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专题六 书面表达
应用文写作常见8大文体(一)——普通书信/电子邮件
一、
写作架构要规范
英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,其开头、结尾常常都会给出,正文可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构为:
二、
靓点句式背一番
(一)开头常用语
1.I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.
我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。
2.There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.
再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。
3.Sorry to reply to your letter so late.
抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
(二)主体部分常用语
1.I’ve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion, you should ...
我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。在我看来,你应该……
2.If necessary, we can arrange a facetoface discussion sometime this week.
如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。
(三)结尾常用语
1.I’d appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。
2.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
盼望能尽快收到你的回信。
三、
润色完善很关键
(2018·沈阳检测)假定你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Peter在邮件中询问你打算如何度过高三毕业后的暑假。请你给Peter回复邮件,内容包括:
1.对暑假的期盼;
2.你的假期计划及理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(一)准审题、准表达保基本分
定体裁
电子邮件
定人称
第一人称为主
定时态
一般现在时为主
定要点
定结构
开头:引入话题,写邮件的背景(期盼暑假)
主体:假期计划及理由(去北京旅游、兼职等)
结尾:表达心情,并期待对方尽早回复
[中档作文]
Dear Peter,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination❶.Then I can do a lot of amazing things❷.
First❸, I plan to take a trip to Beijing❹.It is the center of politics and culture❺.It can not only broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture❻.❼I have applied for a parttime job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good chance❽ for me to promote myself.I believe❾ the job can help me make full preparations for the college life.Lastly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I hope I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)巧润色、大升级创高分
(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)
Dear Peter,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination, (1)during which I can do a lot of amazing things (❶❷句合并升级为定语从句).
(2)To start/begin with (词汇升级❸), I plan to take a trip to Beijing, (3)the center of politics and culture (❹❺句合并升级为名词短语作同位语).(4)Not only can it broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture (升级句❻为倒装句).(5)What’s more(❼前加过渡词汇), I have applied for a parttime job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good (6)opportunity (词汇升级❽) for me to promote myself.I (7)hold the firm belief that (词汇升级❾) the job can help me make full preparations for the college life.Lastly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I (8) do hope (升级句为强调句) I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、
“一题两用”错不犯
下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作,文中共有10处语言错误,请改正。
Dear Peter,
You can’t imagine what glad I was when I received your letter asking me for the plans in summer holiday.Actually, I have been longing for a relaxed and meaningful summer holiday.
The first thing coming to my mind is to get a driving license, what I think is a must for most college student in China.Apart from a completely relaxation, I also plan to take an English course to improve my speaking English.In addition to, I want to take active part in different social activities to better myself.
I believe the holiday must be fascinating before I finish the College Entrance Examination.I can’t wait to enjoy them!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:第一句:what→how
第二句:relaxed→relaxing
第三句:what→which; student→students
第四句:completely→complete; speaking→spoken
第五句:去掉第一个to; take后加an
第六句:before→after
第七句:them→it