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第1讲 合理恰当的细节添加
根据括号内的提示完成句子
1.However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. For_example,_many_people_begin_to_pay_less_attention _to_facetoface_communication(比如,很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流).
2.At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and was_full_of_great _pride_and_confidence(充满了自豪和自信).
3.I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films, thus_making_ English_learning_more_interesting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣).
4.If_possible(如果可能的话), I'll take part in social activities so_that_I_can_ know_more_about_the_society(以便我能更多地了解这个社会).
5.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To_my_joy,_they_made_rapid_progress_and_their_parents_thought_highly_of_me(令我高兴的是,他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高).
6.Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try_to_make_ more_contributions_to_our_environment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献).
在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数,又指出了充实文章的方法,即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的具体方法如下:
1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明
①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I'll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.
②我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behaviours.
→I found some bad behaviours. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.
③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩,我非常喜欢体育运动。
I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.
→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I have
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time, I'll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.
2.增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
①我有时去村西的小河游泳。
I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.
→Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then, in which the water was very clear.
②旅行了一周后,他回到了家。
After a week's trip, he returned home.
→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy.
3.增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容
①我需要好好休息,我要做些阅读。
I need a good rest. I'll do some reading.
→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. I'll do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.
②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人。
The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need.
→The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness.
③演讲时要面带微笑;要讲慢些,讲清楚。
You should wear a smile on your face when you speak. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.
→You should wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.
4.结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等
①Although I was very tired this summer holidays, I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)
尽管我这个暑假很累,但是我为我做的感到高兴。
②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)
我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。
③I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)
我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助,你能够享受你在新学校的生活。
④As a student, it's our duty to protect our school environment and make it
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clean.(倡议)
作为一个学生,保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。
根据提示,给下列短文增添合理恰当的细节
假设你是李华,你的美国网友Peter打算到中国留学,他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:
1.语言是道硬门槛;
2.适应能力很重要;
3.兴趣爱好被看重。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
In your letter you mentioned how to get the preference of Chinese universities. I believe there would be three main aspects to be considered.
Firstly, mastering Chinese is a basic need to live in China. 1.With_this_ability,_ you_can_communicate_with_native_speakers_easily_and_have_access_to_many_resources(有了这种能力,你与当地人交流就会很容易,而且还可以获得很多资源). Besides, it is important to adapt to the new environment quickly. 2.The_sooner_you_ can_get_used_to_the_new_environment,_the_more_beneficial_it_will_become_to_you(你熟悉新环境越早,好处就越多). Finally, personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued. 3.You_should_choose_a_major_that_you_want_to_take_up(你应该选择一个想要从事的专业).
With all the strengths I mentioned above, 4.I_believe_you_can_overcome_all _the_difficulties_and_make_greater_progress_in_China(我相信在中国你能够克服所有困难,取得更大的进步).
Best wishes and good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
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