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2019届二轮复习写作专题导练:学案(十八) 高仿模板快得分——“七大文体”有诀窍:感谢信
近几年全国卷高考写作文体基本稳定,主要考查书信文体的写作,书信依据表达的内容又可分为邀请信、建议信、申请信等七种类型。针对这七种文体分类训练,有利于考生掌握各文体的写作特点和行文规范,并提供可供“仿作”的架构模板,有利于考生在考场上快速打开思路,依模板临摩快得分。
感谢信
[题型技法] (学一学)
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。
[经典考题] (悟一悟)
[典例] (2018·青岛模拟)假定你是李华。最近,你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间,你和房东Mr. Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲,给Mr. Wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助;
3.邀请他来中国游览。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[满分范文]
Dear Mr. Wilson,
①How is everything going? ②I've been back home now. ③I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
④While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable. ⑤How I miss the days we spent together! ⑥ to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon. ⑦I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. ⑧Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me. ⑨By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improve my spoken English.
⑩I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future. ⑪It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
[阅卷评点]
①开篇问候,显现礼貌。
③gratitude是高级词汇,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
⑤句中使用了感叹句和定语从句,大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。
⑩高级短语keep in touch with和communicate with的正确使用为文章锦上添花。
⑪本句中it作形式主语,so that ...引导目的状语从句,这显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力,增加了文章得分的亮点。
[增分佳句] (背一背)
1.开头部分常用语:
(1)I am writing to express my thanks for ...
我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...
在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
(3)On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ...
我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。
2.结尾部分常用语:
(1)Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心。
(2)Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!/Thanks again for your kind help.
我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
(3)I appreciate it more than I can say./I can never thank you enough.
感激之情,无以言表。
[热点押题] (练一练)
假定你是李华,目前正在英国做交换生。你的英国朋友Debbie送了你一张苏格兰传统舞蹈——凯利舞(Ceilidh Dance)舞会票。现在,请给她写一封邮件致谢,并询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
参考范文:
Dear Debbie,
I am delighted to receive your ticket for the Ceilidh Dance. I really feel grateful for your kindness and it will surely make my cultural experience here more colorful. Here, I'd like to know some details about this dance.
First, could you please give me a brief introduction to this dance so that I can know something about it before attending it? Besides, I'd like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I'm supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones? Finally, I'm wondering how I can get there and avoid being late.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua