2020届高考英语短文改错考前提分专练2 11页

‎1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（∕）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（―），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：‎ ‎1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Dear Jack,‎ I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I’d like to offer you any advice. ‎ Firstly, it’s normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you’re friendly to the others.‎ I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future . ‎ ‎2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Ken , ‎ ‎ I am very exciting to learn that you're coming to Beijing for the Olympics . Both my parent miss you a lot . So do our friend , Cathy . August is the best time of ‎ the year to visit Beijing , because of there is only a few rain .Another reason is that the weather is neither too hot or too cold . There are so many places I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer . When you come , you can stay with ourselves . My home is about three kilometers away from the National Stadium , knowing as the “Bird’s Nest ”, where opening ceremony will be held . ‎ Best regards , ‎ Janet ‎ ‎3假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎         So glad that you are interested in my new flat.Now I would like tell you something about it.Locating in the north of the city,this Residential Center is small with only six building.My flat,which covers the area of 36square meters,is in the fourth floor in Building 2.It consisted of a sitting room,a bedroom,a kitchen and a toilet.When you enter into the flat,you will find yourself in the sitting room.The sitting room is the part that I like best,because it is brightly with a lovely balcony,which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below.Although my flat is small,I like them very much because it is comfortable.‎ Best regards,‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua. ‎ ‎4、假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ Dear Ms. Smith,‎ I am secretary of the City Student Union(CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. ‎ Looking forward to hear from you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Jim,‎ Here is a piece of news which may appeal to you. Our school English paper will hold a essay competition which theme is “Natural Disasters”. I’d like invite you to take part in it.‎ It is well-known that many natural disasters occurs every year in America, cause great damage. You can introduce some mainly natural disasters, such as tornadoes and hurricane and tell some common sense about them. For example, we can introduce how they happen, what harm they may cause, or what you can do in the face of disasters. In China, we also face many natural disasters, but the measures you take may benefit us.‎ ‎ The deadline is on June 8th, 2019. I'm looking forward to your article.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear editor,‎ ‎  I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jack,‎ I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I’d like to offer you advice. ‎ Firstly, it’s normal for you to feel lonely because you living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an part in class activities, can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon you’re friendly to the others.‎ I hope the above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you the future . ‎ 解析：‎ 第一处:在find后面加 it 考查it 用法。固定句型:find+it+形容词+to do sth, it是形式宾语,用来代替后面的不定式。‎ 第二处:any →some 考查不定代词在肯定句中用some表示“一些”。‎ 第三处:were →are 考查动词时态。根据语境判断此处指现在的状况.,用一般现在时。‎ 第四处:met →meeting 考查非谓语动词。meet和句子主语是主动关系,故用现在分词。‎ 第五处:actively →active 考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词,故填active。‎ 第六处:what →which 考查定语从句的关系词。非限制性定语从句中缺少主语,指代activities,用关系代词 which。‎ 第七处:unless→if 考查连词。根据句意可知,此处指''如果"。‎ 第八处:去掉the  考查冠词。此处是泛指概念"其他人、别人",用others。the others表示在一个范围内的其他全部。‎ 第九处:suggestion→suggestions 考查名词单复数。根据上文可知,文中列出了多条建议,故用名词复数形式。‎ 第十处:for→in 考查介词。固定短语:in the future "在将来"。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Ken,‎ ‎ I am very to learn that you're coming to Beijing for the Olympics . Both my miss you a lot . So our friend, Cathy . August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing , because of there is only a rain .Another reason is that the weather is neither too or too cold . There are so many places I want to take you to after I finish my work a volunteer . When you come , you can stay with. My home is about three kilometers away from the National Stadium , as the “Bird’s Nest ”, where opening ceremony will be held . ‎ Best regards , ‎ Yours,‎ Janet ‎ 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3、答案及解析：‎ 答案： ‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎  So glad that you are interested in my new flat. Now I would like  tell you something about it.  in the north of the city, this Residential Center is small with only six . My flat, which covers  area of 36square meters, is the fourth floor in Building 2. It  of a sitting room, a bedroom, a kitchen and a toilet. When you enter into the flat, you will find yourself in the sitting room. The sitting room is the part that I like best, because it is  with a lovely balcony,  I can enjoy the beautiful garden below. Although my flat is small, I like  very much because it is comfortable.‎ Best regards,‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua.‎ 解析： 1.加to.短语搭配,would like to do想要做某事.‎ ‎2.locating改为located.短语搭配,be located in坐落于,be动词省略了.‎ ‎3.building改为buildings.前面有six,building大楼,可数名词,要用复数.‎ ‎4.the改为an.短语搭配,an area of一片区域,一块面积,表示泛指.‎ ‎5.in改为on.在楼上,用介词on.‎ ‎6.consisted改为consists.时态错误,文章讲述的客观现实,要用一般现在时态.‎ ‎7.into去掉enter.是及物动词,直接带宾语,不需要介词.‎ ‎8.brightly改为bright.句中是作系动词的表语,要用形容词.‎ ‎9.which改为where.题干是一个定语从句,从句主谓宾结构完整,要用关系副词.‎ ‎10.them改为it.指代错误,句意指代的是my flat单数名词,要用it.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ ‎ Dear Ms. Smith,‎ I am secretary of the City Student Union(CSU). We organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 will be on show, high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful you could join that day. ‎ Looking forward to from you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎    Here is a piece of news which may appeal to you. Our school English paper will hold essay competition theme is “Natural Disasters”. I’d like invite you to take part in it.‎ ‎    It is well-known that many natural disasters every year in America, / great damage. You can introduce some natural disasters, such as tornadoes and and tell some common sense about them. For example, can introduce how they happen, what harm they may cause, or what you can do in the ‎ face of disasters. In China, we also face many natural disasters, the measures you take may benefit us.‎ ‎    The deadline is on June 8th, 2019. I'm looking forward to your article.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ 第一处a→an【解析】essay的发音以元音音素开头，且此处表示泛指，故其前的不定冠词应用an。‎ 第二处:which→whose【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，先行词为an essay competition，从句表示“这次征文比赛的主题 是……"，关系词应该表示所属关系，故将which改为whose。‎ 第三处:在like后加to【解析】would like to do sth.意为"想去做某事"，为固定结构。故在like后加to。‎ 第四处：occurs→occur【解析】此处主语是many natural disasters,故谓语动词应用复数形式。‎ 第五处：cause→causing或在cause前加which【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处为非谓语形式作结果状语，而cause与其逻辑主语many natural disasters之间为主动关系，故将cause改为causing此处也可看作定语从句，先行词为many natural disasters，指物，关系代词作从句的主语，故在cause前加which。‎ 第六处：mainly→main【解析】natural disasters是名词短语，其前应用形容词修饰。故将mainly改为main。‎ 第七处：hurricane→hurricanes【解析】hurricane是可数名词，根据前面的tornadoes and可知，此处为可数名词的并列结构，故将hurricane改为 hurricanes。‎ 第八处:we→you【解析】根据语境可知，作者请吉姆介绍一些美国的自然灾害的情况，故此处要用第二人称。‎ 第九处：but→so/and【解析】根据语境可知，In China, we also face many natural disasters 和 the measures you take may benefit us 之间可以是因果关系，也可以是并列关系，故将but改为so或and。‎ 第十处:删除on【解析】此处表示"最后期限是2019年6月8日”，而不是“在哪一天”，故删除on。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear editor,‎ ‎  I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, I really want to tell you about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following . First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public where they may frighten children or even bite people. The important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media  do something for this.‎ 解析：‎ ‎1.句意:很抱歉占用你宝贵的时间,但是我真的有事要告诉你。故把and改为but。‎ ‎2.否定句用anything,something用于肯定句。故把anything改为something。‎ ‎3. 由后文可知,原因不止一个,故把reason改为reasons。‎ ‎4. as is known to people是固定结构,意为大家都知道。故删除it。‎ ‎5. 这是一个定语,先行词noise为不可数名词,故谓语动词用单数形式,故把trouble改为troubles。‎ ‎6. 此句为非限制性定语从句,先行词为事情,关系代词在从句中作主语,应用which。故把where改为which。‎ ‎7. place为可数名词,而公共场所的地方有很多,此处应为名词的复数。故把place改为places。‎ ‎8. 根据意思此处应为形容词的最高级。important的最高级应在前面加most。故把mostly改为most。‎ ‎9. 此处为动词短语作状语,前面应该用take的动名词形式taking。故把Take改为Taking。‎ ‎10. expect sb. to do sth.希望做某事。故在do前加to。‎ ‎ ‎