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2015-2017年高考英语分项解析精编版专题24
图画式
2017年高考题
[2017·江苏卷]
81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.[
Li Jiang:Hi,Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?
Su Hua:Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West…Each sounds great!
Li Jiang:Yeah!And some movie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the hightech!…
Li Jiang:Perfect!Let's get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.
Su Hua:No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.
One Day in 2016.At Home.
Son:Mum,shall we go and see a film tonight?
Mother:Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.
Son:But it feels good in a cinema.
Mother:And the price…We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Son:Only 10 yuan more than last year.
Mother:But still we cannot get the money's worth. Some films are just boring…
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;
2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);
3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
在遣词造句上,应当注意合理使用连接成分,以提高文章的逻辑性,如在列举理由时可以用to begin with, what's more, last but not least等;还应尽量使用较复杂的句型,如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构;在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。
【参考范文】
The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.
[2017·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:视频video
________________________________________________________________________
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【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁,主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。
参考词汇和句型:
1. In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to…
2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward
3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers…
4. Those who are talented in computer contributed to the making of the video.
5. edited the video/added our love to…
6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.
7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school…
内容要点:
1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频
One possible version:
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We
debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
2016年高考题
【2016·北京】书面表达
第二节 ( 20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:地球日Earth Day
【答案】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom
worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
考点:情景作文
【名师点睛】
话题比较常规,整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容,考生并不陌生。内容主要包括:公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写,不可打乱顺序;注意行文的连贯性,多使用一些连接词。
【2016·上海】Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学学生姚平,最近参加了一项研究性学习调研,课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示)。根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须:
1.描述调研数据;
2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
【答案】
(略)
考点:考查图表作文
2015年书面表达之图画式
1.【2015·上海】
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
【参考答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion
into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Pan Yang
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。
运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well;My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book;
运用连词 Though,
运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed
运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read;It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity;I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration
此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如not only …but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。
【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。
【名师点睛】
一篇好的文章除了书写工整,还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模,板比如说总结,开头和结尾。
2.【2015·福建】
书面表达(满分25分)
请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
内容包括:
1. 描述画面;
2. 概述其含义;
3. 谈谈个人感想。
凿壁偷光
注意:
1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
参考词汇:凿,钻:bore
In the picture,
【答案】
In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be
Of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.
【亮点分析】
文章第一段描述图片,第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过,他沉静在自己的阅读中。
第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛,于是他把墙凿了一个洞,从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识,并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。
第三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然,现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not… but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语:Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。
【考点定位】看图说话写作。
【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作,要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整,还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模,板比如说总结,开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。
3.【2015·北京】
假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中,面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题,给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。
注意:词数不少于60.
提示词:一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine
【答案】
Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.
When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.
Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
【亮点说明】
范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。
全文适用的是一般过去时,注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.;定语从句we
put the figurines we made on the table…;时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰。
【考点定位】图表类记叙文
【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西,学生认真聆听,是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节,因为老师教一定能看得出来,但是学生能不能写到学生在听,这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以,重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相,大家很欢乐,做成一个作品。 所以,除了四幅图的要点之外,所以,重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节,才能得分。还需要注意时态,词汇不要拼写错误,多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误,尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说,情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用,如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。
2014图画式
1.【2014·北京卷】书面表达(共两节,35 分)
第二节(20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意: 1. 词数不少于 60.
2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
【答案】
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.
【亮点说明】使用了从句:1.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.2.不定式短语及形式主语:Now it is easy to park our bikes there.
考点:考查看图写话
2.【2014·辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”
(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文
形式用英语写一份书面通知。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
参考词汇: 校园campus 创意作品innovation 颁奖prize-giving
【答案】
Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It’s your show time.
Student Union
【解析】
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组:around the corner.即将到来,Along with连同, hand in上交,occur to使想起,on show展览, Look forward to盼望,句式上体现出多变的特点,如: Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句, Note that your innovations must be school things. 这句话用了宾语从句,Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。
考点:考查图画类书面表达