高考英语作文满分技巧记叙文 5页

写作指导 (6)‎ ‎　 记叙文 ‎1．记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。‎ ‎2．在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主要是提纲式或图画式。‎ ‎3．通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹。‎ ‎4．由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态主要用一般过去时。‎ ‎5．记叙文通常是按照事情发生的先后顺序来表达内容的。‎ 下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称的口吻用英语写一篇短文。‎ 注意：1.短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，内容要连贯、完整；‎ ‎2．词数：100左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。‎ 案例分析⊙‎ 由题目要求可知，要求考生以记叙文的形式进行描述，即李明的爷爷从养鸟到放鸟整件事情的经过。既为经过，说明事情已经发生，当然要用一般过去时，人称要用第三人称。至于写作顺序，从图片的安排次序可知应从养鸟到放鸟，即事情发生的先后顺序来写。另外，英语写作也不像平常的语文写作，词数的要求(按100词左右)限制了较复杂写作手法的使用。‎ One Sunday morning，Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage.The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water.Li Ming did not know why.‎ The next morning on his way to school，Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky.Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage.He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free.When he got home，he said to his grandpa，“Birds also need friends！” To his delight，his grandpa agreed.‎ The bird was set free.Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.‎ 某英语报刊的一个栏目以“谈谈发生在身边的故事”‎ 为主题展开征文活动。你校最近举办了一场校运会，请你讲述在校运会期间发生在李华同学身上的一件感人的事。根据下列图片，描述事情的经过并简单发表你的看法。‎ 注意：1.词数：100左右。文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．参考词汇：勇气杯 Courage Cup。‎ Never Give Up When Li Hua decided to take part in the 3,000metre race，everyone was very surprised.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Never Give Up When Li Hua decided to take part in the 3,000metre race，everyone was very surprised.One of his classmates said，“Li Hua，you are not strong enough to run the 3,000 metres.”But Li Hua said，“I don’t think I will win，but I’m determined to finish it.”‎ During the race，each step seemed difficult for Li Hua.Suddenly he fell，breaking his glasses and his chance of winning the race.But he didn’t give up.He stood up，put on his broken glasses and kept on running.“Come on，Li Hua.You can do it！” Everyone on the sports field was cheering for him.Although Li Hua was the last one to cross the finishing line，he won the Courage Cup with honor.‎ I was deeply touched by Li Hua’s great determination.In my mind，winning in life shouldn’t be measured by the final score；it should be based on how you play the game. ‎ ‎ ‎