【英语】2019届高考英语二轮复习书面表达考前特训：写作4 11页

写作4‎ ‎1、假如你是李华，是一名校报记者。最近很多高一新生反映不适应高中的生活和学习，请你以“Adjust Ourselves in Time”为题写一篇英文报道。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.描述高一新生所遇到的常见问题；‎ ‎2.针对这些问题提出合理建议。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Adjust Ourselves in Time ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2、假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友Peter给你发来邮件，说他因故不能参加戏曲社活动，请给他回封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.表示理解；‎ ‎2.另约时间。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3、假定你叫李华,你的美国笔友Mary对汉服非常感兴趣,向你询问有关汉服的情况,请你用英文回复一封邮件, 介绍汉服,要点如下:‎ ‎1.汉服的历史 ‎2. 汉服的现状;‎ ‎3. 你对汉服的看法;‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4、假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。 1.学会学习:方法、习惯等; 2.学会做人:真诚、友善等;‎ ‎ 3.其他方面:考生自拟。 注意:‎ ‎1.词数120个左右; 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you!‎ ‎5、假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下: 1.栏目介绍;‎ ‎2.稿件内容; 3.稿件长度:约400词汇; 4.交稿日期:6月28日前。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的; 3.开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.   ‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, Li Hua ‎6、 假定你是李华,正在加拿大参加短期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的杂志里看到一篇介绍中国端午节的文章,但是文章里面没有注明日期是中国农历,且文中所配图片是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信,指出其中的错误并要求改正。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.指出错误,给出正确的信息;‎ ‎2.要求更正;‎ ‎3.赞赏对方介绍中国文化。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右(给出部分不计算在内);‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇:中国农历 the Chinese Lunar Calendar;赛艇rowing boat;龙舟dragon boat Dear editor,‎ I am writing to you ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Adjust Ourselves in Time Recently, many high school freshmen have reflected that they can’t fit in with the life and study in high school. They complain that they feel stressed and nervous. Besides, they can’t keep up with teachers' instruction and explanations.‎ In my opinion, the reason why those students have difficulty in melting into high school is that they don’t adjust themselves to the new environment in time. In fact, it is normal for some of us to feel stressed and nervous. In this case，we should believe that we can overcome those negative emotions and focus our attention on positive things. In addition，in order to follow what the teachers will instruct in class, we’d better preview the new lessons and know which part should be paid more attention to.‎ In a word, we must adjust ourselves in time.‎ 解析：【写作指导】‎ 审题：人称：第一人称和第三人称 时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅提纲：开头句：‎ ① Recently，many high school freshmen have reflected that they can’t fit in with the life and study in high school.‎ ‎②Recently，a lot of high school freshmen say they can't adjust themselves to the new environment in high school.‎ ‎③Recently，many high school freshmen have reflected that they have trouble with the life and ‎ study in high school.‎ 文章主体：要点一：‎ ‎①They complain that they feel stressed and nervous. Besides, they can’s keep up with teachers' instruction and explanations.‎ ‎②The main difficulty they meet is that they feel nervous and they can't keep up with teachers.‎ ‎③0n the one hand, they feel stressed and nervous. On the other hand，they can’t keep up with teachers’ instruction.‎ 要点二：‎ ‎①In fact，it is normal for some of us to feel stressed and nervous. In this case, we should believe that we can overcome those negative emotions and focus their attention on positive things.‎ ‎②As a matter of fact，it is normal for some of us to feel stressed and nervous. The key to solving the problem is that wc should believe that we can overcome those negative emotions and focus their attention on positive things.‎ ‎③In fact，the students who feel stressed and nervous should believe that they can overcome those negative emotions and focus their attention on positive things.‎ 要点三：‎ ‎①In addition，in order lo follow what the teachers will instruct in class，we’d better preview the new lessons and know which part should be paid more attention to.‎ ‎②What’s more，we d better preview the new lessons and know which part should be paid more attention to so that we can follow what the teachers will instruct in class.‎ ‎③Besides, if we can preview the new lessons and know which part should be paid more attention to, it is beneficial for us to follow what the teachers will instruct in class.‎ 结尾句：‎ ‎①In a word，we must adjust ourselves in time.‎ ‎②In short, be positive and adjust ourselves in time.‎ ‎③In conclusion, we must adjust ourselves in time.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ What a pity that you can't participate in the activity held by the Chinese opera club.‎ Considering that you have a great passion to learn about Chinese opera, I’m willing to make it another time. Recently, I learned that a Chinese opera show is around the corner, which is organized by the club and acknowledged as the biggest annual activity. Many artists will show up with their profound performances, thus making the show professional and perfect. So much are you interested in Chinese opera that you will be full of satisfaction after watching them. How about meeting next Sunday when the show is scheduled to be held?‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎【写作指导】本题要求给不能参加戏曲社活动的Peter写一封邮件，写作时应注意：‎ ‎1.审题：根据任务提示可知，邮件的主体部分仍以三段式为佳。第一段简单表示自.己的理解；第二段是重点，表示另约时间参加戏曲社的另一次活动，可以扩展一下活动的大致内容等；第三段可以一句话表示期待他的回复。‎ ‎2.人称和时态：人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅（另约时间）。‎ ‎3.遣词造句：be sorry to hear.听到很遗憾"；participate in"参加"；make it another time"另约时间"；be scheduled to"安排"；be interested in/take interest in"对……感兴趣"等。‎ ‎【名师点评】本文语言流畅，要点齐全，发挥适度，且运用了大量的好词好句：‎ 好词：have a great passion, be willing to, make it another time, be around the comer, be acknowledged as, profound 好句：‎ ‎①现在分词作状语，其中含有宾语从句：Considering that you have a great passion to learn about Chinese opera；‎ ②非限制性定语从句：which is organized by the club and acknowledged as the biggest ‎ annual activity；‎ ③so…that...句型：So nmch are you interested in Chinese opera that you will be full of satisfaction after watching them；‎ ④提建议句型 + 定语从句：How about meeting next Sunday when the show is scheduled to be held?‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Mary,‎ ‎    You can never imagine my excitement and joy when I learnt that you show great interest in Chinese traditional costume 一 Hanfu. Here follows some detailed description about it.‎ ‎    Hanfu has impressed people with the rich and profound ancient Chinese culture with a long history. Traditional Hanfu includes all traditional clothing sorts of the Han Chinese with recorded history of more than three thousand years until the end of the Ming Dynasty. Not only does it play a significant role in the past time, but also it gets an undoubted realistic sense. Nonetheless, Hanfu is facing great challenge for there are fewer and fewer people paying attention to it. From my perspective, it's high time the Chinese should take effective measures to prevent Hanfu from fading away from sight.‎ ‎    I sincerely hope you've satisfied with my reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：【写作指导】这是一篇应用文,要求考生回复一封邮件,话题是给外国笔友介绍汉服,属于半开放作文,考生应根据提纲,进行发挥拓展,这也考查了考生对传统中国文化知识的积累。写作要点:1.介绍汉服的历史;2.汉服的现状;3.对汉服的看法。注意适当使用高级词汇和复杂句式。‎ ‎【名师点评】本范文审题到位,要点齐全,符合题目要求,并且使用了许多高级词汇和复杂句式,把文章要点流畅地表达出来。‎ 句式结构:when引导的时间状语从句;倒装句;it is high time (that)...句型等。‎ 高级词汇:show great interest in,profound, facing great challenge, paying attention to, From my perspective, take effective measures,fading away等。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.        ‎ In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons,get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.       ‎ In addition,we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.      ‎ Finally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, because they were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.      ‎ No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and harmonious environment.That’s all.       ‎ Thanks you!‎ 解析：‎ ‎【要点翻译】‎ ‎1.在未来的三年,你的学校生活将富有挑战性。‎ In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging.‎ ‎2.你应该学会高效学习。‎ You should learn to learn efficiently.‎ ‎3. 养成一个好习惯也很重要。‎ Developing a good habit is also of importance.‎ ‎4. 在学校你应该学会如何与别人相处。‎ You should learn how to get along with others in school.‎ ‎5. 你应该经常参加体育运动和其他户外活动。‎ You should take part in sports and other outdoor activities frequently.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点: 1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确三个要点:首先,简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。 2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。 3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。  4、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语, And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from等。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear editor.‎ I am writing to you rcgarding/conccming some of the mistakes in your recent issue featuringthe Chinese Dragon Boat Festival.‎ This Festival, a grand holiday originating in China. falls on May Sth according to the ChineseLunar Calendar. not the calendar used around the world. Traditionally. boats which arc shaped andbeautifully decorated like a dragon are raced on rivers in honor/memory/praise of the ancientpatriotic poet - Qu Yuan. Obviously. they arc quite different from the rowing boats especially interms of their design and purpose. Therefore. to correct the relevant mistakes may be necessary andconstructive so that readers can acquire authentic information about the festival.‎ However. I do appreciate your effort to introduce this festival to your readers. which will surelybridge the cultural gap between our two countries.‎ Hope you could take my advice into consideration.‎ Sincerely yours.‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎ ‎