2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练1 9页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（1）附参考范文 短文改错(‎ 第一节：短文改错(共10小题)‎ 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ 参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra happen 去掉to crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, ‎ when and but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t ‎ his badly move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed ‎ 110. Soon the police what arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and ‎ sent policemen wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ ‎ 加he或去掉was ‎***********************************************************结束 假如你叫王方，乘出租车时丢了手提箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。 ‎ 内容要点：1． 上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（Holiday Inn）；2． 到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3． 手提箱是黑色的，由塑料制成，尺寸大约为‎60cm×‎40cm×‎16cm；4． 箱内有一台摄像机、两条长裤、三件衬衫、几本儿童读物以及一个钱包。钱包内有一张2,000美元的支票；5． 你的联系电话是：0435-3940526。 ‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已为你写好。 ‎ My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am... ‎ 学生作品： ‎ My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five luggages. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didn't notice the taxi's licence. ‎ The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetre by 40 centimetre by 16 centimetre. In it, there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three pieces of shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check of 2,000 dollars. ‎ Could the finder make relation with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526. ‎ Thank you. ‎ Wang Fang ‎ 点评： ‎ ‎1. 第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，five luggages表达不正确，可改为five pieces of luggage。 ‎ ‎2. 第一段第5句：licence意为"执照"，不是"牌照"，故the taxi's licence可改为the number of the taxi。 ‎ ‎3. 第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个 centimetre都改为centimetres。 ‎ ‎4. 第二段第3句：In it过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。 ‎ ‎5. 第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词， three pieces of shirts表达不正确，应改为three shirts。 ‎ ‎6. 第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。 ‎ ‎7．第三段第1句：make relation with me表达不正确。习作者想表达"与我取得联系"，可改为get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。 ‎ 修改好的文章：‎ My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five pieces of luggage. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didn't notice the number of the taxi. ‎ The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. In it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars. [来源:学§科§网]‎ Could the finder get in touch with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526. ‎ Thank you. [来源:学,科,网Z,X,X,K]‎ Wang Fang ‎******************************************************结束 ‎(201*·绵阳诊断)‎ Tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. One day he1.________‎ went to the cinema. It was the first time for him to do that. He2.________‎ bought a ticket and then went out. But after two or three minutes3.________‎ he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again. After a4.________‎ few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket. Two5.________‎ or three minutes later he came out and asked another ticket.6.________‎ Then the girl in the ticket office who asked him, “Why do you7.________‎ buy so many ticket? How many friends do you meet？” Tom8.________‎ answered，”No, I have not friends here. But a big boy always 9.________‎ stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces.”10.________‎ 答案与解析：‎ ‎1．but改为and　依据语境，这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。‎ ‎2．√‎ ‎3．out改为in　依据语境，男孩买票走进电影院。‎ ‎4．the改为a　下文bought a third ticket有暗示。序数词前用不定冠词，表示“再一，又一”。‎ ‎5．comes改为came　结合行文逻辑，这里应用一般过去时。男孩进去又出来了。‎ ‎6．asked后加for　ask for sth.表示“要求得到……”。‎ ‎7．去掉who　这里不是定语从句，假如是定语从句，原句缺少主句。‎ ‎8．ticket改为tickets　so many后接复数名词。‎ ‎9．not改为no　not是副词，不能修饰名词，应改为no。‎ ‎10．tear改为tears　这里stop和tear是并列谓语动词，要用第三人称单数的一般现在时。‎ ‎*************************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义： 说明文 说明文是指说明事物的情况或道理的文章，目的介绍某一方面的知识。一般来说，高考中的说明文常涉及 : 商品介绍、旅游指南、科技读物和工作总结这几类，而形式上常以图画、图表和文字提示的形式出现。考生要根据实际情况综合运用多种说明方式，以便从不同角度、不同方面把说明对象完整地介绍出来，从而增强表达效果。同时注意运用适当过渡词来体现上下文的逻辑关系：‎ ‎1．表示时间顺序的：then，now，soon，afterwards，later等。‎ ‎2．表示程序、动作过程的：first，second，firstly，secondly，first of all，next，at first，at last等。‎ ‎3．表示递进的：what’s more，once more，what is worse，in addition，besides 等。‎ ‎4．表示解释和说明：namely，for example，for instance，actually，believe it or not，to tell you the truth，that is(to say)，according to this，for this reason等。[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]‎ ‎5．表示比较、对比的：just as，just like，more or less，sooner or later，on the contrary，on the other hand等。‎ ‎6．表示总结的： finally，in conclusion，in a word，in general，generally speaking，in short 等。‎ 范例：假设你是一所对外汉语大学的工作人员，新学期开学时， 请你用英语写一段有关学校服务设施的文字介绍，张贴在新生宿舍门口， 方便不懂汉语的学生熟悉环境。‎ 其中应包括以下要点：‎ ‎1．商店、 邮局、银行在校园西部游泳池附近，约五分钟路程。‎ ‎2．营业时间：商店——每天9∶00～22∶00。邮局——9∶00～17∶00周末休息。银行——中国银行9∶00～17∶00可兑换外币。‎ ‎3．理发店在银行对面，洗衣房在宿舍楼后面一栋楼的第一层。‎ ‎4．服务电话：8645336。‎ 注意：1.词数：100左右。‎ ‎2．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3．参考词汇： 兑换外币currency exchange；洗衣房 laundry To all the new students Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable，here’s some information about the service available at our school.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【思路导航】‎ ‎1．文体分析：本文是说明文。‎ ‎2．段落层次 ‎(1)第一段说明学校介绍服务设施的目的，引出正文。‎ ‎(2)第二段依次介绍商店、邮局和银行的位置及开放时间。‎ ‎(3)第三段对可能未尽事宜提供联络咨询的方式。‎ ‎【范文赏读】‎ To_all_the_new_students Welcome_to_our_school.To_make_your_stay_here_more_enjoyable，here’s_some_‎ information_about_the_service_available_at_our_school.‎ Located in the west of our school，just near the swimming pool，are the shops，the post office and the bank.The shops stay open from nine in the morning till ten at night，where you can get daily necessities.The post office is open for eight hours，from nine am to five pm.And it doesn’t open during the weekends.There is a Bank of China，which can provide you with currency exchanges.It is open for eight hours，beginning at nine in the morning.By the way，there’s a barber’s just opposite the bank.If you want to go to the laundry，there is one on the ground floor of the building just behind the dormitory.[来源:学&科&网Z&X&X&K]‎ If you have any difficulty，you may just call our hotline,8645336.We are always ready to provide you with our good service.‎ ‎******************************************************结束 [来源:1ZXXK]‎ ‎[来源:Z+xx+k.Com]‎ 高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）‎ ‎12. 根据以下图画再结合你的想象，写出一篇100字左右的短文：‎ ‎[来源:1]‎ It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely. ‎ Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.‎ ‎***************************************************结束 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎ （一）‎ To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. Lead in the bags is not possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.‎ ‎ 参考答案：‎ To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from ‎ it ‎ ‎ paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by ∧Florida newspaper says ‎ ‎ to a that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a ‎ ‎ sold metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. Lead in the bags is not ‎ ‎ humans或∧a或∧beings possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating likely goes repeated ‎ use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags ‎ ‎ are without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.‎ ‎ Should ‎**********************************************************结束[来源:Z*xx*k.Com]‎ ‎(1)(25 min.) ‎ ‎(2019·长沙一中月考)以下是一名高三学生王海写给Wise博士的一封信。请以Wise博士的名义回信。[来源:学&科&网]‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 给出至少三点建议；‎ ‎2. 词数不少于120。[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ Dear Dr. Wise，‎ I'm a senior 3 student. Since I became a graduating student, I have been staying up late to finish piles of exercises. I often feel sleepy in class. As a result, I miss lots of key points and it usually takes me more time to finish my homework, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate on what I'm doing. What's worse, I haven't made any progress, which made me lose interest and confidence in studying. What should I do?‎ Sincerely, ‎ Wang Hai ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 One possible version：‎ Dear Wang Hai, ‎ Your problem is not unusual among the senior 3 students and I'll give you some suggestions based on my own experiences and many others'.‎ First of all, make the most of every class. Not only do your teachers possess all the knowledge for the college entrance exam, but they are experienced in making the knowledge yours and in coping with exams.‎ Second, find out your problems and go all out to solve them. Exercises are not merely a means of consolidating what you have learnt but also a means of finding what you are weak in. If you have a problem, make everything, such as books, teachers or the Internet, a source to tackle it. Last, enough sleep and proper exercise play a key role in achieving high efficiency in our studies, so don't stay up too late and make daily exercise a habit.‎ After all, efficiency means everything in the third year. Wish you a bright future.‎ Yours, ‎ Dr. Wise ‎***********************************************************结束