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The vacation
写一篇关于自己旅行的作文。
Have a trip!
I travelled to Hainan island this summer holiday.
It was so beautiful there. The blue sea was around us.
It′s very wide and very nice. The coconut milk was delicious. I liked it so much. I
also liked to swim there. I was happy and I looked like a fish.
I will also come here for another trip the next summer holiday, because it is a nice
place with a beautiful scenery and deliciouss food.
词汇:
swim, summer holiday(暑假), delicious(美味的)
习作点评:
文章描绘了海南岛的风景美食,以及自己愉快的心情,不愧是一篇美文。
佳作赏析:
A visit to Beijing
This summer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city!
We went to the Great Wall first. Like its name, it was very great. We could see
many mountains around and many foreigners.
Then we went to visit Tian'anmen Square. It was also fantastic. There were so
many people on the square, some were flying kites, some were taking photos.
We lived in a small house in Beijing. It was a traditional Beijing building called
“Four-Section Compound”.
I enjoyed myself a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing. It was a great
memory!
作文点评:
本篇作文详细叙述了自己去北京游玩的全过程。先是北京的 the Great Wall,
再去了 Tian'anmen Square,最后又描述了 Four-Section Compound,把读者带进
了一场快乐的北京旅途,充满趣味
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