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只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 1 - 第三部分 要诀四 (2012 全国新课标Ⅱ卷) 假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加，要 点包括： 1．时间：周五晚 8 点至 9 点 2．地点：学生俱乐部 3．内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4．要求：备小礼物 注意： 1．词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结语已为你写好。 Dear Susan， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Hi Susan， We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. (1)We want to give him a surprise, ① but please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8：00 p．m. ②the Friday, after the evening classes. And it will last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he ③come, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. (2)Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too. Yours， Li Hua 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 2 - 1．错误聚焦 (1)① but 前后两句话的意思没有转折关系，只是一种承接关系，故要将 but 改为 ____________。 (2)表达“在星期几”时， “星期”不用加任何冠词或指示词，故②the 要改为 ____________。 (3)在时间状语从句中，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，故③come 要改为 ____________。 【答案】(1)and (2)this (3)comes 2．高分靓句 (1) 将 画 线 句 子 (1) 改 为 含 有 非 谓 语 动 词 的 句 子 ： Please keep quiet about it ____________________________________________. (2)将画线句子(2)改成主语是 we，多个并列谓语动词的句子：We'll cut the cake， __________________________________. 【答案】 (1)in order to/to give him surprise (2)sing songs and play games 参考范文 Hi Susan， We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. And I am writing to invite you to our party. Would you like to come and join us? We will be very glad if you can come. The party will start at 8 o'clock on Friday, and will last for an hour. We will meet in the Students' Club. Then we will have a birthday song, cake for Xiaoming. We will play some games, too. The only requirement is preparing a small gift for Xiaoming. It will be very cold at night. Please wear more clothes. I am waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会将举办迎新生联欢晚会，你希望外籍教师 Tom 能参加， 于是你给他写一封邀请信。要点如下： 1．晚会开始、结束时间以及举办地点。 2．表演内容。 3．邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。 注意：1.词数 100 左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 3 - 你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 One possible version： Dear Tom， How are you doing? Currently, in order to welcome the new students, an evening party will be held in our school. As the chairman of the Students' Union, I'm writing to invite you to join us. Here is a brief schedule. First, it will be held in the school meeting hall from 7：00 to 9：00 p. m. next Sunday. Additionally, there will be many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students, such as singing, dancing, performing plays and so on. Everyone is longing for your coming, and it would be more cheerful if you could give a performance. I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you. Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua