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写作规范练5
Ⅰ.应用文写作
假定你是红星中学的高三学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的Smith夫妇写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.感谢对你的照顾;
2.感谢带你体验西方文化;
3.邀请他们来中国游玩。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
How's everything going?It's been almost a week since I left America and I miss you very much.
During the winter holiday,you took good care of me.Your love made me feel at home.Besides,you showed me around New York and the visit to Times Square was great,which left me a good memory and helped me learn more about American culture.Thank you very much.
I hope you'll come to China one day and I'll take you to the places
of interest in Beijing.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A wealthy man and his son loved to collect rare works of art.They had everything in their collection,from Picasso to Raphael.They would often sit together and admire the great works of art.When the Vietnam conflict broke out,the son went to war.He was very courageous and died in battle while rescuing another soldier.The father was told the sad news and in deep sorrow for his only son.About a month later,just before Christmas,there was a knock at the door.A young man stood at the door with a large package in his hands.
He said,“Sir,you don't know me,but I am the soldier for whom your son gave his life.He saved many lives that day,and he was carrying me to safety when a bullet struck him in the heart and he died instantly.He often talked about you,and your love for art.”The young man held out this package.“I know this isn't much.I'm not really a great artist,but I think your son would have wanted you to have this.”
The father opened the package.It was a portrait(肖像画)of his son,painted by the young man.He stared in amazement at the way the soldier had caught the personality of his son in the painting.The father was so drawn to the eyes that his own eyes welled up with tears.He thanked the young man and offered to pay him for the picture.“Oh,no sir,I could never repay what your son did for me.It's a gift.”
The father hung the portrait on the wall of the sitting room.Every time visitors came to his home he took them to see the portrait of his son before he showed them any of the other great works he had collected.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下画线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下画线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The father died a few months later and his lawyer organized a great auction(拍卖)of his paintings according to his will. ________
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【写作指导】
◆文章主线
已知线索:
父亲和儿子收集稀有艺术品—欣赏艺术品—儿子奔赴战场—牺牲在战场上—一个大的包裹—儿子的肖像—无价的艺术品—死后拍卖艺术品……
可续写线索:儿子的肖像拍卖?没人要?多少钱?剩下的艺术品?
◆续写词汇
已给提示词汇:the son,in deep sorrow,art,a great artist,personality,tears,pay,gift,the sitting room,works
续写可能用到的词汇:influential,purchase,famous,skip,persist,gardener,restless,surprise,over,rule,reveal,paintings
[参考范文]
The father died a few months later and his lawyer organized a great auction of his paintings according to his will.Many influential people gathered,excited over seeing the great paintings and having an opportunity to purchase one for their collections.“We will start with this picture of the son.Who wants this picture?”Silence.Then a voice shouted,“We want to see the famous works.”“Skip this one.It's not art.”Another angry voice said.But the lawyer persisted.Finally,a voice came from the very back of the room.It was the longtime gardener of the man and his son.“I'll pay $10 for the painting.That's all I have.I love the son.”“Now let's go on with the true masterpieces!”The crowd became restless,excitement filling the room.
But to everyone's surprise,the lawyer announced the auction was over!“What about the paintings?”“I am sorry.There was a secret rule in the will.I was not allowed to reveal it until now.It said whoever bought that painting of the son would get all the rest paintings.A gift!”Tears trickling down the face,the old man murmured,“Thank you! Thank you! My dear master!I love you!”
Ⅲ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
If you're anything like us,it seems that your stomach starts to grumble(隆隆响)as soon as McDonald's golden arches come into view.The reason behind that isn't the mouthwatering taste of their delicious fries this is how they get them to taste so good by the way—it's actually psychological,and it has to do with the colours of their logo.
The colours red and yellow were chosen for a specific reason—and no,it wasn't because they looked nice with Ronald McDonald's clownlike face.It actually has to do with science.The colour red is stimulating and is associated with being active.It also increases heart rate,which helps to jumpstart your appetite.The colour yellow is associated with happiness and is the most visible colour in daylight,so that's why a McDonald's sign is so easy to spot on a crowded road.
The brain processes colour before it processes words or shapes,so that's why the fastfood chain chose these two colours for their logo and brand.Red and yellow make you hungry,encouraging you to want to buy the product they sell,while also making you feel happy.
McDonald's has started to use this colour philosophy to influence
and change the way people currently think about their brand as well.Many franchises(授权经销商)in Europe have started to incorporate more of the colour green into their storefronts and interior design because it's associated with nature and being environmentally friendly,something McDonald's has been criticized for not being in the past.The company has been working to become greener by using environmentally friendly refrigeration and converting used oil into biodiesel(生物柴油)fuel.
So,next time you pass a McDonald's,don't be surprised if you find it really hard to resist going in and getting a burger and coke.
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[参考范文]
The reason why people can't resist the temptation of McDonald's is psychologically connected with colours of the logo.(要点1)Yellow and red are chosen to help increase people's appetite and make the store sign easy to spot.(要点2)Another reason is that the human brain processes colour before words or shapes.(要点3)Nowadays McDonald's takes advantage of the colour philosophy to become more environmentally friendly by incorporating more green colour into its store design.(要点4)
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