作文范文北京高考英语真题卷 4页

‎2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(北京卷)‎ 英 语 第三部分:书面表达(共两节，35分)‎ 第一节 (15分)‎ ‎51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:‎ ‎1.交通出行；‎ ‎2.必备衣物。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数不少于50；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.‎ I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.‎ Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.‎ Looking forward to your arrival.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【分析】‎ 本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。‎ ‎【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。‎ ‎【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。‎ 第二节(20分)‎ ‎52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。‎ 注意:词数不少于60。‎ 提示词:西瓜watermelon ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.‎ At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.‎ When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.‎ On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.‎ When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。‎ ‎【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”‎ 为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。‎ ‎【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.还使用了 At the class meeting, When I got home, On the farm, While working, When I came back home等过渡词。‎