高中英语人教版必修4测试：Unit4 Section Ⅳ　Writing 6页

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing 如何写慰问信 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 任务呈现 假定你是李华，从报纸上得知你的美国笔友James的家乡遭遇了飓风。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，给予关心和安慰。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear James，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 写作指导 一、审题定调 ‎　　 本写作任务要求写一封慰问信，向受灾的笔友表示同情并给予安慰，属于________。‎ 二、谋篇布局 因本写作任务称呼、结束语和签名已给出，所以我们只需写出正文部分。‎ ‎ 慰问信的正文通常分为三部分：‎ ‎ 第一部分：引入话题(同情对方遭遇，表明写信目的)；‎ 第二部分：表示慰问(向对方的处境表示理解、关心，并给予鼓励或者提供帮助等)；‎ 第三部分：总结全文(希望可以提供帮助)。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：引入话题(同情对方遭遇，表明写信目的)。‎ ‎1．________________________，(在今天的报纸上) I read about the recent hurricane in your hometown.‎ ‎2．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 我对你们深表同情。‎ 第二部分：表示慰问(向对方的处境表示理解、关心，并给予鼓励或者提供帮助等)。‎ ‎3．When I saw... in the hurricane, ________________________________.(我充满了深深的悲伤)‎ ‎4．You and your family ________________________ at this time.(肯定处在极大困难中)‎ ‎5．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 但是生活并非那样糟糕。‎ ‎6．Some organisations in my country are starting various campaigns to... to help you ________________________________________________________________________...(‎ 度过难关)‎ 第三部分：总结全文(希望可以提供帮助)。‎ ‎7．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 请代我向你父母问好。‎ ‎8．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 如果你需要我做什么，尽管告诉我。‎ 四、连句成篇 Dear James，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 我的写作体会：________________________________________‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 假定你是李华，你的同学Peter是从英国来的交换生，你发现最近他在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。请你给Peter写一封邮件，表达你对他的关心。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 Outline of the text：‎ Paragraph 1: Giving the purpose of writing the email.‎ Paragraph 2: Asking if something is wrong and expressing your concern.‎ Paragraph 3: Encouraging Peter and expecting his reply.‎ 二、词语储备 A：notice, lower, depressed, concerned, ease, ready, hesitate B：1.________________ 可能……‎ ‎2．________________ 担心……‎ ‎3．________________ 习惯……‎ ‎4．________________ 对……感到困惑 ‎5．________________ 与某人分享某事 ‎6．________________ 减轻某人的忧虑 ‎7．________________ 做某事不要犹豫 ‎8．________________ 高兴起来；振作起来 ‎9．________________ 期盼某事 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．你可能非常沮丧，这使我非常担心你。‎ ‎→Probably you are quite depressed. And it makes me greatly concerned about you.(改为非限制性定语从句)‎ ‎→It is likely that you are quite depressed, ________________________________.‎ ‎2．我想知道你是不适应中国的生活还是对课程感到困惑。‎ ‎→I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons.(改为疑问句)‎ ‎→________________ whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons?‎ ‎3．记住：我总是随时准备帮助你。‎ ‎→Remember that I'm always ready to help you at any time.(改为含forget的句子)‎ ‎→________________________ I'm always ready to help you at any time.‎ ‎4．我能为你做些什么吗？不要犹豫让我知道。‎ ‎→Is there anything I can do for you? Don't hesitate to let me know.(改为条件句)‎ ‎→________________________________， don't hesitate to let me know.‎ ‎5．最近我注意到你在课堂上总是低着头。(汉译英)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 我的写作体会：______________________________________________‎ 写作训练 一、 假定你是李华，最近你发现每次你的同学王红和交换生Mary打招呼时，Mary都背过身去不予理睬。请你给Mary写一封邮件，表达你对她的关心并表达愿意提供帮助。‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1.词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 二、据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后，处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英语给Amy写一封慰问信。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Section Ⅳ　Writing 一测　基础过关 写作指导 一、审题定调 ‎　应用文 三、组织语言 ‎1．In today's newspaper ‎2．I felt great pity for you ‎3．I was filled with deep sorrow ‎4．must be in great difficulty ‎5．But life isn't that bad ‎6．get through the difficulties ‎7．Please give my regards to your parents ‎8．If there is anything you need me to do, just let me know 四、连句成篇 Dear James，‎ In today's newspaper, I read about the recent hurricane in your hometown. I felt great pity for you.‎ When I saw lots of homes had been destroyed in the hurricane, I was filled with deep sorrow. You and your family must be in great difficulty at this time. But life isn't that bad. Some organisations in my country are starting various campaigns to call on people to raise money to help you get through the difficulties as soon as possible.‎ Please give my regards to your parents. If there is anything you need me to do, just let me know.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 二测　能力提升 写作步骤 二、词语储备 ‎1．it is likely that...‎ ‎2．be concerned about...‎ ‎3．be used to...‎ ‎4．be confused about...‎ ‎5．share sth. with sb.‎ ‎6．ease one's worries ‎7．don't hesitate to do sth.‎ ‎8．cheer up ‎9．look forward to sth.‎ 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．which makes me greatly concerned about you ‎2．Could you tell me ‎3．Don't forget that ‎4．If there is anything I can do for you ‎5．Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head in class 四、扩充要点，连词成句 Dear Peter，‎ How is everything going? Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head in class. It is likely that you are quite depressed, which makes me greatly concerned about you.‎ Could you tell me what's wrong with you? I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons. I hope that you can share your trouble with me and maybe I can help to ease your worries. Remember that I'm always ready to help you at any time. If there is anything I can do for you, don't hesitate to let me know.‎ Cheer up and believe that everything will be OK. I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 三测　学业达标 写作训练 一、One possible version：‎ Dear Mary，‎ How is everything going? Recently I have found that every time Wang Hong greets you, you always turn your back to her. Your behavior has concerned me very much.‎ I wonder what has happened between Wang Hong and you. I guess maybe it was the joke she played on you last week that made you angry. If so, I'm sure she didn't mean to hurt you and that it was just a misunderstanding. If there is anything else, please tell me and I'll try my best to clear up the misunderstanding between you two.‎ Now ease your mind and everything will be fine. I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 二、One possible version：‎ Dear Amy，‎ I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in China. I am very sorry to hear of your present situation and that you are so bitter after about having such a disease.‎ As far as I know, at present, ACS will give you three cents whenever you receive a letter. This will offer you a lot of courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome you difficulties, no matter how hard it is. I'm sure you can make it.‎ I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may give you the courage you need to live on.‎ May you recover soon!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua