高考英语短文改错专项练习试题 16页

‎2015高二级高考英语短文改错练习 ‎【命题趋向】‎ 短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。‎ 短文改错的趋势：‎ ‎1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主 。‎ ‎2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。‎ ‎3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。‎ ‎4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、 缺词。错词占60%左右 ‎【错误类型】 ‎ ‎1. 错词 2. 多词 3. 缺词 4. 正错 ‎【考点透视】‎ 一．错词的热点 ‎1． 动词—时态 语态 非谓语 ；主谓关系。‎ ‎2． 联系词—关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。‎ ‎3． 名词—可数名词 、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。‎ ‎4． 介词—介词和动词的搭配错误。‎ ‎5． 形容词/副词—词类错用。‎ ‎6． 冠词—定冠词和不定冠词的错用。‎ ‎7． 代词—人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。‎ ‎8． 惯用法—固定句型，固定短语。‎ 二．多词和缺词热点 ‎ 1. 冠词 2.介词 3.副词 4.代词 5.关联词 6.小品词 to ‎【短文改错主要特点】‎ ‎1. 语言材料取自于学生的习作。 2. 短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。 ‎ ‎3. 短文难度符合学生水平。 4. 语言简单易懂。 ‎ ‎5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。‎ ‎【例题解析】‎ 一． 错词 ‎1.动词错误：时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。‎ ‎【1】整体时态： ‎ ‎ *Then I ask him “Grandma, how come you have so much lines on your hand”‎ 全文为故事，故ask改为asked。‎ ‎*High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon.The hole became bigger and bigger.‎ 全篇使用过去时态，故改discover- -discovered ‎【2】主谓一致 ‎*Having fun with their friends make them happy.‎ 动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。‎ ‎*But the most wonderful thing about jack were his musical ability。‎ 主语为the most wonderful thing 故此，系词为was ‎*But not all information are good to society.‎ 主语不可数，所以动词用is。‎ ‎（2.）动词错误：‎ ‎*In American big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)‎ 根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为 buy。‎ ‎（3）非谓语动词 ‎【1】动名词错误 ‎*I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)‎ 解析：to 为介词，故此see改为seeing ‎* Not only play football makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.‎ 解析：主语应为动名词，故play football改为playing football ‎【2】现在分词 ‎*The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.‎ 解析：分词做定语，故keeps 改为keeping ‎*I found a small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.‎ 解析：with a light shone 改为with a light shining。a light和shining为主动关系。‎ ‎【3】不定式 ‎*I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.(become)‎ 解析：help sb do sth 故改becoming为 become ‎ ‎*He did not want share things with others.‎ 解析：want to share sth. want后可跟不定式做宾语。‎ ‎【4】过去分词 ‎*I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.‎ 解析：have sth done, some records和give是被动关系，故改为given。‎ ‎2．连词错误：‎ ‎*I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.‎ 解析：根据句意，“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房，并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and ‎*We would return at night to hear that he`d picked up from the radio in the day.‎ 解析：考查宾语从句，pick up 缺宾语，故改that 为what ‎*The classes helped me understand what the world works ‎ 解析：根据句子意思，“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what 为how。‎ ‎*He was silent for a moment. So he answered slowly: “Each of these lines stands for a trouble”‎ 解析：根据句子意思，So 改为 Then/And ‎3.形容词/副词错用：*You always gave me specially attention. ‎ 解析：名词应该被形容词special修饰。‎ ‎*It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.‎ 解析：副词really修饰系词，故改real为really。‎ ‎*My hometown has taken on a new look.How great it has changed !‎ 解析：great修饰动词，故改为：greatly ‎ ‎4.冠词错误：‎ ‎*This is my first visit to a American family.(an)‎ 解析：American 第一个音标的音素是元音，故用an.‎ ‎*Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team.‎ 解析：有定语修饰，the特指captain.‎ ‎*Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.‎ 解析：固定搭配catch sight of.故此去掉冠词a。‎ ‎5.代词错误：‎ ‎【1】反身代词 ‎*I just smiled to me and thought, …解析：主语和宾语相同，故此me—myself 。‎ ‎【2】形容词性物主代词 ‎*Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interesting.(his --their) 解析：主语是第三人称复数，因此try one`s best ‎ ‎【3】it/that/them /us ‎*I thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.‎ 解析：that不可以做形式主语，故改为it。‎ ‎*It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.‎ ‎6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误 ‎*She marked strictly on student`s performance.(students`)‎ 解析：根据句意，学生们的表演，故改为students` performance ‎*Physics is one of the most difficult subject for us (subjects )‎ 解析：one of说明后面为复数形式。‎ ‎*We practice three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.‎ 解析：常常看比赛，故此match改为matches.‎ ‎* I have no papers to write on.解析：纸不可数，所以改为paper ‎7.介词错误 ‎*He left Shanghai at a cold night.解析：一天的部分被修饰时，介词用on,‎ ‎*I am a new comer of a small town.‎ 解析：根据句子意思，来自一个小镇come from a small town.‎ ‎* I was caught by the rain last night 解析：固定短语be caught in the rain 遇上雨。‎ ‎8.语意错误 ‎*Thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.‎ 解析：句子意思：数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误，sell—buy ‎ ‎*Not all people like to work and everyone like to play.‎ 解析：句子意思：并非所有的人都喜欢工作，并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误，应该为转折关系，and—but 。‎ 二．多余词 多词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。‎ ‎【1】连词多余：‎ ‎*They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning.‎ 解析：连词多余，故此去掉 (that)，原句是状语从句。‎ ‎【2】介词多余：‎ ‎*The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised.(for)‎ 解析：没有宾语，所以去掉for。‎ ‎【3】冠词多余：‎ ‎*Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.‎ 解析：固定短语，catch sight of :偶然看见。‎ ‎【4】系词/助词多余：‎ ‎*My mother was asked : “Have you taken medicine ?”‎ 解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。‎ 三：缺词 缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/‎ ‎【1】缺介词 ‎*He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard (in)‎ 解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。‎ ‎【2】缺冠词 ‎*However, the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)‎ 解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。‎ ‎【3】缺连接词 ‎*In one class, I learned^ it rained (why)‎ 解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为：“在一节课上，我知道了下雨的原因”。‎ ‎【4】缺系词 ‎*What ^your favorite sport ? (is)‎ 解析：句子中缺系词，在What加is.‎ ‎（1）短文改错（共10小题，每小题2分，满分20分） ‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 ‎ 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one ‎ to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show itto my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoyingto find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem .To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was! ‎ ‎（2）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ This morning I found red wallet on the campus. Girls usual like red, so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. I opened it, try to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300 yuan in it. I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by. She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so. I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. Later, a girl came to claim it on 3 o’clock this afternoon.‎ ‎（3）短文改错（共10小题, 每小题2分, 满分20分）‎ ‎ Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the ‎ different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.‎ ‎（4）短文改错（共10小题, 每小题2分, 满分20分）‎ May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement make.‎ The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome my friends from the United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There is sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcomed.‎ ‎（5）甘肃省武威三中2013模拟（5）‎ Dear Dick, ‎ How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in china. In short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. I don’t know about the others, but I used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now, I have more free time. I can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings, I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As ‎ far as I know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things. ‎ Best wishes! yours,‎ ‎ Jim ‎（6）【贵州省湄潭中学2013届月考】‎ Dear Brad ,‎ ‎ I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I ‎ feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .‎ ‎ Best wishes ,‎ ‎ Li Ping ‎（7）【贵阳市2013高考英语】‎ Once l waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute, no bus came.I couldn't wait any longer but decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,1 would have caught. If l wanted to take to the next bus,1 would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our study and work, With it we can achieve greater.‎ ‎ Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus.‎ ‎（8）【哈师大附中、东北师大附中、辽宁省实验中学2013联考】‎ Last week our English club held English speech contest, which theme was ‎"Challenge Myself" Many students take part in it, and delivered their wonderful speech．A great many of teachers and students crowded into the hall in order that see their performances．On the stage, no matter whatever pressure the speakers were facing, they bravely overcame them to achieve great success．What's more, they impressed us deep with their unusual confidence．‎ ‎ Through such an activity, we gained a lot．However, our club is growing stronger and more mature．‎ ‎（9）【哈尔滨市第六中学2013高三（三模）】‎ I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d be good for we all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city．And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful California it was．He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been Dad’s job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year．‎ Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it．‎ ‎（10）短文改错 Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that ‎ day, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” ‎ At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done. （11）短文改错 I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.‎ ‎ On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.‎ ‎（12）短文改错 I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast ‎ to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ ‎（13）【海口市2013高考英语模拟题】‎ I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. ‎ Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.‎ ‎（14）短文改错 【河北省石家庄市2013二模】‎ Li Yue and Zhang Hua -went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor.‎ Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li ‎ Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience.They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.‎ ‎（15）短文改错 【海南省海南中学2013高考英语】‎ Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.‎ ‎（16）短文改错【河北省武安三中2013届月考】‎ Good morning!‎ Today, my topic is the valuable of time. As a saying goes, “ time was money.’ This means that if our time is good spent, it will turn out a lot of useful and important job when proper opportunities come. Although all time is precious, we should make good use of them. Now, we are living at a time which we must learn knowledge and develop our abilities. If we let these morning hours to slip away, we shall never able to make up the loss. What the pity!‎ Let those who think nothing of waste their time remember this. Thank you for your listening!‎ ‎（17）短文改错【河北省易县第二高级中学2013三模】‎ One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was in low spirits．‎ When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise． Seen her so happy ，I quick took out of my Chinese exam paper．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily．At that moment, I couldn’t help cry．‎ I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my mother’s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her slaps．‎ ‎（18）短文改错 The Ministry of Education aims to combining ancient Chinese poetry with music in effort to make them popular with the youths.But they call on college students and musicians to combine ancient poems and music.Many people are in favour of the idea because they think practicable.They say ancient poems were original bonded to music in the past.Jay Chou had set a good example with his song Qinghuaci.However, other have opposite opinions, saying ancient poetry is an art form, that is different from modern music.It may ruin our traditional culture.Personally, this activity is a creative way of help ancient poems gain popularity in modern time.So we should open our arms to welcome it.‎ ‎（19）短文改错 We often give money to the people in poor or disasterstricken area.Some st ‎ udents don't think it a good way to help people there.However, some prefers helping the unfortunate with money.In their opinion, money can be used to buying daily necessities and can help people rebuild their hometowns, while sometimes the things people there received are not what they need actually.But some other students think that give used clothing to the people in those areas is better.Many people have many clothing they no longer like or need.By giving them away to the people can we make the best use it.Anyhow, no matter which way is adopt, we should try our best to help with those who are in need of help.‎ ‎（20）短文改错 Today is Tom's 70th birthday, but there is anybody with him.He feels very disappointing.He can not find his happiness anywhere.His sons didn't care for him on this special day.Although the cakes are very delicious, but he doesn't want to touch it.He just wants his children come and see him.Nowadays, many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents.But blood is thick than water.Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty.Thus, we should and must bring happy to them when they become old.‎ ‎（21）短文改错 Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a be lief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field. ‎ ‎（22）短文改错 I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed of flying in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to the air force base．In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 . I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled around the earth about 14 circle and then returned．I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space． ‎ ‎（23）短文改错 It was raining hardly outside, that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom.I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in the fifties, that brought me lunch, regardless the heavy rain.In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children.But what had the children done in return？All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally.My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up.How shall I do for you?‎ ‎（24）短文改错 Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.‎ ‎（25）短文改错 Nowadays, some students would not like to living in a dorm.Instead, they rented houses outside the school.There are advantages for all.Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe.A dorm is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other, thus preparing for the social life later.As for renting a house to live in alone, it's better for your studies as you can feel freely in your own room without interrupted by others.As a result, you will have more time and can devote yourself to studying wholeheart.But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school.Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.‎ ‎（26）短文改错 Mrs. Williams, my next-door neighbor, have a big house with a beautiful ‎ garden in front of them. She is very proud of her house because of it is always ‎ clean and tidy. While cleaned the carpets one day she suddenly saw a little mice run across her dining room. She felt terrible ashamed, for she used to telling others that mice were found only in dirty houses. She quickly asked her daughter Jenny help catch the mouse. It takes them almost half an hour to catch the mouse. Afraid of being laughed at by other people around her, Mrs. Williams wanted her daughter to keep it the secret.‎ ‎（27）短文改错 Dear Tom,‎ I’m very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your sister will come to ‎ Xi’an and call on me on July. 1st. And I’m terribly sorry that I can’t meet you at ‎ the airport because I have to attend meeting in Beijing. Now let me to tell you the ‎ way to your home. When you got out of the airport, you can take Bus No.29 to ‎ YouYi Bus Station. Walk across the Friendship Street to the west, you can see a bookstore at the corner. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can ‎ see a bank your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the bank. Find ‎ Room 502, which my mother will be waiting for you . ‎ ‎ Best regard to you all.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Liu Mei