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话题写作（四） 人物故事 第一篇　教材考点梳理 　　三年的初中生活,你对自己的表现一定有满意的方面和不满意的方面。假 如你是林薇,请参照以下提示,给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言,希望对 他们有所帮助。 典例分析 【话题点睛】针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人 物的经历、变化或自己对此人物的看法等方面。 提示内容 提示词 简单自我介绍 姓名,班级…… Class Three 对自己满意的方面 勤学好问,养成良好的学 习习惯…… work hard, a good habit of 对自己不满意的方面 忙于学习,锻炼身体较少 …… be busy, do less exercise 对学弟学妹们的建议 或希望 乐于助人,积极参加志愿 活动…… be glad to, volunteer activities [注意] (1)参照提示适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名; (3)词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear boys and girls, Yours, Lin Wei 【思路点拨】 1. 要点提炼： (1)自己三年来的优点及收获; (2)自己存在的缺点及问题; (3)自己给学弟学妹们的建议。 2. 确定时态：讲述自己的优缺点时用一般现在时,讲述自己的收获或取得的成 绩时用现在完成时和一般过去时。 3. 确定人称：讲述自己的情况用第一人称,提建议时用第二人称。 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 Ⅰ. 写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1. 我勤学好问,并且养成了许多良好的学习习惯。(habit of) I am and have developed many learning. 2. 我的视力变得相当弱。(in one's eyesight) I have become quite weak . 3. 我通常忙于辛苦的工作。(be busy with) I was usually . hard-working good habits of in my eyesight busy with hard work Ⅱ. 句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。) 1. It's also a pity. I did less exercise.(用that连成一个句子) 2. I also hope. You all can take an active part in some volunteer activities.(合并为宾语从句) It's also a pity that I did less exercise. I also hope (that) you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities. 【连句成文】 Dear boys and girls, 　　I'm Lin Wei. I come from Class Three. It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years. 　　I am hard-working and have made great progress. I have developed many good habits of learning. I did well in the exams. However, I also had some problems. I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight. What's more, it's also a pity that I did less exercise because I was usually busy with hard work. 　　In the future I hope you can understand the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So you should be glad to help them if someone is in trouble. I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities, such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment, helping disabled children and so on. 　　Thank you, my dear teachers and schoolmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and schoolmates a happy life! Yours, Lin Wei 【参考谚语】 1. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 2. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者,事竟成。 3. All things in their being are good for something.天生我材必有用。 【相关短语】 be born in 出生于; come from=be from 来自; be good at=do well in 擅 长; be of medium build 中等身材; be of medium height 中等身高; get on well with 与……和睦相处; at the age of 在……岁时; make friends 交朋友 拓展积累 【亮点句型】 导入主题句 1. Jim is my best friend but he has changed a lot in the past 3 years. 2. I still remember one of my memories in the three years' life, which impressed me very much. 3. Today, I would like to introduce one of the greatest writers named Lao She. 文章发展、过渡句 1. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. 2. Since then, she has kept helping me. 3. What's more, she always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. 4. Whenever she sees you, she always gives you a friendly smile which makes you comfortable. 文章结尾句 1. I think people surely change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time. 2. I have learned a lot from him. I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. 3. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. 4. In short, we can get on well with each other and we will enjoy ourselves every day. A [2019·临沂] 　　时光荏苒,初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较,你会有很多变化。 请以“I have changed a lot!”为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文, 具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。 [要求] (1)短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息; (2)不少于60词。 实战演练 [提示] (1)What did you use to be like? (2)What is the most important change? (3)And how did it happen? Tell a story about it. I have changed a lot! One possible version: I have changed a lot! 　　Time goes by. Three years has passed. Of course I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes. 　　 I used to be really short and thin. I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. Now I have changed a lot. But one of my most important changes is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing. B　[2019·天津] 　　假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点, 描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。 (1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐。一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面。男孩表达 感谢。 (2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。 (3)你认为…… [参考词汇] 开始呕吐 begin to vomit 挤向座位　push towards the seat 争吵　have a quarrel [要求] (1)词数： 80—100; (2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数; (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Wednesday 　 When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed One possible version: Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy on the train. He was not feeling very well and suddenly began to vomit on the floor. At the same time, a young woman in good clothes noticed him and helped clean the floor. The boy was very grateful for her kindness. However, when the train arrived at the station, some people pushed towards the seats as soon as the train stopped, while some of the passengers couldn't get off the train. Someone even had a quarrel about it. 　　These two things impressed me very much. If we all act like the young woman and think more of others, I think our world will be a much more beautiful place.