【英语】2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（2）应用文写作-建议信 10页

应用文写作-建议信 ‎1、假定你是李华。新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议,请给书店经理Mr. Davis写一封建议信,内容包括:‎ ‎1.拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验;‎ ‎2.提供咨询、讲座等服务; ‎ ‎3.其他建议(至少一条)。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数80左右;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2、假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试,最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。请根据以下要点,给她写一封书信提一些建议。‎ 信的内容应包括下列要点:‎ ‎1.正确认识考试;‎ ‎2.积极为考试做准备;‎ ‎3.注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数为100左右;‎ ‎2.不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。‎ Dear Alice,‎ I have received your letter saying that you are anxious about the coming exam.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  I wish you success in the exam.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎3、建议信 假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级,她在与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题,因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。你的建议内容如下:‎ ‎1.学会倾听 ‎2.有分歧时让步 ‎3.多陪伴 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右 ‎2. 开头及结尾为你写好,不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇:compromise 让步 Dear Ann,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎4、假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jamie发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣,但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难,比如很多汉字不认识,读不懂文章的意思等,他希望得到你的帮助。请用英文给Jamie回邮件。内容要点如下:‎ ‎1. 表示理解并给予安慰;‎ ‎2. 提出建议并说明理由。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。信中不能出现考生本人的相关信息。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5、假定你是李华,你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈,经常发照片分享生活中的所有细节,请根据以下要点提示,给Jim写一封信:‎ ‎(1)对分享行为表示理解;‎ ‎(2)阐述过度分享的危害;‎ ‎(3)提出建议。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数90--120左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 参考词汇:微信朋友圈 WeChat circle; 过度分享 oversharing Dear Jim,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         Best wishes!‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎6、假定你是李华,请你根据下面提示,针对当前有些游客在景区的不文明行为,向政府有关部门用英语写一封信。‎ 内容要点如下:1.列举游客的不文明行为(至少两点);‎ ‎                         2.说明不文明行为的不良影响(至少两点);‎ ‎                         3.对此,你的感想或建议。‎ 注意:1.词数100左右;‎ ‎         2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ 参考词汇:不文明的uncivilized Dear Sir,‎ Nowadays,many tourists behave badly in some scenic spots.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎7、假如你是李华,你收到了你的同学Abby的来信,听说他因高三压力太大,非常烦恼。请你给他写封回信,建议他如何减压。注意:请根据以上要点写一篇100词左右的短文,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。‎ ‎8、现在青少年健康问题日趋严峻。假设你是班长李华,请根据下列信息,给校长写一封信。‎ ‎1.现状:青少年体质明显下降(如肥胖、近视等);‎ ‎2.原因:作业负担过重,睡眠不足,缺乏锻炼;‎ ‎3.建议:减轻学生负担。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计人总词数;‎ ‎3. 词数100左右。‎ 参考词汇:肥胖 obesity;近视 short-sightedness。‎ Dear Headmaster,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Mr. Davis,‎ Congratulations on your newly-opened bookstore. Here are some suggestions for increasing the popularity of your store.‎ Firstly, some spacious room should be designed to provide readers with reading experience, which some online bookstores can’t match. Secondly, it may be helpful to offer some consultation or relevant reading lectures to help readers make proper choices of books and stimulate their interest in reading. In addition, the coffee and snack section will also make the bookstore more attractive.‎ Hope my ideas will be helpful!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Alice,‎ I have received your letter saying that you are anxious about the coming exam.‎ In my opinion,it’s important for you to have a right attitude towards exams.They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies,so there is no need to worry too much about the results.You should study hard every day and make good preparations for exams.In this way you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.‎ Besides,you’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate yourself on exams.What’s more,having enough sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in an exam.‎ I wish you success in the exam.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Ann,‎ ‎    I am delighted to have  received your letter. In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends  in a new class.‎ ‎    From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen. When someone is talking to you, look at them.  Above all, don’t interrupt them. Another thing I want to remind you is that you should compromise, when you don’t agree with each other, one or both of you should agree to give up something to find a solution .Last but not least you should keep in mind that it takes time and energy to build new and good relationship. You cannot expect to become friends with someone if you don’t spend time with them.‎ ‎    I sincerely hope that what I have suggested can be helpful for you. am looking forward to your reply.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jamie,‎ ‎    I am more than glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don't have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.‎ ‎    First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I'm always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!‎ ‎    Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎    I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to sharing all sorts of photos in WeChat circle recently. Undeniably, WeChat makes communication convenient and leisure time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is leaking privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing off.‎ ‎    Thus, never should we post our personal information, nor should we rashly add strangers to the list of friends. It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.‎ ‎    Best wishes!‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Sir,‎ Nowadays,many tourists behave badly in some scenic spots.Their uncivilized behaviors are presented in the following aspects.‎ Some travelers are unwilling to queue up for tickets in the scenic regions because they always want to get benefit for themselves ahead of others.Some others even shake the trees to see the flowers falling down on purpose.Their behaviors destroy the beauty of nature as well as their own images seriously.‎ As for the behaviors mentioned above,I feel very angry about it.I suggest that the government should take tough measures to prevent the behaviors.For example,the people should be punished due to what they have done.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Abby,‎ ‎    I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.‎ ‎    First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the college entrance examinations isa long-term and complicated process andconfidence plays an important role init. Sonever give up or lose heart no matter what happens.Second, you should find outyour own strengths and weaknessesin your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates inface of difficulties and stress. Last but not the least,you are supposed todo more physical exercise so as to keep fitas well as relax yourselves.Always remember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.‎ ‎    Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!‎ Yours Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎8答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Headmaster,‎ ‎    How are you? Nowadays many Chinese students commonly have health problems, such as obesity, short-sightedness and so on.‎ ‎    Under the current educational system, doing endless homework makes the students more stressful and bored in order to go to college. As a result, they don't sleep or exercise enough, thus affecting their health.‎ ‎    To improve the physical problems, we should reform the current educational system. What's more, we reduce much homework so that we students could have more time to sleep and take exercise and only in this way can the health of Chinese students be greatly improved.‎ ‎    Thanks for your reading. Please help us!‎ Your sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎(108 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 ‎1. 理清写作者“我”(李华)与收信人校长的关系,在人称上务必一致。‎ ‎2. 有效整合要点之间的逻辑关系,适当调序,切不可盲目逐条翻译。‎ ‎3. 根据语言特点的表达需要,可适时进行梳理,选择恰当的句式委婉准确地进行表达。‎ 精彩点评 ‎1. 作者具有良好的英语语言驾驭能力,简约有序地组织表达了所有的内容要点。‎ ‎2. 用词精确谨慎,所选句式难易交错。如动名词短语作主语, 现在分词短语作状语,so that引导状语从句等。‎ ‎3. 固定句式及地道的短语赋予了文章别样的风采。如do endless homework; go to college; affect one’s health; take exercise等。‎ ‎4.最后only in this way can the health of Chinese students be greatly improved的精准表达,更加展示了作者娴熟的语法运用能力和巧妙的遣词造句能力。‎ ‎ ‎