人教版PEP小学英语毕业总复习作文指导与欣赏-节假日旅行计划或回忆-traveling 佳作欣赏 1页

During the National Day, my parents took me to the BeidaiRiver. It was my first time to see the sea. The blue waves beat on the rocks along the seashore and turned into spray（浪 花）. I couldn′t tell the sea from the sky, because they were so far away from us. When we sat on the seashore, the waves came and stroked（轻抚） our bodies. Then my father and I swam in the sea together, but my mother couldn′t swim at all. She stood there and watched us swimming. Suddenly, a hill-like wave（一股小山般的海 浪） came over us. And I swallowed（吞下） a mouthful（一满口） of sea water. It was salty and bitter（苦的）, but I was glad to taste real sea water for the first time. Now I often think of the sea. How lovely the sea is! I hope I can go there again. 习作点评: 小作者写了自己去北戴河游玩的有趣经历。通过细节描写来展现海洋的特 点：变幻无穷，充满险境。这也正是人们痴迷于海洋的地方。 写作练兵场: 请以“A travelling for sea/lake/river”为题，写一篇关于游玩江河湖海经历的 英语作文。要求：50 词左右。