2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练13 9页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（13）附参考范文 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右 边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：‎ 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ ‎ Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_________‎ far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful 67_________‎ if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________‎ looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________‎ a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study 70_________‎ better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________‎ photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________[来源:学。科。网][来源:学§科§网]‎ and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but 73_________‎ unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________‎ little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________‎ 参考答案、、短文改错 ‎66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think ‎69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which ‎73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we ‎**********************************************************结束 ‎【写作要求】 ‎ 根据提示的情景，用英文写一篇80-100词的短文。不必根据中文逐字逐句翻译。 ‎ 我们的学校历史悠久。毕业学生中不少已成为各自领域中的专家。近年来，我们的学校发生了很大的变化。我们为自己的学校感到自豪。 ‎ ‎【学生实作】 ‎ Our school has a long history. It is told that it dated from one hundred years ago. From it was founded on, there were more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studying. Some of them are outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed great, it becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students study very hard, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school. ‎ We like our school very much! We are proud of it! ‎ ‎【评析】 ‎ ‎1． 第2句：is told 应为is said。（以下错误均在第一段） ‎ ‎2． 第2句：dated应改为dates。 ‎ ‎3． 第3句：from...on不能表示从过去的某个时间一直到现在的情况，因此这里用since较好。另外，from...on中间应是名词，而不能是从句。 ‎ ‎4． 第3句：主句中应用现在完成时态，表示从过去一直到现在的情况。把there were改为there have been。 ‎ ‎5． 第4句：studying最好改为studies，指"学业"。 ‎ ‎6． 第5句：本句应是说以前的学生的情况，are应改为were。 [来源:Z+xx+k.Com]‎ ‎7． 第7句：great应改为greatly。修饰动词应用副词形式。 ‎ ‎8． 第7句：our school has changed greatly是一个完整的句子，其后也是一个完整的句子，而两个完整的句子没有连词时是不能并列的。最好中间用句号，使各自独立成句。 ‎ ‎9． 第9句：study改为are studying更为生动。 ‎ ‎10． 第9句：very hard最好改为even harder，以对应前面的比较级。 ‎ ‎【总评】 ‎ 优点 ： ‎ ‎1． 基本写出了题目要求的几方面的内容。 ‎ ‎2． 这是一篇半开放的写作。习作者适当地增补细节对内容进行了展开，使内容较为全面、丰富。 ‎ ‎3． 语句表达较为连贯。 ‎ 不足： ‎ ‎1． 有一处句与句之间没有连词连接的情况，这是不符合英语习惯的。 ‎ ‎2． 谓语动词的时态有几处运用不当。 ‎ ‎【修改之后】 ‎ Our school has a long history. It is said that it dates from one hundred years ago. Since it was founded, there have been more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studies. Some of them were outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed greatly. It becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students are studying even harder, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school. ‎ We like our school very much! We are proud of it!‎ ‎[来源:学&科&网]‎ ‎**************************************************结束 短文改错 ‎（201*·四川卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；‎ 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66. ‎ Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67. ‎ fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68. ‎ the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69. ‎ medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70. ‎ The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71. ‎ the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72. ‎ breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73. ‎ said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74. ‎ it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?” ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so ‎69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking ‎72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased ‎75、√‎ ‎**********************************************************结束 ‎ (7)(25 min.)‎ ‎(2019·醴陵月考)几个月后你将从这里毕业，迈向新的征程。假如你必须进入社会，参加工作，请根据自己的情况，以“My ideal job”为题，用英语写一篇短文。‎ 内容包括：[来源:学*科*网Z*X*X*K][来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎1. 你理想的工作；‎ ‎2. 你的理由。‎ 注意：不少于120词。‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 One possible version：‎ Time flies. I have been studying here for more than two years and will graduate. Because of my poor family, I will have to look for a job and begin my career.‎ What should I do? I would like to be a hairdresser. Firstly, I have been interested in hairstyles, so I like to observe, enjoy and study different hairstyles of different boys, girls, ladies and gentlemen and can understand what styles different people like best. Secondly, my sister has been a hairdresser for many years. She has rich experience and can help me learn how to be a hairdresser as soon as possible. So it's easy for me to begin my career.‎ Once I begin the job, I will work hard and make every effort to develop more hairstyles, letting more people enjoy their wonderful person styles.‎ ‎[来源:1]‎ ‎********************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类 ‎5. 假如你是一名大学生叫李华，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出 。‎ 学生心态 向往城市，不愿下乡。‎ 就业现状 城市人才过剩；农村渴求人才。‎ 就业前景 农村天地广阔，可施展才华。‎ Dear editor, ‎ I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.‎ As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.‎ Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎*****************************************************结束 高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类 ‎6. 假如你叫王东，你的叔叔三十年前离开家乡去了美国。不久前，他观看China Report节目，得知中国决定加大建设社会主义新农村的力度，感慨万分，于是发了一份e-mail给你，询问近来家乡的变化情况。请根据email内容和提示要点，给你叔叔做简要回复。E-mail开头和结尾已经给出。‎ ‎ 日期：‎‎20-03-2006‎ ‎ 发件人：Wangguifu usa@hotmail.com[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎ 收件人：Wangdong_88@l63.com ‎ 主题：T0 Xiaodong[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ Dear Xiao Dong ‎ How are you doing?‎ The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside. The report at once took my thoughts back to the small village I once lived in.‎ ‎ The houses were old and low. The roads were muddy and narrow. Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town. Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones.‎ ‎ How time flies!. It is 30 years since I left my home village. It must have changed a lot. Would you please write and tell me something about its changes?‎ ‎ Remember me to your parents!‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Wang Guifu 要点：①．叔叔离家后，家乡变化很大。 ②．生活条件愈来愈好。‎ ‎ ③．房子大而宽敞，许多人住进了设施齐全的公寓。‎ ‎④．装了电话，买了彩电、洗衣机、冰箱等。⑤．宽敞的道路连接了村庄和城镇。‎ ‎ ⑥．买了拖拉机、卡车和汽车。⑦．学校教育良好。⑧．政府重视农村城市化建设。‎ 要求：1)、词数：100左右。2)、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Uncle , ‎ ‎ I’m very glad to receive your email . ‎ ‎ Great changes have already taken place since you left , Our living conditions are getting better and better. Villagers have moved into big and comfortable houses, and many live in well-equipped blocks of flats. Almost all have been equipped with telephones . They have not only bought color TV sets , but also washing machines , fridges, etc. Wide roads have been built to connect villages and towns. Some families have got their own tractors, trucks or even cars. Besides, children can now enjoy very good education.‎ ‎ Our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside . We are speeding up the citifying of the villages . ‎ ‎ I hope that you and aunt will come back and have a visit to the new village . ‎ ‎ Best wishes .‎ ‎ Yours ‎ ‎ Xiao Dong ‎[来源:学§科§网]‎ ‎********************************************************结束 短文改错 Last weekend I went to the Summer‎ ‎Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. ‎ I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. ‎ 参考答案：‎ Last weekend I went to the Summer‎ ‎Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake ‎ ‎ usual while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a ‎ when heard shocked little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. ‎ ‎ people ‎ Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I ‎ ‎ and managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. ‎ ‎ my I was proud ∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. ‎ ‎ of hope ‎*********************************************************结束