高考英语短文改错答题技巧 34页

高考英语短文改错答题技巧 ‎　　短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力.进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力考生英语水平的高低完全可以从这一题型体现出来然而很多考生对该题感到束手无策.关键在于找不到错误、不会找错误。那么怎样找错误、发现错误就成了解题的关键。‎ ‎　　短文改错解题思路和检查原则：‎ ‎　　1.句中各部分的结构是否完整，特别是每个句子要有动词;‎ ‎　　2. 谓语动词的时态、语态;‎ ‎　　3.非谓语动词的用法;‎ ‎　　4.名词的单、复数，格的使用是否正确;‎ ‎　　5.定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;‎ ‎　　6.代词的格和性的使用是否有误;‎ ‎　　7.定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;‎ ‎　　8.并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。短文改错解题四原则：改动以最少为原则; 虚词以添加或删除为原则; 实词以改变词形为原则以保持句子原意为原则。短文改错解题步骤：通读全文，掌握大意; 整句分析，逐行推敲 ‎　　反复通读，复查验证。解题注意要点和能力培养：‎ ‎　　1.核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。‎ ‎　　2.核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。‎ ‎　　3.核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。‎ ‎　　短文改错常见错误类型：‎ ‎　　1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 Theydid not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote allmy time to my studies.(did改为do，错误类型属于①) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. (visiting 改为visited, 错误类型属于②) There will an important game next month. (will后加be,错误类型属于④) One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. ( was 改为were，错误类型属于③)‎ ‎　　2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects) Their word were a great encouragement to me.(word改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge)‎ ‎　　3. 连词错误 连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词，一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式，改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折，but改为and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”，不能再跟but连用，所以去掉but)‎ ‎　　4. 冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We maybe one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the，the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词，所以其前加a) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词，故have后加a)‎ ‎　　5. 形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词，terribly改为terrible.)‎ ‎　　6. 代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I / me;he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词 ‎(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。 Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为myself) One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.(to前加it) If anyone of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. (other后加s) What’s more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. (him改为them)‎ ‎　　7. 非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词，talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(go作主语,应改为going) Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语，read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致，故saw改为seeing)‎ ‎8. 介词错误：词组中的介词误用;介词意思理解偏差;介词的多用或少用 There are too many people among my family. (among改为in，in my family 为固定搭配) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the ‎ moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉at, the moment 引导从句)‎ 倒数十天之短文改错 ‎1假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎  Dear Peter,‎ ‎     As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.‎ ‎     One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.‎ ‎     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.‎ ‎  All the best!  ‎ ‎                                                               Yours,                                                                Li Hua ‎2.   ‎ ‎    In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn． Some families ‎ are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies． ‎ ‎3.   ‎ Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid saved. ‎ ‎  I was proud with what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.‎ ‎4.   ‎ Last Tuesday, the Students' Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter saying it's best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they've already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they've devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us. ‎ ‎5.    I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life. So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school. We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time. ‎ ‎6.    ‎ ‎     My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.      One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. ‎ ‎      That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! ‎ ‎7.    ‎ Dear Angela, I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home. My home is at No.58, Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll see our school on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it’s easy for you to reach. As a bus stop is just next to my home, Bus No.23 will direct take you there. I can’t wait to seeing you in China. Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎8.   ‎ It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the another side of the street.‎ ‎9.   ‎ My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.‎ ‎     One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.‎ ‎     That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!‎ ‎10.   ‎ This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying. They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The lady is Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took it. She sings high praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English.‎ ‎11.   ‎ ‎    I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and ‎ give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.‎ ‎12.   ‎ ‎    I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl as well as her classmates were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move . The young man didn’t know how to do .I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her the hospital at once .One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking .I think it is danger to drive very fast .‎ ‎13.   ‎ When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.‎ ‎14.   ‎ Something was happened while I was ill. While I was hugging me with pain, my two beautiful dogs lay right beside me. They were squeezed in the sofa so tight that I could hardly move. They were my comfort. While I was in my own little world of sickness, the weather outside becomes warm. People were cutting away the dead brown branch, ready new blooms. I walked outside and to my astonished, my hedge was blooming, due to which my illness seemed to take a turn for the better.‎ Today, I feel so thankful to my health. Maybe sometimes we really need to feel painful, so that we can appreciate the time where we feel good. That is so easy not to care too much how other people feel or what they are going through.‎ ‎15.   ‎ Dear Diary,‎ Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make things bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.‎ ‎　　Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir(纪念品) from my past life and my only friend.‎ Yours,‎ Rosemary ‎16.   ‎ ‎    Once, when l was a teenager, my father and l were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.‎ ‎    This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.  Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well- behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands.  They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.‎ ‎17.   ‎ I’m glad to hear the news what you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is the beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler once visits Hangzhou, and was struck by its beautifully scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest city with a long history. It was the capital of several dyn asties. As a result, it has a lot famous temples and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around, attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during your stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.‎ ‎18.    ‎ Dear David, I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can’t stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It’s time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice. Looking forward to your reply! ‎ ‎19.  ‎ ‎ The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of disease caused by pollution. In order to ‎ live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world. Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful. ‎ ‎20.    Dear Angela, I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home. My home is at No.58, Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll see our school on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it’s easy for you to reach. As a bus stop is just next to my home, Bus No.23 will direct take you there. I can’t wait to seeing you in China. Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1.  ‎ ‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎     As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some  examples.‎ ‎     One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example ‎                                                         is                                        used is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came ‎                            you                                                                                                              like on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you from                                                                                                                 ‎ ‎             others                 widely achieve your purpose in ＾very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.‎ ‎                                        a ‎     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, ＾you'll know more about our language and culture.‎ ‎                                                                                                    and ‎ All the best!  ‎ ‎                                                               Yours,                                                                Li Hua ‎        2.  ‎ ‎ In my village a lot of children have left school for many different ．Some families are  poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents  do not think it  to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than ​ let them go to school．I feel worried  this．I think every  should have the opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary  us to care about the children，because one day they will play  important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from  off their studies．‎ ‎       ‎ ‎ 3.  ‎ ‎1第一句把usually改为usual ‎2第二句把while改为when ‎3第二句把hear改为heard ‎4第四句把shocking改为shocked ‎5第四句故去掉the ‎6第四句把peoples改为people ‎7 第五句把but改为and ‎8第七句把his改为my ‎9第七句在saved的前面加was ‎10 第八句把with改为of ‎        4.  ‎ ‎【小题1】第一句中的shall→should或去掉shall ‎ ‎【小题2】第一句中的specially→special ‎ ‎        5.  did---do         6.  My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted ∧ teach me about                                                                       to   animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.                                  came       One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My                                        having   uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly      immediately                          ‎ at        None ‎ ‎  the arrows was flying down at us from the sky —  they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but          were                                删除were或looked                and    fortunately no one was injured.      That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about                                                               an gravity!            7.  ‎ 略 ‎        8.  ‎ ‎   It was^ quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a ‎           a                                                                                    reading couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her ‎                hours                            heard                                                                                              their Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady ‎                                                                                               But said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have ‎                                                                      invite been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my ‎                                                                                                                                      happily husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the another side ‎                                                                                                                                                           other of the street. ‎ ‎        9.  ‎ ‎ My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted ∧ teach me about ‎                                                                              to animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.‎ ‎                                          came ‎      One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles ‎                                                 having immediatejumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the immediately                              at            none arrows was  flying down at us from the sky —  they were looked like rain! We ran to escape ‎       were                                      删除were或looked  ‎ butfortunately no one was injured.‎ and ‎     That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about ‎                                                                                 an gravity!‎ ‎        10.  ‎ This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a ‎ ‎                                             shoe                                                                                                                              talking    ‎ salesgirl.But the ‎  salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying.They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The ‎ ‎                                             what                                                                          worried  ‎ lady is∧Australian. ‎ ‎            an      ‎ She wanted to buy a pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she ‎ ‎                                                         ‎ ‎                                                                                              删除much took it. She sings high ‎      them       sang   ‎ ‎ praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English.‎ ‎                                            Both                                                                                                                         freely ‎        11.  ‎ ‎ I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I ‎                                                                                        on                                                       giving teach them, play with them, ^watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to ‎ ‎                                             and                                                                                 am                                              it be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take ‎ ‎                                                  knowledge                                     well good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.‎ ‎                     them                                                                                                                       come ‎       ‎ ‎ 12.  ‎ ‎  I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl as well as her classmates were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The was                                                                  when young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off ‎                                                                     but his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move . The young man didn’t know how to do .‎ ‎                                             badly                                                                                           what I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her^ the hospital at once .‎ ‎                                                                                            arrived                      to One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking .‎ ‎                  policemen I think it is danger to drive very fast .‎ ‎                 dangerous ‎        13.  ‎ think-thought ‎ in countryside-in the countryside ‎ or- and ‎ on the development-with the development ‎ have been shown-have shown ‎ seriously-serious ‎ airs-air ‎ Much-Many ‎ found-find ‎ your-our ‎ ‎        14.  ‎ ‎1. 第一句 was 去掉 ‎ ‎2. 第二句 me→myself ‎ ‎3. 第三句 tight→tightly ‎ ‎4. 第五句 becomes→became ‎ ‎5. 第六句 branch→branches ‎ ‎6. 第六句ready 和new之间加for ‎ ‎7. 第七句 astonished→astonishment ‎ ‎8.  第八句 to→for ‎9.   第九句where→when ‎10. 第十句That→It ‎       ‎ ‎ 15.  ‎ ‎1.删除 far；‎ ‎2.move改为moved；‎ ‎3.other改为another；‎ ‎4.classmate改为classmates;‎ ‎5.or 改为 and；‎ ‎6.bad 改为worse;‎ ‎7.of school中间加my；‎ ‎8.tiring改为tired；‎ ‎9.sleep改为asleep；‎ ‎10.is改为are。‎ ‎        ‎ ‎        17.  ‎ ‎  I’m glad to hear the news what you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is ‎                                 that the beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler a                                                                                       Italian once visits Hangzhou, and was struck by its beautifully scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest city ‎     visited                                 beautiful                                        cities ‎  with a long history. It was the capital of several dyn  asties. As a ‎ result, it has a lot famous temples ‎                                                                                               of and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around,‎ ‎                                                               and ‎ attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during your ‎                                     ‎ ‎ stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.‎ ‎                                          seeing ‎        18.  ‎ ‎【小题1】stay改成 staying ‎ ‎【小题2】how改成why ‎ ‎        19.  ‎ ‎【小题1】seriously---serious ‎ ‎【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉 ‎ ‎        20.  five-minutes 改为five-minute         21.  ‎ ‎【小题1】general改成generally ‎ ‎【小题2】followed改成following ‎ ‎        22.  ‎ ‎【小题1】general改成generally ‎ ‎【小题2】followed改成following ‎ ‎        23.  ‎ Andrew is a 28－year－old American man，life is very difficult because he  born without arms or legs．Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked like a monster．Doing normal things seemed  to him．However，Andrew never gave up，and after many failures，be finally  to swim，fish and even surf．Most ，he completed university and earned  two degrees．Now he is the CEO of two ．‎ ‎    When ​ about the secret of his succss，Andrew's answer is：Attitude is altitude．To him，nothing is impossible if  has enough determitmtion to overcome difficulties．He thinks a positive attitude is the key  success．‎ ‎        24.  ‎ Dear Sir，‎ I readadvertisement in yesterday's China Daily．I feel I am qualifiedthe job in your company．I'm 20 old and in good health．Alter graduation from a middle school．I studied English for six years，and I alsobookkeeping，typewriting and public relations．I do  in ‎ operating PC and  a good command of English．I'm  in the position of a secretary．I want very much  be accepted by your  company．I'll work hard  I can be a member in your company．‎ Li Hua             ‎ ‎       ‎ ‎        25.  ‎ ‎ 【小题1】a—an 【小题2】flower--flowers 【小题3】see--seeing 【小题4】to--with 【小题5】mustn’t—couldn’t 【小题6】去掉who/加上are 【小题7】加上upon 【小题8】promise--promised 【小题9】left--leaving 【小题10】去掉the ‎ ‎        26.  ‎ ‎ 【小题1】which------who 【小题2】but------and/so 【小题3】Our------My 【小题4】won’t------don’t 【小题5】play 和guitar之间加the 【小题6】把jion in中的in去掉 【小题7】got------get 【小题8】For------At/On 【小题9】relaxed------relaxing 【小题10】get------getting ‎ ‎        27.  ‎ ‎1. ... in his late forty ...           forty → forties ‎ ‎2. ... especial in my ...          especial → especially ‎ ‎3. Besides, I know ...              Besides → However ‎ ‎4. Once I fail ...                  fail → failed ‎ ‎5. ... angry and disappointing.    disappointing → disappointed ‎ ‎6. On contrary ...                contrary前加the ‎ ‎7. ... offered him a few...        him → me ‎ ‎8. ... one and two ...            and → or ‎ ‎9. ... learn anything from ...      anything → something ‎ ‎10. ... say thank you for ...        for → to ‎ ‎        28.  ‎ ‎51.difficulty改为difficult ‎52. hardly改为hard ‎53. asking改为asked ‎54.let her to中去掉to ‎55.think改为thinking ‎56.all 改为both ‎57.same前加the ‎58.tests 改为test.‎ ‎59.so改为or ‎60.does改为did ‎        29.  ‎ ‎(1)to think 改为 think ‎(2)walk 改为 walked  ‎ ‎(3)less 改为 more 或去less  ‎ ‎(4)wore 改为 worn ‎ ‎(5)customer 改为 customers ‎ ‎(6)all others 改为 others 或all the others  ‎ ‎(7)after 改为 when/on/upon  ‎ ‎(8)we 改为 they ‎ ‎(9)hundreds 改为 hundred  ‎ ‎(10)for 改为 in/within ​ ‎ ‎        30.  ‎ ‎​‎ ‎       ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎1.  ‎ 文章介绍随着网络的迅速发展，出现了一些新的词汇。‎ ‎1. are ----is。one of the most popular words后面的谓语是单数。‎ ‎2.use----used。Dianzan和use是被动关系。‎ ‎3. we ---- you。这篇文章主要使用第二人称。‎ ‎4. liked ---like。这篇文章主要使用一般现在时。‎ ‎5. on---- from。使用短语come from来自。‎ ‎6. other ---others。这里泛指“其他人”用others。‎ ‎7.wide ----widely。修饰动词used用副词。‎ ‎8. in后加a。in a very short time在一段很短的时间里。泛指“一段很短的时间”用不定冠词。very是辅音音素开头的单词。‎ ‎9.去掉will。if引导的时间状语从句，用一般现在时代替一般将来时。‎ ‎10. you’ll前加and。使用句型：祈使句+and/or+简单句。而且两句话是顺承关系。用and连接。‎ ‎2.  ‎ 略 ‎3.  ‎ ‎1第一句句意：上周六，我像往常一样去图书馆。像往常一样as usual。故把usually改为usual。‎ ‎2第二句句意：大约中午时分，我正在在湖边读书，就在那时，我突然听到有人哭着喊救命。when就在那时，相当于at then，而while是“在…期间”的意思。故把while改为when。‎ ‎3第二句中，由于是描述过去的事情，应该用一般过去式，故把hear改为heard。‎ ‎4第四句中，表示人感到震惊用-ed形容词，故把shocking改为shocked。‎ ‎5第四句中，抽象的远处用in distance，故去掉the。‎ ‎6第四句中，people是集合名词，后面不用加s，故把peoples改为people。‎ ‎7 第五句中，“took off my coat”与“jumped into the water quickly”不是转折关系，是顺承关系，故把but改为and。‎ ‎8第七句中，根据句意，应该是“让我安慰的是”，故把his改为my。‎ ‎9第七句句意：小孩得救了。kid与save是动宾关系，应该用被动语态，故在saved的前面加was。‎ ‎10 第八句中，“以…为骄傲”应该是be proud of，故把with改为of。‎ ‎4.  ‎ ‎【小题1】第一句中的shall→should或去掉shall advise后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，即谓语动词要使用“should＋动词原形”的形式，should可以省去，即删去shall也正确。 【小题2】第一句中的specially→special something是不定代词，形容词可以作后置定语修饰不定代词，但是副词不可以修饰不定代词。 【小题3】第二句中的it前加to respond是不及物动词，若要跟宾语，后面需要加to。 【小题4】第三句中的best前加the 最高级前面通常要加定冠词。 ‎ ‎ 【小题5】第三句中的appreciations→appreciation 此处appreciation表示“感激”，属于不可数名词，不可数名词没有复数形式。 【小题6】第四句中的will去掉 some...others...属于表示列举的固定句型，前后的时态应该保持一致，根据上句的“Some choose...”，可知此处应用一般现在时。 【小题7】第六句中的which→what which引导名词性从句时有疑问含义what引导名词性从句时可以没有疑问含义，相当于sth.that...，在本句中相当于the things that...；也可以有疑问含义，此时与which的区别在于是否有范围限制。 【小题8】第六句中的bring→bringing devote sth.to doing sth.属于固定搭配，表示“投入时间/努力/金钱等在……上面”，其中to是介词，后跟动名词形式。 【小题9】第七句中的mean→means 动名词作主语，谓语动词需用单数形式。 【小题10】第七句中的us→ourselves 作宾语的代词为主语本身时，需用其反身代词形式。 ‎ ‎5.  ‎ 去周末学校补习在我们学生们中非常流行。好的周末学校有优秀的教师，他们能够帮助提高我们的学习成绩，此外，我们还可以认识很多来自别的学校的学生，了解他们的校园生活。但是不好的方面是，周末学校的学习会增加我们的课业负担，所以对此人们要慎重考虑。 【小题1】did---do。考查动词时态。So did many of my classmates.整篇文章都使用一般现在时，再根据主谓一致的原则，把did改为do。 【小题2】which—who/ that 。考查关系代词。which help us improve our studies.该定语从句的先行词是teachers，所以应该用表示人的关系代词，把which改为who或者that。 【小题3】another—other。考查不定代词。we get to know students from another schools。根据schools和后句中的their可以判断此处是指其他学校，another只修饰单数名词，故把another改为other。 【小题4】去掉of。考查介词。and learn about their campus of life.。此处是名词campus修饰名词life，故去掉their。 【小题5】so—but。考查连词。So every coin has two sides.根据上下文意思可知此处表示转折，故把so改为but。 【小题6】lesson----lessons。考查名词单复数。Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. 根据文章内容和动词take，可以判断主语应该是复数名词，故把lesson改为lessons。 【小题7】pay----paying。考查非谓语动词。pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects。动词原形不能做主语，故把pay改为动名词paying。 【小题8】their ----our。考查物主代词。pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.根据上文可知文章用的是第一人称，指的是我们学生们，所以把their改为our。 【小题9】very ----too。考查副词。We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.从句意可知此处表示“太……而不能”，故把very改为too。 【小题10】make 后加the。考查冠词。and make best use of our time. best是最高级，前面应该有定冠词the，故在make后加the。 考点：考查短文改错。 ‎ ‎6.  ‎ ‎    （1）wanted后加to     试题分析：固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事；to是不能省略的，不定式to do sth. 做want的宾语。故 wanted后加to。     考点：短文改错-缺词     （2）come改为came     试题分析：根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，所以用came。故come改为came。     考点：短文改错-错词     （3）have改为having试题分析：本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中做状语。故have改为having。     考点：短文改错-错词     （4）immediate改为immediately试题分析：本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped，在句中做状语。形容词immediate不能做状语。故immediate改为immediately。      考点：短文改错-错词     （5）on改为at     试题分析：固定搭配shoot..at…，不能使用介词on。at表示瞄准的对方或者方向。故on改为at。     考点：短文改错-错词     （6）Neither改为None     试题分析：代词neither表示两者都不……；而本句中没有提及两者，应该是有很多的鸟。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。故Neither改为None。     考点：短文改错-错词     （7）was改为were试题分析：本句的主语是复数名词arrows，所以谓语动词使用复数形式were。故was改为were。     考点：短文改错-错词     （8）去掉were或者looked     试题分析：本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like：看起来像；要么使用be like…：像……一样。故去掉were或者looked。     考点：短文改错-多词     （9）but改为and      试题分析：我们四处逃跑，很幸运的是没有人受伤。根据上下文语境可知该句表达的是并列关系。故but改为and。     考点：短文改错-错词     （10）a改为an     试题分析：后面的形容词impressive是以元音音素开始的，所以用an。故a改为an。     考点：短文改错-错词 ‎ ‎7.  ‎ 略 ‎8.  ‎ 第一处：quiet前加a                  ‎ ‎ 因为这里泛指一个晴朗的下午，用不定冠词，quiet是辅音音素开头的单词。‎ 第二处：read 改为reading        这里是非谓语动词作伴随状语，因为I和read是主动关系，用现在分词作伴随状语。‎ 第三处：hour 改为hours           hour是可数名词，和a couple of搭配用名词复数。‎ 第四处： hear 改为heard           这是回忆一个下午的事情，用一般过去时。‎ 第五处：her 改为their                句意：我看见12个女子穿着她们的星期天的服饰。指代the ladies’，用their。‎ 第六处：so 改为but                  上句说：我们希望不迟，下文说：找到你家不容易。两句话是转折关系。‎ 第七处：inviting 改为invite       这里是词组：be kind to do sth。‎ 第八处：去掉for                        ask sb into the room 请某人进入房间。‎ 第九处：happy改为happily      修饰动词talk用副词。‎ 第十处：another 改为other      街道有两边，一边是one，另外一边是特指。用the other。‎ ‎9.  ‎ ‎1. wanted后加to；考查want的用法：want to do sth；‎ ‎2. come改为came；考查时态，全文讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时；‎ ‎3. have改为having；考查非谓语动词，动词have和主语we之间有逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用动词ing形式；‎ ‎4. immediate改为immediately；考查副词的用法。此处修饰谓语动词jump up，故用副词immediately；‎ ‎5. on改为at；考查动词短语；shoot at对准...射击；‎ ‎6. Neither改为None；考查代词用法，此处表达的是一个也没有，是多个，不是两者都不，故把Neither改为none;‎ ‎7. was改为were；此处考查谓语动词单复数，主语the arrows是复数，所以谓语动词用复数形式，was改为were；‎ ‎8. 删除were或者looked；看起来像可以用look like,或者be like都可以；‎ ‎9. but改为and；此处考查并列连词，并列关系用and，转折关系用but，此处是并列关系，故把but改为and；‎ ‎10. a改为an；impressive是以元音开头的句子，故前面要加an. ‎ ‎10.  ‎ ‎1. 鞋店的英文应为the shoe shop，直接用名词shoe修饰名词，不用shoe的复数形式。‎ ‎2. notice sb doing sth表示“注意到某人正在做某事”，此处表示“我注意到一个外国女士正在和一个销售小姐讲话”。‎ ‎3. 此处为宾语从句，从句中缺宾语，用what连接，表示“销售小姐不明白外国人说的什么”。‎ ‎4. -ed形容词修饰人，-ing形容词修饰物，此处修饰人的表情，指“看起来忧虑”，故用-ed形式。‎ ‎5. Australian表示“澳大利亚人”，这里主语是the lady，为第三人称单数，所以是“一个”澳大利亚人，用不定冠词an。‎ ‎6. 此处有very修饰，much为多余，故删去。‎ ‎7. 由句意可知，拿走的是一双鞋，为复数，故应用them指代。‎ ‎8. 全文为过去时态，故用sing的过去式sang。‎ ‎9. 此处指salesgirl和Australian lady两个人，故用both，而不用all。‎ ‎10. 此处用副词freely（随意地；自由地）修饰express。‎ ‎11.  ‎ 短文大意：这篇短文讲述的是作者想成为一名老师，但甚至成为一名教师不是那么容易，所以作为学生现在要努力实现梦想。‎ 第一处：在讲台上用介词on the platform，故把in改为on。‎ 第二处：and连接两个并列的动词，standing和give，做of的宾语，give形式应与standing形式一致。故把give改为giving。‎ 第三处：三个以上连续的动作，最后一个动作用and连接，故此处加上and。‎ 第四处：根据短文时态是一般现在时，可知此处是时态错误，故把was改为am。‎ 第五处：It is+形容词+to do sth.句型中it是形式主语，英语中只有it做形式主语。故把there改为it。‎ 第六处：knowledge是不可数名词，故把knowledges改为knowledge。‎ 第七处：此处修饰动词teach，英语中用副词修饰动词，故把good改为well。‎ 第八处：此处表示照顾上文提到的your pupils，应该用代词them代替，故把it改为them。‎ 第九处：英语中though和but不能连用，故此处把but去掉。‎ 第十处：make sb. do sth.让某人做某事，用不带to的不定式作宾语补足语，故把comes改为come。‎ ‎12.  ‎ ‎ 短文大意：这篇短文讲述的是作者今天下午回家的路上看到一起交通事故，一辆摩托车由于速度太快撞到了正在过马路的女孩。‎ ‎1：此处是固定搭配，“on my way home”在回家的路上，home做副词，在此前不需要加to，所以去掉to。‎ ‎2：此处考察主谓一致。主语后跟有“as well as”引导的短语，谓语动词应该和主语a girl保持一致，所以把were改为was。‎ ‎3：此句句意是：一个女孩和她的同学正在斑马线上过马路，这时一辆摩托车向她开过来。“be doing...when...”句型中when译为“这时”，是从属连词。所以把after改为when。‎ ‎4：此处考查连词。根据句意可知前后两句是转折关系，所以把and改为but。‎ ‎5：此处考查词性。此处表示严重受伤，badly严重地，做副词，修饰动词was hurt，而bad是形容词，所以把bad改为badly。‎ ‎6：根据句意可知，年轻人不知道该做什么，应该用what to do做宾语，what做do的逻辑宾语，所以把how改为what。‎ ‎7：本短文介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时态，此处arrive应该用过去式arrived。所以把arrive改为arrived。‎ ‎8：表示“送某人去某地”应该用send sb. to sp.，所以此处加上to。‎ ‎9：one of 后面跟可数名词复数，所以把policeman改为policemen。‎ ‎10：It is + 形容词+to do sth.是固定句型，dangerous形容词，在句子作表语，所以把danger改为dangerous。‎ ‎13.  ‎ think-thought; 根据上文讲的是小时候，故选择一般过去时。 ‎ in countryside-in the countryside; 在农村是固定搭配。 ‎ or- and;并列关系选择and。 ‎ on the development-with the development;随着...的发展with the development。 ‎ have been shown-have shown; 研究表明是主动，无需用被动。 ‎ seriously-serious;修饰名词problem用形容词。 ‎ airs-air;空气不可数。 ‎ Much-Many;动物可数应用many来修饰。 ‎ found-find;must情态动词后加动词原形。 ‎ your-our;人称代词前后保持一致，整篇文章都是第一人称。‎ ‎14.  ‎ ‎1.第一句    happen是不及物动词， 不能用被动语态。‎ ‎2. 第二句   根据句意:我拥抱我自己，需要用反身代词。‎ ‎3. 第三句   修饰动词squeeze 需要用副词。‎ ‎4. 第五句    回忆生病时发生的事，用一般过去时。‎ ‎5. 第六句   branch是可数名词，应该用复数。‎ ‎6. 第六句   be ready for sth. 固定词组。‎ ‎7. 第七句   to one's astonishment 固定词组结构，令某人吃惊的是，需用名词。‎ ‎8.  第八句  feel thankful for sth. 因为某事而感谢，感激用for。‎ ‎9.  第九句   the time先行词表时间，后面的关系词需用介词加关系代词或者直接用关系副词，所以只能用when。‎ ‎10 第十句   it 代替动词不定式短语，作形式主语。‎ ‎15.  ‎ ‎1.far 前面已经有具体的350miles,不能重复使用。‎ ‎2.和last week连用，用过去式moved。‎ ‎3.other其余的 ，应该是失去一个工作，幸运地又找到另一个(another)工作。‎ ‎4.爸爸有了新工作意味着我要和我的同学们说再见了。同学应该是复数classmates。‎ ‎5.向同学、学校还有其它的一切，应该用and。‎ ‎6.To make things worse常用插入语，意为"更加糟的是"。‎ ‎7.应该是我的学校。‎ ‎8.我累了，修饰人，应该用过去分词tired。‎ ‎9.和fall连用，系表结构应用asleep。‎ ‎10.和you连用，主谓一致，应该用are。‎ ‎16.  ‎ 略 ‎17.  ‎ what---that， 此处是that引导的同位语从句；‎ the--a， 此处是泛指； ‎ Italy--Italian， 形容词修饰名词； ‎ visits--visited，once曾经，所以用一般过去时；‎ beautifully---beautiful, 形容词修饰名词；‎ city--cities，one of 后加名词复数形式；‎ a lot 后加of，a lot of 许多，大量；‎ or--and,并列关系用and；‎ at去掉，国内外固定搭配 at home and abroad；‎ see--seeing,look forward to中to是介词，后加动词ing形式。‎ ‎18.  ‎ 这是作者写给David的求助信，作者经常考试作弊，感觉内疚，但是自己又改不了，所以向David征求建议。 【小题1】stay改成 staying，句意：最近我感觉很内疚，晚上睡不着觉，这里是现在分词做伴随状语。 【小题2】how改成why ，从后面的it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams，可知是问原因。 【小题3】seldom 改成often，句意：我经常考试作弊。 【小题4】me改成myself，主语是I，宾语应该是myself。 【小题5】answer是可数名词， 改成answers。 【小题6】考查词组；refer to my notebooks参考笔记。 【小题7】so 改成and，有时看笔记抄东西，是并列关系。 【小题8】do改成 does 主语是动名词cheating，谓语是单数。 【小题9】take改成took或前加should，It’s time +从句的句型，从句中用虚拟语气，sb should do或sb did。 【小题10】it后面加if ，句型I would appreciate it if…，如果…我会很感激…。 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎19.  ‎ 如今环境污染日益严重。不仅人们没有干净可饮用的水，而且由于树木遭到砍伐，一些动物也灭绝了。人们的健康受到了空气，噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更美好的生活，作者呼吁到了人们该治理污染，保护环境的时候了。 【小题1】seriously---serious。The environment pollution is more and more seriously today.。系动词is后应该跟形容词做表语，所以把seriously改为serious。 【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉。We have no clean water to drink it。此处是不定式做定语，不定式的动词和被修饰的名词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，故去掉it。 【小题3】trees---后加are。And when trees cut down。此句中tree和谓语cut down之间是被动关系，应该用被动形式，在cut前加are。 【小题4】was -- is。There was more and more dirty smoke in the air.。根据语境可知此处是说现在的情况，应该用一般现在时，把was改为is。 【小题5】affecting---affected。People’s health has been greatly affecting by air,。根据句意可知此处是现在完成时的被动形式 ，把affecting 改为affected。 【小题6】disease----diseases。Many people have died of disease caused by pollution.。disease是可数名词，应该用复数形式，把disease改为diseases。 【小题7】the----a。In order to live the better life,。 固定短语：live a….. life“过着……的生活”，所以把the改为a。 【小题8】what----which。what saves money and reduces pollution.。此处是非限制性定语从句，what不引导定语从句，改为which。 【小题9】so -- as。Use things so long as possible. 固定短语：as …..as possible“尽可能”，把so改为as。 【小题10】 cut---- cutting。we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down.固定短语：stop sb from doing sth“阻止某人做某事”，所以把cut改为cutting。 ‎