高考英语一轮复习层级3篇章结构第1讲合理恰当的细节添加教学案牛津译林版 2 3页

第1讲　合理恰当的细节添加 根据括号内的提示完成句子 ‎1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. For_example,_many_people_begin_to_pay_less_attention _to_facetoface_communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．‎ ‎2．At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and was_full_of_great _pride_and_confidence(充满了自豪和自信)．‎ ‎3．I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films, thus_making_ English_learning_more_interesting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．‎ ‎4．If_possible(如果可能的话), I'll take part in social activities so_that_I_can_ know_more_about_the_society(以便我能更多地了解这个社会)．‎ ‎5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To_my_joy,_they_made_rapid_progress_and_their_parents_thought_highly_of_me(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．‎ ‎6．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try_to_make_ more_contributions_to_our_environment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．‎ 在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的具体方法如下：‎ ‎1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ‎①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。‎ I'll spend some time staying with my parents.‎ ‎→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.‎ ‎②我看到了一些不良行为。‎ I found some bad behaviours.‎ ‎→I found some bad behaviours. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.‎ ‎③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。‎ I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.‎ ‎→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I have 3‎ ‎ time, I'll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.‎ ‎2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 ‎①我有时去村西的小河游泳。‎ I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.‎ ‎→Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then, in which the water was very clear. ‎ ‎②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。‎ After a week's trip, he returned home.‎ ‎→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy.‎ ‎3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 ‎①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。‎ I need a good rest. I'll do some reading.‎ ‎→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. I'll do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.‎ ‎②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人。‎ The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need. ‎ ‎→The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness.‎ ‎③演讲时要面带微笑；要讲慢些，讲清楚。‎ You should wear a smile on your face when you speak. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.‎ ‎→You should wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.‎ ‎4．结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等 ‎①Although I was very tired this summer holidays, I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)‎ 尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到高兴。‎ ‎②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)‎ 我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。‎ ‎③I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)‎ 我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活。‎ ‎④As a student, it's our duty to protect our school environment and make it 3‎ ‎ clean.(倡议)‎ 作为一个学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。‎ 根据提示，给下列短文增添合理恰当的细节 假设你是李华，你的美国网友Peter打算到中国留学，他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：‎ ‎1．语言是道硬门槛；　‎ ‎2．适应能力很重要；　‎ ‎3．兴趣爱好被看重。‎ 注意：1.词数80左右；‎ ‎2．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Peter，‎ In your letter you mentioned how to get the preference of Chinese universities. I believe there would be three main aspects to be considered.‎ Firstly, mastering Chinese is a basic need to live in China. 1.With_this_ability,_ you_can_communicate_with_native_speakers_easily_and_have_access_to_many_resources(有了这种能力，你与当地人交流就会很容易，而且还可以获得很多资源). Besides, it is important to adapt to the new environment quickly. 2.The_sooner_you_ can_get_used_to_the_new_environment,_the_more_beneficial_it_will_become_to_you(你熟悉新环境越早，好处就越多). Finally, personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued. 3.You_should_choose_a_major_that_you_want_to_take_up(你应该选择一个想要从事的专业). ‎ With all the strengths I mentioned above, 4.I_believe_you_can_overcome_all _the_difficulties_and_make_greater_progress_in_China(我相信在中国你能够克服所有困难，取得更大的进步)．‎ Best wishes and good luck!‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua 3‎