中考英语专项复习训练指导观点看法类书面表达写法 14页

观点看法类书面表达 ‎ 秘招1：审题并确定要点 ‎ 仔细审题，确定文章的体裁、主题、人称以及时态。根据背景材料，确定出文章的体裁和主题；由体裁和主题来确定文章的人称和时态 (观点看法类人称多用第一人称，时态多以一般现在时为主)；根据文章的要点要求确定文章的结构以及内容。‎ ‎ 秘招2：构建框架结构 ‎ ‎ 秘招3：理逻辑 ‎ 这里的逻辑指的是逻辑词，在作文中十分受欢迎，而且中考阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进、转折和总结的逻辑词。‎ ‎ 秘招4：写后五查 ‎ 五查：单词拼写、标点符号错误；人称、时态、语态错误；修改句子结构和逻辑错误；考虑语篇结构；句式的变化和词汇的丰富 ‎☆ 小贴士 ‎1. 此类话题一定得有自己的观点，且观点必须明确，不能模模糊糊；‎ ‎2. 此类话题需要有支撑你的观点的理由，且理由具有说服力；‎ ‎3. 若文章给出的不是一个完整的句子时必须将句子补全 (如2013年和2012年河北中考书面表达)；‎ ‎4. 文章必须包含所给的所有要点提示，且须适当发挥。‎ Test 1‎ 面临中考，我们的作业越来越多，学习任务也越来越繁重。有些同学认为作业多有利于学习，帮助我们考出好成绩；而另一些同学认为作业多休息不好，学习的效率反而不高。请写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。‎ 提示：useful, efficiently, go over, develop one’s mind (开发思维)‎ 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；‎ ‎2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；‎ ‎3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；‎ ‎4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)‎ Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes ________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.‎ ‎(PS: 推荐陕西考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给提示，提取以下信息；‎ ‎1.文体：谈论作业多的利与弊，以及自己的想法和建议，故为议论文；‎ ‎2.时态：谈论的是客观事实，所以时态以一般现在时为主；‎ ‎3.人称：描述其他同学的想法时，使用第三人称，谈论自己的想法和建议时，使用第一人称；‎ ‎4.写作要点：①其他同学对作业多的看法；②发表自己对作业多的看法；③针对作业多，给出自己的合理建议；‎ ‎5.文中不得出现任何真实信息，词数不少于70词。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes us very tired, and some students think having too much homework is bad for our health. But I think a lot of homework is necessary to the tests we will take.‎ I think homework can help us to go over what we have learned in class. And homework can develop our mind and improve our abilities to solve problems. Anyway, homework can help us to get better grades.‎ I think we’d better arrange our time properly so that we can do the homework better and find time to relax.‎ In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.‎ Test 2‎ 俗话说得好，身体是革命的本钱。只是一味地埋头苦学可不成，加强体育锻炼，保持一个健康的体魄才是正道。然而，在上周，某中学的一位学生在长跑训练中突然晕倒(fall in a faint)。此事件引发热议：部分家长认为现在的中学生体质弱，长跑(long-distance running)消耗体力太大，不应该被列入中考体测项目；另外一部分家长则认为，正因为现在孩子们体质弱、锻炼少，才需要长跑训练。‎ 假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出 2至3条理由来说服家长们 (只需选择一方观点表达即可)。‎ 要求： 1.词数不少于80词；‎ ‎2.提示词正、反方均可使用，仅供参考；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎(PS: 推荐山西考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：‎ ‎1.本文要求写对中考体测的看法，文体属于议论文；‎ ‎2.阐述观点时人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主；讲述个人经历时应使用第一人称，一般过去时。‎ ‎3.词数不少于80词，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Exercising plays an important role in our daily life. As a student, I hold the view that long-distance running should be listed in the exam. Because it can bring us students many advantages.‎ I was in bad health and easily got ill when I was in primary school. And I didn’t like sports or PE classes. The doctor advised me to take more exercise. So my father led me to run 5 kilometers every morning in the park. With my father’s and the doctor’s help, I made a great change. Now I become healthier and more energetic.‎ In fact, the main reason why the student fell down in the training is that he lacks exercise. He pays so much attention to his study that he has little time to take exercise. Therefore, long-distance running is necessary for students. Firstly, it canbuild up the body and keep us healthy. Secondly, it can help us get rid of the pressure and make us relaxed. Thirdly, it can prevent diseases and make us keep fit. Finally, it can also strengthen our will. All in all, long-distance running should be listed in the exam.‎ Test 3‎ 英语课上，你们班就中学生进网吧上网现象进行讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。‎ 提示：‎ ‎(1) What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting online?‎ ‎(2) What do you think of getting online for middle school students?‎ ‎(3) How should students get online properly?‎ 要求： ‎ ‎(1) 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，并做适当发挥；‎ ‎(2) 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；‎ ‎(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。‎ Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎(PS: 推荐河北考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给文字提示，提取以下信息：‎ ‎1.本文要求写一篇演讲稿，因此文体为应用文；‎ ‎2.文章要根据提示内容阐明上网的利弊，故时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主；‎ ‎3.词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like getting online very much. They can also learn more knowledge and how to use the modern machine—computer. They can ‎ get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds of games easily. But some students may get lost in playing games. Some even make friends online. They often chat or send emails to each other. It takes them too much time.‎ So I don’t think they should get online when they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.‎ 专家秘招赶紧看 ‎ 秘招1：审题并确定要点 ‎ 仔细审题，确定文章的体裁、主题、人称以及时态。根据背景材料，确定出文章的体裁和主题；由体裁和主题来确定文章的人称和时态 (观点看法类人称多用第一人称，时态多以一般现在时为主)；根据文章的要点要求确定文章的结构以及内容。‎ ‎ 秘招2：构建框架结构 ‎ ‎ 秘招3：理逻辑 ‎ 这里的逻辑指的是逻辑词，在作文中十分受欢迎，而且中考阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进、转折和总结的逻辑词。‎ ‎ 秘招4：写后五查 ‎ 五查：单词拼写、标点符号错误；人称、时态、语态错误；修改句子结构和逻辑错误；考虑语篇结构；句式的变化和词汇的丰富 ‎☆ 小贴士 ‎1. 此类话题一定得有自己的观点，且观点必须明确，不能模模糊糊；‎ ‎2. 此类话题需要有支撑你的观点的理由，且理由具有说服力；‎ ‎3. 若文章给出的不是一个完整的句子时必须将句子补全 (如2013年和2012年河北中考书面表达)；‎ ‎4. 文章必须包含所给的所有要点提示，且须适当发挥。‎ Test 1‎ 面临中考，我们的作业越来越多，学习任务也越来越繁重。有些同学认为作业多有利于学习，帮助我们考出好成绩；而另一些同学认为作业多休息不好，学习的效率反而不高。请写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。‎ 提示：useful, efficiently, go over, develop one’s mind (开发思维)‎ 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；‎ ‎2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；‎ ‎3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；‎ ‎4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)‎ Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes ________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.‎ ‎(PS: 推荐陕西考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给提示，提取以下信息；‎ ‎1.文体：谈论作业多的利与弊，以及自己的想法和建议，故为议论文；‎ ‎2.时态：谈论的是客观事实，所以时态以一般现在时为主；‎ ‎3.人称：描述其他同学的想法时，使用第三人称，谈论自己的想法和建议时，使用第一人称；‎ ‎4.写作要点：①其他同学对作业多的看法；②发表自己对作业多的看法；③针对作业多，给出自己的合理建议；‎ ‎5.文中不得出现任何真实信息，词数不少于70词。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes us very tired, and some students think having too much homework is bad for our health. But I think a lot of homework is necessary to the tests we will take.‎ I think homework can help us to go over what we have learned in class. And homework can develop our mind and improve our abilities to solve problems. Anyway, homework can help us to get better grades.‎ I think we’d better arrange our time properly so that we can do the homework better and find time to relax.‎ In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.‎ Test 2‎ 俗话说得好，身体是革命的本钱。只是一味地埋头苦学可不成，加强体育锻炼，保持一个健康的体魄才是正道。然而，在上周，某中学的一位学生在长跑训练中突然晕倒(fall in a faint)。此事件引发热议：部分家长认为现在的中学生体质弱，长跑(long-distance running)消耗体力太大，不应该被列入中考体测项目；另外一部分家长则认为，正因为现在孩子们体质弱、锻炼少，才需要长跑训练。‎ 假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出 2至3条理由来说服家长们 (只需选择一方观点表达即可)。‎ 要求： 1.词数不少于80词；‎ ‎2.提示词正、反方均可使用，仅供参考；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎(PS: 推荐山西考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：‎ ‎1.本文要求写对中考体测的看法，文体属于议论文；‎ ‎2.阐述观点时人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主；讲述个人经历时应使用第一人称，一般过去时。‎ ‎3.词数不少于80词，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Exercising plays an important role in our daily life. As a student, I hold the view that long-distance running should be listed in the exam. Because it can bring us students many advantages.‎ I was in bad health and easily got ill when I was in primary school. And I didn’t like sports or PE classes. The doctor advised me to take more exercise. So my father led me to run 5 kilometers every morning in the park. With my father’s and the doctor’s help, I made a great change. Now I become healthier and more energetic.‎ In fact, the main reason why the student fell down in the training is that he lacks exercise. He pays so much attention to his study that he has little time to take exercise. Therefore, long-distance running is necessary for students. Firstly, it canbuild up the body and keep us healthy. Secondly, it can help us get rid of the pressure and make us relaxed. Thirdly, it can prevent diseases and make us keep fit. Finally, it can also strengthen our will. All in all, long-distance running should be listed in the exam.‎ Test 3‎ 英语课上，你们班就中学生进网吧上网现象进行讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。‎ 提示：‎ ‎(1) What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting online?‎ ‎(2) What do you think of getting online for middle school students?‎ ‎(3) How should students get online properly?‎ 要求： ‎ ‎(1) 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，并做适当发挥；‎ ‎(2) 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；‎ ‎(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。‎ Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎(PS: 推荐河北考生必做)‎ ‎【审题指导】细读所给文字提示，提取以下信息：‎ ‎1.本文要求写一篇演讲稿，因此文体为应用文；‎ ‎2.文章要根据提示内容阐明上网的利弊，故时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主；‎ ‎3.词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。‎ ‎【高分范文】‎ Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like getting online very much. They can also learn more knowledge and how to use the modern machine—computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds of games easily. But some students may get lost in playing games. Some even make friends online. They often chat or send emails to each other. It takes them too much time.‎ So I don’t think they should get online when they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.‎