【英语】2019届高考英语二轮复习增分技巧学案：专题六应用文写作常见8大文体（八） 4页

‎ 应用文写作常见8大文体(八)——演讲稿 一、 ‎ 写作架构要规范 演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，该文体通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。具体写作结构为：‎ 二、 ‎ 靓点句式背一番 ‎(一)开头常用语 ‎1．My name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I shall be speaking about ...‎ 我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……‎ ‎2．Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...‎ 大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。‎ ‎3．It’s my honor to stand here and say something about friendship.‎ 我非常荣幸站在这里并谈谈关于友谊的话题。‎ ‎(二)主体部分常用语 ‎1．The topic of my speech today is ...‎ 我今天演讲的主题是……‎ ‎2．As far as I am concerned, I think it is a good idea to ...‎ 就我而言，我认为……是一个好主意。‎ ‎3．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success, but few people can really understand what the saying means.‎ 众所周知，失败是成功之母，可是很少有人真正理解这句格言的真谛。‎ ‎(三)结尾常用语 ‎1．Thanks for your listening (to my speech)．‎ 感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。‎ ‎2．That’s all I want to say about this point.‎ 关于这一点，我就讲这些。‎ 三、 ‎ 润色完善很关键 在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以“My dream career”为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：‎ ‎1．你的理想职业；‎ ‎2．选择的理由；‎ ‎3．实现的途径。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3．可以根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone！　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you for listening.‎ ‎(一)准审题、准表达保基本分 定体裁 演讲稿 定人称 第一人称为主 定时态 一般现在时为主 定要点 定结构 开头：演讲主题(理想职业) ‎ 主体：主题内容(选择的理由) ‎ 结尾：总结演讲(实现的途径)‎ ‎[中档作文]‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone! ‎ Today, please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will do❶ in the future. Undoubtedly, I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present❷. And my dream career is to be a tourist guide. From my early age, I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere❸. They share the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoy the brilliant landscapes at the same time❹. Also❺， it is a wellpaid job.‎ To be a good guide is no easy job. I can achieve the qualification and serve the people properly only by hard work❻.‎ Thank you for listening.‎ ‎(二)巧润色、大升级创高分 ‎(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone!‎ ‎ Today, please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will (1)take up (词汇升级❶) in the future. (2)There is no doubt that I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present (把句❷升级为同位语从句). And my dream career is to be a tourist guide.(3) From my early age, I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere, sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time (把句❸❹合并升级为非谓语动词作状语). (4)In addition (词汇升级❺), it is a wellpaid job.‎ To be a good guide is no easy job. (5)Only by hard work can I achieve the qualification and serve the people properly (把句❻升级为倒装句式)．‎ Thank you for listening.‎ 四、 ‎ ‎“一题两用”错不犯 下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone!‎ I feel greatly honour to give you a speech on a career I will take up in the future. My dream career was to be a doctor. As a child, I hoped that I could grow up as soon as possibly so that I could devote myself to save lives. Not only doctors save people’s lives but also we are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledges. In addition, it’s a wellpaid job.‎ As far as I’m concerned, it is not easy to be a good doctor. It is only by hard work what I can achieve the qualification and serve for the people heart and soul.‎ Thank you for listening.‎ 答案：第二句：honour→honoured; 第二个a→the 第三句：was→is 第四句：possibly→possible; save→saving 第五句：only后加can; we→they 第六句：knowledges→knowledge 第九句：what→that; 去掉for