。‎ because---although/though/but/yet 高考短文改错3‎ ‎2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)‎ Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera ‎ with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I got ‎ back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，‎ ‎ but he signed his name on my shirt!‎ 答案：‎ Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera ‎ making actors with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I got ‎ so／and it back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really ‎ had anywhere disappointing and about to leave when he walked outa building．He was right there in disappointed of the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，‎ ‎ have but he signed his name on my shirt!‎ 高考短文改错 4‎ ‎2011高考英语试题（新课标卷）‎ My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend， he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.‎ 答案：‎ My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ‎                                                                                                   buying Ticket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to ‎                                                                    there Xiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag ‎                a                                            and from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very ‎ ‎          in                                                        were strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my fiend he lent ‎                                          luggage                                           friend’s to me  lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.‎ ‎                                   Felt 高考短文改错 5‎ ‎2012年浙江高考英语试题 Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and ‎ hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did ‎ not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I ‎ was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them ‎ interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that ‎ it was the right thing to do.‎ 第一节 短文改错 Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and ‎ ago 去掉 Unfortunately ‎ ‎ hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did ‎ weeks but ‎ ‎ not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I ‎ would me ‎ ‎ was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them ‎ far ‎ ‎ interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I still think that ‎ interesting the ‎ ‎ it was the right thing to do.‎ 高考短文改错 6‎ ‎2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)‎ Dear Diana,‎ Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.‎ Much love ‎ Fiona ‎ 答案：‎ Dear Diana,‎ Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring ‎ ‎ had of ‎ Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had ‎ ‎ Unfortunately ‎ been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of ‎ ‎ as ‎ traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there ‎ ‎ miles ‎ unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧ car ‎ until/till there a drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ ‎ ‎ We ‎ and made our own way to home.‎ ‎ 去掉 高考短文改错7‎ ‎2012全国英语高考真题 陕西卷 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.‎ It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.‎ 答案：1.visit----visited 2.but----so/and 3.go to---to去掉 4.comfortably----comfortable 5.were---was 6.for---with 7.taking---taken 8.dish---dishes 9.such后加a 10.me---mine.‎ 高考短文改错 8‎ ‎2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)‎ I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy.‎ ‎ I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.‎ 答案：‎ 第一行：因为与more patient对应，little要改为less 第二行：each of 后面要用可数名词复数toy要改为toys 第三行：do sb. Wrong意思为冤枉某人，不符合句意。改为go wrong或过去时went wrong意思是“出问题”，“出毛病”符合句意。‎ 第四行：与toys对应，故it要改为复数them。Parents指代不明，所以要加上my。‎ 第五行：由句意“发生了什么事”，可知which哪个不对，应该为what。由后文said可知tear要用过去式tore。‎ 第六行：为某人买玩具应该用for而不是to。‎ 第七行：由found out that with patience可知must语气太强，应该为could或might。‎ 高考短文改错 9‎ ‎2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）‎ Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?‎ 答案：1.difficult----difficulty.2.hardly---hard 3.asking---asked 4.to copy 去掉to 5.think---thinking 6.all---both ‎7.same前加the 8.tests---test 9.so---or 10.does---did 高考短文改错 10‎ ‎ 2013年浙江省高考英语试卷真题 Dear Diary, ‎ Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else ‎ I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, ‎ Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.‎ Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. ‎ Yours,‎ Rosemary 答案：‎ Dear Diary, ‎ Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other ‎ ‎ moved another one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else ‎ ‎ classmates and I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, ‎ ‎ worse ‎ Maggie. Tomorrow is∧ first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.‎ ‎ the/my tired asleep Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. are Yours,‎ Rosemary 高考短文改错 11‎ ‎2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)‎ Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.‎ 答案：1.with—on 2.so去掉 3.have—has 4.healthy—health 5.which---what ‎6.visit前加a 7.her---his 8.step—stepped 9.picture---pictures 10.many—much 高考短文改错 12‎ ‎2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）‎ ‎      My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.‎ One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.‎ 答案：‎ ‎ My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.‎ One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and ‎ ‎ went our headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. ‎ ‎ ‎ Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted ‎ After impatient to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a ‎ ‎ but was sudden pull at the pole and ∧fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my ‎ ‎ a minutes grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and ‎ ‎ feeling barbecued the fish. It was delicious.‎ 高考短文改错 13‎ ‎2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)‎ The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.‎ 答案：1.of去掉 2.Have—Having 3.that---which 4.becomes---become 5.day前加the 6.Interesting---Interestingly 7.by---with/to 8.drank—drunk 9.cup—cups 10.grow—growth 高考短文改错 14‎ ‎2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)‎ I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.‎ I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.‎ 答案：‎ I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only ‎ ‎ hold four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.‎ ‎ passed I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black ‎ ‎ well / clearly shoulders toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,∧he was ‎ ‎‎ to / into him and strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do ‎ ‎ when homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.‎ ‎ Ever 高考短文改错 15‎ ‎2014年高考辽宁卷 第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ Dear Jeremy and Alice,‎ Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.‎ We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are. ‎ We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.‎ Dear Jeremy and Alice，‎ Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to(去掉) us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.‎ We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to ‎ times understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking understand have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends ‎ has Besides to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before ‎ ‎ an started ‎5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.‎ ‎ close We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure ∧ a ‎ your out good way of settling the matter.‎ ‎ Sincerely, ‎ ‎ Jack and Rose ‎【答案】去掉us前面的to ‎ ‎【试题解析】动词bother困扰，麻烦；这是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要使用介词to。‎ ‎2. 【答案】time改为times ‎ ‎【试题解析】本句中的time表示“次数”，是一个可数名词，前面有several修饰，说明使用复数形式。‎ ‎3. 【答案】understanding改为understand ‎ ‎【试题解析】本句中的it是一个形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式结构to understand why….；不定式结构中to后面要接动词原形。‎ ‎4. 【答案】have改为has ‎ ‎【试题解析】本句的主语是单个的动名词短语the early morning barking，做主语时，谓语动词要使用单数形式。‎ ‎5. 【答案】beside改为beside ‎ ‎【试题解析】介词beside以为“在…旁边”；本句中的besides是一个副词“而且”，单独使用，表示递进关系。‎ ‎6. 【答案】bark后面的a改为an ‎ ‎【试题解析】名词average是以元音开始的单词，所以使用an修饰average of…。‎ ‎7. 【答案】starts改为started ‎ ‎【试题解析】本句叙述的是具体早晨发生的事情，也就是过去所发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时started。‎ ‎8. 【答案】closely改为close ‎ ‎【试题解析】本句how close the houses are中的close本应该是在系动词are的后面，构成系表结构are close。Closely是一个副词，副词通常不能和许系动词连用构成系表结构的。‎ ‎9. 【答案】our改为your ‎ ‎【试题解析】句义：我们很欣赏你的歉意。根据后面的you可知对方是来道歉的。‎ ‎10. 【答案】figure后面加out ‎ ‎【试题解析】固定搭配figure out找到，算出。我们希望你能够找到一个解决问题的好方法。‎ 高考短文改错 16‎ ‎2014年陕西卷 第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. ‎ ‎ One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.‎ ‎ That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!‎ 短文改错 ‎【答案与解析】want ∧teach-to。want后跟非谓语动词做宾语时用动词不定式，to不能省略。‎ ‎【答案与解析】come-came。本文主体时态是一般过去式，故come改为came。‎ ‎【答案与解析】have-having。前一句已有谓语动词，have做伴随状语，逻辑主语是句子的主语，与逻辑主语是主动关系，且与谓语动词动作同事进行，故用v-ing形式。‎ ‎【答案与解析】immediate-immediately。修饰动词jumped，应用副词immediately。‎ ‎【答案与解析】on-at。介词与shot构成搭配，意思是“向……瞄准”，故介词用at。‎ ‎【答案与解析】Neither-None。前文中未提到箭的数量，但根据意思可以推断出射出的不止两支，故此处不定代词应表示“（三者以上）都不……”，用none。‎ ‎【答案与解析】was-were。主语是复数arrows，动词也要用复数。‎ ‎【答案与解析】were或looked去掉。主语与谓语之间不是被动关系，故去掉助动词were。‎ ‎【答案与解析】but-and。根据句意可知前后两句是顺延关系，无转折之一，故用and。‎ ‎【答案与解析】a-an。冠词后的形容词impressive第一个音素是元音，故不定冠词用an。‎ 高考短文改错 17‎ ‎2014新课标二卷 第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)‎ ‎ 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)‎ ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ My dream school starts at 8:‎30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.‎ My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.‎ My dream school starts at 8:‎30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson ‎ There ‎ in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework.‎ ‎ don’t much ‎ Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading ‎ for ‎ for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.‎ ‎ hours My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers ‎ ‎ looks and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the ‎ ‎ sit lake listening∧ music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our ‎ to helpful ‎ teachers but also our friends. ‎ 高考短文改错 18‎ ‎2014年新课标一卷 第四部分写作（共两节；满分35分）‎ 第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ ‎ 假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 ‎10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处 加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ 1． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits ‎ are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! ‎ 高考短文改错 19‎ ‎2014年四川高考试题 第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）‎ Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.‎ 短文改错 Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm ‎ ‎ about go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait∧ your teacher to lead you outside.‎ goes for ‎ Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet ‎ ‎ classmates try ‎ and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no ‎ ‎ calm the fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing ‎ ‎ you and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.‎ or ‎【答案与解析】‎ ‎1.with改为about。考查介词。此处应为talk about something“谈论关于某事”。‎ ‎2.go改为goes。考查主谓一致。主语a fire alarm为单数，故谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式。‎ ‎3.wait后加for。考查介词。此处wait为不及物动词，后接宾语时需加上介词for。‎ ‎4.classmate改为classmates。考查名词。此处表达同班同学应为复数形式。‎ ‎5.trying改为try。考查非谓语动词。此处为祈使句，应以动词原形开头。‎ ‎6.calm改为calmly。考查形容词和副词。此句remain为系动词，后接形容词作表语。‎ ‎7.a改为the。考查冠词。第二次提到某一名词，需特指。‎ ‎8.us改为you。考查代词。根据句意：你的老师会带你们回教室。‎ ‎9.去掉when。考查从属连词。根据句意，如果你注意到有人失踪或受伤……，可知此处是that引导的宾语从句表陈述，故when多余。‎ ‎10.and改为or。考查并列连词。根据句意，有人不见或者受伤。‎ 高考短文改错 20‎ ‎2014年全国新课标卷 第II卷 第四部分 写作(共两节.满分35分)‎ 第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)‎ ‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边 横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:‎ ‎ 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜 线划掉。‎ ‎ 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意:原行没有错的不要改。‎ All of us need friendship. The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes， “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can. The more friends we have，the more we can learn for one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎76.正确。7.mean---means 78.trusting---trust 79.him---them 80.去掉to ‎ ‎81.really---real 82.should后加be 83.that---as 84.for---from 85.but---and ‎ 高考短文改错 21‎ ‎2014年高考浙江卷 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ ‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ ‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.‎ ‎ Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.‎ ‎ No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.‎ ‎1.去掉had 本文叙述的是过去发生的一件事情，不需要使用过去完成时，因为过去完成时表示的是过去的过去的事情。句意：我注意到车厢里很吵闹都是人。‎ ‎2.noise改为noisy ‎ 本句中应该使用形容词noisy和系动词was构成系表结构，修饰车里当时的情况。同时noisy与后面的形容词短语filled with…构成并列关系。‎ ‎3.comes改为came 因为本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时的时态。列车员过来检票。‎ ‎4.but改为and 句意：一位乘客找不到自己的票，很难受。上下文之间是顺接关系，所以使用and。But表示上下文之间的转折关系。‎ ‎5.searching后面加for 根据句意可知每个人都帮助他找票。固定搭配search for sth寻找sth；‎ ‎6.his改为its/the 句意：这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的。Its指代the ticket。‎ ‎7.a改为the 使用定冠词the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那张票。‎ ‎8.previoes改为previously 本句中应该使用副词previously作状语，修饰谓语动词。形容词previous通常作为定语或者表语，不能做状语。‎ ‎9.strangers改为stranger 句意：他们如此迅速地给与陌生人他们的帮助。本句中的陌生人就是指那张票的主人，是一个单数形式。‎ ‎10.on改为in 固定搭配in need需要。句意：如果我们向那些需要帮助的人表示关心，这个世界就会变得更美好。‎ 高考短文改错 22‎ ‎2015年全国一卷短文改错（10分）‎ When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .‎ 高考短文改错 23‎ ‎2015年高考陕西英语试卷---短文改错 My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement ‎ party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum ‎ taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the ‎ biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.‎ At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”‎ My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!‎ ‎ 高考短文改错 24‎ ‎2015年全国二卷英语短文改错 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.‎ 高考短文改错 25‎ ‎2015年四川高考短文改错 Hi, Janice,‎ ‎ It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.‎ As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?‎ Please help with me and give me some advice.‎ Grave