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高考英语写作范文精选珍藏版 外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国，学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师：‎ ‎1)．请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实，提醒司机(remind sb. of sth.提醒某人做某事)。‎ ‎2)．她之所以要确定一下，是因为太早不好叫出租车。‎ ‎3)．感谢费心，并感谢一年来的关心。‎ ‎4)．在学校一年来，生活愉快、难忘，很可能再来。‎ ‎5)．留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆，希望对学生有用。‎ 字数：100—120个词。‎ Hi, Mr. Li,‎ Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this. I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up. I am sorry to trouble you again. Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school. I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students. Probably I will come back some day. I leave some English books to your library. I hope they will be useful to your students.‎ Yours Lynne 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。‎ 赞成迁出：　　 反对迁出：‎ ‎①．游客多，交通堵塞 ①．建于1906年，中外闻名 ‎②．郊区环境好　　 ②．搬迁易造成动物死亡 注意:‎ ‎1)．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。‎ ‎2)．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3)．参考词汇： 郊区—suburb June 3 ,2005‎ Dear Editor ,‎ Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.‎ ‎　　 Yours truly, Li Hua 假设你的英文名为Jack，是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行，为期7天，请你给诺丁汉的STA（Students’Travel Agency）经理Phil发一封电子邮件，联系有关事宜。要点如下：‎ ‎（1）希望能够派车接送；‎ ‎（2）需要一名说标准英语，并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游；‎ ‎（3）请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况；‎ ‎（4）你的联系方式：电子邮箱地址：Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或电话号码：07747745007‎ 注意：（1）词数：100词左右；‎ ‎（2）开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎（3）参考词汇：旅馆住宿accommodation；旅行日程安排itinerary；长途客车coach Hi, Phil,‎ I’d like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us. I have here a group of 32 Chinese students studying in Nottingham University, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas days. I hope we can have a coach which will take us to Scotland and then bring us back to Nottingham. We also need a guide who speaks standard English and knows Scotland well. I would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as possible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay. If you have any information, please either email me to Jackwang@yahoo.com.cnor call me at 07747745007.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours Truly. Jack 加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括：‎ ‎①. 你怎样得知他的愿望 ②. 你愿意成为他的朋友 ‎③. 你打算如何帮助他 ④. 你盼望他的回复 注意：词数：100词左右 Dear David，‎ I am LiHua. I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture. I want to be your friend. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you. I was born in Chongqing in 1990，I study in the Experimental Middle School of Chongqing and I am good at English.‎ I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails.What’s more， we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and I’ll tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods，etc. of the Chinese. I hope we can keep in touch with each other.‎ I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours, LiHua 假如你是一名大学生叫李华，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出 。‎ 学生心态 向往城市，不愿下乡。‎ 就业现状 城市人才过剩；农村渴求人才。‎ 就业前景 农村天地广阔，可施展才华。‎ Dear editor,‎ I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.‎ As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.‎ Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要如下：‎ ‎⑴．该工作主要包括两部分：一是从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；二是选择与编辑同学们的来稿。‎ ‎⑵．希望该同学满足下列要求：‎ ‎① 乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；‎ ‎② 英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑。‎ ‎③ 感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（Students’ Union）联系。‎ 注意：（1）词数100左右；‎ ‎（2）不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。‎ An English Editor Wanted Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students. The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．‎ We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts. Besides, the ability to use the computer is important．‎ Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week．‎ Students’ Union 英语作文：雾霾天气【书信】‎ 近年来我国多地雾霾天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，能唤起高中生环保意识。‎ ‎【预测题目】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面写一封电子邮件：‎ ‎1.感谢他得关心;‎ ‎2.介绍情况:‎ ‎(1)去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气 ‎(2)人们已认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生 ‎(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么 要求150--200词 参考范文 Dear Bill,‎ I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.‎ Since the winter last year,the smog has occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog weather. Mmore and more people have to go to see the doctor because the serious disease ‎ caused by the smog. Quite a lot of flights have to be put off. A great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog.‎ People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the smog weather. The government suggests people go to work or school with the public traffic, such as the bus and the underground. Also we should plant more trees.‎ According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere. In addition, I will tell the people to protect the environment as possible as they can. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I'm looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 一篇作文，三种写法，都是满分 ‎【作文题目】  假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请写信介绍住房的情况（在梵高街，可乘11路公交车经过一站到达建新华文学校，住房在三层，共三个房间：一个卧室、一个厨房和一个浴室），并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。‎ 注意：1．词数：100左右： 2．参考词汇：房租 rent(n.).‎ ‎【满分作文1】‎ Dear Bob,‎ I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.‎ I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are ‎ bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.‎ Maybe this flat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.  ‎ Hope you will come here soon!  ‎ All the best!  ‎ Yours,  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ Li Hua 满分理由 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。‎ ‎【满分作文2】‎ Dear Bob,‎ Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.‎ I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.‎ Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’ll be able to meet you at the airport. 　　‎ I am looking forward to seeing you. ‎ Best wishes !  ‎ Yours,  ‎ Li Hua 满分理由 本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。‎ ‎【满分作文3】‎ Dear Bob,  How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.‎ You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.  ‎ There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ Yours,  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ Li Hua 满分理由 本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。‎ 英语作文大幅提升的四秘诀（+范例+名师点评）‎ 一. 用词准确;表达地道 ‎【安徽卷】【试题回放】‎ 假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：‎ l 表示赞成。   　　l 提出你喜欢的栏目。     l 简要说明理由。‎ 注意：　　‎ ‎1. 词数100左右。　　            ‎ ‎2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。　　‎ ‎3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　　‎ ‎4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,‎ ‎　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.‎ ‎　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.‎ ‎　　Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!‎ ‎　　Yours faithfully,‎ ‎　　Li Hua ‎【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。‎ 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩 ‎【北京卷】　【试题回放】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。‎ 注意：词数不少于60     　　提示词：郊区 suburbs ‎　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. ‎ ‎    We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。‎ ‎ ‎ 三. 复合句为写作增色 ‎ 【全国卷】　　【试题回放】‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：‎ ‎1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。‎ 注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Sir/Madam,‎ ‎      Greetings from China!‎ ‎　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.‎ ‎　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.‎ ‎　　Yours truly,‎ ‎　　Li Hua ‎【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下： 1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。‎ 这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。‎ 好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育 好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.‎ 我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。‎ 四. 结构清晰,句式准确 ‎【江苏卷】　　【试题回放】‎ ‎2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。‎ 教育部倡导学生：‎ ‎1. 每天锻炼一小时 ‎2. 健康工作五十年 ‎3. 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。‎ ‎2. 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3. 参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program;‎ 教育部——the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone,‎ ‎　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.‎ ‎　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.‎ ‎　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!‎ ‎　　Thank you!‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。‎ 好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡 好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.‎ 教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。‎ 评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。‎ 好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.‎ 如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。‎ 高考英语记叙文满分作文精选 写好一篇英语记叙文要做到以下几点：1、故事发展符合逻辑 2、语言连贯 3、段落结构安排清晰合理  4、句式丰富，多用短语和高级词汇 4、无语法和拼写错误。由此看来，写好一篇英语记叙文并非易事呢，关键还是要多看、多积累、多思考、多写。小简老师已把下面作文中好的短语和句型标红加粗，同学们可记下来供自己写作之用。‎ 写作要求：你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1、词数100左右；‎ ‎2、日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。‎ 生词：‎ 指南针：compass n.   手电筒：flashlight n.急救包：first-aid kit   宿营地：campsite n.‎ Saturday, May 4, 2002‎ Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.‎ The two of us spent the night in the forest.‎ We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.‎ Just before the dawn, we set out on foot in high spirits. Li Ming brought a compass and a tent as well along in his backpack, and I was carrying a flashlight, a map, a knife , a first-aid kit, some matches, candles, food, and clothing that were all indispensable for the adventure. The path to the campsite was fraught with more difficulties and obstacles than we had expected. On the way to the campsite lay a hill, and we succeeded in climbing it over. After that，we were caught by a rushing river. Fortunately, near the bank we happened to find a wooden board on which we placed our backpacks,‎ ‎ and we swam across the river, pushing the wooden board ahead. On the opposite bank of the river stretched a forest in which we got lost.Thanks to the compass, we turned out to tell the right direction and made our way to the campsite in the end. The dark setting in, Li Ming was busy putting up the tent while I set about making a fire and preparing the food. ‎ 翻译及分析 ‎1. took part in 参加 ‎2. set out on foot in high spirits  情绪高涨地步行出发 ‎3. that were all indispensable for the adventure 对于这次冒险来说都是必不可少的（定语从句，修饰a flashlight, a map, a knife , a first-aid kit, some matches, candles, food, and clothing）‎ ‎4. was fraught with 充满......的 ‎5. On the way to the campsite lay a hill. 一座山位于去营地的路上。（此句为完全倒装句）‎ ‎6. happened to find a wooden board  碰巧发现一块木板 ‎7. On the opposite bank of the river stretched a forest 在河对岸有一片森林。（此句为完全倒装句）‎ ‎8. Thanks to 幸亏，由于 ‎9. made our way to the campsite  成功到达营地 ‎10. setting in 到来 ‎11. was busy putting up the tent 忙着搭建帐篷 ‎12. set about making a fire and preparing the food  着手生活和准备食物 第二篇写作要求：假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。  ‎ 提示词：游乐园 amusement park     垃圾箱 bin With spring coming, the weather becomes warmer and warmer, and trees and grass turn green. What a splendid spring!     ‎ The beauty of spring struck my classmates, resulting in a pleasant spring outing last week. Before our going outing, we discussed warmly on where and how to spend the precious chance of touching nature. Some students proposed a visit to the amusement ‎ park. Some suggested to row boats on a river. Others advised to go hiking. Eventually, we reached an agreement of going hiking.         ‎ Having prepared for the hiking, we set off the next day. The day was so nice that the sun shined brightly, and birds sang and danced among trees and bushes. However, the rubbish thrown about everywhere on the mountain broke down our mood in spite ofthe good weather. Therefore, we devoted ourselves to picking the litter, putting them away in the plastic bags. After going down, we separated them into available ones and unavailable ones, and thus we put them into different bins.   ‎ During the day, we have no time to enjoy our eyes, instead, we applied ourselves to cleaning up the mountain. But yet, we still felt happy owing to our efforts to protect our environment clean and tidy, which was much more important than enjoying a big feast for eyes! ‎ ‎【翻译及分析】‎ resulting in  导致，结果是 proposed a visit to the amusement park 建议去游乐园 reached an agreement of going hiking 一致同意去远足 in spite of 尽管，不管，不顾 devoted ourselves to picking the litter 致力于/献身捡垃圾 applied ourselves to cleaning up the mountain 专心致志清理山 owing to 由于 a big feast for eyes 一场视觉盛宴 英语作文：保护传统文化（含满分范文）‎ 英语作文的说明是：注意中华传统文化和核心价值观的引领。而且，随着全球一体化的发展，文化融合现象已经愈来愈明显，如何能够在文化大融合的背景下保护好我们的传统文化是值得我们关注的问题。‎ 某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你准备给该报投稿，稿件内容包括： 1.‎ ‎ 保护中国传统文化的重要性; 2. 列举1-2个你所知道的国家或当地政府文化保护的事例; 3. 谈谈你对文化保护的建议。 ‎ 字数要求：120字。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Protect Traditional Chinese Culture ‎ The protection of national and folk culture is of great significance to Chinese cultural diversity and also to the harmonious development between local economic and social development. It is reported that the Guangdong government pays special attention to protecting Chaoju(潮剧)， a local drama born in Chaozhou in the eastern Guangdong province.‎ ‎ In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively. To start with, we should make a law to regulate the society’s performance. Besides, we should draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of culture protection, the stronger support we can get from the public.‎ ‎ In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.‎ 英语作文题目：‎ 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;‎ ‎2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。‎ ‎【参考范文一】‎ Word came that a reading festival would be held by our school and there is a need for a picture for advertisement and I am writing to give my opinion. From my perspective , I am in favor of the picture in the top right corner.‎ As is vividly depicted in that picture, around the table sit three kids with a couple of books in their hands, having a heated discussion about the contents and sharing their thoughts for the themes, which shows their dedication and passion for reading.‎ Basically, several reasons are listed for my preference. First, nothing is more attractive than a proper and realistic picture. This picture serves as an epitome of our daily reading scene in the school and it is apt to let students recall the joy and harvest while reading.‎ Second, this picture stands for the fun of sharing and exchanging ideas. With regard to reading, there is a saying that there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. After reading, bits and pieces of thoughts will appear in our mind, so it is beneficial to have a better understanding after comparing notes about what we have read.‎ From what is mentioned above, I, undoubtedly, approve of the picture in the top right corner. Thus, I would appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration and I wish this festival a complete success.‎ ‎【参考范文二】‎ Recently, having been delighted to see the notice that there is a need of our reading festival to make a choice among three creative pictures for advertisement. After a long time comparison, the picture on the bottom right corner earns my favor.‎ As is clearly depicted in the picture, there sits a foreigner in front of the library who is concentrating on the books, immersing himself into the world of literature and feeling peaceful and satisfied, which turns out to be thought-provoking and enlightening.‎ Part of the reasons for my choice is that it vividly reveals the significance of reading books to students, which provides you with the power to escape from the hustle and bustle in the metropolis. For instance, whenever you feel puzzled, confused or stressed, you can always refer to books and consequently find peace and satisfactory solutions in them.‎ I’d, however, perfectly appreciate your considering my selection if you feel that choice and reason are in lined with your requirements and best wishes for your reading festival.‎ ‎【参考范文三】‎ What a pleasant surprise it is to know that our school will hold a Reading Festival! Hearing that the committee need select a picture as the publicity photo, I intend to voice my opinion that I am fond of the one on the left corner.‎ Actually, the three photos are equally attractive to us students. If we must elect one to publicize, I prefer the one that is composed of books, coffee, musical notes and instrument, which creates the an agreeable and relaxed atmosphere.‎ ‎“Read a good book, just like a noble people in conversation.”, which is said by Gerd, reveals that books play an essential role in our life. Creating an atmosphere by music and coffee，it appeals to students to start reading. Moreover, the image could imply that reading has the function of nurturing spirituality and purifying mind.‎ I hope that my suggestions will prove of some value in your consideration, and that reading books will be more popular among us students.‎ 高考英语满分作文范文（带翻译）‎ ‎　　what is beautiful ‎　　what is beautiful, people like to wear beautifulclothes,if we print some colorful pads of some wordson them.the clothes will become more attractive.Butthe meaning of the words on them must be lovelytoo. I am sorry to say that some people pay noattention on this.Now please look at the picture.thegirl in the new jacket looks pretty indeed.but theEnglish words on the jacket are quite different.Doyou think a snake is beautiful?Do people take a pride been a personal. of course not. and onother two jackets are writing kiss me and foolish.Do you think the girl is foolish.If the girl knowthe meaning of words on it.she probably will not buy suchjacket. So I think everyone shouldknow what is beautiful and what is not.‎ ‎　　【参考译文】‎ ‎　　什么是美丽 ‎　　什么是美丽，人们喜欢穿漂亮的衣服，如果衣服上有五颜六色的图案和文字，那衣服就更加美丽了。但是，衣服上的文字也必须美丽。我想说的是许多人不注意衣服上的文字。请看这张照片，这张穿夹克的女孩看起来很美丽。但是，她衣服上的文字却不美丽。你认为蛇美丽吗?你认为人们会因为成为犯人而骄傲吗，当然不。其他两件夹克写的是亲我，以及傻瓜。你认为这个女孩傻吗。如果女孩知道这些文字的意思。她绝对不会再买这些夹克。所以，我认为人们应该知道什么是美丽，什么不是。‎ 英语作文大幅提升的四秘诀（+范例+名师点评）‎ 一. 用词准确;表达地道 ‎【安徽卷】【试题回放】‎ 假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：‎ l 表示赞成。   　　l 提出你喜欢的栏目。     l 简要说明理由。‎ 注意：　　‎ ‎1. 词数100左右。　　            ‎ ‎2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。　　‎ ‎3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　　‎ ‎4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,‎ ‎　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.‎ ‎　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.‎ ‎　　Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!‎ ‎　　Yours faithfully,‎ ‎　　Li Hua ‎【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。‎ 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩 ‎【北京卷】　【试题回放】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。‎ 注意：词数不少于60     　　提示词：郊区 suburbs ‎　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. ‎ ‎    We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。‎ ‎ 三. 复合句为写作增色 ‎ 【全国卷】　　【试题回放】‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：‎ ‎1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。‎ 注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Sir/Madam,‎ ‎      Greetings from China!‎ ‎　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like ‎ to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.‎ ‎　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.‎ ‎　　Yours truly,‎ ‎　　Li Hua ‎【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下： ‎ ‎1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。‎ 这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。‎ 好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育 好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.‎ 我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。‎ 四. 结构清晰,句式准确 ‎【江苏卷】　　【试题回放】‎ ‎2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。‎ 教育部倡导学生：‎ ‎1. 每天锻炼一小时 ‎2. 健康工作五十年 ‎3. 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。‎ ‎2. 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3. 参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program;‎ 教育部——the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone,‎ ‎　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.‎ ‎　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.‎ ‎　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!‎ ‎　　Thank you!‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。‎ 好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡 好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.‎ 教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。‎ 评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。‎ 好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.‎ 如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。‎