2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练17 7页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（17）附参考范文 短文改错 He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评).‎ ‎ Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).‎ 参考答案：‎ He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up ‎ ‎ but to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her ‎ ‎ his[来源:学。科。网Z。X。X。K]‎ music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a ‎ ‎ up suffered storm of criticism(批评).‎ ‎ Chou was reported ∧be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only ‎ ‎ to show was[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, ‎ ‎ later Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).‎ ‎ Increase ‎****************************************************结束 ‎ （1） ‎ 请根据下面提供的情景, 写一篇100词左右的短文。 ‎ Your friend Lily tells you, "I am suffering from depression (沮丧, 消沉). I have trouble sleeping. I'm often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless. I don't enjoy anything. I am never happy. I don't laugh or smile any more." You need to give her some suggestions and tell her what she should do. ‎ 参考范文 第一篇：‎ One possible version: ‎ Lily, don't be upset. I have some pieces of advice for you. First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs, because music has been proved to have great effect on smoothing pressure. If you still feel depressed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you will believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. Of course, you had better try to find any good friend you can trust to talk to. I do hope these will help you. Please believe tomorrow will be better and our life will be full of sunshine!‎ ‎************************************************结束 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning             ‎ Province in June, in 1965． When I was a child, I dreamed of flying  ‎ in the sky． I joined the army in June, 1983． In 1992, I was sent to   ‎ the air force base． In August, 2019, I was one of the first 14 members ‎ from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination． I worked hardly, ‎ because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 2019 .       ‎ ‎20090318‎ I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．[来源:Z§xx§k.Com]‎ On Oct．15, 2019, I successfully fly to space, circled      ‎ around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ． I was honored     ‎ to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．      ‎ 参考答案短文改错 ‎1．farmer改为farmer,s ‎2． 去掉1965前面的in ‎ ‎3． an air force base。‎ ‎4． 把hardly改为hard ‎5．把because改为so ‎6．在chosen后加as ‎7． manned ‎8． flew ‎ ‎9． 把circle改为circles ‎ ‎10． 在have后面加been ‎ ‎**************************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）‎ ‎4. 目前，全区上下都在大力开展城乡清洁工程的活动。为了响应政府的号召，‎3月25日，星期天，你们班参加了一次校外环境卫生清洁活动。请根据图画所提供的信息，用英语写一篇日记，并谈谈你的看法。 （为方便排版，图见下页）‎ ‎ 注意： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、完整； 2. 词数：100左右。‎ Sunday, March 25 Fine ‎　　Today our class went out to do some cleaning. We gathered at the school gate and started out early in the morning. Some collected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and others swept the street. We hoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands. At the same time some of us went to the public places, where there were a lot of people. We kept on telling people not to destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world. ‎ ‎ In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the importance of protecting the environment at present.‎ ‎*********************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类 ‎11. 如你是学生会主席，请根据下面图表，用英语写一则关于春游的通知。‎ 参加者 高中一、二年级的学生 活动内容 ‎1.去博物馆看《人与自然》的展览。‎ ‎2.参加泉山植物园。‎ 集合地点 学校大门前 集合时间 ‎1. ‎4月25日上午乘校车前往；‎ ‎2.早上七点集合，七点二十分开车。‎ 注意事项 ‎1.参观展览时保持安静；并认真记笔记，准备回来后讨论。‎ ‎2.在山顶野餐，要自带午餐和饮料。‎ ‎3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.通知必须包括表内所列内容，可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节，使其连贯、完整。‎ ‎2.词数：100左右。 3.通知时间：‎‎4月24日 ‎4.生词：植物园the botanical garden; 报名sign up for; 学生会the Students' Union Notice The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two will go out for a visit on April 25. We'll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature. When you’re ‎ in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.‎ Our school bus will take us there. The school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:‎00 a.m.‎ Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday.‎ The Students’ Union ‎ April 24‎ ‎*************************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类 ‎12. 假设你是浙江大学的老师，你将在开学典礼上向一年级的新生致辞。请你根据下面的提示写一篇演讲稿就大学的学习生活提出几点要求，并适当阐述其重要性。‎ ‎①．合理安排学习和生活 ②．同学之间关系融洽 ③．积极参加校园社团活动 。。。。。。‎ 参考词汇：大学一年级新生 freshman n. 社团 society n.‎ 注意：1)．演讲稿必须包括所有提示要点，但不要逐条译成英语。‎ ‎2)．演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 3)．词数：100—120‎ Good morning, everybody. Welcome to Zhejiang‎ ‎University! ‎ As a freshman, you are going to have a completely new life. So here is something you should keep in mind.‎ First, arrange your time properly. You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and take advantage of every minute. It will make your work more efficient. Living in the university, sometimes you will face some problems that you can’t deal with all alone. Then help from others will make things easy for you. So get along well with all the people around you. Always be open-minded and warm-hearted. Don’t speak ill of others at will. You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family. At last, take an active part in societies. Societies at school are your second teachers. It will not only provide you more chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but make your school life rich and colorful as well.‎ Enjoy your university life!‎ ‎***********************************************************结束[来源:学+科+网]‎ 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类[来源:学_科_网]‎ ‎15. 假如你是王林， 李明是你的好友， 他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋职（apply for a position）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。‎ 词数110左右。‎ 姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国 出生地 重庆 婚否 已婚 出生日期 ‎1980.8.21‎ 通讯地址 重庆市人民路148号 电话 ‎023-63335550‎ 职业 律师[来源:Z#xx#k.Com]‎ 学历 大学毕业 外语水平 擅长英语， 懂一些日语、德语 其他[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 有三年工作经历，办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处 Dear Mr. Brown,‎ I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm. He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyerever since. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, ‎1980 in Chongqing‎, ‎China. He is married and lives at No ‎148 Renmin Road‎, ‎Chongqing city. His telephone number is 023-63335550. He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I’m sure he will be fit for the position. ‎ I’m looking forward to your early reply.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Wang Lin ‎**********************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类 ‎16. 假如你是业余气象员，你从电台天气预报节目得知了今晚和明天上午你处的天气情况，晚饭后6点钟在校广播室用英语向全体师生作天气预报，并提出忠告。要点如下： ‎ ‎①午夜至凌晨两点有强劲北风。 ②气温将下降5-8度。‎ ‎③明天上午有阵雨。 ④要求同学们今晚离开教室时关好门窗。‎ ‎⑤明天早上起床时多穿些衣服，以防感冒。 词数100在右。‎ Attention, please.‎ It is six o'clock in the afternoon. I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual. From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5‎-8℃‎.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning. Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning, please put on more clothes in order to keep yourself from catching cold.‎ That's all. Thank you.‎ ‎************************************************************结束 高考英语：写作综合训练集 写作【看图写话篇】‎ A[来源:Z|xx|k.Com]‎ 假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“A Volunteer Day”的英文稿件。‎ 请根据以下四幅图所提供的情景，叙述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活动的完整过程。 注意： ‎ ‎1、短文的开头已为你写好。 ‎2、词数不少于60。 提示词语： patrol vt. 巡视 trim vt. 修整 ‎【参考范文】----Possible version:‎ Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.‎ ‎ At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.‎ ‎ What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever. (184)‎ 本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面并按照时间顺序展开叙述。‎ 考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。‎ ‎ 还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。   ‎ ‎*************************************************************结束 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（） 划掉。[来源:学+科+网Z+X+X+K]‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things. Now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ very →so straightly →straight polluting →polluted was →were Unless →If ‎ be →be do →does ‎ what →how measure →measures ‎ water →the water ‎*********************************************************结束[来源:学_科_网Z_X_X_K]‎