八年级上英语课件写作书案_牛津译林版 (1) 9页

写作方法 “五步四要素法”介绍朋友 五步： Name第一步：介绍朋友的名字 Looks第二步：介绍他/她的外貌特征 Personality第三步：他/她的个人品质 Future plan第四步：他/她的未来计划 Advice　第五步：给他/她一些建议 写作书案 四要素： 要素一：人物 要素二：外貌 要素三：性格和品质 要素四：理想 写作书案 1. 注意短文的要点：名字、外貌、个人品质、未来计 划、建议。 2. 注意时态：一般现在时。 3. 短文有条理。 4. 通读检查全文。不得遗漏题目所给要点。 易错点提醒 请从外貌、个人品质、未来计划等方面写一篇英语短 文介绍一下你最好的朋友Jim。以下为提示，写作内容需 包含所有要点，并请给他一些建议(至少两点)。 典例 1. 高而且壮，英俊; 方脸，微笑的眼睛。 2. 不喜欢运动，电脑玩得太多，戴眼镜。 3. 乐于助人，有幽默感。 4. 想成为歌手。 5. 建议…… 要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，不少于80词。 典例 参考词汇和句式 单词 tall， strong， square， smiling， helpful， humour， wear， singer， bored， unhappy 短语 have a square face， smiling eyes， wear glasses， because of， too much， have a good sense of humour， feel bored， tell funny jokes， make sb. laugh， grow up， work hard 句式 He has. . . He doesn't like. . . He wants to be. . . when he grows up. My best friend is Jim. He is tall and strong. He is very handsome. He has a square face and smiling eyes. He doesn‘t like doing exercise. He wears glasses because he plays on the computer too much. He is helpful and he has a good sense of humour. When I feel bored or unhappy, he often tells funny jokes to make me laugh. 范文欣赏 He wants to be a singer when he grows up. I don't think he should play on the computer too much. He should read many books. He should work hard on his study. If he likes singing， he can practice singing after school or at weekends after finishing his homework. 范文欣赏